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感谢信
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题型分析
感谢信是指我们在日常生活或者学习工作中,受到别人的赠与、邀请、照顾、慰问、祝贺以及帮助时,写信向对方表示感谢的一种文体。在撰写时,考生需详细描述感谢的具体原因,体现对方的善举对自己的积极影响,并表达对未来可能的回报或继续保持联系的愿望。
思维导图
写作方法
第一段:交代写作目的,表达对对方的感谢;
第二段:讲清对方对你的帮助,可以扩展该帮助给你带来了什么样结果。
第三段:再次表达谢意,并且致上最真诚的祝愿。
高阶模板
Dear Mrs Wang ,
With deepest gratitude, I am writing to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for ..., without which I wouldn’t have ...
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me .... Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in ...Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for ... and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.
No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Tom ,
With deepest gratitude, I am writing to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your warm hospitality during the vacation, which impressed me with the great beauty and charm of your hometown.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me those cherished moments when I enjoyed the captivating stories about your hometown as we strolled along the shore. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out.Upon returning home, I found myself still immersed in the pleasant moments we shared together.
No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(全国九省联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考)
假定你是李华,假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表示谢意;2.回忆难忘的瞬间。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
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Dear××,
How about your life? I'm writing to thank you for 感谢的原因.
During得到帮助的时间,you对方的帮助之一.Besides,you对方的帮助之二.What's more,you对方的帮助之三.Without your assistance, I fear I would have been没有对方帮助的结果.
Thank you for your kindness again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Judy,
How about your life? I'm writing to thank you for the warm hospitality you have given me during my vacation.
During my visit,you showed me around the attractions of your hometown, gave me a deep insight into local customs, and prepared the authentic hometown cuisine by yourself, the flavor of which still lingers in my mind with an endless aftertaste.Besides, devoted your time to keeping me company and helping me learn more about the local culture and history, which strengthened my emotional bond with your hometown.What's more,your warmth and thoughtfulness brought me a remarkable journey.
Thank you for your kindness again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(浙江省A9协作体2024学年第一学期高二年级暑假返校考)
假设你是李华,假期去留学生Judy的家乡游玩时收到了她的热情款待。请你给她写一封邮件表达谢意,
内容包括:1.写邮件目的;
2.得到好友的哪些款待;
3.表达谢意。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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真题链接
【2019年浙江卷】假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80词左右
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
审题
2019年浙江卷:
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80词左右
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
审题
1.体裁:应用文中的感谢信
2.时态:一般过去时和一般现在时
3.人称:第一和第二人称
4.主题:感谢Alex的帮助
列纲
1. 人称:
2. 时态:
3.写作构思:
第一二人称
一般过去时
①写信问候+写信背景+写信目的
②陈述感谢的理由
③再次表示感谢,表达回报心情
激活
第一段-点明写作目的,因某事表达感谢
得知你...,我写信来对你的帮助表达真诚的的感谢 Knowing/Learning that you...
I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for your help (with...)
得知你即将回国,我写信来向你对我英语学习上的帮助表示真诚的感谢。
Knowing that you are going to/will return to your motherland, I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for your help with my English study.
第一段-点明写作目的,因某事表达感谢
我很兴奋的得知...并且我写信来是想对你的帮助表示感谢
I am excited to learn that...,
and I am writing to express my appreciation for your help.
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I am excited to learn that I won the first prize in the English speech contest,and I am writing to express my appreciation for your help.
我很兴奋的得知我赢得了英语演讲比赛的第一名,并且我写信来向你表达感谢。
第二段-细述对方给与的帮助
当我不知道...正是你用...启发了我(强调句型)
When I had no idea what/ how to... It was you who inspired me with....
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当我不知道要写什么,正是你来到我身边并用你广博的知识启发了我。
When I had no idea what to write, it was you who came to me and inspired me with your broad knowledge.
第二段-细述对方给予的帮助
此外,我永远不会忘记这些你投入时间和精力帮助我的日子...(定语从句)
Besides, I will never forget the days when you devoted your time
and energy to helping me....
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此外,我永远不会忘记这些你投入时间和精力帮助我修改我的语法错误和润色我的演讲的日子。
Besides, I will never forget the days when you devoted your time and energy to helping me correct my grammar mistakes and polish my speech.
第二段-说明对方的帮助对自己的意义
要不是你的帮助,我本不能...
Without your help/guidance/assistance,I couldn’t have done...
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要不是你的帮助,我本不能准确的表达我的想法。
Without your help/guidance/assistance, I couldn’t have expressed my ideas accurately.
第二段-说明对方的帮助对自己的意义
另外,你在你有空的时候帮助我...真是太好了
What’s more, it is so nice/kind of you to help me...when you are free.
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另外,你在你有空的时候帮助我练习我的口语真是太好了。
What’s more, it is so nice/kind of you to help me practise my oral/spoken English when you are free.
第三段-再次表达感谢+祝愿(传情型结尾)
①再次感谢你慷慨的帮助。
Thank you again for your generous help.
②表达祝愿:
I wish you + sth.
e.g. 万事如意 all the best
身体健康 excellent health
开头:
I am excited to learn that..., and I am writing to express my appreciation for your help.
中间:
When I had no idea what/ how to...It was you who...
Besides, I will never forget the days when you...
Without your help/guidance/assistance, I couldn’t have done...
What’s more, it is so nice/kind of you to help me...when you are free/available.
结尾:
Thank you again for your generous help.I wish you all the best.
因某事表达感谢
对方给予的帮助1
对方给予的帮助2
对方给予的帮助对自己的作用/影响
夸夸对方,提供情绪价值
再次感谢表达美好祝愿
Dear Alex,
How's everything going? Having learned that you are leaving for your hometown, I'm writing these few lines to express my sincere gratitude to you.
The past three months has witnessed my giant leap in oral English. It was under your professional guidance that I was able to be exposed to so many native expressions. Had it not been for your constant encouragement, I would not have enhanced my confidence and enthusiasm in English learning.
Words failed me when I tried to express my feelings. I wish you all the best on the new stage in your life.
Yours, Li Hua
Top English
1. 2021年6月全国甲卷
假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英语网站上展示,请你给外国朋友Chris写封信,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友,内容如下:
1. 阐明写信事由;
2. 征求建议;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Chris,
Hope everything goes well with you! In a bit to foreign students' richer insight into Chinese culture, a class meeting themed introducing Chinese traditional culture to foreign friends will be launched in our school. I'm writing to ask for your suggestions on the topic.
Since every process and detail is to be posted on an English website that has numerous foreign visitors, I feel at a loss which aspects of our culture fascinates foreign readers. Currently, we have been considering a wide range of choices ranging from local cuisine and ancient costumes to festival traditions and folk music, but we haven't reached any agreement yet. So, I am urgently in need of your suggestion.
If you can furnish me with more information, just feel free to inform me.
Your prompt response will be much appreciated. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,Li Hua
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2. 2021年6月天津卷
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
(1) 表示感谢并问候;
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情;
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,Li Jin
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3. 2020年7月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:
1. 条件及要求;
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意:
1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything is OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practicing. Since you are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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