23.Unit 5 Travel（书面表达）-2025-2026学年上学期八年级英语知识点梳理与巩固（北师大版2024）

2025-2026学年上学期八年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(北师大版2024) Unit 5 Travel书面表达 必备知识清单 单元写作指导 一、写作框架 旅行日记一般可采用以下结构框架： 1.开头（Beginning）：引出旅行主题，说明旅行的时间、地点、同行人员以及当天的天气状况。 【例】Last Sunday, I went to the beach with my family. The weather was sunny and warm, which made us feel extremely excited.（上周日，我和家人去了海滩。天气晴朗温暖，这让我们感到无比兴奋。） 2.中间（Body）：按照时间顺序或事件发展顺序，详细描述旅行中的具体活动、所见所闻、所尝美食等。 【例】First, we built sandcastles on the beach. Then, we swam in the clear blue sea. After that, we had a picnic with delicious sandwiches and fresh fruits.（首先，我们在海滩上堆沙堡。然后，我们在清澈湛蓝的海水中游泳。之后，我们用美味的三明治和新鲜水果进行了野餐。） 3.结尾（Ending）：总结旅行感受，表达对这次旅行的喜爱、难忘之情，或者说明从旅行中获得的收获等。 【例】All in all, it was a wonderful trip. I really hope to visit there again.（总之，这是一次美妙的旅行。我真的希望能再次去那里游玩。） 二、词汇句式 （一）词汇 1.旅行地点相关 beach（海滩）：We spent the whole day at the beach, enjoying the sun and the sea.（我们在海滩上度过了一整天，享受着阳光和大海。） mountain（山）：We climbed the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful view from the top.（我们爬上了山，从山顶欣赏到了美丽的景色。） forest（森林）：The forest is full of various kinds of trees and animals.（森林里有各种各样的树木和动物。） park（公园）：There are many people flying kites in the park on weekends.（周末有很多人在公园放风筝。） museum（博物馆）：We visited the history museum and learned a lot about the past.（我们参观了历史博物馆，学到了很多关于过去的知识。） zoo（动物园）：The children were excited to see the cute animals in the zoo.（孩子们在动物园看到可爱的动物很兴奋。） city（城市）：New York is a very busy and modern city.（纽约是一个非常繁忙和现代化的城市。） countryside（乡村）：I love the quiet and peaceful countryside.（我喜欢宁静祥和的乡村。） 2.旅行活动相关 visit（参观）：We visited many famous places during our trip.（我们在旅行中参观了许多著名的地方。） climb（攀爬）：They climbed the ancient tower to get a better view.（他们爬上古老的塔楼以获得更好的视野。） swim（游泳）：The kids swam happily in the pool.（孩子们在泳池里快乐地游泳。） hike（徒步旅行）：We went hiking in the mountains and enjoyed the fresh air.（我们在山里徒步旅行，享受着新鲜空气。） camp（露营）：We decided to camp near the lake for the night.（我们决定在湖边露营过夜。） fish（钓鱼）：My father likes to fish by the river on weekends.（我爸爸喜欢在周末去河边钓鱼。） shop（购物）：We went shopping in the local market and bought some souvenirs.（我们在当地市场购物，买了一些纪念品。） take photos（拍照）：Don't forget to take photos to record the beautiful scenery.（别忘了拍照记录美丽的风景。） have a picnic（野餐）：We had a wonderful picnic in the park on a sunny day.（在一个阳光明媚的日子里，我们在公园进行了一次美妙的野餐。） 3.人物相关 family（家人）：I went on this trip with my family.（我和家人一起进行了这次旅行。） friend（朋友）：My friends and I had a great time together during the journey.（我和我的朋友们在旅途中一起度过了愉快的时光。） guide（导游）：The guide introduced the history and culture of the place to us.（导游向我们介绍了这个地方的历史和文化。） local（当地人）：The locals are very friendly and helpful.（当地人非常友好且乐于助人。） 4.天气相关 sunny（晴朗的）：It was a sunny day, perfect for a trip.（那是一个晴朗的日子，非常适合旅行。） cloudy（多云的）：The sky was cloudy, but it didn't rain.（天空多云，但没有下雨。） rainy（下雨的）：We had to stay indoors because it was rainy.（因为下雨，我们不得不待在室内。） windy（有风的）：It was too windy to fly a kite properly.（风太大了，无法正常放风筝。） snowy（下雪的）：The world became white when it was snowy.（下雪的时候，整个世界都变白了。） 5.食物相关 delicious（美味的）：We ate a lot of delicious local food.（我们吃了很多美味的当地食物。） tasty（可口的）：The pizza in that restaurant is really tasty.（那家餐厅的披萨真的很可口。） fresh（新鲜的）：The fruits here are very fresh.（这里的水果非常新鲜。） spicy（辣的）：I like spicy food, so I really enjoyed the local cuisine.（我喜欢辣的食物，所以我真的很喜欢当地的美食。） sweet（甜的）：The cake has a sweet taste.（这个蛋糕有甜味。） seafood（海鲜）：We had a big seafood dinner last night.（我们昨晚吃了一顿丰盛的海鲜晚餐。） snack（小吃）：There are many kinds of snacks in the street market.（街边市场有很多种小吃。） 6.感受相关 excited（兴奋的）：I was so excited about the trip that I couldn't sleep well the night before.（我对这次旅行非常兴奋，以至于前一天晚上都没睡好。） happy（高兴的）：We were very happy to see such beautiful scenery.（看到如此美丽的风景，我们非常高兴。） tired（疲惫的）：After a long day of traveling, we were all tired.（经过一整天的旅行，我们都很累。） bored（无聊的）：The long journey on the train made me feel a little bored.（火车上漫长的旅程让我觉得有点无聊。） amazed（惊奇的）：We were amazed by the ancient architecture.（我们对古老的建筑感到惊奇。） relaxed（放松的）：Lying on the beach made me feel very relaxed.（躺在海滩上让我感到非常放松。） 7.其他相关 trip（旅行）：This trip is one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life.（这次旅行是我一生中最难忘的经历之一。） journey（旅程）：The journey to the small town was full of surprises.（去那个小镇的旅程充满了惊喜。） experience（经历）：It was a great experience to try something new during the trip.（在旅行中尝试新事物是一次很棒的经历。） souvenir（纪念品）：I bought a lot of souvenirs for my friends.（我给朋友们买了很多纪念品。） transportation（交通）：We chose different kinds of transportation during the trip, such as buses and trains.（我们在旅行中选择了不同种类的交通工具，比如公共汽车和火车。） hotel（酒店）：The hotel we stayed in was very comfortable.（我们住的酒店非常舒适。） plan（计划）：Before the trip, we made a detailed plan.（在旅行前，我们制定了一个详细的计划。） memory（记忆）：This trip will leave a deep memory in my heart.（这次旅行将在我心中留下深刻的记忆。） （二）句式 1.开头常用句式 Last + 时间，I went to... with...（上……，我和…… 去了……） Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents.（去年夏天，我和父母去了北京。） On + 具体日期，we traveled to...（在……，我们去了…… 旅行） On October 1st, we traveled to Guilin.（10 月 1 日，我们去桂林旅行。） It was a/an + 天气形容词 + day when I/we started our trip to...（当我 / 我们开始去…… 旅行时，那是一个…… 的日子） It was a sunny day when we started our trip to the beach.（当我们开始去海滩旅行时，那是一个晴朗的日子。） 2.描述旅行活动句式 First/At first, we... Then/Next, we... After that, we... Finally/In the end, we...（首先，我们…… 然后，我们…… 在那之后，我们…… 最后，我们……） First, we visited the museum. Then, we had lunch in a local restaurant. After that, we went shopping in the city center. Finally, we returned to the hotel.（首先，我们参观了博物馆。然后，我们在当地一家餐馆吃了午饭。在那之后，我们在市中心购物。最后，我们回到了酒店。） We spent + 时间 + doing sth.（我们花了…… 时间做某事） We spent two hours climbing the mountain.（我们花了两个小时爬山。） While we were...（当我们正在…… 时） While we were walking in the forest, we saw many beautiful birds.（当我们在森林里散步时，我们看到了许多美丽的鸟。） We couldn't wait to do sth.（我们迫不及待地做某事） We couldn't wait to swim in the sea as soon as we arrived at the beach.（我们一到达海滩就迫不及待地想去海里游泳。） 3.描述所见所闻句式 There be + 名词 + doing sth.（有…… 正在做某事） There were many people playing beach volleyball on the beach.（有很多人在海滩上打沙滩排球。） It was + 形容词 + to see/hear...（看到 / 听到…… 是…… 的） It was amazing to see the ancient ruins.（看到古老的遗迹令人惊叹。） We noticed that...（我们注意到……） We noticed that the locals were very friendly.（我们注意到当地人非常友好。） 4.描述食物句式 The food there was + 形容词.（那里的食物是…… 的） The food there was really delicious.（那里的食物真的很美味。） We had... for + 三餐.（我们…… 餐吃了……） We had pizza for dinner.（我们晚餐吃了披萨。） The taste of... was...（…… 的味道是……） The taste of the local special dish was quite unique.（当地特色菜的味道非常独特。） 5.描述感受句式 I/We felt + 形容词 + about the trip.（我 / 我们对这次旅行感到……） I felt really excited about the trip.（我对这次旅行感到非常兴奋。） It was such a/an + 形容词 + trip that...（这是一次如此…… 的旅行以至于……） It was such a wonderful trip that I will never forget it.（这是一次如此美妙的旅行，以至于我永远不会忘记它。） I/We had a great time during the trip.（我 / 我们在旅行中玩得很开心。） This trip made me/us...（这次旅行让我 / 我们……） This trip made us feel more relaxed.（这次旅行让我们感觉更放松。） 6.结尾常用句式 All in all/In a word/To sum up, it was a/an... trip.（总之，这是一次…… 的旅行。） All in all, it was an unforgettable trip.（总之，这是一次难忘的旅行。） I hope to visit... again someday.（我希望有一天能再次参观……） I hope to visit Paris again someday.（我希望有一天能再次参观巴黎。） I will always remember this trip because...（我将永远记住这次旅行，因为……） I will always remember this trip because I learned a lot from it.（我将永远记住这次旅行，因为我从中学到了很多。） 三、范文例析 Saturday, July 15th Sunny Today was an amazing day. I went to the zoo with my friends. The weather was sunny, which made our trip more enjoyable. When we arrived at the zoo, we saw many people. First, we went to see the pandas. They were so cute, eating bamboo leisurely. Then, we watched the monkey show. The monkeys were really smart and funny, making us laugh from time to time. After that, we visited the bird area. There were various kinds of beautiful birds singing in the cages. For lunch, we had some snacks in the zoo. The food was not so great, but we were too hungry to care. In the afternoon, we continued our visit. We saw lions, tigers and other animals. All in all, it was a wonderful trip. I was tired but happy. I hope to visit the zoo again soon. 【范文分析】 格式正确：开头明确写出了日期 “Saturday, July 15th” 和天气 “Sunny”，符合旅行日记的格式要求。 结构清晰：采用了总分总的结构。开头引出旅行的时间、地点、人物和天气。中间按照参观顺序，详细描述了在动物园看到的各种动物以及活动。结尾总结旅行感受，表达了希望再次参观的愿望。 内容丰富：运用了丰富的词汇，如 “amazing”“enjoyable”“leisurely”“smart”“funny” 等形容词来描述旅行中的事物和感受；使用了 “First... Then... After that...” 等连接词，使文章叙述有条理；对动物的描写生动形象，让读者能够感受到作者在动物园的愉快经历。 语法正确：全文基本使用一般过去时，动词的形式变化准确，符合语法规则。 四、优化策略 运用多样化词汇：避免重复使用相同的词汇，尽量使用同义词或近义词替换。例如，描述 “美丽的”，除了 “beautiful”，还可以用 “gorgeous”“attractive”“charming” 等。 增加细节描写：在描述旅行活动、景点、人物等时，加入更多细节，让读者有身临其境之感。比如描述食物，不仅说 “delicious”，还可描述食物的外观、口感等。如 “The pizza had a crispy crust, with a rich layer of cheese and a sweet - sour tomato sauce, and it was really delicious.”（这个披萨有酥脆的外皮，一层厚厚的芝士和酸甜的番茄酱，真的很美味。） 使用修辞手法：适当运用比喻、拟人、排比等修辞手法，增强文章的感染力。例如，“The sun was like a big warm ball, shining brightly in the sky.”（太阳像一个温暖的大球，在天空中明亮地照耀着。） 注意句子结构变化：不要总是使用简单句，可适当加入并列句、复合句等，提升文章的档次。如 “Although we were a little tired, we were very happy because we had a great time at the zoo.”（虽然我们有点累，但我们非常开心，因为我们在动物园玩得很愉快。） 检查修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误、标点符号使用是否正确等。同时，检查文章内容是否完整，逻辑是否清晰，如有需要，进行修改完善。 综合实战演练 1．假如你是李华，暑假期间你和家人外出了，玩得很开心。请写一封信给你远在北京的好朋友王新，回忆你和家人共同度过的这段时光，也聊聊你现在的生活，并表达对他的想念。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2. 文章需要包含所有要点； 3. 文章中不得出现真实姓名及个人信息； 4. 卷面整洁，书写工整。 参考信息： Activities: tried delicious food, visited museums, went to the sea… Life: study, hobby, appearance... Dear Wang Xin, How’s everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 2．假如你是李华，你负责了美国交换生Tom的周末接待工作。你带着Tom在重庆进行了一日游，让Tom感受到了重庆的美和重庆人的热情。对你来说，这也是一次特别的经历。请根据你们拍摄的照片，写一篇名为“One Day with Tom” 的游记，记录下你当时的心情与感受。文章开头已给出，不计入总次数。 要求： 1.80—120词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称； 3.请选用合适的时态； 4.卷面整洁，书写工整。 参考要点： 1.描述你和Tom游览的地方和尝试的事物； 2.你和Tom的感受。 参考词汇：spicy辣的；culture文化；traditional传统的；warm-hearted热心的；snacks小吃；be proud of为……感到骄傲。 One Day with Tom Tom is my new friend from America. When he came to my home, I couldn’t wait to show him this beautiful city. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．去年暑假，你肯定去过许多有趣的地方，请你以“I went to ________ for summer vacation”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1. 你去了什么地方； 2. 进行了哪些活动。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数100左右，可适当增加细节内容。 I went to _______ for summer vacation _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，请你根据你的外国笔友Mike的来信内容给他写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How time flies! The new term is coming. I learned from your WeChat that you went somewhere interesting. I am sure you have a nice summer vacation. Would you like to tell me something about your travel? Where did you go? What did you do there? Who did you go with? If I want to go there next summer vacation, can you give me some advice (建议)? Yours, Mike 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 字数不少于80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是李明，你的笔友Dave计划这个暑假来中国游玩。请你根据表格中的信息给他写封邮件介绍中国的基本情况并向他推荐北京、西安的名胜，同时谈谈推荐的原因及自己参观的感受。 Facts of China Locations (位置) East Asia Size (面积) 9,600,000 km2 Population 1,400,000,000 History more than 5,000 years, one of..., oldest Places of interest Beijing: The Bird’s Nest, the Great Wall... Xi’an: The Terracotta Army... Feeling wonderful, fantastic, proud, fall in love 要求： 1. 书写规范，包含全部要点，要有适当的开头和结尾，可合理增加细节； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名及人名； 3. 80词左右。 Dear Dave, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 6．假如你是李华，暑假马上就要到了，请你结合以下思维导图写一封邮件邀请新加坡笔友Paul来你的家乡旅游。 要求： 1）邮件中必须包含图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Dear Paul, Summer vacation is coming. I’d like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是李华，学校英语节活动正在举办主题为“读万卷书，行万里路”的演讲比赛。请根据以下提示，以“Enjoy the world, love our life”为题，写一篇演讲稿，请你分享关于一本书的阅读体验，或者描述一次旅行经历，以及它带给你的好处。以此倡议大家多读书，多户外，让身心多多受益。 注意事项： 1. 词数不少于80个。演讲稿首尾已给出，不计入总数； 2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Enjoy the world, love our life Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                        Thank you for your listening! 8．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友玛丽（Mary）听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语给玛丽写一封回信，向她介绍一下中国的黄山（Mount Huangshan）。 提示： 1. 黄山的基本情况介绍； 2. 黄山的特色风景。 要求： 1. 不得出现真实的校名和人名； 2. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mary, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure you will have a good time here. Yours, Li Hua 9．假如你是李明，由于备战期中考试压力比较大，所以你计划在假期旅游一次以缓解紧张的情绪。请你以“Travel for Better Mood”为题，根据以下提示词写一篇短文描述你的旅行计划，并说明这次旅行将如何帮助你保持好心情。词数80-100词。 Travel for Better Mood Why should I travel? stress (n.压力), plan a trip to What do I plan? ·explore nature ·try local (adj.当地的) food ·experience local culture How will it help? happy moments (欢乐时光), forget (v.忘记) worries, new energy 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Travel for Better Mood ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是李华，是学校英文俱乐部的视频博主(vlogger)，受邀为当地旅游局推广拍摄一期英文短视频。请根据以下提示，撰写视频拍摄脚本(video script)，向国际友人介绍横山的一些变化。 The Changes in Hengshan Past Present Living conditions small old houses, small shops tall buildings, shopping malls, supermarkets, … Environment narrow and dirty roads wide and clean roads, blue sky, beautiful parks and lakes, … Traffic on foot, bike, bus private cars, new big train station, … Your feelings … 要求： 1.文章必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于60词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数) The Changes in Hengshan Hengshan is a beautiful place in Yulin, Shaanxi. It has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope Hengshan will become even better in the future. ( 一 / 1 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年上学期八年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(北师大版2024) Unit 5 Travel书面表达 必备知识清单 单元写作指导 一、写作框架 旅行日记一般可采用以下结构框架： 1.开头（Beginning）：引出旅行主题，说明旅行的时间、地点、同行人员以及当天的天气状况。 【例】Last Sunday, I went to the beach with my family. The weather was sunny and warm, which made us feel extremely excited.（上周日，我和家人去了海滩。天气晴朗温暖，这让我们感到无比兴奋。） 2.中间（Body）：按照时间顺序或事件发展顺序，详细描述旅行中的具体活动、所见所闻、所尝美食等。 【例】First, we built sandcastles on the beach. Then, we swam in the clear blue sea. After that, we had a picnic with delicious sandwiches and fresh fruits.（首先，我们在海滩上堆沙堡。然后，我们在清澈湛蓝的海水中游泳。之后，我们用美味的三明治和新鲜水果进行了野餐。） 3.结尾（Ending）：总结旅行感受，表达对这次旅行的喜爱、难忘之情，或者说明从旅行中获得的收获等。 【例】All in all, it was a wonderful trip. I really hope to visit there again.（总之，这是一次美妙的旅行。我真的希望能再次去那里游玩。） 二、词汇句式 （一）词汇 1.旅行地点相关 beach（海滩）：We spent the whole day at the beach, enjoying the sun and the sea.（我们在海滩上度过了一整天，享受着阳光和大海。） mountain（山）：We climbed the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful view from the top.（我们爬上了山，从山顶欣赏到了美丽的景色。） forest（森林）：The forest is full of various kinds of trees and animals.（森林里有各种各样的树木和动物。） park（公园）：There are many people flying kites in the park on weekends.（周末有很多人在公园放风筝。） museum（博物馆）：We visited the history museum and learned a lot about the past.（我们参观了历史博物馆，学到了很多关于过去的知识。） zoo（动物园）：The children were excited to see the cute animals in the zoo.（孩子们在动物园看到可爱的动物很兴奋。） city（城市）：New York is a very busy and modern city.（纽约是一个非常繁忙和现代化的城市。） countryside（乡村）：I love the quiet and peaceful countryside.（我喜欢宁静祥和的乡村。） 2.旅行活动相关 visit（参观）：We visited many famous places during our trip.（我们在旅行中参观了许多著名的地方。） climb（攀爬）：They climbed the ancient tower to get a better view.（他们爬上古老的塔楼以获得更好的视野。） swim（游泳）：The kids swam happily in the pool.（孩子们在泳池里快乐地游泳。） hike（徒步旅行）：We went hiking in the mountains and enjoyed the fresh air.（我们在山里徒步旅行，享受着新鲜空气。） camp（露营）：We decided to camp near the lake for the night.（我们决定在湖边露营过夜。） fish（钓鱼）：My father likes to fish by the river on weekends.（我爸爸喜欢在周末去河边钓鱼。） shop（购物）：We went shopping in the local market and bought some souvenirs.（我们在当地市场购物，买了一些纪念品。） take photos（拍照）：Don't forget to take photos to record the beautiful scenery.（别忘了拍照记录美丽的风景。） have a picnic（野餐）：We had a wonderful picnic in the park on a sunny day.（在一个阳光明媚的日子里，我们在公园进行了一次美妙的野餐。） 3.人物相关 family（家人）：I went on this trip with my family.（我和家人一起进行了这次旅行。） friend（朋友）：My friends and I had a great time together during the journey.（我和我的朋友们在旅途中一起度过了愉快的时光。） guide（导游）：The guide introduced the history and culture of the place to us.（导游向我们介绍了这个地方的历史和文化。） local（当地人）：The locals are very friendly and helpful.（当地人非常友好且乐于助人。） 4.天气相关 sunny（晴朗的）：It was a sunny day, perfect for a trip.（那是一个晴朗的日子，非常适合旅行。） cloudy（多云的）：The sky was cloudy, but it didn't rain.（天空多云，但没有下雨。） rainy（下雨的）：We had to stay indoors because it was rainy.（因为下雨，我们不得不待在室内。） windy（有风的）：It was too windy to fly a kite properly.（风太大了，无法正常放风筝。） snowy（下雪的）：The world became white when it was snowy.（下雪的时候，整个世界都变白了。） 5.食物相关 delicious（美味的）：We ate a lot of delicious local food.（我们吃了很多美味的当地食物。） tasty（可口的）：The pizza in that restaurant is really tasty.（那家餐厅的披萨真的很可口。） fresh（新鲜的）：The fruits here are very fresh.（这里的水果非常新鲜。） spicy（辣的）：I like spicy food, so I really enjoyed the local cuisine.（我喜欢辣的食物，所以我真的很喜欢当地的美食。） sweet（甜的）：The cake has a sweet taste.（这个蛋糕有甜味。） seafood（海鲜）：We had a big seafood dinner last night.（我们昨晚吃了一顿丰盛的海鲜晚餐。） snack（小吃）：There are many kinds of snacks in the street market.（街边市场有很多种小吃。） 6.感受相关 excited（兴奋的）：I was so excited about the trip that I couldn't sleep well the night before.（我对这次旅行非常兴奋，以至于前一天晚上都没睡好。） happy（高兴的）：We were very happy to see such beautiful scenery.（看到如此美丽的风景，我们非常高兴。） tired（疲惫的）：After a long day of traveling, we were all tired.（经过一整天的旅行，我们都很累。） bored（无聊的）：The long journey on the train made me feel a little bored.（火车上漫长的旅程让我觉得有点无聊。） amazed（惊奇的）：We were amazed by the ancient architecture.（我们对古老的建筑感到惊奇。） relaxed（放松的）：Lying on the beach made me feel very relaxed.（躺在海滩上让我感到非常放松。） 7.其他相关 trip（旅行）：This trip is one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life.（这次旅行是我一生中最难忘的经历之一。） journey（旅程）：The journey to the small town was full of surprises.（去那个小镇的旅程充满了惊喜。） experience（经历）：It was a great experience to try something new during the trip.（在旅行中尝试新事物是一次很棒的经历。） souvenir（纪念品）：I bought a lot of souvenirs for my friends.（我给朋友们买了很多纪念品。） transportation（交通）：We chose different kinds of transportation during the trip, such as buses and trains.（我们在旅行中选择了不同种类的交通工具，比如公共汽车和火车。） hotel（酒店）：The hotel we stayed in was very comfortable.（我们住的酒店非常舒适。） plan（计划）：Before the trip, we made a detailed plan.（在旅行前，我们制定了一个详细的计划。） memory（记忆）：This trip will leave a deep memory in my heart.（这次旅行将在我心中留下深刻的记忆。） （二）句式 1.开头常用句式 Last + 时间，I went to... with...（上……，我和…… 去了……） Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents.（去年夏天，我和父母去了北京。） On + 具体日期，we traveled to...（在……，我们去了…… 旅行） On October 1st, we traveled to Guilin.（10 月 1 日，我们去桂林旅行。） It was a/an + 天气形容词 + day when I/we started our trip to...（当我 / 我们开始去…… 旅行时，那是一个…… 的日子） It was a sunny day when we started our trip to the beach.（当我们开始去海滩旅行时，那是一个晴朗的日子。） 2.描述旅行活动句式 First/At first, we... Then/Next, we... After that, we... Finally/In the end, we...（首先，我们…… 然后，我们…… 在那之后，我们…… 最后，我们……） First, we visited the museum. Then, we had lunch in a local restaurant. After that, we went shopping in the city center. Finally, we returned to the hotel.（首先，我们参观了博物馆。然后，我们在当地一家餐馆吃了午饭。在那之后，我们在市中心购物。最后，我们回到了酒店。） We spent + 时间 + doing sth.（我们花了…… 时间做某事） We spent two hours climbing the mountain.（我们花了两个小时爬山。） While we were...（当我们正在…… 时） While we were walking in the forest, we saw many beautiful birds.（当我们在森林里散步时，我们看到了许多美丽的鸟。） We couldn't wait to do sth.（我们迫不及待地做某事） We couldn't wait to swim in the sea as soon as we arrived at the beach.（我们一到达海滩就迫不及待地想去海里游泳。） 3.描述所见所闻句式 There be + 名词 + doing sth.（有…… 正在做某事） There were many people playing beach volleyball on the beach.（有很多人在海滩上打沙滩排球。） It was + 形容词 + to see/hear...（看到 / 听到…… 是…… 的） It was amazing to see the ancient ruins.（看到古老的遗迹令人惊叹。） We noticed that...（我们注意到……） We noticed that the locals were very friendly.（我们注意到当地人非常友好。） 4.描述食物句式 The food there was + 形容词.（那里的食物是…… 的） The food there was really delicious.（那里的食物真的很美味。） We had... for + 三餐.（我们…… 餐吃了……） We had pizza for dinner.（我们晚餐吃了披萨。） The taste of... was...（…… 的味道是……） The taste of the local special dish was quite unique.（当地特色菜的味道非常独特。） 5.描述感受句式 I/We felt + 形容词 + about the trip.（我 / 我们对这次旅行感到……） I felt really excited about the trip.（我对这次旅行感到非常兴奋。） It was such a/an + 形容词 + trip that...（这是一次如此…… 的旅行以至于……） It was such a wonderful trip that I will never forget it.（这是一次如此美妙的旅行，以至于我永远不会忘记它。） I/We had a great time during the trip.（我 / 我们在旅行中玩得很开心。） This trip made me/us...（这次旅行让我 / 我们……） This trip made us feel more relaxed.（这次旅行让我们感觉更放松。） 6.结尾常用句式 All in all/In a word/To sum up, it was a/an... trip.（总之，这是一次…… 的旅行。） All in all, it was an unforgettable trip.（总之，这是一次难忘的旅行。） I hope to visit... again someday.（我希望有一天能再次参观……） I hope to visit Paris again someday.（我希望有一天能再次参观巴黎。） I will always remember this trip because...（我将永远记住这次旅行，因为……） I will always remember this trip because I learned a lot from it.（我将永远记住这次旅行，因为我从中学到了很多。） 三、范文例析 Saturday, July 15th Sunny Today was an amazing day. I went to the zoo with my friends. The weather was sunny, which made our trip more enjoyable. When we arrived at the zoo, we saw many people. First, we went to see the pandas. They were so cute, eating bamboo leisurely. Then, we watched the monkey show. The monkeys were really smart and funny, making us laugh from time to time. After that, we visited the bird area. There were various kinds of beautiful birds singing in the cages. For lunch, we had some snacks in the zoo. The food was not so great, but we were too hungry to care. In the afternoon, we continued our visit. We saw lions, tigers and other animals. All in all, it was a wonderful trip. I was tired but happy. I hope to visit the zoo again soon. 【范文分析】 格式正确：开头明确写出了日期 “Saturday, July 15th” 和天气 “Sunny”，符合旅行日记的格式要求。 结构清晰：采用了总分总的结构。开头引出旅行的时间、地点、人物和天气。中间按照参观顺序，详细描述了在动物园看到的各种动物以及活动。结尾总结旅行感受，表达了希望再次参观的愿望。 内容丰富：运用了丰富的词汇，如 “amazing”“enjoyable”“leisurely”“smart”“funny” 等形容词来描述旅行中的事物和感受；使用了 “First... Then... After that...” 等连接词，使文章叙述有条理；对动物的描写生动形象，让读者能够感受到作者在动物园的愉快经历。 语法正确：全文基本使用一般过去时，动词的形式变化准确，符合语法规则。 四、优化策略 运用多样化词汇：避免重复使用相同的词汇，尽量使用同义词或近义词替换。例如，描述 “美丽的”，除了 “beautiful”，还可以用 “gorgeous”“attractive”“charming” 等。 增加细节描写：在描述旅行活动、景点、人物等时，加入更多细节，让读者有身临其境之感。比如描述食物，不仅说 “delicious”，还可描述食物的外观、口感等。如 “The pizza had a crispy crust, with a rich layer of cheese and a sweet - sour tomato sauce, and it was really delicious.”（这个披萨有酥脆的外皮，一层厚厚的芝士和酸甜的番茄酱，真的很美味。） 使用修辞手法：适当运用比喻、拟人、排比等修辞手法，增强文章的感染力。例如，“The sun was like a big warm ball, shining brightly in the sky.”（太阳像一个温暖的大球，在天空中明亮地照耀着。） 注意句子结构变化：不要总是使用简单句，可适当加入并列句、复合句等，提升文章的档次。如 “Although we were a little tired, we were very happy because we had a great time at the zoo.”（虽然我们有点累，但我们非常开心，因为我们在动物园玩得很愉快。） 检查修改：完成初稿后，仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误、标点符号使用是否正确等。同时，检查文章内容是否完整，逻辑是否清晰，如有需要，进行修改完善。 综合实战演练 1．假如你是李华，暑假期间你和家人外出了，玩得很开心。请写一封信给你远在北京的好朋友王新，回忆你和家人共同度过的这段时光，也聊聊你现在的生活，并表达对他的想念。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2. 文章需要包含所有要点； 3. 文章中不得出现真实姓名及个人信息； 4. 卷面整洁，书写工整。 参考信息： Activities: tried delicious food, visited museums, went to the sea… Life: study, hobby, appearance... Dear Wang Xin, How’s everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 2．假如你是李华，你负责了美国交换生Tom的周末接待工作。你带着Tom在重庆进行了一日游，让Tom感受到了重庆的美和重庆人的热情。对你来说，这也是一次特别的经历。请根据你们拍摄的照片，写一篇名为“One Day with Tom” 的游记，记录下你当时的心情与感受。文章开头已给出，不计入总次数。 要求： 1.80—120词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称； 3.请选用合适的时态； 4.卷面整洁，书写工整。 参考要点： 1.描述你和Tom游览的地方和尝试的事物； 2.你和Tom的感受。 参考词汇：spicy辣的；culture文化；traditional传统的；warm-hearted热心的；snacks小吃；be proud of为……感到骄傲。 One Day with Tom Tom is my new friend from America. When he came to my home, I couldn’t wait to show him this beautiful city. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．去年暑假，你肯定去过许多有趣的地方，请你以“I went to ________ for summer vacation”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1. 你去了什么地方； 2. 进行了哪些活动。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数100左右，可适当增加细节内容。 I went to _______ for summer vacation _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，请你根据你的外国笔友Mike的来信内容给他写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How time flies! The new term is coming. I learned from your WeChat that you went somewhere interesting. I am sure you have a nice summer vacation. Would you like to tell me something about your travel? Where did you go? What did you do there? Who did you go with? If I want to go there next summer vacation, can you give me some advice (建议)? Yours, Mike 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 字数不少于80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是李明，你的笔友Dave计划这个暑假来中国游玩。请你根据表格中的信息给他写封邮件介绍中国的基本情况并向他推荐北京、西安的名胜，同时谈谈推荐的原因及自己参观的感受。 Facts of China Locations (位置) East Asia Size (面积) 9,600,000 km2 Population 1,400,000,000 History more than 5,000 years, one of..., oldest Places of interest Beijing: The Bird’s Nest, the Great Wall... Xi’an: The Terracotta Army... Feeling wonderful, fantastic, proud, fall in love 要求： 1. 书写规范，包含全部要点，要有适当的开头和结尾，可合理增加细节； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名及人名； 3. 80词左右。 Dear Dave, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 6．假如你是李华，暑假马上就要到了，请你结合以下思维导图写一封邮件邀请新加坡笔友Paul来你的家乡旅游。 要求： 1）邮件中必须包含图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Dear Paul, Summer vacation is coming. I’d like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是李华，学校英语节活动正在举办主题为“读万卷书，行万里路”的演讲比赛。请根据以下提示，以“Enjoy the world, love our life”为题，写一篇演讲稿，请你分享关于一本书的阅读体验，或者描述一次旅行经历，以及它带给你的好处。以此倡议大家多读书，多户外，让身心多多受益。 注意事项： 1. 词数不少于80个。演讲稿首尾已给出，不计入总数； 2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Enjoy the world, love our life Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                        Thank you for your listening! 8．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友玛丽（Mary）听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语给玛丽写一封回信，向她介绍一下中国的黄山（Mount Huangshan）。 提示： 1. 黄山的基本情况介绍； 2. 黄山的特色风景。 要求： 1. 不得出现真实的校名和人名； 2. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mary, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure you will have a good time here. Yours, Li Hua 9．假如你是李明，由于备战期中考试压力比较大，所以你计划在假期旅游一次以缓解紧张的情绪。请你以“Travel for Better Mood”为题，根据以下提示词写一篇短文描述你的旅行计划，并说明这次旅行将如何帮助你保持好心情。词数80-100词。 Travel for Better Mood Why should I travel? stress (n.压力), plan a trip to What do I plan? ·explore nature ·try local (adj.当地的) food ·experience local culture How will it help? happy moments (欢乐时光), forget (v.忘记) worries, new energy 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Travel for Better Mood ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是李华，是学校英文俱乐部的视频博主(vlogger)，受邀为当地旅游局推广拍摄一期英文短视频。请根据以下提示，撰写视频拍摄脚本(video script)，向国际友人介绍横山的一些变化。 The Changes in Hengshan Past Present Living conditions small old houses, small shops tall buildings, shopping malls, supermarkets, … Environment narrow and dirty roads wide and clean roads, blue sky, beautiful parks and lakes, … Traffic on foot, bike, bus private cars, new big train station, … Your feelings … 要求： 1.文章必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于60词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数) The Changes in Hengshan Hengshan is a beautiful place in Yulin, Shaanxi. It has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope Hengshan will become even better in the future. 参考答案 1． Dear Wang Xin, How’s everything going? I had a wonderful summer vacation with my family. We visited museums, tried delicious local food, and went to the sea. The beach was especially fun—we swam and built sandcastles together. We had a good time there. Now I’m back home. I spend most of my time studying. I also enjoy reading books. By the way, I’ve grown a little taller! I miss playing basketball with you. Hope we can meet soon! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你和家人外出游玩的时光； 第二步，聊聊你现在的生活，并表达对他的想念。 [亮点词汇] ①summer vacation暑假 ②delicious local food美味的当地食物 ③by the way顺便说一下 [高分句型] ①We visited museums, tried delicious local food, and went to the sea.（并列结构） 2． One Day with Tom Tom is my new friend from America. When he came to my home, I couldn’t wait to show him this beautiful city. So last Saturday, we started our day trip to Chongqing. First of all, we ate Chongqing noodles for breakfast. Tom said it was a little spicy but delicious. Then we took a bus to visit the Three Gorges Museum. After that, we climbed the Mountain City Trail. Tom said that it was too hard to climb. Finally, we did it! We were so proud of ourselves. We had hotpot for dinner and watched face changing. After dinner, we went to see the night scene at Hongya Cave. Tom was excited to see such a beautiful sight. We all had a good day. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：游记类记叙文； ②时态：一般过去时（描述过去发生的一日游经历）； ③提示：围绕带美国交换生Tom在重庆一日游的经历，结合给定的游览地点和活动（吃重庆小面、参观三峡博物馆、爬山城步道、吃火锅看变脸、赏夜景等），描述过程与感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点明Tom的身份以及带他游览重庆的缘由，引出一日游主题； 第二步：按照时间顺序，依次描述早餐、上午、下午、晚餐及晚上的游览活动与双方感受； 第三步：总结这一天的美好，表达愉快的心情。 [亮点词汇] ①couldn’t wait to 迫不及待 ②be proud of 为……感到骄傲 ③first of all 首先 [高分句型] ①When he came to my home, I couldn’t wait to show him this beautiful city.（When引导的时间状语从句） ②Tom said that it was too hard to climb.（“too...to...”结构表示“太……而不能……”） 3． I went to Beijing for summer vacation Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We went there by plane. It took us two hours to get there. On the first day, we visited the Great Wall, which is considered as one of the seven wonders in the world. It’s so wonderful. There were many people there. We were very tired but happy. On the second day, we went to the Summer Palace in the morning and visited the Water Cube in the afternoon. On the third day, we went to Beijing Hutong. We learnt a lot about the culture of old Beijing and also tasted lots of delicious food like Beijing Roast Duck. We had a great time! In a word, this trip was really interesting, and I hope to visit Beijing again! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中给出的活动要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的暑假经历； 第二步，介绍自己去的地方和参与的活动； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be considered as被认为是 ②a lot of许多 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] On the first day, we visited the Great Wall, which is considered as one of the seven wonders in the world. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 4． Dear Mike,         How are you doing? I’m glad to hear from you!     This summer vacation, I went to Sanya with my parents. It’s a beautiful coastal city in southern China. We enjoyed the golden beaches, clear blue sea, and delicious seafood. I also tried surfing for the first time—it was so exciting! If you plan to visit Sanya next summer, I suggest going between June and August for the best weather. Don’t forget sunscreen and a hat, as it’s very sunny. The night market is a must-visit for local snacks!         Hope to hear about your summer, too!     Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 【总体分析】    ①题材：本文是一封书信（回信）；    ②时态：一般过去时（描述旅行经历）和一般现在时（给出建议）；    ③提示：需回答Mike的问题（地点、活动、同伴、建议），并适当扩展细节，突出写作重点。     【写作步骤】    第一步：问候并回应来信，简要介绍旅行地点；    第二步：描述旅行活动，增加趣味性；    第三步：针对Mike的提问给出具体建议。     【亮点词汇】    ①coastal city滨海城市    ②golden beaches金沙滩 ③for the first time第一次 【高分句型】    ①If you plan to visit Sanya next summer, I suggest going between June and August for the best weather.（条件状语从句）    ②Don’t forget sunscreen and a hat, as it’s very sunny.（原因状语从句） 5． Dear Dave, I’m excited to know you’ll come to China this summer. China is in East Asia. It has an area of 9,600,000 km² and a population of 1,400,000,000. With a history of over 5,000 years, it’s one of the oldest countries.   In Beijing, remember to visit the Bird’s Nest and the Great Wall. The Great Wall is so fantastic that it makes me feel proud. In Xi’an, don’t miss the Terracotta Army. It’s really wonderful. You’ll surely fall in love with these places.   Looking forward to seeing you!   Yours, Li Ming 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：不要遗漏写作要点，适当补充。注意表达正确、语句连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对对方表示欢迎，引出“中国概况”的介绍； 第二步，具体介绍游览推荐； 第三步，表达期待与收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①has an area of面积为…… ②a population of人口为…… ③don’t miss不要错过 ④fall in love with爱上 [高分句型] ①With a history of over 5,000 years, it’s one of the oldest countries.（with复合结构作状语） ②The Great Wall is so amazing that it makes me feel proud.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句） 6． Dear Paul,     Summer vacation is coming. I’d like to invite you to pay a visit to my hometown.       My hometown is located in the south of China. It has a long history and a pleasant climate. There are many places of interest here. The West Lake is very beautiful, with clear water and lovely scenery. The ancient temples are also meaningful, telling stories of the past.       The food in my hometown is really tasty. You must try the local dumplings and the delicious fish soup.        I love my hometown very much. It’s a wonderful place, and I’m sure you’ll have a great time here.       Looking forward to your reply.   Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤]​ 第一步，开篇点明写作目的，即暑假即将到来，邀请朋友Paul参观自己的家乡。​ 第二步，介绍家乡的基本情况，包括地理位置、历史背景和气候特点。​ 第三步，详细描述家乡的特色景点，展现家乡的旅游价值。​ 第四步，推荐家乡的特色美食。​ 第五步，总结对家乡的喜爱，强调家乡是个很棒的地方，并表达对朋友来访会度过愉快时光的期待，最后以盼望回复收尾。​ [亮点词汇]​ ①pay a visit to参观；拜访 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ​③have a great time玩得愉快 [高分句型]​ ①It has a long history and a pleasant climate.（and并列两个名词短语作宾语）​ ②The West Lake is very beautiful, with clear water and lovely scenery.（“with + 名词短语” 作伴随状语）​ 7． Enjoy the world, love our life Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. The theme “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles” always inspires me. Today, I want to share a trip to a small village last summer. There, I walked on green fields, breathed fresh air, and tried homemade rice cakes—they were sweet and warm. I met an old grandma who told me stories about the village’s history. We picked vegetables together, and I learned how hard farmers work. This trip let me make new friends, know about rural culture, and open my mind to a different life. Just like traveling, reading helps too. It gives stories and knowledge. So let’s read more and go outdoors often. They’ll make our hearts happy and our lives richer, helping us enjoy the world and love life more. Thank you for your listening! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，引出“读万卷书，行万里路”的主题，表明要分享去年夏天的乡村旅行经历； 第二步，具体阐述乡村旅行中的活动及旅行带来的好处； 第三步，关联阅读的作用，最后发出“多读书、多户外”的倡议，点明其对生活的积极意义。    [亮点词汇] ① inspire sb 激励某人 ② homemade 自制的 ③ open one’s mind 开阔某人的眼界 ④ rural culture 乡村文化 [高分句型] ① I met an old grandma who told me stories about the village’s history.（who引导的定语从句） ② This trip let me make new friends, know about rural culture, and open my mind to a different life.（并列句） 8． Dear Mary, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It is located in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. You can go there by train or by plane. While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pine trees and unique rocks around you. What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the view looks so beautiful that you can’t wait to visit it again. You will feel it is all worth it. It’s really a nice place to visit. I’m sure you will have a good time there. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，围绕“信息提示”介绍黄山的基本情况和特色风景。 [写作步骤] 第一步，书信问候语，并引出黄山是最著名的山脉之一； 第二步，介绍黄山的基本情况； 第三步，介绍黄山的特色风景。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the most famous mountains最著名的山脉之一 ②locate in位于 ③what’s more此外 [高分句型] ①What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the view looks so beautiful that you can’t wait to visit it again.（时间状语从句和结果状语从句） ②It’s really a nice place to visit.（不定式作定语） 9． Travel for Better Mood   Mid-term exams bring me much stress. To relax, I plan to take a trip to the mountains. I want to explore nature by hiking and enjoying the fresh air and beautiful views. I also plan to try local food. Eating delicious dishes is always fun! Besides, I look forward to experiencing the local culture, like visiting a village and learning about their traditions. These happy moments will help me forget my worries. Being in nature and trying new things will refresh my mind. When I come back, I’ll have new energy to study better. Travel really helps me find joy and keep a good mood. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明旅行的意图； 第二步，具体从风景、美食和文化三方面阐述旅行计划； 第三步，阐述旅行对自己有哪些帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth计划做某事 ②look forward to doing sth期待做某事 ③keep a good mood保持好心情 [高分句型] When I come back, I’ll have new energy to study better. (when引导的时间状语从句) 10． The Changes in Hengshan Hengshan is a beautiful place in Yulin, Shaanxi. It has changed a lot over the years. In the past, people lived in small old houses and bought daily things from small shops. The environment was poor. The roads were narrow and dirty. Most people went out on foot, by bike or bus. Now, everything is different. New tall buildings, shopping malls and supermarkets make people’s lives more convenient. The government has taken action to improve the environment. We have wide and clean roads, blue skies, and beautiful parks and lakes. Cars are common. New big train stations are built. And many tourists come to visit. I’m so proud of these changes. I hope Hengshan will become even better in the future. 【写作解析】 [总体分析]​ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；​ ②时态：使用了“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”，分别描述过去和现在的情况；​ ③提示：介绍陕西榆林横山的变化，包括居住、购物、环境、交通及旅游等方面。​ [写作步骤]​ 第一步，开头点明横山是陕西榆林的一个美丽地方，以及它多年来变化很大。​ 第二步，中间分别描述过去横山的状况，如人们的居住、购物环境、道路和出行方式；再阐述现在横山的新面貌，如建筑、生活便利性、环境改善、交通和旅游情况。​ 第三步，结尾表达对横山未来会更好的期望。​ [亮点词汇]​ ①convenient便利的；方便的​ ②improve改善；提高​ ③common常见的；普遍的​ ④proud自豪的；骄傲的​ [高分句型]​ ①Hengshan is a beautiful place in Yulin, Shaanxi.（此句简洁明了，点明了横山的地理位置和整体印象。）​ ②The government has taken action to improve the environment.（运用了现在完成时，体现出政府在改善环境方面所做的努力及对现在的影响，使句子更具时效性和连贯性。） ( 一 / 1 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $