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专题08应用文写作
基础
必练
主题01推荐信
Passage 1
(24-25学年高二上山西省晋城市期中)
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Anna想找一个地方学习中国书法,请写信向她推荐一个合适的地方,内容
包括:
1.写信目的:
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数为80个左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(2425学年高二上·山西省·期中)
你校正在征文。请以“The Place I Want to Visit Most'"为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:
1.选择去这个地方的理由;
2.旅游计划。
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Place I Want to Visit Most
Passage 3
(24-25学年高二上·陕西省咸阳市·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英语角要为下个月的英文诗歌比赛招聘一位主持人。你对此非常感兴趣,请你给该招
聘的负责人Mr.Charles写一封申请信。内容包括:
1.申请意愿:
2.个人优势:
3.希望得到批准。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Charles,
Yours,
Li Hua
主题02报道
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Passage 1
(24-25学年高二上山西省·期中)
上周五,你校举办了一场英文歌唱比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动介绍:
2.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Last Friday,our school held an English singing contest in the multi-function hall.
Passage 2
(24-25学年高二上·宁夏回族自治区银川市·期中)
假定你是李华,上周日你们学校组织师生观看了关于如何在自然灾害中自救的纪录片。请写一篇新闻报道,
发表在校英文报上,内容包括:
1.活动目的:
2.纪录片介绍:
3.活动效果。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 3
(24-25学年高二上·山西省太原市期中)
上周末,你和同学们一起参加了一次农场采摘活动。请以My Weekend为题,为校报写一篇报道,介绍这
次活动,内容包括:
1.农场情况;2.采摘过程;3.个人感受。
注意:
词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
主题03人物介绍
Passage 1
(24-25学年高二上·青海省海南州:期中)
你校英文报正在组织写作比赛。请你以“My Favourite Scientist'"为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介:
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Scientist
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Passage 2
(24-25学年高二上·陕西省西安市·期中)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介:
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句己为你写好。
Passage 3
(24-25学年高二上·陕西省西安市·期中)
中国航天事业蓬勃发展,这离不开中国航天科技工作者的无私贡献,请你写一篇关于“中国航天人”的短
文给你校英语报投稿,内容包括:
1.中国航天人的工作精神:
2.对你的影响。
注意:1.词数80词左右;2.可通当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
2.相关词汇:China aerospace people中国航天人
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进阶
提升
主题01推荐信
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·陕西省汉中市·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英语协会(English Association)将招聘志愿者去接待来访的外国中学生,你有意应聘。
请根据以下要点,给协会负责人写一封英文自荐信。要点如下:
1.写信的目的:
2.口语能力强,善于沟通:
3.有相关接待经验。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(2425高二上·宁夏回族自治区石嘴山市·期中)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得你学习的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介:
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2.值得你学习的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右:
2.短文题目己为你写好。
A Role Model I Learn from
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·陕西省西安市·期中)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.书籍简介:
2.对你的影响。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增添细节,使行文连贯。
The Most Influential Book to Me
主题02建议信
Passage 1
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假定你是李明,你发现有些同学每次在重要考试之前,都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向
某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括以下要点:
内容包括:
(1)写作目的:
(2)焦虑症状:
(3)提出建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Ming
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·陕西省安康市·期中)
1.假定你是李华,你校交换生James想学习一项运动,写邮件向你咨询。请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的建议:
2.阐述理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Passage 3
(24-25高二上·青海省·期中)
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Alice的学校,在使用Al工具辅助学习,请你写一封邮件给Alice,向她询问
如何使用A1工具提高学习效率,内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由:
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢,
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·甘肃省天水市·期中)
假设你是李华,你的英国好友Pter打算来中国旅游,他想先学习一些中文,却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助
他,写一封邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下:
1.你给他的学习建议;
2.介绍你的帮助计划;
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3.对结果的展望。
注意
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
主题03回信
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·山西省太原市·期中)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Davd来信,向你倾诉他近期两次向校报投稿失败的经历和沮丧的心情,请
你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达理解;
(2)给予鼓励。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi,David!
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专题08 应用文写作
主题01 推荐信
Passage 1
(24-25学年高二上·山西省晋城市·期中)
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Anna想找一个地方学习中国书法,请写信向她推荐一个合适的地方,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Anna,
I am glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Calligraphy. Chinese Calligraphy is an essential part of Chinese traditional culture. Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.
Knowing your interest in Chinese calligraphy, I’d like to recommend a course in calligraphy offered by our school. The course is given by Mr. Chen, who is experienced in this field and popular with students. It’s given at 9 a.m. every Saturday in our school library and is especially suitable for beginners, for Mr. Chen will teach the basic skills in calligraphy.
Why not attend this course? I’m sure you will fall in love with calligraphy if you attend it and have a glimpse of the abundant traditional Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if my advice can be of great help for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Anna推荐一个地方学习中国书法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
极其重要的:essential → extremely important
推荐:recommend → suggest
提供:offer → provide
受……欢迎:be popular with → be welcomed by
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Knowing your interest in Chinese calligraphy, I’d like to recommend a course in calligraphy offered by our school.
拓展句:Because I know your interest in Chinese calligraphy, I’d like to recommend a course in calligraphy offered by our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls. (使用了Not only…but also…并列结构,并使用了部分倒装句和which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Knowing your interest in Chinese calligraphy, I’d like to recommend a course in calligraphy offered by our school. (使用了现在分词充当原因状语,过去分词充当后置定语)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高二上·山西省·期中)
你校正在征文。请以“The Place I Want to Visit Most”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:
1. 选择去这个地方的理由;
2. 旅游计划。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Place I Want to Visit Most
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【答案】One possible version:
The Place I Want to Visit Most
I am excited to visit Gulangyu Island. It’s a small island in China known for its peaceful environment and beautiful views. I am looking forward to exploring its quiet streets and enjoying the fresh sea air.
My plan is to walk around the island, admiring its old buildings and local life. I want to visit the piano museum, as Gulangyu is famous for its music. I also plan to relax on the beach and try some delicious local snacks.
This trip will be a great way to enjoy nature and learn about a different culture. I can’t wait to experience Gulangyu Island!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。请考生以“The Place I Want to Visit Most”为题,写一篇英语短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
出名的:known→famous
探索:explore→probe into
美味的:delicious→tasty
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句: I am excited to visit Gulangyu Island. It’s a small island in China known for its peaceful environment and beautiful views.
拓展句: I am excited to visit Gulangyu Island, which is a small island in China known for its peaceful environment and beautiful views.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I want to visit the piano museum, as Gulangyu is famous for its music. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] My plan is to walk around the island, admiring its old buildings and local life. (运用了不定式作表语和现在分词作状语)
Passage 3
(24-25学年高二上·陕西省咸阳市·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英语角要为下个月的英文诗歌比赛招聘一位主持人。你对此非常感兴趣,请你给该招聘的负责人Mr. Charles写一封申请信。内容包括:
1.申请意愿;
2.个人优势;
3.希望得到批准。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Charles,
My name is Li Hua. I am writing to express my earnest interest in applying for the host for the upcoming English Poetry Contest scheduled for next month.
In terms of my personal advantages, I have excellent communication skills and a fluent command of English, which will help me engage the audience with warmth, clarity and enthusiasm. My previous experiences as a host at various school events will enable me to handle all kinds of situations, ensuring a smooth and engaging process throughout the competition.
I sincerely hope that my application will be favorably considered, and I eagerly wait for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语角招聘的负责人Mr. Charles写一封申请信,应聘下个月的英文诗歌比赛的主持人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
申请:apply for → put in for
根据:in terms of → on the basis of
处理:handle → deal with
希望:hope → wish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to express my earnest interest in applying for the host for the upcoming English Poetry Contest scheduled for next month.
拓展句:I am writing to express my earnest interest in applying for the host for the upcoming English Poetry Contest which is scheduled for next month.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In terms of my personal advantages, I have excellent communication skills and a fluent command of English, which will help me engage the audience with warmth, clarity and enthusiasm.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that my application will be favorably considered, and I eagerly wait for your reply. (运用了that连接的宾语从句)
主题02 报道
Passage 1
(24-25学年高二上·山西省·期中)
上周五,你校举办了一场英文歌唱比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Last Friday, our school held an English singing contest in the multi-function hall.
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【答案】One possible version:
Last Friday, our school held an English singing contest in the multi-function hall.
The contest attracted a large number of students who are crazy about singing. Standing on the stage, they presented their wonderful voices and excellent English pronunciation. The hall was filled with enthusiastic cheers and applause, creating a very lively atmosphere. Each performance was a unique display of the students’ musical talent and English proficiency.
The event received an excellent response. It not only offered a platform for students to display their talents but also greatly enhanced their enthusiasm for English learning. Teachers also thought it was a great way to combine English study with entertainment. All are eagerly anticipating the next such activity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。作文类型为活动报道,需报道上周五学校举办的英文歌唱比赛,首先对比赛情况进行介绍,然后描述比赛的反响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
吸引:attract→appeal to
展现:present→display, show
极好的:wonderful→great, incredible
期盼:anticipate→look forward to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The hall was filled with enthusiastic cheers and applause, creating a very lively atmosphere.
拓展句:The hall was filled with enthusiastic cheers and applause, which created a very lively atmosphere.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The contest attracted a large number of students who are crazy about singing. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Teachers also thought it was a great way to combine English study with entertainment. (运用了that引导宾语从句并被省略)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高二上·宁夏回族自治区银川市·期中)
假定你是李华,上周日你们学校组织师生观看了关于如何在自然灾害中自救的纪录片。请写一篇新闻报道,发表在校英文报上,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 纪录片介绍;
3. 活动效果。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】In order to improve our awareness of safety and skills of protecting ourselves in any emergency that might occur in our life, all the teachers and students in our school were organized to watch a documentary about survival skills during natural disasters last Sunday.
When the documentary began at 9:00 am with pictures about huge earthquakes in history, many students immediately stopped talking and began to watch it with exceptionally great attention.
The documentary was quite beneficial to us since it provided us with first aid knowledge and ways to rescue others and ourselves.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生学校组织师生观看的关于如何在自然灾害中自救的纪录片写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发生:occur→happen
立刻:immediately→instantly
开始做某事:begin to do sth.→start to do sth.
提供某人某物:provide sb. with sth.→offer sb. sth.
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:In order to improve our awareness of safety and skills of protecting ourselves in any emergency that might occur in our life, all the teachers and students in our school were organized to watch a documentary about survival skills during natural disasters last Sunday.
拓展句:All the teachers and students in our school were organized to watch a documentary about survival skills during natural disasters last Sunday so that we can improve our awareness of safety and skills of protecting ourselves in any emergency that might occur in our life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
In order to improve our awareness of safety and skills of protecting ourselves in any emergency that might occur in our life, all the teachers and students in our school were organized to watch a documentary about survival skills during natural disasters last Sunday.(运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]
The documentary was quite beneficial to us since it provided us with first aid knowledge and ways to rescue others and ourselves.(运用了since引导原因状语从句)
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上周末,你和同学们一起参加了一次农场采摘活动。请以My Weekend为题,为校报写一篇报道,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1. 农场情况; 2. 采摘过程; 3. 个人感受。
注意:
词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】My Weekend
In order to release the pressure resulting from our study, I went to Xingxing Farm to pick some oranges together with my classmates last weekend.
Hardly had we arrived at the farm when we saw many oranges hanging from the branches. A farmer told us how to pick oranges. Then each of us carried a basket and a pair of scissors, quickly climbed up the ladder and started to pick oranges. Bathed in sunshine, we sang and laughed while picking oranges. After we paid for the oranges we picked, we prepared to go back to school.
What a wonderful time we had! Not only did it give us relaxation, but also it got us closer to nature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的报道。要求考生以“My Weekend”为题,为校报写一篇报道,介绍上周末的农场采摘活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
解除:release→relieve
由……引起:result from→arise from
到达:arrive at→reach
开始:start→commence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Bathed in sunshine, we sang and laughed while picking oranges.
拓展句:Bathed in sunshine, we sang and laughed while we were picking oranges.
【点睛】【高分句型1】After we paid for the oranges we picked, we prepared to go back to school. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句和省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only did it give us relaxation, but also it got us closer to nature. (运用了部分倒装结构)
主题03人物介绍
Passage 1
(24-25学年高二上·青海省海南州·期中)
你校英文报正在组织写作比赛。请你以“My Favourite Scientist”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Scientist
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【答案】My Favourite Scientist
There are many respectable great scientists in the world, one of whom is my favourite scientist Wang Zeshan, a gunpowder and explosive expert. Due to his concentration on the research, he has made important achievements in the field of gunpowder, and he became one of the two winners of 2017 Highest Science and Technology Award.
Great scientist as he is, Wang Zeshan is easy-going and friendly. Besides, he is modest and serious about science in spite of his great success, which is worth learning.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文,要求考生以“My Favourite Scientist”为题写一篇短文参加写作比赛,介绍自己最喜欢的科学家。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可敬的:respectable →honourable
由于:due to →owing to
重要的:important →significant
尽管:in spite of →despite of
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Due to his concentration on the research, he has made important achievements in the field of gunpowder, and he became one of the two winners of 2017 Highest Science and Technology Award.
拓展句:Due to his concentration on the research, he has made important achievements in the field of gunpowder, as a result of which, he became one of the two winners of 2017 Highest Science and Technology Award.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are many respectable great scientists in the world, one of whom is my favourite scientist Wang Zeshan, a gunpowder and explosive expert. (运用了whom引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Great scientist as he is, Wang Zeshan is easy-going and friendly. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句及部分倒装)
[高分句型3] Besides, he is modest and serious about science in spite of his great success, which is worth learning. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高二上·陕西省西安市·期中)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher, who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:
1.人物简介:
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)
As for me;spare some time;listen to me patiently;
第三步:连词成句
1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.
2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.
3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序:介绍人物;阐述原因
2.表示并列补充关系:As for; and; but; So
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式,如定语从句:My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much;非谓语动词:He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students;时间状语从句:When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
Passage 3
(24-25学年高二上·陕西省西安市·期中)
中国航天事业蓬勃发展,这离不开中国航天科技工作者的无私贡献,请你写一篇关于“中国航天人”的短文给你校英语报投稿,内容包括:
1. 中国航天人的工作精神;
2. 对你的影响。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;2. 可通当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
2. 相关词汇:China aerospace people中国航天人
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【答案】范文
China Aerospace People: Pioneers of the Stars
The China aerospace people embody the spirit of exploration and dedication. They work tirelessly, driven by an unwavering passion for pushing the boundaries of space technology. Their meticulous attention to detail and relentless pursuit of perfection have led to numerous groundbreaking achievements, from manned space missions to lunar exploration.
Their perseverance and commitment inspire me deeply. Seeing how they overcome countless challenges with unyielding determination reminds me that nothing is impossible with hard work and a dream. The China aerospace people are true heroes, lighting the way for future generations to reach for the stars.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于“中国航天人”的短文给你校英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热爱:passion→enthusiasm
许多的:numerous→endless
点亮:light→enlighten
克服:overcome→get over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They work tirelessly, driven by an unwavering passion for pushing the boundaries of space technology.
拓展句:They work tirelessly because they are driven by an unwavering passion for pushing the boundaries of space technology.
【点睛】[高分句型1] They work tirelessly, driven by an unwavering passion for pushing the boundaries of space technology. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Seeing how they overcome countless challenges with unyielding determination reminds me that nothing is impossible with hard work and a dream. (运用了how和that引导宾语从句及动名词短语作主语)
主题01 推荐信
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·陕西省汉中市·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英语协会(English Association)将招聘志愿者去接待来访的外国中学生,你有意应聘。请根据以下要点,给协会负责人写一封英文自荐信。要点如下:
1. 写信的目的:
2. 口语能力强,善于沟通;
3. 有相关接待经验。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I sincerely hope I’ll have the honor to be a volunteer of the English Association.
First of all, I got the first prize in the spoken English competition held in our school last term. Therefore, my good command of spoken English makes me free to communicate with foreign students. And I used to be a volunteer working for an international conference. So I believe I’ll be a qualified volunteer. If given the chance, I’ll introduce our school and our city to the students from foreign countries.
Hope you can take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语协会写一封英文自荐信,自荐成为志愿者接待来访的外国学生。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地:sincerely → genuinely/truly
获得/赢得:get → win
比赛:competition → contest
机会:chance → opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First of all, I got the first prize in the spoken English competition held in our school last term.
拓展句:First of all, I got the first prize in the spoken English competition which was held in our school last term.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I sincerely hope I’ll have the honor to be a volunteer of the English Association. (运用了省略that的宾语从句,作动词hope的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If given the chance, I’ll introduce our school and our city to the students from foreign countries. (运用了条件状语从句中的省略结构)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·宁夏回族自治区石嘴山市·期中)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得你学习的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 值得你学习的原因。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 短文题目已为你写好。
A Role Model I Learn from
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【答案】Sample:
A Role Model I Learn from
There are many extraordinary people that can be called a model. The one I want to learn from is my aunt, a middle-aged nurse, always wearing a smile and a determined look.
Her selfless devotion to her job never fails to appeal to me. Additionally, it is her passionate belief in what she is doing that leaves a deep impression on me. Faced with the outbreak of the epidemic, she went to Wuhan without a second thought, where she helped to save hundreds of lives. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her heroic deeds will flash through my mind and motivate me to overcome them.
In my eye, my aunt is such an outstanding model that I want to learn from her. What she has done sheds light on the future lying before me.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就身边值得学习的人为题,写一篇短文参加学校组织的英语作文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
优秀的:extraordinary→excellent/outstanding
吸引:appeal to→attract
遇到:encounter→meet with/come across
在我看来:in my eyes→as far as I am concerned/from my point of view
2.句式拓展:
原句:In my eye, my aunt is such an outstanding model that I want to learn from her.
拓展句:In my eye, such an outstanding model is my aunt that I want to learn from her.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
The one I want to learn from is my aunt, a middle-aged nurse, always wearing a smile and a determined look.(运用了定语从句、名词短语作同位语和现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
Additionally, it is her passionate belief in what she is doing that leaves a deep impression on me.(运用了what引导宾语从句和强调句型。)
【高分句型3】
Faced with the outbreak of the epidemic, she went to Wuhan without a second thought, where she helped to save hundreds of lives.(运用了过去分词作状语和where引导定语从句。)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·陕西省西安市·期中)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 书籍简介;
2. 对你的影响。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增添细节,使行文连贯。
The Most Influential Book to Me
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【答案】One possible version:
The Most Influential Book to Me
Among the books I’ve read, the Little Prince influences me most. It’s about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets a boy — the little prince from another planet. The little prince tells the pilot stories of his magical journey from his little planet and of his encounters with different grown-ups.
Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways. I’ve realized the importance of company and learned to open my heart and love the people around me.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题,根据要求写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①影响:influence→ affect
②旅途:journey→ tour
③重要性:importance→ significance
④喜欢:love→ be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’ve realized the importance of company and learned to open my heart and love the people around me.
拓展句:I’ve realized that company is important and learned to open my heart and love the people around me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets a boy — the little prince from another planet.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和until引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways.(运用了as引导的让步状语从句)
主题02 建议信
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·青海省西宁市·期中)
假定你是李明,你发现有些同学每次在重要考试之前,都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括以下要点:
内容包括:
(1)写作目的;
(2)焦虑症状;
(3)提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear editor,
I am writing to express my concern about a problem that many students, including myself, face before major exams. The issue is exam anxiety, which manifests in various ways such as sleeplessness, loss of appetite, and constant worry.
Some students experience headaches or stomachaches, while others become irritable and easily distracted. These symptoms not only affect our academic performance but also our overall well-being.
To address this issue, I suggest that the school could organize workshops on stress management and time management skills. Additionally, providing access to a school counselor for one-on-one sessions could be beneficial. Teachers could also incorporate relaxation exercises into their lessons to help us stay calm.
I hope my letter will prompt some positive changes to help us all cope better with exam stress.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李明的身份写一封信给学生英文报编辑,反映部分同学考前焦虑的问题并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express → convey
建议:suggest → recommend
解决:address → tackle
此外:additionally → besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, providing access to a school counselor for one-on-one sessions could be beneficial.
拓展句:Additionally, it could be beneficial for students if a school counselor is provided for one-on-one sessions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The issue is exam anxiety, which manifests in various ways such as sleeplessness, loss of appetite, and constant worry.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To address this issue, I suggest that the school could organize workshops on stress management and time management skills.(运用了不定式短语作目的状语和that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·陕西省安康市·期中)
1.假定你是李华,你校交换生 James想学习一项运动,写邮件向你咨询。请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.阐述理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
Having thought carefully about your request, I would recommend that you try table tennis, also known as ping-pong.
First, table tennis is deeply rooted in Chinese culture. Learning it will give you a unique insight into our culture and traditions. Second, almost every neighborhood in China has table tennis tables, which means you’ll have no trouble finding a place to practice. Third, playing table tennis is a fantastic way to make friends and build confidence.
I hope my recommendation works for you. If you decide to give it a try, I’d be more than happy to help. Wish you all the best on your sporting journey in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给James写一封邮件,建议他选择一项运动并解释原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
要求:request→require
建议:recommend→suggest
尝试:try→attempt
几乎:almost→nearly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Third, playing table tennis is a fantastic way to make friends and build confidence.
拓展句:Third, playing table tennis is a fantastic way in which you make friends and build confidence.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having thought carefully about your request, I would recommend that you try table tennis, also known as ping-pong.(运用了现在分词Having thought作状语,that引导的宾语从句和过去分词known作定语)
【高分句型2】If you decide to give it a try, I’d be more than happy to help.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·青海省·期中)
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Alice的学校,在使用AI工具辅助学习,请你写一封邮件给Alice,向她询问如何使用AI工具提高学习效率,内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢,
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
I heard that your school is using AI tools to assist learning. I’m really interested in this. As I want to improve my study efficiency, I’m writing to ask for your suggestions on how to make good use of AI tools.
For example, I wonder which specific AI tools are most suitable for different subjects like math, English, and history. Also, how often and in what ways should we incorporate them into our daily study routine? Could they really replace some traditional study methods or just complement them?
I would be extremely grateful if you could share your experiences and valuable tips with me. Your advice would mean a lot to me.
Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生给美国朋友Alice写封信,向其询问如何使用AI工具提高学习效率。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ show interest in
想要:want→ would like
提高:improve→ enhance
感激的:grateful→ thankful
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I would be extremely grateful if you could share your experiences and valuable tips with me. Your advice would mean a lot to me.
拓展句:I would be extremely grateful if you could share your experiences and valuable tips with me, because your advice would mean a lot to me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I want to improve my study efficiency, I’m writing to ask for your suggestions on how to make good use of AI tools.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】For example, I wonder which specific AI tools are most suitable for different subjects like math, English, and history.(运用了which引导的宾语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·甘肃省天水市·期中)
假设你是李华, 你的英国好友Peter打算来中国旅游, 他想先学习一些中文, 却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他, 写一封邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下:
1.你给他的学习建议;
2.介绍你的帮助计划;
3.对结果的展望。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this August. As I know, you are always interested in Chinese culture and want to learn some Chinese. Therefore, I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dialogue as a start, like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs, which can help you a lot during your trip.
Learning a foreign language needs great efforts. Apparently, I’d like to be your teacher and send you an e-book with my teaching schedule later. Besides, let’s have an online class over the Internet every weekend, through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Peter一些学习中文的建议,介绍帮助计划并对结果展望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣:are interested in→are keen on
因此:Therefore→Consequently
建议:suggestion→recommend
此外:Besides→What’s more
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Learning a foreign language needs great efforts.
同义句:Mastering a foreign language requires significant dedication and hard work.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I know, you are always interested in Chinese culture and want to learn some Chinese.(运用了As I know引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefore, I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dialogue as a start, like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs, which can help you a lot during your trip.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句及虚拟语气)
主题03 回信
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·山西省太原市·期中)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友David来信,向你倾诉他近期两次向校报投稿失败的经历和沮丧的心情,请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达理解;
(2)给予鼓励。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi, David!
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Love,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Hi, David!
I was sorry to hear about your setbacks in submitting articles to the school newspaper. I do understand your frustration, for it’s natural to feel that way when things don’t go as planned.
But don’t let these rejections bring you down, because every great writer has encountered them. J. K. Rowling’s Harry Potter was rejected numerous times before it became a worldwide success. You have excellent writing talent, so just see these failures as opportunities to learn and grow. Keep writing, and believe yourself! I’m confident that with your determination and hard work, you’ll soon see your name in print.
Love,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给英国笔友David回复一封邮件,安慰因两次向校报投稿失败而沮丧的他,应首先对他的情况表示理解,然后给予他具体的鼓励。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
沮丧:frustration→disappointment, letdown
遭遇:encounter→experience, face
拒绝:reject→turn down, dismiss
无数的:numerous→countless, numberless
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I was sorry to hear about your setbacks in submitting articles to the school newspaper.
拓展句:I was sorry to hear that you experienced setbacks in submitting articles to the school newspaper.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I do understand your frustration, for it’s natural to feel that way when things don’t go as planned. (运用了do强调谓语动词understand、for引导原因状语从句、when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m confident that with your determination and hard work, you’ll soon see your name in print. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·陕西省榆林市·期中)
假定你是李华,你的英国好友Charles发来邮件询问你暑期参加科学营的情况。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 主要活动;
2. 你的收获。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Charles,
I wanted to share some exciting news with you. I’m back from the summer science camp and thought you’d enjoy hearing about it.
The camp was filled with lots of fun activities. We did experiments, listened to talks from famous scientists, and visited nearby science centers. My favorite part was working on a little robot that had to find its way through a puzzle, which was tough but really enjoyable.
The best thing I got from it was learning more about how science works and how much fun it can be to make new discoveries. Plus, I also made friends who share my passion for science.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Charles回复一封邮件,告知他关于暑期参加科学营的一些情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
充满:be filled with → be full of
著名的:famous → well-known
参观:visit → pay a visit to
困难的:tough → hard
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:The camp was filled with lots of fun activities. We did experiments, listened to talks from famous scientists, and visited nearby science centers.
拓展句:The camp was filled with lots of fun activities where we did experiments, listened to talks from famous scientists, and visited nearby science centers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My favorite part was working on a little robot that had to find its way through a puzzle, which was tough but really enjoyable.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The best thing I got from it was learning more about how science works and how much fun it can be to make new discoveries.(运用了省略关系代词that引导的定语从句、how引导的宾语从句以及“it作形式作主语,不定式短语作真正主语”的结构)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·青海省西宁市·期中)
假定你是李华,你校正在举办主题为“给未来的自己写一封信”的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇作文参赛,内容包括:
1.简单介绍现在的自己;
2.描述未来的自己。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Future Li Hua,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Present Li Hua
【答案】Dear Future Li Hua,
Hi, I’m Li Hua, your present self. I’m passionate about English and dream of becoming a translator in the future. I am also fond of traveling and exploring new cultures.
In my imagination, your life is filled with more opportunities and challenges. You graduate from a prestigious university and then get a master’s degree in a foreign country. With your language skills and cultural knowledge, you plan to work in the field of international relations and promote cultural understanding between nations.
Despite the obstacles that may arise, I’m confident that your strong determination and unremitting efforts will help you realize your dreams.
Best regards,
Present Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你校正在举办主题为“给未来的自己写一封信”的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇作文参赛,内容包括:1.简单介绍现在的自己;2.描述未来的自己。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情的:passionate→enthusiastic
喜爱:be fond of→be into
增强:promote→enhance
尽管,不管:despite→in spite of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With your language skills and cultural knowledge, you plan to work in the field of international relations and promote cultural understanding between nations.
拓展句:With your language skills and cultural knowledge, you plan to work in the field of international relations, which will promote cultural understanding between nations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m passionate about English and dream of becoming a translator in the future.(运用了高级短语be passionate about)
【高分句型2】Despite the obstacles that may arise, I’m confident that your strong determination and unremitting efforts will help you realize your dreams.(运用了两个从句,第一个that引导定语从句,第二个that引导宾语从句)
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