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高频文体21 图表类
近五年考情分析
年份
卷区
体裁
话题
命题形式
2025年
全国一卷
建议信
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择
提纲类
全国二卷
咨询信
咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展
提纲类
浙江卷1月
发言稿
发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议
提纲类
天津卷
推荐信
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐
提纲类
2024年
新高考I和II卷
告知信
分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历
提纲类
全国甲卷
发言稿
以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿
图标类
北京卷
建议信
对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议
提纲类
天津卷
发言稿
“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿
提纲类
浙江卷1月
征文投稿
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动
提纲类
上海卷
安慰信
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭
提纲类
2023年
新高考全国卷
建议信
提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受
提纲类
浙江卷1月
报道
报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议
提纲类
天津卷
申请信
申请参加“中国工坊” 活动
提纲类
2022年
新高考全国卷
邀请信
邀请外教做访谈
提纲类
浙江卷
邀请信
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
邀请外国留学生一同体验
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
回忆经历
回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
英语学习方式图标的调查投稿
提纲类
北京卷
邀请信
邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
提纲类
天津卷
视频文字稿
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
2021年
新高考全国卷
征文投稿
庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿
提纲类
浙江卷
宣传稿
宣传学生国画作品展
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
发言稿
欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞
提纲类
全国甲卷
咨询信
咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法
提纲类
全国乙卷
发言稿
以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿
提纲类
北京卷
道歉信
你因故不能赴约周末一起外出
提纲类
天津卷
征文投稿
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
提纲类
写作指导
Para.1(引言段)
用简明的语言介绍图表的主要信息
Para.2(数据描述段)
准确、清晰地呈现图表中的具体数据,不必过度解读,重点在于数据的准确呈现
Para.3(数据分析段)
对图表数据变化的趋势进行分析,给出合理的解释或推测,并指出背后的原因
Para.4(结论段)
总结图表的主要趋势,并提出进一步的分析或建议。此段需要简洁而有力,能够准确抓住图表展示的核心结论
【素材宝库】
写作模板
As the bar chart shows, ______________(说明图表反映的问题).
Several factors contribute to ______________. And, ______________. Furthermore, ______________. All these result in ______________(分析问题产生的原因).
However, ______________is faced with some problems. With______________, the effect of______________ is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay your attention to______________. but not just to ______________(提出解决措施).
常用表达
校园活动类调查
1. Aiming to enrich students’ extracurricular life, our school offers a broad choice of clubs, about which our students are extremely passionate.
为丰富同学们的课余生活,我校开设了丰富多彩的社团活动,同学们参与热情极高。
2. Of all the clubs, Chinese Calligraphy and Painting Club is the most likable, with 48% of students signing up. It is followed by Pingpong Club and Erhu Club, taken up by 25% and 10% of the students respectively.
其中,最受欢迎的是中国书画社,报名人数占比高达48%;其次是乒乓球社和二胡社,分别有25%和10%的同学选择。
3. The rest of the students show their preference towards other clubs, accounting for 17%.
其余17%的同学则选择了其他社团。
4. Attending these clubs offers us good opportunities to improve our all-round abilities.
参加社团活动为我们提升综合能力提供了良好契机。
5. Let’s embrace our hobbies and get energized through the interactions the clubs offer.
让我们在社团互动中拥抱爱好、收获能量吧!
社会现象类调查
6. The given pie chart compares the distribution of consumer spending on various goods in Country X in 2015 and 2020.
这张饼图比较了2015年和2020年X国消费者在各类商品上的支出分布。
7. According to the chart, in 2015, the largest portion of spending (40%) was on food and beverages, followed by housing at 30%.
根据图表,2015年消费者支出的最大部分(40%)用于食品和饮料,其次是住房,占30%。
8. By 2020, however, spending on food and beverages decreased to 30%, while spending on leisure activities increased to 25%, and housing-related expenditure remained stable at 30%.
然而,到2020年,食品和饮料的支出降至30%,而休闲活动支出增加到25%,住房相关支出保持稳定在30%。
9. One interesting observation is the shift in consumer priorities.
一个有趣的观察是,消费者的优先事项发生了变化。
10. The increase in leisure spending likely reflects changes in lifestyle, as people have more disposable income and seek more leisure activities.
休闲支出的增加可能反映了生活方式的变化,因为人们拥有更多可支配收入,并寻求更多的休闲活动。
11. The decrease in food and beverage spending may be due to a greater focus on health and dining out less.
食品和饮料支出的减少可能与人们更加注重健康和减少外出就餐有关。
12. In conclusion, consumer spending in Country X has shifted from basic necessities like food to more discretionary spending on leisure activities, indicating a change in consumer behavior as living standards improve.
总之,X国的消费者支出从食品等基本必需品转向更多可自由支配的休闲活动支出,这表明随着生活水平的提高,消费者行为发生了变化。
高考真题精讲
【2025▪天津卷】
假如你是晨光中学的李津,5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Mmseums的征文活动,根据你搜集的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
(1)简单分析图表展示的现象;
(2)简要分析该现象产生处原因(展览丰富,多样性强,丰富生活和学习);
(3)鼓励大家走进图书馆。
要求:词数不少于100;可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
The Power of Museums
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【2024▪全国甲卷】
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【2022▪全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
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必背满分范文
1.学校英文报正在开展以“Popular Books Among Students”为题的讨论。请依据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.读书状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Popular Books Among Students
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2.近日,你校英语报拟介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况。请你结合图表信息,以“Physical Exercise After Class”为题写一篇英语短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 课外体育锻炼情况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Physical Exercise After Class
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3.良好的学习习惯可以成就成功的生活。对于英语学习同学们一定养成了一些好的学习习惯,某中学对200名学生英语学习习惯进行了一项调查。请根据调查内容写一篇短文,简要介绍调查结果,并结合自身经历谈谈你的英语学习习惯,以及对你学习的促进。
要求:
1.不得少于80词;
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名。注意:
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4.你校英文报正在开展以 Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly 题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.描述调查结果;
2.分析其原因并给出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Recently, our school English club conducted a survey among senior high school students about the duration of weekly physical exercise.
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5.假定你是李华,你班在校英语戏剧节中获得一等奖,外教James打算为此庆祝,并委托你调查同学们喜欢的方式。请你根据调查结果,给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.提出个人建议;
3.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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6.在青少年成长的过程中,与父母之间的关系非常重要。在相处的过程中,彼此之间难免会有争执的时候,如何处理好这些争执是我们不得不面对的问题。对此,某校对200名中学生做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包括保持安静、坚持观点和交流的人数。请你写一篇短文,用百分比简要说明图表内容,并从图表中选出一项你喜欢的交流方式,表达你的看法和建议。
注意:
1.短文词数不少于100词。
2. 文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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7.最近,你在你校高三(1)班就“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗?”进行了一次问卷调查。调查结果见下图。
请根据图表及汉语提示,写一篇短文叙述调查的结果、分析其原因(自拟),并阐述你的个人观点。
注意:词数100左右,标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
Is It the Only Way Out to Go to College?
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8.你班“英语角”针对同学们喜欢的体育项目做了一次调查,具体结果见下表。请给校英语报写篇调查报告,内容包括:
1.简述调查情况;
2.对学校体育教育提出建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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9.假如你是李华,请根据你校英文校刊“Times Change”栏目提供的近五年工作需求图表(The Fastest Growing Jobs)撰写短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 描述现象;
2. 分析原因;
3. 你的职业选择。
注意:
1. 至少包括表格中的两项内容;
2. 80词左右。
The following graph is about the job growth between 2016 and 2021 in the world.
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10.学校英文报正在开展以"Using Fitness Apps to Monitor Health"为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 调查结果描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
Using Fitness Apps to Monitor Health
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高频文体21 图表类
近五年考情分析
年份
卷区
体裁
话题
命题形式
2025年
全国一卷
建议信
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择
提纲类
全国二卷
咨询信
咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展
提纲类
浙江卷1月
发言稿
发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议
提纲类
天津卷
推荐信
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐
提纲类
2024年
新高考I和II卷
告知信
分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历
提纲类
全国甲卷
发言稿
以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿
图标类
北京卷
建议信
对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议
提纲类
天津卷
发言稿
“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿
提纲类
浙江卷1月
征文投稿
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动
提纲类
上海卷
安慰信
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭
提纲类
2023年
新高考全国卷
建议信
提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受
提纲类
浙江卷1月
报道
报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议
提纲类
天津卷
申请信
申请参加“中国工坊” 活动
提纲类
2022年
新高考全国卷
邀请信
邀请外教做访谈
提纲类
浙江卷
邀请信
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
邀请外国留学生一同体验
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
回忆经历
回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
英语学习方式图标的调查投稿
提纲类
北京卷
邀请信
邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
提纲类
天津卷
视频文字稿
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
2021年
新高考全国卷
征文投稿
庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿
提纲类
浙江卷
宣传稿
宣传学生国画作品展
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
发言稿
欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞
提纲类
全国甲卷
咨询信
咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法
提纲类
全国乙卷
发言稿
以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿
提纲类
北京卷
道歉信
你因故不能赴约周末一起外出
提纲类
天津卷
征文投稿
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
提纲类
写作指导
Para.1(引言段)
用简明的语言介绍图表的主要信息
Para.2(数据描述段)
准确、清晰地呈现图表中的具体数据,不必过度解读,重点在于数据的准确呈现
Para.3(数据分析段)
对图表数据变化的趋势进行分析,给出合理的解释或推测,并指出背后的原因
Para.4(结论段)
总结图表的主要趋势,并提出进一步的分析或建议。此段需要简洁而有力,能够准确抓住图表展示的核心结论
【素材宝库】
写作模板
As the bar chart shows, ______________(说明图表反映的问题).
Several factors contribute to ______________. And, ______________. Furthermore, ______________. All these result in ______________(分析问题产生的原因).
However, ______________is faced with some problems. With______________, the effect of______________ is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay your attention to______________. but not just to ______________(提出解决措施).
常用表达
校园活动类调查
1. Aiming to enrich students’ extracurricular life, our school offers a broad choice of clubs, about which our students are extremely passionate.
为丰富同学们的课余生活,我校开设了丰富多彩的社团活动,同学们参与热情极高。
2. Of all the clubs, Chinese Calligraphy and Painting Club is the most likable, with 48% of students signing up. It is followed by Pingpong Club and Erhu Club, taken up by 25% and 10% of the students respectively.
其中,最受欢迎的是中国书画社,报名人数占比高达48%;其次是乒乓球社和二胡社,分别有25%和10%的同学选择。
3. The rest of the students show their preference towards other clubs, accounting for 17%.
其余17%的同学则选择了其他社团。
4. Attending these clubs offers us good opportunities to improve our all-round abilities.
参加社团活动为我们提升综合能力提供了良好契机。
5. Let’s embrace our hobbies and get energized through the interactions the clubs offer.
让我们在社团互动中拥抱爱好、收获能量吧!
社会现象类调查
6. The given pie chart compares the distribution of consumer spending on various goods in Country X in 2015 and 2020.
这张饼图比较了2015年和2020年X国消费者在各类商品上的支出分布。
7. According to the chart, in 2015, the largest portion of spending (40%) was on food and beverages, followed by housing at 30%.
根据图表,2015年消费者支出的最大部分(40%)用于食品和饮料,其次是住房,占30%。
8. By 2020, however, spending on food and beverages decreased to 30%, while spending on leisure activities increased to 25%, and housing-related expenditure remained stable at 30%.
然而,到2020年,食品和饮料的支出降至30%,而休闲活动支出增加到25%,住房相关支出保持稳定在30%。
9. One interesting observation is the shift in consumer priorities.
一个有趣的观察是,消费者的优先事项发生了变化。
10. The increase in leisure spending likely reflects changes in lifestyle, as people have more disposable income and seek more leisure activities.
休闲支出的增加可能反映了生活方式的变化,因为人们拥有更多可支配收入,并寻求更多的休闲活动。
11. The decrease in food and beverage spending may be due to a greater focus on health and dining out less.
食品和饮料支出的减少可能与人们更加注重健康和减少外出就餐有关。
12. In conclusion, consumer spending in Country X has shifted from basic necessities like food to more discretionary spending on leisure activities, indicating a change in consumer behavior as living standards improve.
总之,X国的消费者支出从食品等基本必需品转向更多可自由支配的休闲活动支出,这表明随着生活水平的提高,消费者行为发生了变化。
高考真题精讲
【2025▪天津卷】
假如你是晨光中学的李津,5月18日为国际博物馆日,学校英语俱乐部正在举办主题为The Power Of Mmseums的征文活动,根据你搜集的以下图表信息,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:
(1)简单分析图表展示的现象;
(2)简要分析该现象产生处原因(展览丰富,多样性强,丰富生活和学习);
(3)鼓励大家走进图书馆。
要求:词数不少于100;可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
The Power of Museums
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【范文】
The Power of Museums
The chart shows that the number of museum visitors in China has increased significantly from 720 million in 2014 to 1.4 billion in 2024. This remarkable growth reflects the growing popularity of museums among the public.
There are several reasons for this trend. To begin with, museums offer a wide variety of exhibitions. They cover different fields such as history, art, science and technology, which cater to diverse interests. For example, the Palace Museum in Beijing has a large collection of ancient Chinese paintings and calligraphy, attracting art lovers from all over the world. What's more, museums provide a platform for people to enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons. By visiting museums, people can learn about different cultures and historical events, which helps them to understand the world better. Most importantly, with the development of technology, museums have become more interactive and educational. Many museums now use virtual reality and augmented reality technologies to create immersive experiences for visitors, making learning more fun and engaging.
Museums are not only places to display artifacts and artworks, but also important cultural institutions that play a significant role in preserving and promoting cultural heritage. I strongly encourage everyone to visit museums. It is a great way to spend your free time and to learn something new. Whether you are a student, a professional or a tourist, there is always something interesting to see and learn in a museum. Let's embrace the power of museums and make them a part of our lives.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表说明文。要求考生根据所提供的图表数据,写一篇关于中国博物馆参观人数增长的短文,并向学校英文报投稿。
【详解】
词汇积累
增长:increase → remarkable growth
受欢迎:popularity → growing popularity
各种各样的:wide variety → diverse
例如:for example → for instance
提供:provide → offer
拓宽视野:broaden horizons → expand one's outlook
互动性强的:interactive → engaging
鼓励:encourage → strongly advocate
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Museums offer a wide variety of exhibitions. They cover different fields.
拓展句:Museums offer a wide variety of exhibitions which cover different fields such as history, art, science and technology.
原句:Many museums use virtual reality technologies. They create immersive experiences for visitors.
拓展句:Many museums now use virtual reality and augmented reality technologies to create immersive experiences for visitors, making learning more fun and engaging.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The chart shows that the number of museum visitors in China has increased significantly from 720 million in 2014 to 1.4 billion in 2024.(运用了that引导宾语从句,以及具体数据支撑说明)
【高分句型2】What's more, museums provide a platform for people to enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.(运用了不定式作目的状语,并列动词结构)
【高分句型3】Most importantly, with the development of technology, museums have become more interactive and educational.(运用了with复合结构作状语,形容词并列作表语)
【高分句型4】Museums are not only places to display artifacts and artworks, but also important cultural institutions that play a significant role in preserving and promoting cultural heritage.(运用了not only...but also...连接并列结构,以及that引导定语从句)
【2024▪全国甲卷】
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【范文】
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically→tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【2022▪全国乙卷】
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
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【范文】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose→select
提高:improve→strengthen
各种各样的:various→diverse
就我而言:as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句:Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline(运用了it作形式主语,to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
必背满分范文
1.学校英文报正在开展以“Popular Books Among Students”为题的讨论。请依据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.读书状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Popular Books Among Students
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【范文】
Popular Books Among Students
As can be seen from the chart, diverse sorts of books hold different proportions. Science, accounting for 43% enjoys the greatest popularity among students, while the classics, ranking the fourth place, wins the hearts of 13% students. The proportions of comics and Sports & Music occupy 26% and 18% respectively.
The phenomenon above may result from the following factors. First of all, not only does Science have tight bonds with Physics and Biology, but it also is equipped with adequate imagination, inspiring our passionate desire to explore the world. Additionally, interesting illustrations are added to the comics, which provides a fabulous feast for eyes.
Personally, I suggest students should read more classics, which accumulates the wisdom and spirits from ancestors, thus having a deeper insight into the pearl of literature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文是一篇图表作文。要求考生写一篇投稿短文,根据最受学生欢迎的书的调查结果饼图,进行调查状况描述,做出简单评论以及提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不同的:diverse → different
占:occupy → account for
此外:Additionally → Moreover
依我之见:Personally→ In my opinion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The phenomenon above may result from the following factors.
拓展句:The phenomenon which is mentioned above may result from the following factors.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As can be seen from the chart, diverse sorts of books hold different proportions.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Personally, I suggest students should read more classics, which accumulates the wisdom and spirits from ancestors, thus having a deeper insight into the pearl of literature.(运用了宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.近日,你校英语报拟介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况。请你结合图表信息,以“Physical Exercise After Class”为题写一篇英语短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 课外体育锻炼情况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Physical Exercise After Class
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【范文】
Physical Exercise After Class
Recently, a survey on students’ after-class physical exercise has been conducted among students in our school. The results are as follows.
More than half of the students, about 65%, choose running as their regular form of exercise, while only 15% would play basketball after class. Meanwhile, badminton is preferred by 40% of the participants, followed by basketball, which attracts 20% of the students. As for the reasons, it is likely that running requires less on equipment and field, and can be done at will. The other three, especially football, are usually played by boys, and thus have less participants.
Whatever physical exercise we choose, we should bear in mind that it is the workout itself that matters. Therefore, we’d better set aside some time for exercise each day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生结合图表信息,介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况,进行简单评论并提出你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引:attract→appeal to
随意:at will→as one pleases
因此:therefore→as a consequence
留出:set aside→spare
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Therefore, we’d better set aside some time for exercise each day.
拓展句:Therefore, we’d better set aside some time for exercise each day, which is beneficial for our body and learning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, badminton is preferred by 40% of the participants, followed by basketball, which attracts 20% of the students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Whatever physical exercise we choose, we should bear in mind that it is the workout itself that matters.(运用了Whatever引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
3.良好的学习习惯可以成就成功的生活。对于英语学习同学们一定养成了一些好的学习习惯,某中学对200名学生英语学习习惯进行了一项调查。请根据调查内容写一篇短文,简要介绍调查结果,并结合自身经历谈谈你的英语学习习惯,以及对你学习的促进。
要求:
1.不得少于80词;
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名。注意:
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【范文】
In order to know about the habits of learning English, a school did a survey among 200 students. Here is the result.78% of the students usually take notes. 81% of them like reading a lot including English newspapers and magazines. 21% sometimes watch English movies, while 15% like keeping diaries.
Once I always had difficulties in remembering so many English words. As a result, I couldn't do well in English. Because of the lack of words, I couldn't even understand the articles that I read. Later, according to my best friend, Lucy's advice, I kept reading English magazines and newspapers half an hour every day. Little by little, I remembered more and more words. I didn't think it was hard to learn English any more. I am interested in learning English now.In a word, good habits will give us a successful life. For it, we must keep our good habits.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于调查报告类作文。要求考生根据调查数据介绍结果,并结合个人经历谈谈自己的英语学习习惯及其影响。
【详解】
词汇积累
调查:survey → investigation
困难:difficulties → challenges
建议:advice → suggestion
逐渐地:little by little → gradually
缺乏:lack → deficiency
养成习惯:keep habits → develop/maintain habits
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:Later, according to my best friend, Lucy's advice, I kept reading English magazines and newspapers half an hour every day.
拓展句:Later, following the advice from my best friend Lucy, I developed a habit of reading English magazines and newspapers for half an hour daily, which significantly improved my vocabulary.
原句:I am interested in learning English now.
拓展句:Now not only has my vocabulary expanded, but I have also developed a genuine interest in learning English.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Because of the lack of words, I couldn't even understand the articles that I read.(运用了"because of"短语表原因,及that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Little by little, I remembered more and more words.(运用了比较级叠用结构,生动体现渐进过程)
【高分句型3】In a word, good habits will give us a successful life. For it, we must keep our good habits.(结尾运用总结性短语"In a word"并重申观点,强化文章主旨)
4.你校英文报正在开展以 Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly 题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.描述调查结果;
2.分析其原因并给出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Recently, our school English club conducted a survey among senior high school students about the duration of weekly physical exercise.
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【范文】
Students’ Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly
Recently, our school English club conducted a survey among senior high school students about the duration of weekly physical exercise. According to the chart, 18% of the students spend less than 2 hours on physical exercise per week, 40% exercise for 2 - 4 hours, 28% for 4 - 5 hours, and 14% for more than 5 hours.
It's encouraging that nearly 82% of students exercise for at least 2 hours a week, which shows that most of us understand the significance of physical activity. However, the 18% of students with less than 2 - hour exercise time per week is a concern. This might be because of the heavy study load or insufficient awareness of the benefits of exercise.
To address this, we students should make a conscious effort.We can start our day with a brisk walk or do some stretching exercises during breaks. As for the school, more sports activities like campus marathons or basketball tournaments could be organized to boost our enthusiasm for sports. Let's all take action to keep fit and lead a more active life.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表分析类作文。要求考生根据所提供的柱状图数据,写一篇关于学生每周体育锻炼时间的短文,并向校英文报投稿。
【详解】
词汇积累
进行:conducted → carried out / performed
时间:duration → time spent
令人鼓舞的:encouraging → promising
重要性:significance → importance
意识:awareness → recognition
解决:address → tackle / deal with
有意识的:conscious → deliberate / intentional
热情:enthusiasm → passion
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:Recently, our school English club conducted a survey among senior high school students about the duration of weekly physical exercise.
拓展句:A survey was recently conducted by our school English club to investigate how much time senior high school students spend on physical exercise each week.
原句:This might be because of the heavy study load or insufficient awareness of the benefits of exercise.
拓展句:This phenomenon could be attributed to either the overwhelming academic pressure or a lack of understanding regarding how beneficial exercise can be.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It's encouraging that nearly 82% of students exercise for at least 2 hours a week, which shows that most of us understand the significance of physical activity.(运用了"It"作形式主语,that引导主语从句,以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To address this, we students should make a conscious effort.(不定式作目的状语,置于句首,使表达更具目的性)
【高分句型3】As for the school, more sports activities like campus marathons or basketball tournaments could be organized to boost our enthusiasm for sports.(运用了被动语态和不定式作目的状语,使建议表达更客观得体)
5.假定你是李华,你班在校英语戏剧节中获得一等奖,外教James打算为此庆祝,并委托你调查同学们喜欢的方式。请你根据调查结果,给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.提出个人建议;
3.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【范文】
Dear James,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to express our class's gratitude for your thoughtful plan to celebrate our first prize at the school's English Drama Festival. We truly appreciate your enthusiasm and support!
I've conducted a survey on how my classmates would prefer to celebrate. The results are quite revealing: 88% would enjoy an outing on the weekend, 59% are interested in watching English movies, and 32% suggested sharing food and drinks.
Given these preferences, I recommend organizing a weekend outing. This option not only received the highest interest but would also allow us to enjoy the outdoors and engage in various activities together, making us more united. It's a perfect way to relax, have fun, and bond further outside of school.
Thank you again for your encouragement and support. Hoping that my suggestions will be taken on board.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议类邮件。要求考生以李华的身份,根据调查结果给外教James写一封邮件,感谢其庆祝计划,并提出个人建议及理由。
【详解】
词汇积累
感谢:gratitude → heartfelt thanks
调查:conducted a survey → carried out research
显示:revealing → indicative / informative
偏好:preferences → favorites / choices
推荐:recommend → suggest / propose
选择:option → alternative / choice
促进团结:more united → enhanced team bonding
考虑:taken on board → considered / adopted
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:I've conducted a survey on how my classmates would prefer to celebrate.
拓展句:After conducting a survey among my classmates, I have gathered their preferences regarding the celebration.
原句:This option not only received the highest interest but would also allow us to enjoy the outdoors.
拓展句:Not only is this option the most popular, but it also provides an excellent opportunity for us to appreciate nature and participate in group activities.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I'm writing to express our class's gratitude for your thoughtful plan to celebrate our first prize at the school's English Drama Festival.(运用了不定式作目的状语和介词短语作后置定语,表达正式且清晰)
【高分句型2】Given these preferences, I recommend organizing a weekend outing.(运用了过去分词短语作原因状语,使句子结构紧凑)
【高分句型3】This option not only received the highest interest but would also allow us to enjoy the outdoors and engage in various activities together, making us more united.(运用了"not only...but also..."并列结构,以及现在分词作自然结果状语,逻辑层次分明)
6.在青少年成长的过程中,与父母之间的关系非常重要。在相处的过程中,彼此之间难免会有争执的时候,如何处理好这些争执是我们不得不面对的问题。对此,某校对200名中学生做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包括保持安静、坚持观点和交流的人数。请你写一篇短文,用百分比简要说明图表内容,并从图表中选出一项你喜欢的交流方式,表达你的看法和建议。
注意:
1.短文词数不少于100词。
2. 文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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【范文】
A survey about the solution after argument with parents for teenagers has been done and here are the results.
According to the chart, seventy percent of the students intend to communicate with their parents after arguments, which can improve their relationship. Twenty-five percent students prefer to insist on their opinions, and only five percent students choose to keep silent.
Personally, communicating after arguments is the best choice. Obviously, efficient communication can not only make us understand each other better, but also relax tense relation, as well as make us get on well with each other like friends.
Therefore, I suggest teenagers should catch every possible chance to communicate with their parents when meeting disagreements or having arguments. Only though communication can all of us feel much happier.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表分析类议论文。要求考生根据调查数据描述结果,并选择自己喜欢的沟通方式发表看法和提出建议。
【详解】
词汇积累
解决:solution → approach / method
意图:intend → tend / are inclined to
改善:improve → enhance / strengthen
关系:relationship → bond / connection
显然:obviously → evidently / apparently
有效的:efficient → effective / constructive
紧张的:tense → strained
因此:therefore → hence / thus
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:A survey about the solution after argument with parents for teenagers has been done and here are the results.
拓展句:A recent survey conducted among teenagers reveals various approaches they take to resolve arguments with their parents, as illustrated in the chart below.
原句:Efficient communication can not only make us understand each other better, but also relax tense relation.
拓展句:Through effective communication, not only can mutual understanding be enhanced, but tense relationships can also be relaxed, ultimately fostering a friend-like bond between parents and children.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】According to the chart, seventy percent of the students intend to communicate with their parents after arguments, which can improve their relationship.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,对前文进行补充说明)
【高分句型2】Obviously, efficient communication can not only make us understand each other better, but also relax tense relation, as well as make us get on well with each other like friends.(运用了"not only...but also...as well as"的多重并列结构,使表达层次丰富)
【高分句型3】Only though communication can all of us feel much happier.(运用了"only+状语"部分倒装结构,强调沟通的重要性)
7.最近,你在你校高三(1)班就“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗?”进行了一次问卷调查。调查结果见下图。
请根据图表及汉语提示,写一篇短文叙述调查的结果、分析其原因(自拟),并阐述你的个人观点。
注意:词数100左右,标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
Is It the Only Way Out to Go to College?
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【范文】
Is It the Only Way Out to Go to College?
Recently, I have done a survey about whether it is the only way out for senior students to go to college in Class 1, Senior 3 in our school. Views vary from person to person. The results are as follows.
As can be seen from the chart, the majority of the students interviewed consider it very necessary to go to college. They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities. Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation. Very few students, that is about 10%, think it is no use going to universities, because the tuition is too high for their families to afford. What’s more, nowadays it’s rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory jobs. However, 30% of the students, believe “All road lead to Rome.” Therefore, it doesn’t make any difference whether they go to college or not.
In my point of view, we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland better in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表分析类议论文。要求考生根据问卷调查结果,描述数据、分析原因,并阐述个人观点。
【详解】
词汇积累
调查:survey → investigation
观点:views → opinions / perspectives
多数:majority → vast majority
素质:qualities → competencies / capabilities
学费:tuition → tuition fees
负担得起:afford → manage financially
满意的工作:satisfactory jobs → desirable employment
条条大路通罗马:All roads lead to Rome → There are multiple paths to success
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities.
拓展句:They believe that attending college can not only broaden their knowledge but also enhance their personal qualities, thereby increasing their competitiveness in the job market.
原句:Nowadays it's rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory jobs.
拓展句:In today's competitive society, even college graduates often find it challenging to secure employment that meets their expectations.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation.(运用了"only+状语"部分倒装结构,强调方式状语)
【高分句型2】Very few students, that is about 10%, think it is no use going to universities, because the tuition is too high for their families to afford.(运用了插入语"that is about 10%"补充说明,以及because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型3】In my point of view, we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland better in the future.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句,表达上大学的长远意义)
8.你班“英语角”针对同学们喜欢的体育项目做了一次调查,具体结果见下表。请给校英语报写篇调查报告,内容包括:
1.简述调查情况;
2.对学校体育教育提出建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【范文】
Our English Corner conducted a survey about the popular sports among our classmates. The results are as follows.
As can be seen from the table, basketball is enjoyed by 15%, football by 19%, jogging by 25%, and table tennis by 30% respectively, with the remaining 11% preferring other activities. This data highlights the need for a diverse range of sports offerings.
We suggest that the school invest in better table tennis facilities, as it’s the most favored sport, and introduce more jogging events to engage the sizable portion of students who prefer it. Additionally, we encourage the school to consider the interests of all students by providing a broader range of sports in the physical education program.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于调查报告类应用文。要求考生根据表格数据描述调查结果,并就学校体育教育提出合理建议。
【详解】
词汇积累
进行:conducted → carried out / performed
受欢迎:popular → favored / preferred
数据:data → statistics / findings
突出:highlights → emphasizes / underscores
多样化:diverse → varied / wide range
设施:facilities → equipment / infrastructure
引入:introduce → implement / organize
考虑:consider → take into account
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:Basketball is enjoyed by 15%, football by 19%, jogging by 25%, and table tennis by 30% respectively.
拓展句:According to the survey results, while basketball and football are favored by 15% and 19% of students respectively, jogging and table tennis prove to be more popular, attracting 25% and 30% of participants.
原句:We suggest that the school invest in better table tennis facilities.
拓展句:It is recommended that the school allocate resources to improve table tennis facilities, given its status as the most preferred sport among students.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As can be seen from the table, basketball is enjoyed by 15%, football by 19%, jogging by 25%, and table tennis by 30% respectively, with the remaining 11% preferring other activities.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和with复合结构,使数据描述简洁明了)
【高分句型2】This data highlights the need for a diverse range of sports offerings.(运用了动宾结构,直接点明数据反映的核心需求)
【高分句型3】Additionally, we encourage the school to consider the interests of all students by providing a broader range of sports in the physical education program.(运用了副词过渡和介词短语作方式状语,使建议表达更加全面周到)
9.假如你是李华,请根据你校英文校刊“Times Change”栏目提供的近五年工作需求图表(The Fastest Growing Jobs)撰写短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 描述现象;
2. 分析原因;
3. 你的职业选择。
注意:
1. 至少包括表格中的两项内容;
2. 80词左右。
The following graph is about the job growth between 2016 and 2021 in the world.
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【范文】
The following graph is about the job growth between 2016 and 2021 in the world.
Times change; so do jobs. As the graph shows, leading the way is the online shopping industry, where jobs increase by 32 percent between 2016 and 2021.It’s not surprising since the progress of the Internet has been greatly influencing us and forever changing our lifestyles. Jobs related to environmental, conservationist, and wild life organizations run a second. That’s because people have been increasingly environmentally conscious and are trying to pull their own weight for a better Earth.
Being a software engineer would be my ideal job. I’m always crazy about programming. I’d be content to know my work makes people’s life more convenient.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表分析类议论文。要求考生根据全球工作需求变化图表,描述现象、分析原因并阐述个人职业选择。
【详解】
词汇积累
引领:leading the way → taking the lead
增长:increase → growth / rise
影响:influencing → impacting / affecting
改变:changing → transforming
环保意识:environmentally conscious → eco-awareness
尽自己的一份力:pull their own weight → contribute their share
理想的:ideal → perfect / dream
满足的:content → satisfied / fulfilled
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:Jobs related to environmental, conservationist, and wild life organizations run a second.
拓展句:Following closely in second place are jobs related to environmental protection, conservation efforts, and wildlife organizations, which have seen significant growth due to rising ecological concerns.
原句:I'm always crazy about programming.
拓展句:My passion for programming has been a driving force in my academic pursuits, as I find great satisfaction in creating solutions through code.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As the graph shows, leading the way is the online shopping industry, where jobs increase by 32 percent between 2016 and 2021.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和where引导的定语从句,以及倒装句式,突出主要信息)
【高分句型2】That's because people have been increasingly environmentally conscious and are trying to pull their own weight for a better Earth.(运用了because表语从句和现在完成进行时,强调持续性的变化和努力)
【高分句型3】I'd be content to know my work makes people's life more convenient.(运用了不定式作原因状语和省略连接词的宾语从句,表达个人价值观)
10.学校英文报正在开展以"Using Fitness Apps to Monitor Health"为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 调查结果描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
Using Fitness Apps to Monitor Health
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【范文】
Using Fitness Apps to Monitor Health
A recent survey reveals that an increasing number of students are turning to fitness apps to monitor their health. According to the data, 58% of students use these apps to track their daily activities, while 35% rely on them to set exercise goals. A mere 7% admit to not using fitness apps at all.
The reliance on fitness apps is a testament to the digital age's influence on health consciousness. These apps offer convenience and motivation, making it easier for students to maintain an active lifestyle. However, it's also crucial to remember that while technology is a tool, it cannot replace the importance of a balanced diet and regular medical check-ups.
To maximize the benefits of fitness apps, I suggest integrating them with a holistic approach to health. Students should use these apps as a complement to a well-rounded health regimen that includes proper nutrition and medical advice. Additionally, sharing data with healthcare providers could lead to more personalized and effective health management strategies.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表分析类议论文。要求考生根据调查数据描述学生使用健身应用的现状,进行简要评论,并提出个人建议。
【详解】
词汇积累
调查:survey → investigation
依赖:reliance → dependence
证明:testament → evidence / proof
意识:consciousness → awareness
便利:convenience → accessibility
动机:motivation → incentive
全面的:holistic → comprehensive
补充:complement → supplement
方案:regimen → routine / program
句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:These apps offer convenience and motivation, making it easier for students to maintain an active lifestyle.
拓展句:By providing both convenience and ongoing motivation, these applications significantly facilitate students' efforts to sustain an active and healthy lifestyle.
原句:Students should use these apps as a complement to a well-rounded health regimen.
拓展句:It is advisable for students to utilize these applications as a supplementary tool within a comprehensive health management plan that incorporates balanced nutrition and professional medical guidance.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】According to the data, 58% of students use these apps to track their daily activities, while 35% rely on them to set exercise goals.(运用while连接对比状语从句,清晰呈现数据对比关系)
【高分句型2】The reliance on fitness apps is a testament to the digital age's influence on health consciousness.(运用名词化结构"reliance on..."作主语,使表达更正式客观)
【高分句型3】Additionally, sharing data with healthcare providers could lead to more personalized and effective health management strategies.(运用动名词短语作主语,表达建议性观点)
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