内容正文:
Unit 2 Be sporty, be healthy 运动和健康
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写作主题
识
)应用文写作精练(解析版)
主题:建议信(鼓励参加体育运动)
写作框架:
第一段
开门见山,引出话题。表明写信目的。
第二段
建议的体育活动并说明理由。
第三段
表达期望,希望建议得到采纳和考虑。
写作词汇短语:
(1)体育运动
stadium n. 运动场
attempt v. 企图,试图 n. 努力,试图
promote v. 促进;将……晋级
record n. & v. 记录
participate in 参加
be in good/great shape 体形健美
be good/bad for one’s health 对某人的健康有好处/坏处
relieve stress 缓解压力
work out/take exercise regularly 定期锻炼
as a matter of routine 例行公事
physical exercise 身体锻炼
full of energy 精力充沛
build up one’s body 强身健体
develop a habit of 养成……的习惯
in good health 身体状况良好
contribute to 促进,有利于
improve one’s health 增进某人的健康
stay in shape 保持体形
outdoor activities 户外活动
keep healthy/fit 保持健康
写作句型:
【开头句】
1. Not only does exercise improve our health but it also makes us cheerful and raises our learning efficiency.
运动不仅改善我们的健康,而且使我们愉快,提高我们的学习效率。
2. I’m sorry to hear that you are suffering from bad health.
听说你身体不好,我很难过。
3. I’m writing to offer you my advice/tips/suggestions on how to keep healthy.
我写信是想给你提供关于如何保持健康的建议。
4. Would you be kind enough to give me some advice/tips/suggestions on how to build up my body?
你能给我一些关于如何强身健体的建议吗?
【中间句】
5. Sports and games are also very useful for character training.
体育运动还有利于品格的培养。
6. The reason why I think basketball is an art as well as a sport is that it needs both strength and skill.
我认为篮球不仅是一项运动而且是一门艺术的原因是它既需要力量又需要技巧。
7. I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.
我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。
8. If I were you, I would try tai chi.
如果我是你,我会尝试一下太极。
9. It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise.
找一个可以和你一块锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。
10. How about playing basketball in your free time?
在你空闲的时候打篮球怎么样?
【结尾句】
11. The sport teaches you to play by the rules and teaches you to know what it feels like to win or to lose—it teaches you the true meaning of life. 这项运动教你按规则行事,教你知道输赢的滋味——它教会你生活的真谛。
12.I hope my suggestion can be of help to you.希望我的建议对你有帮助。
13.I think you can make it if you follow the above advice.如果你听从以上建议,我认为你会成功的。
写作模板:
Having learned that .
Exercise can__________________. First of all, I suggest________________. Besides,_________________.Last but not least,______________.
I hope you will________________________________.
举一反三:
中国正大力采取措施,帮助人们管理体重,过上健康生活。为响应这一号召,扩大宣传,请你为校英文报写一篇倡议书,内容包括:
1.体重管理的目的;
2.体重管理的措施;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
An Initiative for Weight Management
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
An Initiative for Weight Management
Dear fellow students,
It is reported that the Chinese government is taking significant measures to help people manage their weight and live a quality and healthy life. As individuals, how should we act?
First and foremost, it is essential to recognize that a healthy weight can dramatically reduce the risk of various chronic diseases. Then we should adopt a balanced diet. What’s more, regular physical activities matter too. Not only does exercise help burn calories but also strengthens our muscles and bones. In addition to diet and exercise, developing healthy lifestyle habits is crucial for effective weight management. By following these together, we can create a supportive environment for weight management and overall well-being.
To conclude, weight management is a vital aspect of our health that requires our attention and effort. Let’s take the first step! Just do it!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇倡议书,说明体重管理的目的以及体重管理的措施。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
采用:adopt → employ
总之:in conclude → all in all
此外:what’s more → besides
重要:vital → important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:By following these together, we can create a supportive environment for weight management and overall well-being.
拓展句:If we follow these together, we can create a supportive environment for weight management and overall well-being.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】By following these together, we can create a supportive environment for weight management and overall well-being.(运用了动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】Not only does exercise help burn calories but also strengthens our muscles and bones.(运用了部分倒装句)
Passage 1
假定你是李华,是学校英语社团负责人。你校正在开展“快乐学习,健康生活”主题活动,请代表社团用英文向社团成员及全体学生写一份倡议信,号召大家利用好课间休息时间,劳逸结合。内容包括:1. 倡议的背景和目的;2. 如何利用课间休息时间;3. 提出倡议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当添加内容,使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The English Club
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
I am excited to announce the launch of our school’s themed activity “Happy Learning, Healthy Living”. The purpose is to promote a balanced lifestyle by combining study and relaxation effectively. During our busy school days, it is important that we make the most of our break times. We encourage everyone to use their class breaks wisely by engaging in activities that help refresh the mind and body. This could include taking a short walk outside, doing some stretching exercises, chatting with friends, or even reading a book to unwind.
Let’s strive for a harmonious blend of work and rest to ensure a productive and fulfilling academic journey.
The English Club
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作,要求用英文写一份倡议信。学校正在开展“快乐学习,健康生活”主题活动,请号召社团成员及全体学生利用好课间休息时间,劳逸结合。内容要点如下:1. 倡议的背景和目的;2. 如何利用课间休息时间;3. 提出倡议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
重要的:important → critical/significant
鼓励:encourage → inspire
参加:engage in → take part in/participate in
聊天:chat with → have a gossip with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I am excited to announce the launch of our school’s themed activity “Happy Learning, Healthy Living”. The purpose is to promote a balanced lifestyle by combining study and relaxation effectively.
拓展句:I am excited to announce the launch of our school’s themed activity “Happy Learning, Healthy Living” whose purpose is to promote a balanced lifestyle by combining study and relaxation effectively.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】During our busy school days, it is important that we make the most of our break times. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】We encourage everyone to use their class breaks wisely by engaging in activities that help refresh the mind and body. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
最近你所在的国际班中有许多同学缺乏体育锻炼,每天都十分困倦,所以你决定给全班同学写封英文倡议信,劝说大家每天早上到校后参加晨跑。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear classmates,
I’m writing to persuade you to take part in morning jogging after arriving at school every day.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I’m writing to persuade you to take part in morning jogging after arriving at school every day. Recently I noticed many students are under huge pressure of study, lack of exercise and thus sleepy in class. Morning jogging can bring us a lot of benefit.
Regular exercise will do good to health. Morning jogging can help lessen stress and at the same time, equip us with firm will to overcome difficulties. Finally, if a day begins with exercise, we can keep a positive state of mind and remain in high spirits all day.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封倡议信,劝说大家每天早上到校后参加晨跑。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
缺少:lack of → short of
减少,减轻:lessen → decrease
坚定的:firm → determined
克服:overcome → get over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Regular exercise will do good to health.
拓展句:It is known to all that regular exercise will do good to health.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Recently I noticed many students are under huge pressure of study, lack of exercise and thus sleepy in class. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Finally, if a day begins with exercise, we can keep a positive state of mind and remain in high spirits all day. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 3
为增强学生体质,你校将在下周举办一次“Love Sports, Love Life”的体育活动。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你用英文写一篇倡议信,呼吁同学们积极进行体育锻炼。
内容要点包括:
1.活动的目的;
2.进行体育运动的益处;
3.提出倡议,表达期待。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With best wishes.
The Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear friends,
We are writing to call on everyone to participate in the activity called Love Sports, Love Life, whose aim is to urge us to take an active part in physical exercise.
There is no denying that taking exercise is beneficial to us. Firstly, it can help build up our body and keep healthy, thus protecting us from the epidemic flu nowadays. In addition, not only can exercising relieve stress from study, but it can improve our learning efficiency. More importantly, doing sports can build up our confidence and strengthen our willpower, which will have a lasting effect on our life.
It is high time that we got started. Only when we have a healthy body can we live a happy life.
With best wishes.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英文写一篇倡议信,呼吁同学们积极进行体育锻炼。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
呼吁:call on→appeal to
参与:participate in→take part in
目的:aim→objective
另外:in addition→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, it can help build up our body and keep healthy, thus protecting us from the epidemic flu nowadays.
拓展句:Firstly, it can help build up our body and keep healthy, which protects us from the epidemic flu nowadays.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]We are writing to call on everyone to participate in the activity called Love Sports, Love Life, whose aim is to urge us to take an active part in physical exercise. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]More importantly, doing sports can build up our confidence and strengthen our willpower, which will have a lasting effect on our life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 4
假定你是李华。你校交换生Eric最近因学业压力大,加上缺乏锻炼,经常生病。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明定期锻炼的重要性;
2. 分享你保持健康的运动习惯;
3. 说服对方加入。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Eric,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been getting sick frequently due to academic stress and lack of exercise. Regular exercise is crucial as it can strengthen your immune system, relieve stress and improve your overall well-being.
I usually jog for half an hour every morning and play basketball with my friends on weekends. These habits have really helped me stay fit.
I strongly advise you to join me in these activities, which I am confident will improve your condition. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Eric写邮件,说明定期锻炼的重要性,分享自己的运动习惯并说服对方加入。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
由于:due to → because of
至关重要的:crucial → significant
压力:stress → pressure
健康的:fit → healthy
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:I strongly advise you to join me in these activities, which I am confident will improve your condition.
拓展句:I strongly advise that you should join me in these activities, which I am confident will improve your condition.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been getting sick frequently due to academic stress and lack of exercise. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Regular exercise is crucial as it can strengthen your immune system, relieve stress and improve your overall well-being. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 5
假定你是李华。班上新转来的交换生Jack酷爱跑步,他写信向你询问适合早晨跑步的地方。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 推荐一个理想的跑步地点并说明原因;
2. 邀请他一起晨跑。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’m delighted to hear about your passion for running. Since you’re looking for a perfect jogging spot, I highly recommend the riverside path near our school. The path is smooth and lined with beautiful flowers and trees. As you run along this route, you can enjoy the fresh air and the sound of the flowing river. It’s really relaxing and refreshing.
I usually run there at 6:30 a.m. every Saturday. How about joining me this Saturday? We can run together and explore the scenic route. I’m sure you’ll love it.
Looking forward to running with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给询问适合晨跑地点的交换生Jack回一封信,为他推荐一个理想的地点,并详细说明原因,最后邀请他一起晨跑。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
热情:passion → enthusiasm, zeal
寻找:look for → seek, search for
理想的:perfect → ideal
使人精神振作的:refreshing → invigorating
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m delighted to hear about your passion for running.
拓展句:I’m delighted to hear that you are passionate about running.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Since you’re looking for a perfect jogging spot, I highly recommend the riverside path near our school. (运用了Since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]As you run along this route, you can enjoy the fresh air and the sound of the flowing river. (运用了As引导时间状语从句)
Passage 6
假定你是李华,你的朋友Leo因为缺少锻炼,经常生病。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表达担忧及看法;
2.你的建议以及理由,至少两条;
3.表达期待和祝福。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Leo,
I hope this email finds you in good spirits. I am writing to express my deep concern about your health. You have been suffering from frequent illnesses lately, and I am convinced that the root cause lies in the lack of exercise.
To improve your situation, I suggest several practical steps. Firstly, substitute short car rides or bus trips with walking or cycling. Secondly, allocate some time each day to do bodyweight exercises at home, which are convenient and effective. Additionally, consider joining a local sports club where you can engage in group activities and receive professional guidance.
I earnestly hope that you will take these suggestions seriously and start incorporating exercise into your daily routine. I am confident that this will significantly enhance your health and quality of life.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Leo写封邮件,对于他缺少锻炼,经常生病表达担忧及看法、提出建议并表达期待和祝福。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
缺乏:lack → shortage
担忧:concern → worry
最近:lately → recently
此外:additionally → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, substitute short car rides or bus trips with walking or cycling.
拓展句:Firstly, it is recommended that you substitute short car rides or bus trips with walking or cycling.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Secondly, allocate some time each day to do bodyweight exercises at home, which are convenient and effective.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, consider joining a local sports club where you can engage in group activities and receive professional guidance.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型3】I earnestly hope that you will take these suggestions seriously and start incorporating exercise into your daily routine.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
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Unit 2 Be sporty, be healthy 运动和健康
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写作主题
识
)应用文写作精练(原卷版)
主题:建议信(鼓励参加体育运动)
写作框架:
第一段
开门见山,引出话题。表明写信目的。
第二段
建议的体育活动并说明理由。
第三段
表达期望,希望建议得到采纳和考虑。
写作词汇短语:
(1)体育运动
stadium n. 运动场
attempt v. 企图,试图 n. 努力,试图
promote v. 促进;将……晋级
record n. & v. 记录
participate in 参加
be in good/great shape 体形健美
be good/bad for one’s health 对某人的健康有好处/坏处
relieve stress 缓解压力
work out/take exercise regularly 定期锻炼
as a matter of routine 例行公事
physical exercise 身体锻炼
full of energy 精力充沛
build up one’s body 强身健体
develop a habit of 养成……的习惯
in good health 身体状况良好
contribute to 促进,有利于
improve one’s health 增进某人的健康
stay in shape 保持体形
outdoor activities 户外活动
keep healthy/fit 保持健康
写作句型:
【开头句】
1. Not only does exercise improve our health but it also makes us cheerful and raises our learning efficiency.
运动不仅改善我们的健康,而且使我们愉快,提高我们的学习效率。
2. I’m sorry to hear that you are suffering from bad health.
听说你身体不好,我很难过。
3. I’m writing to offer you my advice/tips/suggestions on how to keep healthy.
我写信是想给你提供关于如何保持健康的建议。
4. Would you be kind enough to give me some advice/tips/suggestions on how to build up my body?
你能给我一些关于如何强身健体的建议吗?
【中间句】
5. Sports and games are also very useful for character training.
体育运动还有利于品格的培养。
6. The reason why I think basketball is an art as well as a sport is that it needs both strength and skill.
我认为篮球不仅是一项运动而且是一门艺术的原因是它既需要力量又需要技巧。
7. I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.
我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。
8. If I were you, I would try tai chi.
如果我是你,我会尝试一下太极。
9. It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise.
找一个可以和你一块锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。
10. How about playing basketball in your free time?
在你空闲的时候打篮球怎么样?
【结尾句】
11. The sport teaches you to play by the rules and teaches you to know what it feels like to win or to lose—it teaches you the true meaning of life. 这项运动教你按规则行事,教你知道输赢的滋味——它教会你生活的真谛。
12.I hope my suggestion can be of help to you.希望我的建议对你有帮助。
13.I think you can make it if you follow the above advice.如果你听从以上建议,我认为你会成功的。
写作模板:
Having learned that .
Exercise can__________________. First of all, I suggest________________. Besides,_________________.Last but not least,______________.
I hope you will________________________________.
举一反三:
中国正大力采取措施,帮助人们管理体重,过上健康生活。为响应这一号召,扩大宣传,请你为校英文报写一篇倡议书,内容包括:
1.体重管理的目的;
2.体重管理的措施;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
An Initiative for Weight Management
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 1
假定你是李华,是学校英语社团负责人。你校正在开展“快乐学习,健康生活”主题活动,请代表社团用英文向社团成员及全体学生写一份倡议信,号召大家利用好课间休息时间,劳逸结合。内容包括:1. 倡议的背景和目的;2. 如何利用课间休息时间;3. 提出倡议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当添加内容,使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The English Club
Passage 2
最近你所在的国际班中有许多同学缺乏体育锻炼,每天都十分困倦,所以你决定给全班同学写封英文倡议信,劝说大家每天早上到校后参加晨跑。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear classmates,
I’m writing to persuade you to take part in morning jogging after arriving at school every day.
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Passage 3
为增强学生体质,你校将在下周举办一次“Love Sports, Love Life”的体育活动。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你用英文写一篇倡议信,呼吁同学们积极进行体育锻炼。
内容要点包括:
1.活动的目的;
2.进行体育运动的益处;
3.提出倡议,表达期待。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
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With best wishes.
The Students’ Union
Passage 4
假定你是李华。你校交换生Eric最近因学业压力大,加上缺乏锻炼,经常生病。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明定期锻炼的重要性;
2. 分享你保持健康的运动习惯;
3. 说服对方加入。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你是李华。班上新转来的交换生Jack酷爱跑步,他写信向你询问适合早晨跑步的地方。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 推荐一个理想的跑步地点并说明原因;
2. 邀请他一起晨跑。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
假定你是李华,你的朋友Leo因为缺少锻炼,经常生病。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表达担忧及看法;
2.你的建议以及理由,至少两条;
3.表达期待和祝福。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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