Unit 5 Section Ⅴ Writing——观察日记-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版）

该高中英语课件围绕“人与自然——认识与探索自然”主题，聚焦观察日记写作，通过水仙花生长日记范文解析结构（时间顺序）、语言（准确动词、形容词、拟人修辞）和逻辑（衔接词），再以向日葵仿写任务分步骤指导结构、语言、句式，最后以竹子观察日记应用，构建“范文输入-仿写实践-自主应用”的学习支架。 其亮点在于融合语言能力、思维品质与学习能力培养。语言能力方面，范文“side by side”拟人修辞、“long、narrow”细节描写及仿写中定语从句、非谓语动词改写，提升表达准确性与句式多样性。思维品质上，以时间为线（如Week 1/3/6）组织内容，培养观察逻辑性。学习能力方面，“结构-语言-句式”三步骤指导及常用句型素材，助学生掌握写作方法。采用“范文赏析-情景任务-学以致用”阶梯式教学，贴近生活实例（向日葵、竹子）让学生提升观察与表达能力，教师可借完整流程高效教学。

Unit 5 Revealing nature 主题语境：人与自然——认识与探索自然 Section Ⅴ　Writing——观察日记 内容索引 模仿范文　学写作 1 40分写作限时练(五) 2 模仿范文　学写作 返回 原文呈现 Week 1 The daffodil bulbs have been planted side by side in soil，with the pointed ends facing up. Water has been added and the container was put in a cool， dark place. The bulbs are being watered regularly. Week 3 A single stem has sprouted from each of the bulbs. On each stem are two leaves， which are long and narrow with a waxy texture. The container has been moved to a sunny， but cool place. Week 6 The stems have grown to around 20 centimetres tall and each has produced a single flower. The flowers are yellow and white， and shaped like trumpets. 名师圈点 学语言 亮点表达 第一段中作者使用了side by side， face up等拟人的修辞手法，形象地告诉我们水仙花种植及发芽阶段的情况。高级词汇add，put，water等动词的使用准确，有很强的科学性。这些体现了作者的语言功底深厚，使文章更加优美。 第二段中作者使用了形容词 long， narrow，waxy，sunny，cool，形象地表达出水仙花生长阶段的过程，观察细致全面，抓住了水仙花的特点。 逻辑衔接 第二段作者描述了水仙花生长阶段的过程。but衔接词的使用使文章过渡自然，语句顺畅。 知结构 本文结构按时间顺序进行说明。写作时以说明对象的生长过程为线，介绍其各阶段的外在变化，包括具体的大小、形状或颜色等。 情景任务写作 　　假定你是李华，你想研究一下向日葵从种子到植株的生长过程，请根据下面的提示写一篇观察日记。 1．你把向日葵种子埋进了一个盆子的土里，浇了些水； 2．几天后，盆子中长出了嫩苗；你把盆子放在屋里，避免阳光暴晒； 3．嫩苗在茁壮地成长，几天后长得很高了； 4．你对于它的生长很是惊讶。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 首段：介绍自己要观察记录的内容及目的； 中段：介绍向日葵的发芽及生长过程； 尾段：表达自己的感受。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①一天我把一些向日葵种子埋进一个盆子里，那里面有肥沃的泥土。 One day I _____________________________________and there was some rich soil in it. ②在倒入一些水之后，我开始以极大的耐心观察它。 After I had poured some water into it，I _______________________________． buried some seeds of sunflowers into a basin began to observe it with great patience ③几天后，一些绿色的嫩芽从土里长出来，非常可爱。 Several days later，some green and delicate plants _________________and they _____________． ④看到土有一些干了，我又加了些水。 When I saw the soil was a little dry，I ________________________． grew out of the soil were so lovely added some water to it again 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑤用定语从句改写句① _____________________________________________________________________________ ⑥用简单句改写句② _____________________________________________________________ ⑦用定语从句改写句③ _________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑧用非谓语动词改写句④ _______________________________________________________ One day I buried some seeds of sunflowers into a basin，where there was some rich soil. After pouring some water into it，I began to observe it with great patience. Several days later，some green and delicate plants grew out of the soil，which were so lovely. Seeing that the soil was a little dry，I added some water to it again. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 　　One day I buried some seeds of sunflowers into a basin，where there was some rich soil.After pouring some water into it，I began to observe it with great patience.Several days later，some green and delicate plants grew out of the soil，which were so lovely.I moved the basin into the room to prevent these young plants from being burnt by the hot sun.Seeing that the soil was a little dry，I added some water to it again.After several days，those young plants grew into some tall plants，which were very strong.I was surprised at what I saw that day! How amazing it is to watch a seed become a tall plant！ 精彩素材积累 常用开头句： 1．The whole body of a cactus is green. 仙人掌全身都是绿的。 2．I really want to know how the garlic grows up in the soil. 我真想知道大蒜是怎么在泥土里生长的。 3．Although bamboo is really a kind of grass， it looks more like a tree. 虽然竹子实际上是一种草，但它看起来更像一棵树。 常用中间句： 1．Bamboo grows best in places where it is warm and rains often. 竹子在温暖多雨的地方长得最好。 2．The above is the green garlic bolt，the following white， like a long green onion. 蒜苗的上面是绿色的，下面是白色的，像一棵绿色的长葱。 3．The cactuses have long roots and they take their roots deep into the earth so that they can get the water from deeper soil. 仙人掌的根很长，它们把根深深地扎入土壤中，以便从较深的土壤中获得水分。 常用结束句： 1．Sunflowers often have flowers facing the sun and grow well. 向日葵的花常朝着太阳，且生长良好。 2．With enough earth and sunshine， it will grow faster and better. 有了足够的土壤和阳光，它会生长得更快更好。 学以致用 　　仔细观察下列有关竹子种植的图画，写一篇有关竹子成长的观察日记。 参考范文 　　Week 1 　　A single seed has been planted in the center of each pot.Water has been added and the pots were put in a spot with 12－16 hours of indirect sunlight，the purpose of which is to protect the seeds from burning.Each pot has been watered daily.Before long，the sprouts start to pop out of the soil. 　　Week 5 　　To my delight，on the stem are several leaves，which are long and narrow.The pots have been placed in a location with at least 6 hours of indirect sunlight.Direct sun will burn the bamboo seedlings，so make sure that the plants get about half sun，half shade. 返回 　　Week 8 　　The stems have grown to around 30 centimetres tall and each has a number of green leaves.The bamboo plants have been transplanted from pots to open soil.And the new bamboo plants are watered 2—3 times a week. 40分写作限时练(五) 返回 Ⅰ.应用文写作(15分) (2024·福建省福州市高二上期中) 　　假定你是李华。你所在的学校的观鸟协会正在招收新成员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他参加，邮件内容包括：介绍协会活动；报名方式及截止日期。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Eric， _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 　　I am writing to invite you to join the Birdwatching Society at our school. 　　Our society organizes regular birdwatching outings to nearby parks and nature reserves， providing a great chance to observe various bird species in their natural habitats. We also hold informative workshops by experienced birdwatchers to enhance our understanding of birds and their conservation. 　　If you are interested in joining， please fill out the registration form attached and submit it to the Student Affairs Office by November 15th. We encourage everyone to participate and contribute to the society's mission. 　　I believe that your passion for nature and birds would make a valuable addition to our group. Looking forward to your reply! Ⅱ.读后续写(25分) 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·辽宁省县级重点高中高二上期中) 　　Many years ago， I was at a girls' school and our teacher made all the girls in the class sit next to someone different every day. 　　On one of the days， my teacher paired Madhuri， who I had never talked to， and me to sit next to each other. I noticed that she seemed very anxious. I asked her what was wrong. She remained silent at first， but eventually， she told me that she had three sisters in her family and that her father couldn't afford school books for all of them. 　　My primary school was strict， as was the standard then， and if you didn't have your school books the teacher would make you leave the class. Madhuri was very anxious that day because she thought that the teacher would tell her to leave the class. When the teacher saw that she didn't have the books， he told Madhuri that she couldn't attend class for a week. 　　Madhuri was very sad. I felt so bad when I saw her pain that I decided to help her. I went to speak to her and offered to buy the books for her. She refused my offer to help. She had very strong principles and she would never accept things bought by others. 　　When I got home from school，I told my mom the story. She said that it was good that I had tried to help but I should stop worrying about it because there was nothing more that I could do if she had refused my offer to help. I couldn't stop worrying about it though. Then I had an idea． My elder brother， who had once used the same series of books， graduated from school last year. Why not turn to him for help? 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 　　Maybe those old books were the solution to the problem.______________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ They wouldn't cost anything so Madhuri could accept without any pressure. I went to Mom and my brother immediately. After hearing Madhuri's situation and my plan， my brother was quite willing to help. We sorted out the needed books for Madhuri together very quickly. Looking at the neatly piled books， I felt quite satisfied and delighted but suddenly a concern flashed across my mind， “Would Madhuri mind they are second-hand books？” 返回 　　The next day， I got up early so that I could go to her house before going to school.________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Not knowing whether she would accept the books or not， I knocked at the door nervously. When the door opened， I could see her surprised expression. Hearing that these books were old books of my brother， she accepted them without hesitation. I also got a weight off my mind. On the way to school， I could see from her face how happy she was. From that day on， something changed and as the days passed and the years moved on， Madhuri and I became best friends. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $