专题09 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用）六年级英语上学期

函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 专题09书面表达 基础 必练 1.(24-25六上·上海莘松中学期中)根据海报内容，写一段关于机器人社团的介绍，不少于3句话。 内容需包括要点：what,when,where. Robot Club Build and play with robots! Every Wednesday 15:4017:15 The science lab (Room 505) We have the Robot Club in our school. Come and join us together! 2.(24-25六上·上海市西初级中学.期中)本周是学校的“温馨家庭周”(Wonderful Family Week),学校倡议 同学们积极行动起来，为家人送去温暖与关爱。请就该主题写一段不少于50词的短文，谈谈你的想法。 Use the following points as a reference (以下内容仅供参考) What can you do for your family? Why do you do it/them for your family? 面学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 3.(23-24六上·上海浦东新区·期中)Please write at least40 words on the topic“My best friendi”,using the following questions below for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“我最好的朋友”为题写一篇短文，不少于40 词。) Suggested questions: 1.Who is your best friend? 2.What do you usually do with your best friend? (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分) 4.(24-25六上·上海崇明区九校联考期中)Write a passage of at least50 words about the topic“My family”(以 “我的家”为题写一篇短文不少于50字的短文。) Suggested questions 1.How is your family? 2.What jobs do your family members do? 2.What do you usually do with your family members? 3. Do you like your family?Why or why not? 函学科网 www zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 5.(24-25六上·上海宝山区期中)以“A special dish for my friend”为题，写一段不少于50字的短文，标点 符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following questions are for reference only.(以下问题仅供参考) 1.What is the special dish? 2.How do you make it? 6.(23-24六上·上海大同初级中学期中)以“我未来的梦想职业”为题写一篇最少50个单词的作文标点符号 不占格。 1.What would you like to be in the future? 2.What does this job do? 3.Why would you like to do this job in the future? 4. What will you do to realize your dream? 7.(23-24六上·上海奉贤区·期中)Write at least50 words about the topic“I would like to be a/an (以“我想要成为 ”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格，不得出现真实的姓名或 班级等信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 1.What would you like to be in the future? 2.Why would you like to be a/an...(at least 2 points) 3.What will you do to make your dream come true(实现)？(at least2 points) 进阶提升 8.(24-25六上·上海奉贤区期中)Write an article about the topic“My wonderful ”。请以“我的美好 ”为题写一篇记叙文。 少年的你已经是中学生啦！在过去两个多月时间里，你一定有许多与家人、朋友或老师的美好经历， 或许与朋友们过了集体生日，或是为家人烧了一顿可口的饭菜，或是参加了学校的重要活动，又或者去游 历了祖国的大好河山。现在学校校刊拟向同学们征集“我的美好”专刊稿件，请选择一次值得记忆 的经历进行叙述，我们期待你的分享！ 温馨提示：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。文章不少于50词。 9.(24-25六上·上海黄浦区·期中)Write a passage of at least50 words on the topic“My favorite club”with the help of the following questions.以“我最喜欢的俱乐部”为题写一篇最少50个单词的作文，标点符号不占格。 函学科网 www .zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 1.What is your favourite club? 2.What do you do in the club? 3.When and where do you have the activities in the club? 4.What do you think of the club? l0.(24-25六上·上海闵行区期中)Write at least60 words on the topic“A Special Day'” 假如你是Amy,今天是你弟弟Toy的生日，你的家人正在为他办一个生日聚会，你为他们拍摄了照片。 请根据下列图片，描述你的家人为弟弟准备生日聚会的情况，可适当发挥(60词左右)。 ，绿架 11.(24-25六上·上海闵行区·期中)假定你是李辉，你的新笔友Peter想了解你和你家人的情况。请你写一 封信介绍你的家庭。(12分+写字分2分) (注意：词数不得少于60，开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息， 否则不予评分) Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive a letter from you. 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 Yours, Li Hui 12.(23-24六上·上海闵行区五校期中)Please write a passage of at least50 words on the topic“A/An classmate'”.(请以一位 的同学”为题写一篇短文，不少于50词。) 提示： 在你的生活中，一定有很多值得你学习的同学。请你选取一位同学，描述他/她是怎样的一位同学，说 一说你在生活与他/她相处的日常，并谈一谈你可以从他/她身上学习到什么。 (注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) l3.(24-25六上·上海浦东新区·期中)Write a passage of at least50 words about the topic“My family duties”. (以“我的家庭职责”为题写一篇短文不少于50字的短文。)（注：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关 信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: 1.What are your family duties? 2.How do you feel when you carry out these duties? 3.What do you think of sharing the family duties? 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 14.(24-25六上·上海莘松中学期中)描述图中人物正在进行的活动，至少3句话。 Here is a photo of my family. And I am taking this photo! l5.(23-24六上·上海位育中学.期中)Write at least60 words on the topic“My favourite job in the future”,using the following questions below as reference.(以“未来我最喜欢的职业”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标 点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1.What's your favourite job in the future? 2.What is the job like? 3.Why do you like the job? l6.(24-25六上·上海位育中学.期中)Write an articleI love my family'of at least60 words for your family 函学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 poster. (注意：短文中不得出现任何中文人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分) How many people are there in your family? What do you usually do at weekends with your family? 专题09 书面表达 1．（24-25六上·上海莘松中学·期中）根据海报内容，写一段关于机器人社团的介绍，不少于3句话。 内容需包括要点：what，when，where… Robot Club Build and play with robots! Every Wednesday 15:40—17:15 The science lab（Room 505） We have the Robot Club in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Come and join us together! 【答案】 We have the Robot Club in our school. We can build and play with robots. We can go to the club from 15:40 to 17:15 every Wednesday. Our club is in Room 505 of the science lab. Come and join us together! 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍可以在机器人社团做的事情； 第二步，介绍什么时候可以去社团； 第三步，介绍社团在哪个房间。 [亮点词汇] ① play with和……玩 ② from．．．to．．．从……到…… [高分句型] We can build and play with robots．（and并列句） 2．（24-25六上·上海市西初级中学·期中）本周是学校的“温馨家庭周”（Wonderful Family Week），学校倡议同学们积极行动起来，为家人送去温暖与关爱。请就该主题写一段不少于50词的短文，谈谈你的想法。 Use the following points as a reference: （以下内容仅供参考） ●What can you do for your family? ●Why do you do it/ them for your family? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 This week is our school’s wonderful family week, which encourages us to do something warm for our families. As for me, I want to design an interesting game for my family members to play together. Of course, I will also make a delicious cake for them. So my family members can sit down to enjoy the relaxing time, contacting with each other happily. I think it is a good chance for us to get together and have a good time. I hope each student can take action to do something for his family. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“参考提示”中温馨家庭周的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明本周是学校的“温馨家庭周”，以及其目的； 第二步，具体阐述我能为家人做什么以及为什么这样做； 第三步，表达自己对这个活动的看法和期待。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb to do sth．鼓励某人去做某事 ②of course当然 ③sit down坐下 ④have a good time玩得开心 ⑤take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①This week is our school’s wonderful family week, which encourages us to do something warm for our families．（which引导定语从句） ②I hope each student can take action to do something for his family．（省略that的宾语从句） ③提示：要求根据题目提示讲述自己将来想成为什么。学生不要提示中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先引出“我想成为一名教师”的话题； 第二步，具体讲述想成为教师的原因、如何实现梦想； 第三步，书写结语。表达“相信梦想会实现”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth．想要做某事 ②study hard努力学习 ③learn to do sth．学习做某事 [高分句型] ①Besides, I think I can stay young when I get along with children．（宾语从句、时间状语从句） ②I think I will realize my dream．（宾语从句） 3．（23-24六上·上海浦东新区·期中）Please write at least 40 words on the topic “My best friend”, using the following questions below for reference．（请根据提示问题，以“我最好的朋友”为题写一篇短文，不少于40词。） Suggested questions: 1. Who is your best friend? 2. What do you usually do with your best friend? （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Best Friend My best friend is Clark. He is 12 years old. He is an outgoing boy with a round face, two big bright eyes and a straight nose. Clark is good at English and Chinese. He often helps me with my English. On weekends we often play basketball and climb the mountains together. We get along well with each other． In a word, he is a popular and helpful boy． 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为人物介绍； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍具体对象。可简要描述基本信息和外貌等； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。包括通常和最好的朋友做的事情， 第三步，书写结语。总结朋友的特点。 [亮点词汇] ① be good at擅长 ② help sb. with sth．在某方面帮助某人 ③ on weekends在周末 ④ get along well with相处融洽 ⑤ in a word总而言之 [高分句型] He is an outgoing boy with a round face, two big bright eyes and a straight nose．（with作伴随状语） 4．（24-25六上·上海崇明区九校联考·期中）Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “My family”（以“我的家”为题写一篇短文不少于50字的短文。） Suggested questions: 1. How is your family? 2. What jobs do your family members do? 2. What do you usually do with your family members? 3. Do you like your family? Why or why not? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, and I. My father is an English teacher,and he teaches in a high school. My mother works as a doctor in a hospital. On weekends, we always go to a park for a walk. We sometimes go to the movies with my grandparents on Saturdays. I like my family because we love each other. We are very happy． 【详解】 [总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍家人情况、职业、周末与家人的活动，并谈谈与家人的情感。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家人的情况； 第二步，介绍家人的职业、周末与家人的活动； 第三步，谈谈与家人的情感。 [亮点词汇] ① work as 担任……工作 ② go to a park for a walk 去公园散步 ③ love each other 相亲相爱 [高分句型] ① There are five people in my family．（使用There be句型） ② I like my family because we love each other．（使用because引导的原因状语从句） 5．（24-25六上·上海宝山区·期中）以“A special dish for my friend”为题，写一段不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following questions are for reference only．（以下问题仅供参考） 1. What is the special dish? 2. How do you make it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Today is my friend’s birthday. I make a special dish for him, it is scrambled eggs with tomatoes. First, buy three tomatoes, two eggs. Next, cut up tomatoes and broke eggs. Then, fry tomatoes and eggs. After a few minutes, add some salt. Finally, put in the scallions, and the dish is ready. My friend says it is very nice after eating it. I’m very glad that he likes the dish． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，为朋友做了一份特别的菜。 第二步，介绍做菜的过程。 第三步，表达朋友和自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①cut up切开 ②after a few minutes几分钟后 [高分句型] ①I’m very glad that he likes the dish．（宾语从句） 6．（23-24六上·上海大同初级中学·期中）以“我未来的梦想职业”为题写一篇最少50个单词的作文标点符号不占格。 1. What would you like to be in the future? 2. What does this job do? 3. Why would you like to do this job in the future? 4. What will you do to realize your dream? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I want to be a teacher in the future. A teacher is a person who imparts knowledge. I love children. Being a teacher, I can always stay with the purest persons in the world all the time. Being a teacher can also make me proud of myself because teachers are called the engineers of human’s spirit. In a word, I think I must work hard now. I must have enough knowledge to teach the students. There goes an old saying that knowledge is power. It is true. I have a dream in my mind which is to be a teacher in the future. I will try my best to make my dream come true． 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你未来想成为什么； 第二步，介绍其中的原因； 第三步，最后介绍你打算如何去实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①want to be想成为 ②all the time一直 ③In a word总之 [高分句型] ①A teacher is a person who imparts knowledge．（who引导的定语从句） ②Being a teacher can also make me proud of myself because teachers are called the engineers of human’s spirit．（because引导的原因状语从句） 7．（23-24六上·上海奉贤区·期中）Write at least 50 words about the topic “I would like to be a/an ________ ”．（以“我想要成为 ________”为题写一篇不少于 50个词的短文，标点符号不占格，不得出现真实的姓名或班级等信息，否则不予评分。） Suggested questions: 1．What would you like to be in the future? 2．Why would you like to be a/an．．．?（at least 2 points） 3．What will you do to make your dream come true（实现）?（at least 2 points） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I would like to be a teacher I would like to be a teacher in the future because I like to teach children and help them become smart. I also like to teach the students how to be useful people. Besides, I think I can stay young when I get along with children. A teacher should be very kind and know much so I must study hard and learn to be patient and friendly to others. I think I will realize my dream． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求根据题目提示讲述自己将来想成为什么。学生不要提示中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先引出“我想成为一名教师”的话题； 第二步，具体讲述想成为教师的原因、如何实现梦想； 第三步，书写结语。表达“相信梦想会实现”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth．想要做某事 ②study hard努力学习 ③learn to do sth．学习做某事 [高分句型] ①Besides, I think I can stay young when I get along with children．（宾语从句、时间状语从句） ②I think I will realize my dream．（宾语从句） 8．（24-25六上·上海奉贤区·期中）Write an article about the topic “My wonderful ________”。请以“我的美好________”为题写一篇记叙文。 少年的你已经是中学生啦！在过去两个多月时间里，你一定有许多与家人、朋友或老师的美好经历，或许与朋友们过了集体生日，或是为家人烧了一顿可口的饭菜，或是参加了学校的重要活动，又或者去游历了祖国的大好河山。现在学校校刊拟向同学们征集“我的美好________”专刊稿件，请选择一次值得记忆的经历进行叙述，我们期待你的分享！ 温馨提示：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。文章不少于50词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My wonderful experience In the past two months, I had a wonderful experience with my family. We decided to take a trip to the mountains. The scenery was breathtaking, with green trees and clear blue skies. We hiked during the day and camped under the stars at night. It was a great opportunity to stay with my family and enjoy nature. This trip taught me the importance of spending quality time with loved ones and appreciating the beauty around us. I will always cherish these memories． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍与家人的美好经历； 第二步，细节描述经历的过程和发表感想。 [亮点词汇] ①decided to do决定做 ②breathtaking激动人心的 ③cherish珍惜 [高分句型] This trip taught me the importance of spending quality time with loved ones and appreciating the beauty around us．（并列结构） 9．（24-25六上·上海黄浦区·期中）Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “My favorite club” with the help of the following questions. 以“我最喜欢的俱乐部”为题写一篇最少50个单词的作文，标点符号不占格。 1．What is your favourite club? 2．What do you do in the club? 3．When and where do you have the activities in the club? 4．What do you think of the club? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My favorite club My favourite club is Basketball Club. I love sports and playing basketball can make me stronger. Every day, we begin to practice in the playground after 4：00 p.m. When it rains, we would play it in the gym. When I play basketball, I would feel very excited and happy. In the club, we often have games, and our team often wins the games. I’m happy here． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我最喜欢的俱乐部”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“俱乐部名称、活动、感受”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①favourite最喜欢的 ②begin to do开始做某事 ③playground操场 [高分句型] When I play basketball, I would feel very excited and happy．（when引导的时间状语从句） 10．（24-25六上·上海闵行区·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Special Day” 假如你是Amy，今天是你弟弟Tony的生日，你的家人正在为他办一个生日聚会，你为他们拍摄了照片。请根据下列图片，描述你的家人为弟弟准备生日聚会的情况，可适当发挥（60词左右）。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Special Day Hello! I’m Amy. Tony is my brother. Today is his ninth birthday. My family plan to celebrate it. In the morning, we go shopping with our parents. We need to buy something for my brother’s birthday party. He likes yogurt and ice cream a lot. So we buy a box of yogurt and some ice cream for him. In the afternoon, we clean our room. In the evening, we have a birthday party for Tony. Mother makes his favorite chocolate cake. After we sing the “Happy Birthday” song, he makes a wish and blows out all the candles. Then we eat the cake and play games. We also take photos． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示信息和图片介绍家人为弟弟准备生日聚会的情况，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据图片信息详细介绍家人为弟弟准备生日聚会的情况。 [亮点词汇] ①go shopping去购物 ②make a wish许愿 ③take photos拍照 [高分句型] After we sing the “Happy Birthday” song, he makes a wish and blows out all the candles．（after引导的时间状语从句） 11．（24-25六上·上海闵行区·期中）假定你是李辉，你的新笔友 Peter想了解你和你家人的情况。请你写一封信介绍你的家庭。（12分+写字分2分） （注意：词数不得少于60，开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分） Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive a letter from you．__________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive a letter from you. I want to tell you something about me and my family． I live with my parents in a small town. My father works in a school as a teacher. He teaches math. My mother is a nurse at the local hospital. She helps sick people get better. I have an older sister, her name is LinLin. She’s in high school and studies very well. We like to play together. In our free time, we enjoy going for walks in the park and watching movies． I hope to learn more about you and your family too. Please write back soon and tell me your stories． Yours, Li Hui 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据题干信息介绍自己的家庭情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍写信目的； 第二步，具体阐述作者的家庭成员信息； 第三步，书写结语，希望收到Peter的信。 [亮点词汇] ①tell sb something告诉某人某事 ②play together一起玩 ③enjoy going for walks喜欢散步 [高分句型] ①Please write back soon and tell me your stories．（祈使句） 12．（23-24六上·上海闵行区五校·期中）Please write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “A/An ________ classmate”．（请以“一位________的同学”为题写一篇短文，不少于50词。） 提示： 在你的生活中，一定有很多值得你学习的同学。请你选取一位同学，描述他/她是怎样的一位同学，说一说你在生活与他/她相处的日常，并谈一谈你可以从他/她身上学习到什么。 （注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A model classmate I have a good friend in my class. His name is Li Lei. I think he is a model classmate. Li Lei is a kind boy. He likes helping others. He often helps me with my English. Now my English is better than before. Also, Li Lei often picks up litters, rides bike to school and plants trees and so on. He says it is our duty to protect our world. I think friends should be similar. I decide to be a person like LiLei. I will help others and protect our environment． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点根据自己的朋友的特点自行拟定。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我有一个好朋友”来引出重点介绍的内容； ②第二步，分别从好友的姓名、爱好、及相处情况等方面去叙述； ③第三步，描述我从朋友那里学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb. with sth．帮助某人做某事 ②pick up 捡起 ③and so on 等等 [高分句型] ①I think he is a model classmate．（宾语从句） ②He says it is our duty to protect our world．（宾语从句） 13．（24-25六上·上海浦东新区·期中）Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “My family duties”．（以“我的家庭职责”为题写一篇短文不少于50字的短文。）（注：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息，否则不予评分。） Suggested questions: 1. What are your family duties? 2. How do you feel when you carry out these duties? 3. What do you think of sharing the family duties? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Family Duties In my family, I have several duties that I am responsible for． Firstly, I help with the household chores such as washing dishes and cleaning the house. These tasks not only keep our home tidy but also teach me important life skills. Secondly, I contribute to meal preparation. Whether it’s setting the table or helping to cook dinner, these activities bring us closer as a family and allow me to develop cooking skills． Carrying out these duties makes me feel proud and accomplished. It shows that I can be dependable and contribute positively to my family. Overall, I believe that sharing family duties is essential for maintaining a harmonious home environment. It teaches us about responsibility, discipline, and appreciation for each other’s efforts． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据提示信息讲述你在家里的职责，你执行这些职责的感受以及你对分担家庭职责的思考，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，在家里你有很多职责； 第二步，根据提示信息列举你的一些职责； 第三步，你执行这些职责时的感受以及你对分担家庭职责的一些思考。 [亮点词汇] ①be responsible for对……负责 ②the household chores家务事 ③wash dishes洗碗 ④contribute to有助于，促成 ⑤set the table摆餐具 ⑥carry out执行，实施 [高分句型] ①It shows that I can be dependable and contribute positively to my family．（that引导的宾语从句） ②I believe that sharing family duties is essential for maintaining a harmonious home environment．（that引导的宾语从句） 14．（24-25六上·上海莘松中学·期中）描述图中人物正在进行的活动，至少3句话。 Here is a photo of my family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ And I am taking this photo! 【答案】 Here is a photo of my family. Look, my grandmother and grandfather are sitting on the sofa. My father is looking at my mother and my mother is cleaning the floor. My little sister is playing with her teddy bear. And I am taking this photo! 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ② 时态：时态为“现在进行时”； ③ 提示：根据所给图片完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍祖父母在做的事情； 第二步，介绍父母在做什么； 第三步，最后介绍小妹妹在做什么。 [亮点词汇] ① look at 看 ② play with和……玩 [高分句型] My father is looking at my mother and my mother is cleaning the floor．（and并列句） 15．（23-24六上·上海位育中学·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic“My favourite job in the future”, using the following questions below as reference．（以“未来我最喜欢的职业”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: 1. What’s your favourite job in the future? 2. What is the job like? 3. Why do you like the job? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My favourite job in the future Doing your favorite job will make you happy and feel meaningful. It’s my pleasure to share my favourite job in the future with you． I want to be a secretary in the future. I will work in an office in the city centre. I will answer the phone, type letters, go to meetings with my manager and take notes for him. I will do many different things to make me grow up. I will work well with all the people in my office. I think being a secretary is very interesting because I like meeting different people and I’m good at working out difficult problems. Secretary is my favourite job in the future． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：本文为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表达出“选择喜爱的工作的重要性”以及引出“我的未来最喜爱的工作”这个话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“What和Why等”几个重点方面来介绍你的未来职业规划，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 第三步，书写结语。再次表达对这份工作的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①meaningful有意义的 ②be good at擅长 ③work out解决 [高分句型] ①It’s my pleasure to share my favourite job in the future with you．（it做形式主语） ②I will do many different things to make me grow up．（不定式做目的状语） ③I think being a secretary is very interesting because I like meeting different people．（because引导原因状语从句） 16．（24-25六上·上海位育中学·期中）Write an article ‘I love my family’ of at least 60 words for your family poster． （注意：短文中不得出现任何中文人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分） ♡ How many people are there in your family? ♡ What do you usually do at weekends with your family? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I love my family I have a big family, look at this photo of my family. There are ten people in it. These are my grandparents and these are my uncles and aunts, this is my father and this is my mother. These are my cousins, Rose and Tom. After supper, I always walk in the garden with my grandparents. I sometimes play badminton with my father and go shopping with my mother. I usually play basketball with my cousins at weekends. We love each other and help each other. I love my family． 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家庭成员的情况； 第二步，介绍在周末通常和家人一起做什么； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①look at看 ②walk in the garden在花园里散步 ③go shopping购物 ④each other彼此 [高分句型] ①There are ten people in it．（there be句型） ②I sometimes play badminton with my father and go shopping with my mother．（and连接并列句） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $