高中英语读后续写句式拓展句法攻略（全年级通用）清单-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写句式拓展——句法攻略

一、10个无灵主语

公式1 A（n）look/expression of +情感名词 + flashed through/spread across/crossed one's

1. The expression of merriment on the girl's face flashed through my mind, urging me to ride faster.女孩脸上喜悦的表情一直闪过我的脑海,催促我骑得更快.

2. When they heard they were going to go camping, the look of excitement spread across their faces, and then they packed their backpacks with essentials. 一听说他们要去露营,他们脸上满是兴奋的表情,随后他们把必需品装进背包.

公式2 A wave/urge/sense of +情感名词 + seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over/flowed over/came over sb.

1. Fear washed over me as I thought of the possibility of miserably failing on the way. 在路上当我想到有可能会惨败时,一阵恐惧袭来.

2. Embarrassment and the feeling of failure overwhelming her, she threw herself onto the bed, bursting into tears. 她感到无比羞愧和挫败,于是扑倒在床上,放声大哭起来.

3. The tension eased, and a sense of pride flooded over me, indicating that I did surprise my classmates. 紧张情绪有所缓解,一种自豪感涌上心头,暗示着我确实让我的同学感到惊讶了.

公式3 情感名词 + welled up in/inside/within sb.

1. Sympathy welled up inside me as my mother told me what happened to the little girl. 当妈妈告诉我这个小女孩发生了什么事时,我内心充满了同情.

2. Reading the letter that brought news of her admission to the ideal college, Mary felt merriment well up within her, knowing that all the hard work had finally paid off. Mary读着信里的消息,得知自己被理想的大学录取时,顿时喜气洋洋,她知道所有的努力终于有了回报.

公式4 A（slight）feeling/sense of +情感名词 + crept upon/over sb.

1. A sense of guilt crept upon me, and tears of sorrow welled up in my eyes. 我渐渐感到一股内疚,眼中泛起悲伤的泪水.

2. A feeling of gratitude crept over me for the teacher forgave my mistake and I made up my mind to do better next time. 老师原谅了我的错误,我心中涌起一股感激之情,并下定决心下次做得更好.

公式5 （表高兴、激动的）情感名词 + was shining/twinkling/sparkling in one's eyes

1. While the old man enjoyed the beauty of the day, satisfaction was twinkling in his eyes. 当老人享受着这美好的一天时,他眼中闪烁着满足的光芒.

2. Uncontrollably, a wave of merriment was sparkling in our families' eyes as we heard the good news. 当我们一家听到这个好消息时,我们家人的眼中不禁闪烁着喜悦的光芒.

公式6 情感名词（Fear/Terror/Panic/Surprise/Shock/Embarrassment 等） + rooted sb. to the spot/ground

1. Surprise rooted me to the ground when I saw my mother walk through the door, leaving me speechless. 当我看到妈妈走进门时,我惊讶得呆住了,说不出话.

2. Panic rooted them to the spot as the fire alarm blared, their minds going blank and their legs refusing to cooperate. 当火警警报响起时,恐慌使他们呆站在原地,大脑一片空白,双腿不听使唤.

公式7 表情感的名词A + gave way to/was swept away by/ was replaced by +表情感的名词B

1. His initial excitement was replaced by a deep sense of disappointment. 他最初的兴奋被深深的失望所取代.

2. The fear and shock brought on by the quake are now swept away by hunger, cold and desperation. 地震带来的恐惧和震惊现在被饥饿、寒冷和绝望所替代.

3. My fear gave way to desperation when I felt my bones cracking where the bear was

attacking me. 当我感觉到熊攻击我的地方骨头都碎了时,我的恐惧变成了绝望.

公式8 one's heart pounded/thumped/raced/beat wildly（heavily）with +表情感的名词

1. Lotus' heart pounded with guilt, and tears sprang to her eyes. Lotus的心因内疚而怦怦直跳,泪水夺眶而出.

2. On hearing the news that he won the final, his heart thumped with excitement and joy. 听到他赢下决赛的消息,他的心因激动和喜悦而怦怦猛跳.

3. Despite the fear of punishment and ridicule, I stood up again and ran for the door, my heart beating wildly with nervousness in my chest. 尽管害怕受到惩罚和嘲笑,我还是再次站了起来向门跑去,我的心因为紧张而狂跳不止.

公式9 one's face lit up/brightened up when .

1. His face lit up when he saw me and he gave me an engaging smile. 当他看到我时,他的脸亮了起来,给了我一个迷人的微笑.

2. Her face brightened up when I gave her the long - prepared present. 当我把准备已久的礼物送给她时,她的脸上露出了笑容.

公式10 the sight/thought of sth. filled/overwhelmed sb. with +情感名词

1. The thought of working nights filled me with hopeless horror. 一想到要夜间工作我就觉得惨兮兮的.

2. The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great joy. 想到不久就要见到她的儿子,她心中充满了幸福.

3. The thought of the awkward moment in the morning filled her mind with embarrassment. 一想到早上的尴尬时刻,她就尴尬不已.

 

二、4个动作描写

公式1 三连动作链:sb. + did A, did B and did C

1. Ben also ran in my direction, gathered me into his arms, and kept patting my back. Ben 也朝我这个方向跑过来,把我拥入怀里,不停地轻轻拍着我的后背.

2. Without wasting a moment, I unfastened my seat belt, exited the bus, and hurried down the stairs. 我立即解开安全带,下了车,匆匆走下楼梯.

3. Without thinking twice, I swam to her at tremendous speed, grabbed hold of her, and lifted her out of the pool. 我毫不犹豫地快速游向她,抓住她,把她拖出游泳池.

4. As the curtain opened gradually, I started to act out my role, immersed myself in the character of the old woman and spoke out my lines fluently, full of emotion. 随着帷幕逐渐拉开,我开始表演我的角色,沉浸在老妇人的角色中,流利地、充满感情地说出了我的台词.

公式2 (1)主语 did A,非谓语动词 B and 非谓语动词 C

(2)主语 did A and B,非谓语动词 C

(3)非谓语动词 A,主语 did B + did C

1. Tears blurred my eyes for a long time and finally overflowed, streaming down my face. 眼泪让我的视线变得模糊,最后涌出,沿着我的脸滑落下来.

2. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wanted something to eat. 在街上漫无目的地逛了几小时之后,她感到有点饿,想吃东西.

3. Thinking of the mess I deliberately made under the bed, I hurried to my bed and bent down to take a look. 想到我故意把床下面弄得一团糟,我赶紧走到床边,弯下腰看了看.

4. The moment I reached the finish line, my dad rushed towards me, embracing me tightly and murmuring in a comforting tone, “Well done, boy. I sincerely felt proud of you.” 我一到达终点,我的爸爸就朝我冲来,紧紧地抱住我,用安慰的语气小声说道：“干得漂亮,孩子,我真心为你骄傲.”

公式3 主语 did,with 复合结构[with + 名词/代词 + 非谓语动词/介词短语/形容词/副词]

1. He stormed to the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing red. 他冲向房间,心怦怦直跳,满脸通红.

2. With her eyes sparkling, she struggled to her feet and shouted, “I'm here!” 她眼睛闪闪发光,挣扎着站起来,大声喊道：“来了！”

3. With my head dizzy, I struggled to my feet and staggered to the finish line. 我头晕目眩,挣扎着站起来,踉踉跄跄地朝着终点跑去.

公式4 主语+did,独立主格[逻辑主语 + 非谓语动词/介词短语/形容词/副词]

1. Perspiration pouring from my forehead, tiredness swallowed me entirely. 汗水从我额头上涌出,疲劳感完全吞噬了我.

2. My feet seemingly stuck to the earth, every single step becoming extremely difficult. 我的脚似乎困在了地上,每迈出一步都显得那么困难.

3. Time standing still, everyone stared at the ball flying through the air, holding their breath. 时间静止了,每个人都盯着空中飞舞的球,屏住呼吸.

4. She realized she had mistaken the gentleman for a rude man, her face red with shame, feeling guilty from the bottom of her heart. 她意识到自己把这位先生误认为是个粗鲁的男子,羞愧得脸都红了,打心底里感到内疚.

 

三、四个修辞公式

公式1 比喻式:as + 形容词 + as (a/an)...

1. Jack sprinted for the finish line as swift as an arrow, leaving all the competitors behind. Jack 敏捷得像箭一样,快速冲向终点,把所有参赛者抛在了后面.

2. All my classmates were as busy as bees, eagerly engaged in the preparation for the performance. 班里的所有同学都忙得不可开交,热情投入到表演的准备中.

3. With his turn to speak coming, Jack stood there, tongue - tied with his face turning as pale as snow. 轮到 Jack 说话时,他站在那里,张口结舌,脸色苍白如雪.

4. Opening the door, Mary found Susan standing there, her smile on her face as bright as daylight. Mary 打开门,发现 Susan 站在那里,脸上的笑容像日光一样灿烂.

积累速记——比喻表达

形容人  

as pleased/delighted/cheerful/joyful as a flying bird 高兴得像一只飞翔的小鸟

as angry/mad/furious as a raging storm 愤怒得像狂风暴雨

as anxious as an ant on a hot pan 急得像热锅上的蚂蚁  

as busy as a bee 忙得团团转

形容事物 

as bright as daylight 如日光般明亮/灿烂   

as easy as a piece of cake 轻而易举

as dazzling/shining as diamonds 像钻石般闪耀  

as gentle as a breeze 像微风一样温柔

 

公式2 比喻式:特定动词短语 + 表情绪的名词,sb. did sth. like/as if...

1. Seized by terror and despair, David began to shake uncontrollably like being electrified. 被恐惧和绝望所困,David 开始像触电一样无法控制地颤抖.

2. Overwhelmed by anxiety and uncertainty, I felt my throat tightened as if burning when I stepped onto the stage. 充斥着焦虑不安,我一上台就觉得喉咙发紧,像着火一样.

3. Filled with relief, I felt my mom's words were like a ray of sunshine, driving all my depression and sorrow away. 我如释重负,觉得妈妈的话就像一缕阳光,驱散了我所有的忧郁和悲伤.

4. George, overwhelmed by astonishment, eagerly accepted the unexpected opportunity like a kid desperate for his favorite toy. George 震惊不已,像一个渴望得到自己最喜欢的玩具的孩子一样,迫不及待地接受了这个意想不到的机会.             

【注】常见特定动词短语有: filled with 充满, falling into 陷入, drowned in 沉浸在, seized/struck by 被……侵袭, overwhelmed with/by 充溢着, consumed by 被……吞噬