UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing—写一篇家庭往事-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书Word（外研版）

Section Ⅴ　Writing—写一篇家庭往事

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Sunday 20 October

I was tidying my room yesterday and found an old photo in a notebook.As I was looking at it，the lovely memory of that day came back to me.

It was my mother's birthday ten years ago，and I decided to surprise her with home-made scrambled eggs.I woke up really early and tip-toed to the kitchen.I had never cooked anything before，so I tried to copy how she did it.But somehow they ended up burnt.

I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.I showed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened.To my surprise，she tasted them and said they weren't bad! I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.In fact，we ended up laughing and ate them all.

This weekend is her 45th birthday.I'll make her scrambled eggs again，and this time they won't be burnt!

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学语言

本文主要讲述了作者十年前为母亲制作生日礼物的回忆。文章主要以过去时态为主，讲述了给母亲悄悄制作礼物却失败的故事。为了给母亲惊喜，作者在文中使用了surprise，tip-toe等动词，使语言更加形象；失败后作者使用了sadly表达作者的失望之情。

最终，母亲品尝后说还不错。作者使用了．..love is indeed a magical ingredient，将爱比喻成“神奇的调料”，由此“爱”得到升华……

知结构

本文写作主要借助时间顺序：yesterday→ten years ago→this weekend。

文章内容：一张老照片(引起回忆)→十年前给母亲制作生日礼物失败→这周末母亲45岁生日，将再次制作同样的生日礼物(新的愿望)。

[情境任务写作]

假定你是李华，你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经写给你的一堆卡片。刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励你并帮助你减轻压力而写的，最后你开始快乐地学习。请你把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友Tom。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

[仿写程序步骤]

1．一仿结构布局合理

首段：总体介绍；

主体：叙述故事；

尾段：描述感受，进行总结。

2．二仿语言规范美观

①这个周末我在整理我的书架时，发现了一堆卡片。(clean up)

While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend，I found a stack of cards.

②当我读每张卡片上的话语时我的眼睛湿润了。(water)

When I read the words on each card，my eyes watered．

③这些鼓励卡片帮助我经受住了挫折(frustration；go through)

These encouraging cards helped me go through my frustration．

④刚开始上高中的时候，我感到很有压力，我一天中的每一分钟都害怕会落后。(fall behind)

I felt pressured at the beginning of high school and I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day．

⑤妈妈很体贴，她发现了我的问题。(so...that...)

Mum was so considerate that she found my problem．

⑥妈妈让我明白压力是无法避免的。(avoid)

Mum makes me understand that pressure can't be avoided．

⑦重要的是如何恰当地处理它，如何把它变成乐趣。(主语从句，count)

What counts is how to deal with it properly，and how to turn it into pleasure.

3．三仿句式高级表达

⑧用强调结构改写句③

It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration.