2025年中考英语书面表达-旅游指南话题写作【介绍广州】课件

该初中英语中考复习课件聚焦“旅游指南话题书面表达”核心考点，对接中考书面表达评分标准，明确内容（6’）、语言（6’）、结构（2’）、书写（1’）的权重分布，归纳出“地点介绍+景点推荐+美食购物”的写作模块及“开头引入-主体描述-结尾呼吁”的结构框架。 课件亮点在于“错误诊断+句型示范”的实战训练，通过“挑刺儿”环节修正there be句型误用、地点副词前加介词等常见错误，结合广州写作示例示范“If you like shopping, you can...”等条件句运用，培养学生语言准确性和思维逻辑性。提供“内容模块 checklist”和“连接词速记表”，助力学生规范表达，教师可依此开展针对性纠错和模板教学，提升复习效率。

初中英语书面表达 ——旅游指南话题写作 A good travel guide tell us…? Beginning: introduce (介绍) the city to the readers Ending：call up the readers to come where is it? Body： Some places What to see? of interest what is it？ What to play? What to eat?... Question: Is there other sentence patterns can we use? 1. ...one of the most... 2. There is/are... 3. If you like/enjoy..., you will love/ can.... 4. It is adj. +to do sth... because... Writing Visiting Guangzhou _______________________________________ _________________ (where is it?). ____________ _________________________________________ _______(what is it?). _______________________________________ If _______________________________________, you can __________________________________ _________________________________________ If you visit ________________________, you will _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ ______________________________(ending). Writing How to make a travel guide? A travel guide Step 1 Choose a place 认真审题 Writing Step 2 Visiting Guangzhou ...... Brief introduction (location地址，history历史，weather） Shopping Places of interest Food 谋篇布局 Step 3 …is in … …lies in … …is located in … 广州位于中国的南部。 Guangzhou is in the south of China. Guangzhou lies in the south of China. Guangzhou is located in the south of China. 词汇句式 …is one of the largest cities/ the most beautiful cities/with a long history… Writing 广州是一个有着悠久历史的美丽的城市。 Guangzhou is a beautiful city with a long history of 2000 years. The weather is …. cold, warm, hot, windy, rainy, snowy, seasons…. Writing 广州气候宜居，不太冷也不太热。 Guangzhou is a comfortable place to live in. It is neither too hot nor too cold. Writing 广州以它的美食而著名。 Guangzhou is famous for its delicious food. Brief introduction of Guangzhou Let’s start writing! Location (位置) history (历史) weather (天气) Guangzhou is in the south of China. It is a beautiful city with a long history of 2000 years. Guangzhou is a comfortable place to live in. It is neither too hot nor too cold. Writing Places to visit in Guangzhou Beijing Road Tourists can buy things in the large shops. Shangxiajiu Road Tourists can eat traditional local food. The Canton Tower Tourists will have a bird’s eye view of Guangzhou. places of interest Writing If you like shopping, just come to Beijing Road. There are many large shops. If you go to Shangxiajiu Road, you can eat the delicious snacks and traditional food. If you get to the top of Canton Tower, you can have a bird’s eye view of Guangzhou. Have a try Guangzhou is in the south of China. It is a beautiful city with a long history of 2000 years. Guangzhou is a comfortable place to live in. It is neither too hot nor too cold. There are a lot of things for you to enjoy in Guangzhou. If you like shopping, just come to Beijing Road. There are some expensive shops and also some cheap ones. There is something for everyone in Guangzhou. Besides, Guangzhou is also famous for its delicious food. Shaxiajiu Road is a good place for you to enjoy all kinds of traditional local food. Beijing has a lot places of interest. When you visit the Canton Tower, you will see many modern buildings around it, such as the Guangzhou Library and the Guangdong Museum. If you get to the top of the Canton Tower, you can get a bird’s-eye view of the whole city. Guangzhou is a wonderful place to visit. Welcome to Guangzhou! What can we learn from this writing? Clear structure (清晰的结构) Rich content (丰富的内容) Accurate language (准确的语言) Beautiful handwriting (优美的书写) grammar, spelling, tense, punctuation topic sentence + supporting details brief introduction 简要概述 1’ shopping 2’ places of interests 2’ food 2’ Tense 时态 (simple present tense) 1’ Grammar 语法 1’ Spelling 拼写 1’ good expressions 表达 2’ paragraphing 分段1’ linking words 连接词 1’ 15 points 内容 (6’) 语言 (6’) 结构 (2’) 书写 (1’) 1. Guangzhou have Canton Tower, the Pearl River, White Cloud Mountain and Flower City Square. 大家来“挑刺儿” 修改：There are many places of interest in Guangzhou, such as the Canton Tower, the Pearl River, Baiyun Mountain and Flower City Square. 2. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong province. There is a modern and good city. 修改：It is a modern and good city. (there是地点副词，不能当句子主语) 3. Peoples can eat traditional local food in there. 修改：People can eat traditional local food there. (there是地点副词，前面不加介词) 4. If you want to see the Guangzhou, you may go to The Canton Tower, it is largest tower in Guangzhou, peoples will have a bird’s eye-view of Guangzhou. 大家来“挑刺儿” 修改：If you want to see Guangzhou, you may go to the Canton Tower. It is largest tower in Guangzhou. People will have a bird’s eye-view of Guangzhou. (Guangzhou前不加the，英语写作不能“一逗到底”，句子写完要用句号，另起一句，首字母大写) $