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Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇地点介绍类的演讲稿
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If you haven't already heard of Fanjing Mountain,you soon will!A “must” for anyone visiting Guizhou Province,Fanjing Mountain has now been added to the UNESCO World Heritage List,bringing the total number of UNESCO sites in China to 53.The main reason for its inclusion is its biological diversity,with approximately 50 endangered plant and animal species found in its protected area.One of the first national nature reserves in China,Fanjing Mountain represents one of the country's greatest achievements in environmental protection.It is also renowned for its breathtaking scenery as a summer resort.
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学语言
文章开头采用了if引导的条件句,自然导入主题,既拉近了与读者之间的距离,又有助于激发读者的兴趣。
语言上,作者第二句中使用must,进一步突出强调了游览梵净山的必要性;作者使用the main reason使内容更加突出。
知结构
全文分为三部分,开头直接点明要介绍的地点,并对其进行整体介绍;主体部分具体介绍该地点的独特历史价值或人文特色;结尾做出总结以吸引读者。
[情境任务写作]
安徽黄山(Huangshan Mountain)是世界文化与自然双重遗产,被誉为“天下第一奇山”。请根据下列信息,用英语写一篇演讲稿,简单介绍一下黄山。内容包括:
1.位于安徽省南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地;
2.在黄山可领略其云海、松树、温泉、冬雪等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。
参考词汇:云海 the sea of clouds;松树 pine trees
[仿写程序步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
2.二仿语言规范美观
(1)众所周知,黄山位于安徽省南部。
As we all know,Huangshan Mountain is located in the south of Anhui Province.
(2)它是中国最著名的旅游景点之一。
It is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.
(3)当你爬山的时候,你可以欣赏到它独特的景色:松树、云海、温泉和冬雪。
While you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy its unique scenes:the pine trees,the sea of clouds,hot springs and the snows of winter.
(4)黄山的景色令人叹为观止。
The landscape of Huangshan Mountain is breathtaking.
(5)黄山为各种各样的动植物提供了良好的自然栖息地。
Huangshan Mountain provides a great natural habitat for a wide variety of animals and plants.
3.三仿句式高级表达
(6)用合适的过渡词连接句(4)和句(5)
For one thing,the landscape of Huangshan Mountain is breathtaking.For another,Huangshan Mountain provides a great natural habitat for a wide variety of animals and plants.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
[参考范文]
Good morning,everyone.It is a great honour for me to give a lecture about Huangshan Mountain here.
As we all know,Huangshan Mountain,located in the south of Anhui Province,is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.As a famous Chinese saying goes,“There is no need to see other mountains after visiting Huangshan Mountain.” For one thing,the landscape of Huangshan Mountain is breathtaking.While you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy its unique scenes:the pine trees,the sea of clouds,hot springs and the snows of winter.In the early morning,when the sun rises,the sky looks incredibly beautiful.For another,Huangshan Mountain provides a great natural habitat for a wide variety of animals and plants.It has rich natural resources which have scientific and ecological values.
While you are in Anhui,Huangshan Mountain is a must for you to visit.You are welcome to visit this attractive tourist destination.
Thank you for your attention.Do you have any questions?
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[精彩素材积累]
首段:
1.It's my great pleasure to give a lecture here to introduce Tai Mountain.
我很高兴在这里做演讲介绍泰山。
2.Qingdao is one of the most beautiful coastal cities in China and a wonderful place to spend summer.
青岛是中国最美丽的海滨城市之一,也是避暑的好地方。
主体:
1.I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.
我将把这个话题分为五个主要方面。
2.The climate there is very mild and can make you feel very relaxed and comfortable.
那里的气候非常温和,可以让你感到非常放松和舒适。
3.It is famous for its beautiful scenery and long history.
它以美丽的风景和悠久的历史而闻名。
结尾:
1.That's all I want to say about this point.
关于这一点,我就讲这些。
2.By way of conclusion,I'd like to quote what Newton once said.
作为总结,我想借用牛顿曾经说过的话。
3.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个演讲的机会。
[学以致用]
假定你是育才中学的李华,将参加主题为“Why was the Great Wall selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List?” 的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括:
1.长城在1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产;
2.长城位于中国北部,全长约6 700公里;
3.长城从秦朝开始修建,修建长城的最初目的是抵御外来敌人进攻;
4.长城是古代劳动人民创造的奇迹,是人类历史上最伟大的工程之一。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.文章的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Good morning,everyone!I am Li Hua from Yucai Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Why was the Great Wall selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List?”
Thank you for listening.
[参考范文]
Good morning,everyone!I am Li Hua from Yucai Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Why was the Great Wall selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List?”
As we know,the Great Wall was listed as a World Heritage by UNESCO in 1987.The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China,the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers.The Great Wall was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies.The Great Wall is a wonder that was created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.
In a word,all of this explains why the Great Wall deserves its place on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
Thank you for listening.
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