内容正文:
Unit 1 Lights, camera, action! 电影和戏剧
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写作主题
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)应用文写作精练(原卷版)
主题:电影评论
写作框架:
第一段
开头:开门见山,引出讨论的影视作品。
第二段
主体:具体介绍影视作品的内容。
第三段
结尾:归纳总结推荐。
写作词汇短语:
1. be based on 以……为基础
2. be directed by 由……导演
3. learn from... 从……中学习
4. be popular with... 受……欢迎
5. be set in 以……为背景
6. the martial arts 武术
7. romantic scenes 浪漫的场景
8. play the part of 扮演
9. the most exciting moments 最激动人心的时刻
10. to everyone’s surprise 让所有人感到吃惊的是
11. masterpiece 杰作
写作句型:
1.影片概述
①The main characters are...
②The film tells us a real story.
③The film ...directed by ...is a story about ...
④The film ...is set in...
⑤The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.
2.好的评价
①This is a very touching film/a must-see.
②...gives an amazing performance in the film.
③My favourite part of the film is ...
④Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it!
3.不好的评价
① However, many people have complained that the film is too...
②Another common complaint is that the film...
③I’m disappointed with the film because...
写作模板:
The film..., directed by..., is about... ...stars in the film... (介绍电影、导演及主演等)
The film tells of a story... (介绍故事梗概)
The film is touching and instructive, ...It is worth watching. (感想及评价)
举一反三:
(2024-2025学年黑龙江省鸡西市密山市第一中学高一下学期第一次月考英语试题)假定你是某高中学生李华,目前你校英文网站正在举行有关影评的征文活动,主题是“评论我喜欢的一部电影”内容包括:
1. 电影简介;
2. 主要情节和场景;
3. 给予评论。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My comments on a movie I like
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Passage 1
假如你是李华,要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请根据以下要点推荐一部电影投稿,要点如下:
1. 选择一部你喜欢的电影;
2. 简单描述电影情节;
3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。
注意:1.词数100词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Movie
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Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim十分喜爱电影,发来邮件请你给他推荐一部有代表性的国产电影。请你回复该邮件,内容包括:
1.电影简介; 2.推荐该电影的理由; 3.期待他观看并评论
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
Passage 3
你校英语报正在征集稿件,内容是对你看过的一部电影进行评论。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 简单介绍电影;
2. 评论电影。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 4
请根据电影《功夫熊猫》写一篇影视评论。内容包括:
1.故事以China’s Valley of Peace为背景;
2.从一只普通熊猫被选为神龙勇士(the Dragon Warrior)到成为功夫大师的过程;
3.发表自己的看法。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
参考词汇:《功夫熊猫》(Kung Fu Panda)
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Passage 5
请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介,用英语写一篇电影评论。
A Film Review
片名(Name):《ET外星人》(ET)
导演(Director):史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg)
剧情梗概:外星人(ET)误留在地球上,Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友,分享痛苦与快乐,最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。
评价(Comment):本片美丽而感人;告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。
注意:词数80个左右。
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Unit 1 Lights, camera, action! 电影和戏剧
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写作主题
识
)应用文写作精练(解析版)
主题:电影评论
写作框架:
第一段
开头:开门见山,引出讨论的影视作品。
第二段
主体:具体介绍影视作品的内容。
第三段
结尾:归纳总结推荐。
写作词汇短语:
1. be based on 以……为基础
2. be directed by 由……导演
3. learn from... 从……中学习
4. be popular with... 受……欢迎
5. be set in 以……为背景
6. the martial arts 武术
7. romantic scenes 浪漫的场景
8. play the part of 扮演
9. the most exciting moments 最激动人心的时刻
10. to everyone’s surprise 让所有人感到吃惊的是
11. masterpiece 杰作
写作句型:
1.影片概述
①The main characters are...
②The film tells us a real story.
③The film ...directed by ...is a story about ...
④The film ...is set in...
⑤The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.
2.好的评价
①This is a very touching film/a must-see.
②...gives an amazing performance in the film.
③My favourite part of the film is ...
④Even with these small problems, the film is still a great film, and I really enjoy it!
3.不好的评价
① However, many people have complained that the film is too...
②Another common complaint is that the film...
③I’m disappointed with the film because...
写作模板:
The film..., directed by..., is about... ...stars in the film... (介绍电影、导演及主演等)
The film tells of a story... (介绍故事梗概)
The film is touching and instructive, ...It is worth watching. (感想及评价)
举一反三:
(2024-2025学年黑龙江省鸡西市密山市第一中学高一下学期第一次月考英语试题)假定你是某高中学生李华,目前你校英文网站正在举行有关影评的征文活动,主题是“评论我喜欢的一部电影”内容包括:
1. 电影简介;
2. 主要情节和场景;
3. 给予评论。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My comments on a movie I like
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【答案】
My comments on a movie I like
Last weekend, I watched a movie named Forrest Gump《阿甘正传》, which I like very much and from which I have learned a lot about life lessons. It is a 1994 American comedy-drama movie based on the 1986 novel of the same name by Winston Groom.
The movie tells the story of a man with low IQ but good intentions. The movie follows his life from childhood to adulthood. Through his life, Forrest encounters many people, experiences the Vietnam War, meets President Kennedy, and even becomes a table tennis champion. He also finds his true love, Jenny.
I am really fond of this movie, because it sends a message to viewers that no matter what challenges we face in our life, we can always strive to do our best to overcome them. It also shows that friendship and love are the most important things in our life.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。目前考生校英文网站正在举行有关影评的征文活动,主题是“评论我喜欢的一部电影”。
【详解】
1.词汇积累:
遇到:encounter→meet
重要的:important→vital
喜欢:like→be fond of
意图:intention→purpose
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:I am really fond of this movie, because it sends a message to viewers that no matter what challenges we face in our life, we can always strive to do our best to overcome them.
拓展句:I really like this movie due to the fact that it conveys a message to viewers that regardless of what challenges we meet in our life, we can always make efforts to do our best to get over them.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】Last weekend, I watched a movie named Forrest Gump《阿甘正传》, which I like very much and from which I have learned a lot about life lessons.(运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型 2】I am really fond of this movie, because it sends a message to viewers that no matter what challenges we face in our life, we can always strive to do our best to overcome them.(运用了 that 引导的同位语从句以及 no matter what 引导的让步状语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 1
假如你是李华,要参加一个关于电影评论的征文活动。请根据以下要点推荐一部电影投稿,要点如下:
1. 选择一部你喜欢的电影;
2. 简单描述电影情节;
3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。
注意:1.词数100词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Movie
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【答案】
My Favorite Movie
The movie I adore most is The Million Pound Bank Note, which is based upon a story by Mark Twain.
In the movie, Henry Adams, the main character, landed in England by accident with no money or friends. By chance, he is made the subject of a bet by two wealthy brothers on whether someone could live in London for a month with a million pound bank note. With the large bank note, Henry finds that people’s attitudes towards him change greatly. The film, with excellent acting, beautiful music and interesting plots, is a real success.
I liked the play because of some exciting twists and turns. I also learned that success is not measured by how much money you have. It is totally worth seeing.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据要点推荐一部电影投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
喜爱:adore → be fond of
偶然:by accident/by chance → accidentally
富有:wealthy → rich
因为:because of → due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I liked the play because of some exciting twists and turns.
拓展句:I liked the play because it has some exciting twists and turns.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The movie I adore most is The Million Pound Bank Note, which is based upon a story by Mark Twain. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I also learned that success is not measured by how much money you have. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim十分喜爱电影,发来邮件请你给他推荐一部有代表性的国产电影。请你回复该邮件,内容包括:
1.电影简介; 2.推荐该电影的理由; 3.期待他观看并评论
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Glad to learn you’re interested in movies. I’m writing to recommend my favorite Chinese movie - The wandering earth. The wandering earth is an awesome science fiction film starring Jason Wu. It tells the story of Chinese people’s struggle to save the earth from destruction as the sun expands.
I highly recommend this film because it not only showcases China’s advancements in film-making with its grand scenes and impressive special effects, but also highlights Chinese people’s perseverance and determination in saving our “home”, which offers an insight into Chinese culture and society.
Hope you will enjoy it and let me know what you think of it.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国朋友Jim十分喜爱电影,发来邮件请你给他推荐一部有代表性的国产电影,要求考生回复该邮件。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delightful
展示:showcase → display
特殊的:special → particular
提供:offer → provide
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Glad to learn you’re interested in movies.
拓展句:I'm glad to learn that you’re interested in movies.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]It tells the story of Chinese people’s struggle to save the earth from destruction as the sun expands.(as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]I highly recommend this film because it not only showcases China’s advancements in film-making with its grand scenes and impressive special effects, but also highlights Chinese people’s perseverance and determination in saving our “home”, which offers an insight into Chinese culture and society.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
你校英语报正在征集稿件,内容是对你看过的一部电影进行评论。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 简单介绍电影;
2. 评论电影。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Forrest Gump is an inspiring movie, whose leading character Forrest Gump is born with a low IQ and muscle problem. His mother plays a very important role in his life. She is optimistic, never feeling ashamed of her son. Supported by his mother, Gump manages to live a life like a normal person. Although he is not smart, he knows how to keep life hopeful and dynamic.
The movie sends a message: do well what we should do and life will repay us. With its fairly beautiful pictures and music, this educational and moving movie is well worthy of appreciation for many times.
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作。学校英语报正在征集稿件,请考生写一篇短文投稿,对你看过的一部电影进行评论。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
振奋人心的:inspiring → encouraging
聪明的:smart → clever
充满活力的:dynamic → energetic
感人的:moving → touching
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:His mother plays a very important role in his life. She is optimistic, never feeling ashamed of her son.
拓展句:Playing a very important role in his life, his mother is optimistic, never feeling ashamed of her son.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Forrest Gump is an inspiring movie, whose leading character Forrest Gump is born with a low IQ and muscle problem. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Although he is not smart, he knows how to keep life hopeful and dynamic. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 4
请根据电影《功夫熊猫》写一篇影视评论。内容包括:
1.故事以China’s Valley of Peace为背景;
2.从一只普通熊猫被选为神龙勇士(the Dragon Warrior)到成为功夫大师的过程;
3.发表自己的看法。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
参考词汇:《功夫熊猫》(Kung Fu Panda)
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【答案】
Kung Fu Panda tells a story about a fat, big panda that can perform martial arts. The film is set in China’s Valley of Peace, where there are no humans except a group of animals who can speak.
At first, the panda works for his father in a noodle shop. At that time, he is only a common panda. By accident, he is chosen to be the Dragon Warrior. In the end, he realizes the truth to be a master of Kung Fu is that you will succeed if you believe in yourself.
Kung Fu Panda is considered to be one of the greatest cartoon films. It is popular among teenagers, even the adults.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据电影《功夫熊猫》写一篇影视评论。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
偶然:by accident → by chance
选择:choose → select
最后:in the end → finally
相信:believe in → have faith in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Kung Fu Panda is considered to be one of the greatest cartoon films. It is popular among teenagers, even the adults.
拓展句:Kung Fu Panda is considered to be one of the greatest cartoon films, which is popular among teenagers, even the adults.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Kung Fu Panda tells a story about a fat, big panda that can perform martial arts. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]In the end, he realizes the truth to be a master of Kung Fu is that you will succeed if you believe in yourself. (运用了that引导表语从句,if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 5
请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介,用英语写一篇电影评论。
A Film Review
片名(Name):《ET外星人》(ET)
导演(Director):史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg)
剧情梗概:外星人(ET)误留在地球上,Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友,分享痛苦与快乐,最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。
评价(Comment):本片美丽而感人;告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。
注意:词数80个左右。
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【答案】
A Film Review
ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg. It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. A boy called Elliott, acted by Henry Thomas, hides ET in his house to protect ET from the cold world of grown-ups. They become good friends, sharing sorrow and happiness and at last some children decide to take the risk of sending ET back to his planet.
The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给关于电影《ET外星人》的简介,用英语写一篇电影评论。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
给……命名:call → name
决定做某事:decide to do sth. → determine to do sth.
感人的:moving → touching
重要的:important → significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg.
拓展句:ET is a film which is directed by Steven Spielberg.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
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