Module 3 写作指导 The person who has influenced me most 导学案2025-2026学年外研版（2012）九年级英语上册

该初中英语单元学案以“对我影响最大的人”为主题的记叙文写作为核心，整体目标是引导学生掌握写作内容结构、语言表达及逻辑组织能力。学案通过审题明确文体、人称和时态要求，思路表格构建“人物介绍-影响事迹-感受收获”的框架，结合素材词块补全、句型积累到布局补全短文的递进任务，形成连贯的写作学习路径。 亮点在于“词块-句型-语篇”三级语言支架设计，通过补全关键词块（如“stick to one's dream”）、运用核心句型（如“The person who has influenced me most is...”）、完成语篇补全练习，培养语言能力。思路部分按“起因-经过-结果”梳理事迹，引导学生分析事件逻辑，提升思维品质。提供的素材库和句型模板帮助学生掌握写作策略，发展学习能力，为学生从语言输入到输出提供完整训练，为教师实施写作教学提供系统指导。

Module 3 写作指导 The person who has influenced me most 写作任务 近日，你校英文报开展了题为 The person who has influenced me most 的征文活动。请你用英语写一 篇短文投稿，谈谈对你影响最大的人是谁，以及他/她是如何影响你的。 审题 内容：介绍对你影响最大的人，并分享他/她影响你的事迹 文体：记叙文 人称：以第三人称为主 时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 思路 对我影响最大的人 谁 他/她的个人情况(年龄、职业、品性等) 影响我的事迹 起因 经过 结果 我的感受和收获 … 素材 补全下列词块对应的英文表达。 对我影响最大的人：my mother / father / ..., (1)_______________(在某人三十多岁时) / ..., used to be / is a teacher / ..., has been a doctor / ... for ... years, be kind to / patient with / ..., (2)_______________ (总是乐于) help others, be strict with ... 影响我的事迹：be interested in ..., get over (克服) difficulties, (3)_______________(坚持) one's dream, never give up, practise a lot, spend (4)_______________(某人大部分时间) on / (in) doing ..., day and night, forget to eat and rest, finally made it ... 我的感受和收获：(5)_______________(树立好榜样) to me, learn more about ..., realize my mistake / problem / ..., make up my mind, work hard ... Keys： (1) In one’s thirties (2) be always willing / ready to (3) stick to (4) most of one’s time (5) set a good example 句型 1. The person who has influenced me most is ... 2. He / She is / likes / keeps ... 3. However, it was not easy for ... to ... at first. 4. But ... didn't give up. 5. From ..., I have learnt that ... 布局 将括号中的汉语翻译成英语，补全短文。 The person who has influenced me most 对我影响最大的人 The person who has influenced me most is my father. He is in his forties and (1) (他在一所中学教英语). He is very hard-working and strict with himself. 影响我的事迹 My father likes English very much and is excellent at it. But he doesn't stop there. (2) (他认为学无止境) and he keeps perfecting his English. Besides, he is also teaching himself French in his spare time. In his eyes, (3) (法语是世界上最美丽的语言) and he is very interested in it. However, it was not easy for him to learn French at first. He couldn't pronounce the words correctly (4) (他在理解语法方面有困难). But he didn't give up. He kept working hard and finally got over all the difficulties. 我的感受和收获 My father is my hero and I admire him very much. From him, I have learnt that (5) (只要你不放弃，总有一天你能实现自己的梦想). Key: (1) he teaches English in a middle school (2) He thinks / believes that there is no end to learning (3) French is the most beautiful language in the world (4) he had difficulty / trouble / problems (in) understanding the grammar (5) as long as you don't give up, you can realize / achieve your dream one day 练习 请写一篇短文, 描述对你们影响最大的人是谁呢？ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $