Unit 9 Great cities of the world（写作突破专项训练）英语牛津上海版三起六年级上册

Unit9思维导图法描述地点 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 Ms Guo: Look at the photos. This is Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. （对北京的评价） It's a great city. It's in the north of China. （北京的地理位置）This is Shanghai. It's a great city too. （对上海的评价） It's in the east of China. （上海的的地理位置） Peter: Are the two cities far away from each other? Kitty: Yes, they are. Peter: How long does it take to get to Shanghai from Beijing by train? Ms Guo: It takes about five hours. It's very fast. （交通方式1：火车的耗时） Alice: How long does it take to travel by plane? Ms Guo: It only takes about two hours by plane. （交通方式2：飞机的耗时） 02 写作方法指引-观点表述法 03写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Shall we go to Beijing and Shanghai with my best friend Lily next winter holiday? We both love traveling, and we’re planning this trip carefully. Beijing is the capital of China. （对北京的评价）It's in the north of China, and there are many famous places like the Great Wall. （北京的地理位置和著名景点） Shanghai is a great city too. （对上海的评价）It's in the east of China, and the Oriental Pearl Tower there is very famous. （上海的地理位置和著名景点）The two cities are far away from each other. It takes about five hours by train and two hours by plane. （飞机和火车不同的交通方式的耗时） Lily wants to take the plane to Beijing first because it’s fast. Then we plan to take the train to Shanghai—we want to talk and enjoy the views on the train. 01 基础知识精讲 位置相关 参考词汇 方位：east 东面；west西面；north 北面；south 南面；far away from 远离 参考句型 1. How long does it take to get to Shanghai from Beijing by train? 2. It takes about five hours. 02基础知识精讲-语法 It takes sb. some time to do sth.表达某人花费了多长时间做某事 1. 句型结构与成分功能 “It takes sb. some time to do sth. ” 中it为形式主语，无实际语义，目的是避免 “真正主语（to do sth.）” 过长导致句子 “头重脚轻”，使句子结构更平衡。 take表示 “花费（时间）”，是句型的核心动词，仅用于该结构中，主语必须是形式主语 “It”；时态变化时，“takes” 需相应调整（如过去式 “took”，将来时 “will take”）。 2. 时态变化规则 该句型的时态主要通过谓语动词 “take” 的形式变化体现，核心结构（It + 谓语 + sb. + 时间 + to do sth.）保持不变，常见时态变形如下： 一般现在时：It takes sb. some time to do sth. 一般过去时：It took sb. some time to do sth. 一般将来时：It will take / is going to take sb. some time to do sth. 3. 常见句式变形 （1）否定句 在谓语动词前加否定词 “don’t /doesn’t /didn’t /won’t”，具体形式根据时态确定： 一般现在时：It doesn’t take sb. some time to do sth. 例句：It doesn’t take her long to make breakfast.（她做早餐花不了多久。） 一般过去时：It didn’t take sb. some time to do sth. 例句：It didn’t take them much time to solve the problem.（他们解决这个问题没花太多时间。） （2）特殊疑问句（询问时间） 用疑问词 “How long” 引导，结构为：How long + 助动词 + it + take + sb. + to do sth.? （助动词根据时态确定，如 does /did/will） 例句 1（一般现在时）：How long does it take you to learn a new song?（你学一首新歌要花多久？） 例句 2（一般过去时）：How long did it take him to repair the car?（他修这辆车花了多久？） 提分练 一、选择题 ( )1. It ______ my sister 2 hours to draw this picture yesterday. A. take B. takes C. took D. will take ( )2. It usually ______ my father 40 minutes to drive to his office. A. take B. takes C. took D. is taking ( )3. How long ______ it ______ you to finish reading this book last week? A. do; take B. does; take C. did; take D. will; take 二、按要求改写句子 (1) It takes me 10 minutes to brush my teeth every morning.（改为一般过去时） → ________________________________________ (2) It took them 5 hours to climb the mountain last weekend.（改为否定句） → ________________________________________ (3) It will take her 1 hour to go shopping this afternoon.（改为以 How long 引导的特殊疑问句） → ________________________________________ 参考解析 一、选择题 (1) C 解析：句中 “yesterday”（昨天）提示时态为一般过去时，谓语动词 “take” 需用过去式 “took”，故选 C。 (2) B 解析：“usually”（通常）表明句子描述常规习惯，时态为一般现在时；主语 “It” 是第三人称单数，谓语动词需用 “takes”，故选 B。 (3) C 解析：“last week”（上周）提示时态为一般过去时，特殊疑问句需用助动词 “did”，且 “did” 后接动词原形 “take”，故选 C。 二. 按要求改写句子 (1) It took me 10 minutes to brush my teeth every morning. 解析：原句为一般现在时，改为一般过去时需将谓语动词 “takes” 变为过去式 “took”，其余成分（形式主语 It、间接宾语 me、时间 10 minutes、真正主语 to brush...）保持不变。 (2) It didn’t take them 5 hours to climb the mountain last weekend. 解析：原句为一般过去时，否定句需在谓语动词 “took” 前加 “didn’t”，同时 “took” 恢复为原形 “take”，其余成分不变。 (3) How long will it take her to go shopping this afternoon? 解析：原句为一般将来时，改为 How long 引导的特殊疑问句时，需将助动词 “will” 提前至 “it” 前，结构为 “How long + will + it + take + sb. + to do sth.”，其余成分不变。 模拟写作提升1 写作主题 课堂上你看了Miss Guo拍摄的北京的照片，你准备前往这个城市，请你介绍一下你对北京的印象和你会怎么去？ 写作要求 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词 & 词组 show us photos of it给我们展示了它的图片; in the north of China在中国的北面 参考句型 1.If I go from Beijing to Shanghai by train, it takes about five hours 2.I hope to see nice things in Beijing. 范文1 I want to visit Beijing soon. Ms Guo showed us photos of it. Beijing is China’s capital. It is a great city! It is in the north of China.​ （北京的地理位置） I know Beijing is far from Shanghai. If I go from Beijing to Shanghai by train, it takes about five hours. By plane, it only takes two hours. That’s very fast!​ （去北京的两种交通方式） I hope to see nice things in Beijing. I think this trip will be fun. I can’t wait!. （对北京之行的评价） 模拟写作提升2 写作主题 课堂上你听Miss Guo说了上海这个城市，你准备前往这个城市，请你介绍一下你对上海的印象和你会怎么去？ 写作要求 1.书写规范，没有拼写错误 2.语言表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词 & 词组 next trip下一次旅行；walk around the city沿着城市步行 参考句型 1. I believe I will have a good time there. 2. By train, it takes about five hours to go from Beijing to Shanghai. 范文2 Shanghai is my next trip place. Ms Guo said it is a great city, just like Beijing. It is in the east of China.​ （上海的地理位置） Shanghai is far from Beijing. By train, it takes about five hours to go from Beijing to Shanghai. By plane, it takes only two hours. That’s quick!​ （去上海的两种交通方式） I am happy to visit Shanghai. I want to walk around the city. I believe I will have a good time there. （对上海之行的评价） 六年级寒假作文真题 同学们，刚刚过去的寒假一定给你留下了很多美好的回忆。请你以A visit to...为题写一篇短文。内容提示如下： 1. 何时去何地游玩。 2. 交通方式及路程时间。 3. 日程安排（至少两天)及具体活动。 4. 该地的变迁。 5. 你的感受。 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 内容必须包括以上中的要点，可适当发挥； 3. 条理清楚、语句连贯。 参考单词&词组： winter vacation 寒假; direct flight直飞; sound wonderful 听上去优美; natural beauty自然之美; on the second day 在第二天 参考句型： 1. It took us two hours to get there by direct flight.我们用了2小时直飞去那 2. We not only watched the show of dolphins but also took many pictures. 我们不仅看了海豚秀还拍了很多照片 范文3 A visit to Hangzhou Last winter vacation, my parents and I visited Hangzhou. It is in the east of China. （杭州的地理位置）It took us two hours to get there by direct flight. （杭州的交通方式） After we arrived，I felt that all had great change,the city was more beautiful than before. First, we went to the West Lake which made Hangzhou famous for. （杭州的著名景点1）It was a place which had natural beauty. The view was very beautiful in a whole year. I enjoyed the music fountain, it sounded wonderful. On the second day, we visted Hangzhou Amusement Park. （杭州的著名景点2）We not only watched the show of dolphins but also took many pictures. That was a very interesting traveling there. I will never forget it. （对杭州之行的评价） 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $