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专题08 书面表达
188.(2025·江苏淮安·中考真题)假如你是阳光中学的一名学生,你校英语节将开展以“Friendship Lights Up My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿,介绍你的朋友并分享你们的故事。文章须包含以下要点:
1. 描绘朋友的基本信息(年龄,长相,爱好等);
2. 描述一个事例,体现朋友对你的帮助;
3. 谈谈你对友谊的理解。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Friendship Lights Up My Life_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
189.(2025·江苏徐州·中考真题)2025年是丹麦作家安徒生诞辰220周年。为了纪念这位用童话点亮世界的文学大师,阳光中学英文社团拟组织纪念活动,现面向全校学生征集活动方案。假设你是该校九年级学生李华,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文,提出你的方案。
IDEAS NEEDED!The year 2025 marks the Danish writer Andersen’s 220th birthday!
Sunshine English Club will organize activities in memory of him.
Your IDEAS are needed! Please let us know:
● Time: Weekday or weekend? Why?
● Place: School hall or city park? Why?
● Activities: Story-telling, role-play
And ... (at least ONE)
● Your hope: …
We need your creative ideas!
注意:
1.短文需包括所给要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数90左右。短文已给出的部分 (见答题卡) 不计入总词数;
3.短文不得透露个人信息。
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190.(2025·江苏常州·中考真题)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:
1. Why shouldn’t we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
191.(2025·江苏扬州·中考真题)校园是一个充满“美”的地方。为了感受、记录、分享校园之“美” ,你校英语俱乐部将开展以“The beauty of our school”为主题的小组实践活动,请你根据以下提示和要求用英语完成一份小组活动计划。
提示: (1) What do you record? (choose one point: views/people/activities… )
(2) How do you record and share it? And why?
(3) What do you expect to get from this group activity? (list at least two points)
要求:
(1) 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3) 词数:100词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record
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192.(2025·江苏宿迁·中考真题)学校英语角开展以“健康饮食”为主题的演讲比赛,假如你是李华,请你以“A Healthy Diet”为题写一份英语演讲稿。要求:参照下表,阐述健康饮食的重要性,列举不良饮食习惯及危害,并给出合理的建议。
A Healthy Diet
健康饮食的重要性
1.提供能量
2.强壮身体
不良饮食习惯及危害
1.甜食:对牙齿有害
2.油炸食品(fried food):使身体变胖
合理的建议
1.按时吃饭
2.多吃水果、蔬菜
3.……(补充2点)
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
193.(2025·江苏连云港·中考真题)假如你是李华,初中毕业在即,你校英文报“We’re Graduating”栏目正在征集毕业感言,请你写一篇文章投稿,内容包括:
(1)回顾一次难忘的经历;
(2)表达一份感恩的心情;
(3)展望一下未来的人生。
注意:(1)词数90左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
How time flies! The three years has been filled with so many memories. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
194.(2025·江苏苏州·中考真题)假如你是李华,正在英国参加短期交流项目。在学校的“文化周”活动中,作为中国交流学生代表,你准备展示并介绍一把自制的手工扇,请你写一份发言稿。
内容包括:
(1)扇子制作过程(如图);
(2)扇面设计内容和寓意;
(3)你的感受与愿望。
要求:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)适当展开想象,增加细节;
(3)照抄试卷中语篇内容不得分;
(4)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
参考词汇:brush n. 毛笔
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made.
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195.(2025·江苏盐城·中考真题)你校英文报正在组织题为“A Meaningful Trip”的征文活动。请根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享一次有意义的出行经历。
注意事项:1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A Meaningful Trip
I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
196.(2025·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李华,你将参加学校英语俱乐部举办的“实践·成长”主题演讲比赛。现请你就自己的一次经历完成一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.亲身经历;
2.实践感受;
3.成长愿景。
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
Dear all,
It’s my great honor to share my special experience here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
197.(2025·江苏无锡·中考真题)随着免签政策的实施,外国游客纷至沓来。为传播中华文化,讲好中国故事,某旅游服务机构正在招募一批志愿者,要求报名者面试时用英语推荐国内任意一个有特色的城市。假设你是李华,你想报名参加面试,并已绘制了如下流程图,请根据图示内容完成面试发言稿。
注意事项:1. 发言稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,发言稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
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I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city.
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专题08 书面表达
188.(2025·江苏淮安·中考真题)假如你是阳光中学的一名学生,你校英语节将开展以“Friendship Lights Up My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿,介绍你的朋友并分享你们的故事。文章须包含以下要点:
1. 描绘朋友的基本信息(年龄,长相,爱好等);
2. 描述一个事例,体现朋友对你的帮助;
3. 谈谈你对友谊的理解。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Friendship Lights Up My Life_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Friendship Lights Up My Life
I’d like to introduce my best friend, Li Hua. He is 14 years old, just like me. He has short black hair and always wears a warm smile. He loves playing basketball and reading books.
Last term, I failed my Maths exam and felt very upset. Li Hua noticed my sadness. He spent two hours every day helping me review Maths after school. With his help, my Maths improved a lot.
As an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” This experience made me understand that true friendship is about being there for each other, especially in difficult times. A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter. I’m truly thankful to have such a friend as Li Hua.
【难度】0.85
【知识点】朋友、记叙文
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍朋友的基本信息,包括年龄,长相,爱好等;
第二步:描述一个事例,体现朋友对自己的帮助;
第三步:谈谈自己对友谊的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①feel upset感到沮丧
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
A good friend is like a light that guides you and makes your life brighter.(that引导定语从句)
189.(2025·江苏徐州·中考真题)2025年是丹麦作家安徒生诞辰220周年。为了纪念这位用童话点亮世界的文学大师,阳光中学英文社团拟组织纪念活动,现面向全校学生征集活动方案。假设你是该校九年级学生李华,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文,提出你的方案。
IDEAS NEEDED!The year 2025 marks the Danish writer Andersen’s 220th birthday!
Sunshine English Club will organize activities in memory of him.
Your IDEAS are needed! Please let us know:
● Time: Weekday or weekend? Why?
● Place: School hall or city park? Why?
● Activities: Story-telling, role-play
And ... (at least ONE)
● Your hope: …
We need your creative ideas!
注意:
1.短文需包括所给要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数90左右。短文已给出的部分 (见答题卡) 不计入总词数;
3.短文不得透露个人信息。
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【答案】例文:
To mark the Danish writer Andersen’s 220th birthday, here’s my plan for the activity.
For the time, I suggest choosing a weekend. Most students are free then, so more can take part in it. As for the place, the school hall is better. It’s comfortable and convenient, protecting us from bad weather. Activities will be diverse. Besides story-telling and role-play, we can have a “Fairy Tale Creation” session. Students can write their own tales inspired by Andersen.
I hope this activity will not only help us better understand Andersen’s works but also spark our love for fairy tales and creativity.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】计划、文体活动
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据写作要点展开,不要遗漏要点,需适当补充;注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的;
第二步,介绍活动的时间、地点和具体活动方案。
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②protect sb from sth保护某人免于
③comfortable and convenient舒适又方便
[高分句型]
I hope this activity will not only help us better understand Andersen’s works but also spark our love for fairy tales and creativity. (not only...but also结构)
190.(2025·江苏常州·中考真题)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:
1. Why shouldn’t we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help dirty words speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What’s more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】意见/建议、礼仪与习俗
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍为什么我们不能说脏话;
第二步,介绍怎样才能帮助他人不再说脏话。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to 对……有害
②leave a bad impression on others 给他人留下不好的印象
③make friends with 和……交朋友
④What’s more 此外
[高分句型]
①When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!(省略that的宾语从句)
191.(2025·江苏扬州·中考真题)校园是一个充满“美”的地方。为了感受、记录、分享校园之“美” ,你校英语俱乐部将开展以“The beauty of our school”为主题的小组实践活动,请你根据以下提示和要求用英语完成一份小组活动计划。
提示: (1) What do you record? (choose one point: views/people/activities… )
(2) How do you record and share it? And why?
(3) What do you expect to get from this group activity? (list at least two points)
要求:
(1) 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3) 词数:100词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record
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【答案】例文:
To present the beauty of our school, we plan to record the people. We will mainly focus on our teachers and classmates during their daily activities, like teaching, studying together, or helping each other. We plan to take photos and write short notes about these heartwarming moments. Photos capture real expressions and feelings instantly, making the beauty vivid. Then, we will share them on the school website or our club’s social media page. This way, more people inside and outside school can see the warm human spirit in our school.
From this activity, we expect to understand our school community better and learn to appreciate the kindness around us. We also hope to work better as a team.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】学校信息、学校人员、文体活动
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文属于材料作文写作;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生需围绕“记录的内容、记录和分享的方式及原因、预期收获”展开叙述,注意使用第一人称,并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,明确记录的对象(people),并简要说明具体内容(teachers and classmates);
第二步,具体阐述记录方式(photos and short notes)和分享渠道(school website/social media),并解释原因(capture real expressions, spread warmth);
第三步,总结预期收获(understand community better, appreciate kindness, teamwork),呼应主题。
[亮点词汇]
①heartwarming moments暖心时刻
②capture real expressions捕捉真实表情
③human spirit人文精神
④appreciate the kindness感恩善意
[高分句型]
① Photos capture real expressions and feelings instantly, making the beauty vivid.(现在分词作状语)
192.(2025·江苏宿迁·中考真题)学校英语角开展以“健康饮食”为主题的演讲比赛,假如你是李华,请你以“A Healthy Diet”为题写一份英语演讲稿。要求:参照下表,阐述健康饮食的重要性,列举不良饮食习惯及危害,并给出合理的建议。
A Healthy Diet
健康饮食的重要性
1.提供能量
2.强壮身体
不良饮食习惯及危害
1.甜食:对牙齿有害
2.油炸食品(fried food):使身体变胖
合理的建议
1.按时吃饭
2.多吃水果、蔬菜
3.……(补充2点)
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life. It can provide us with enough energy to study and play. Also, it helps build up our bodies and makes us stronger.
However, some bad eating habits are common among us. Many students love eating sweet food, which is bad for our teeth. And fried food is popular too, but it can make us fat easily.
So how can we have a healthy diet? First, we should eat regularly. Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins. Third, drink more milk and water instead of sugary drinks. Last but not least, control the amount of food we eat and avoid overeating.
Let’s start from now on and form a good eating habit. Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】健康饮食、意见/建议
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章写作需要围绕“健康饮食”展开,涵盖健康饮食的重要性、常见的不良饮食习惯及健康饮食的方法,考生应注意条理清晰地阐述观点,适当补充具体例子,不要遗漏任何要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山说明演讲主题是“健康饮食”,并指出健康饮食在生活中的重要作用;
第二步,具体分析内容。先阐述健康饮食的益处,再列举学生中常见的不良饮食习惯,最后给出健康饮食的具体建议;
第三步,书写结语。呼吁大家从现在开始养成良好的饮食习惯,以保持健康、享受幸福生活,并结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①vital role 重要作用
②build up our bodies 增强体质
③fried food 油炸食品
④be rich in vitamins 富含维生素
⑤sugary drinks 含糖饮料
⑥avoid overeating 避免暴饮暴食
[高分句型]
①As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Many students love eating sweet food, which is bad for our teeth.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
④Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life.(only+介词短语置于句首引起的部分倒装句)
193.(2025·江苏连云港·中考真题)假如你是李华,初中毕业在即,你校英文报“We’re Graduating”栏目正在征集毕业感言,请你写一篇文章投稿,内容包括:
(1)回顾一次难忘的经历;
(2)表达一份感恩的心情;
(3)展望一下未来的人生。
注意:(1)词数90左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
How time flies! The three years has been filled with so many memories. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How time flies! The three years has been filled with so many memories.
When in Grade 7, I was too shy to speak in class. My English teacher Ms Mu noticed me and kept encouraging me. Little by little, I could speak in front of the whole class.
I’m thankful to Ms Mu. Without her help, I couldn’t make so much progress. I feel so lucky to have met so many excellent teachers like her during my growth.
In the future, I hope to be a person like Ms Mu. I will do my job to the fullest and help people in need.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】计划、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容完成写作,适当增加细节,使作文内容意思完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回顾一次难忘的经历;
第二步,表达一份感恩的心情;
第三步,展望一下未来的人生。
[亮点词汇]
①too...to...太……而不能
②in front of在……之前
③make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
I feel so lucky to have met so many excellent teachers like her during my growth. (动词不定式作原因状语)
194.(2025·江苏苏州·中考真题)假如你是李华,正在英国参加短期交流项目。在学校的“文化周”活动中,作为中国交流学生代表,你准备展示并介绍一把自制的手工扇,请你写一份发言稿。
内容包括:
(1)扇子制作过程(如图);
(2)扇面设计内容和寓意;
(3)你的感受与愿望。
要求:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)适当展开想象,增加细节;
(3)照抄试卷中语篇内容不得分;
(4)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
参考词汇:brush n. 毛笔
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made.
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【答案】例文
Hi, everyone! Welcome to the cultural week! Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art. Here is the fan I made.
To make this fan, I first prepared materials like paper, scissors, a brush, and ink. Next, I carefully cut out two circular pieces of paper for the fan’s surface. Finally, I used the brush to paint my design on one side. The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees, symbolizing harmony between nature and humanity.
This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it. Thank you!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】文体活动、中华文化、传统工艺
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿,描述了作者亲手制作中国扇子的过程以及其背后的意义;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍主题和背景,引出自己制作的扇子;
第二步,详细描述制作过程、材料及设计特点;
第三步,总结经验与感悟,表达对作品的喜爱和分享的喜悦。
[亮点词汇]
①practical tools 实用工具
②works of art 艺术品
③traditional Chinese landscape 中国传统山水画
④harmony between nature and humanity 自然与人类之间的和谐
[高分句型]
①Chinese fans are both practical tools and beautiful works of art.(使用both...and结构,突出了扇子的功能性与艺术性)
②The design features a traditional Chinese landscape with mountains, waterfalls, and pine trees, symbolizing harmony between nature and humanity.(通过具体描写设计元素,生动表达了主题意义)
③This project was not only fun but also taught me about patience and creativity.(运用not only...but also结构,强调了收获)
195.(2025·江苏盐城·中考真题)你校英文报正在组织题为“A Meaningful Trip”的征文活动。请根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享一次有意义的出行经历。
注意事项:1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A Meaningful Trip
I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Meaningful Trip
I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to a small mountain village last summer.
Instead of typical sightseeing, our class volunteered to help the local community. We taught English to the children and helped farmers pick fruits. Although the work was tiring, the smiles on the villagers’ faces made it all worthwhile. I was deeply touched by their kindness and simple way of life.
This trip was meaningful not only because we offered help, but also because we learned the importance of giving and gratitude. It was an unforgettable experience that taught me to cherish what I have and to always be willing to help others.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】旅行、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇命题作文;
②时态:时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要围绕“有意义的旅行”展开,涵盖旅行地点、活动、过程、感受及旅行意义,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点,注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己去过很多地方,重点分享去年夏天去小山村的“最有意义”的旅行;
第二步,具体叙述旅行过程。先说明旅行的特殊形式,再描述具体志愿活动,并对比“工作累”与“村民笑容让一切值得”的感受,提及被村民善良与质朴打动;
第三步,书写结语。总结旅行的双重意义,点明这段难忘经历带来的成长——学会珍惜现有生活、愿意帮助他人。
[亮点词汇]
①typical sightseeing 典型的观光
②volunteer to help 志愿帮助
③local community 当地社区
④worthwhile 值得的
⑤gratitude 感恩
⑥cherish 珍惜
[高分句型]
①The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to a small mountain village last summer.(定语从句)
②Although the work was tiring, the smiles on the villagers’ faces made it all worthwhile.(although引导的让步状语从句)
③This trip was meaningful not only because we offered help, but also because we learned the importance of giving and gratitude.(“not only...but also...”连接两个并列的原因状语从句)
④ It was an unforgettable experience that taught me to cherish what I have and to always be willing to help others.(that引导的定语从句,what引导的宾语从句)
196.(2025·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李华,你将参加学校英语俱乐部举办的“实践·成长”主题演讲比赛。现请你就自己的一次经历完成一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.亲身经历;
2.实践感受;
3.成长愿景。
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
Dear all,
It’s my great honor to share my special experience here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear all,
It’s my great honor to share my special experience here. Last summer, I decided to learn cooking by myself. At first, I made a mess in the kitchen and almost burned the food! But I didn’t give up. I followed recipes carefully and practiced again and again.
Through this practice, I not only learned several dishes but also realized the importance of patience and perseverance. Every small success made me feel proud and more confident.
This experience showed me that trying new things helps us grow. I wish to keep exploring, learning practical skills, and becoming a more independent and helpful person in the future. Thank you.
【难度】0.65
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,注意行文连贯,表述完整,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍自己的一次实践经历;
第二步,表达自己在这次经历中的感受;
第三步,表达自己的成长愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①make a mess弄得一团糟
②give up放弃
③the importance of……的重要性
[高分句型]
①Through this practice, I not only learned several dishes but also realized the importance of patience and perseverance. (not only...but also...结构)
②This experience showed me that trying new things helps us grow. (that引导宾语从句)
197.(2025·江苏无锡·中考真题)随着免签政策的实施,外国游客纷至沓来。为传播中华文化,讲好中国故事,某旅游服务机构正在招募一批志愿者,要求报名者面试时用英语推荐国内任意一个有特色的城市。假设你是李华,你想报名参加面试,并已绘制了如下流程图,请根据图示内容完成面试发言稿。
注意事项:1. 发言稿内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,发言稿开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Hello, my friends Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city.
【答案】范文:
Hello, my friends! Welcome to China!
I’d like to recommend Guilin, a pearl in southern China. Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.
Here, you can be immersed in nature by cycling through rice terraces or taking a bamboo raft ride. Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles. For photography lovers, the sunset at Elephant Trunk Hill is a must-visit spot.
My advice? Visit between April and October for the best weather, and try learning basic Chinese phrases to connect with locals.
I’m waiting for you here in this beautiful city!
【难度】0.4
【知识点】城市
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇面试发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据流程图提示介绍城市特色、活动及建议,语言需流畅且有感染力,注意句式多样性。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山推荐城市;
第二步:分点说明城市特色与活动;
第三步:给出实用建议并热情结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①breathtaking scenery令人惊叹的风景
②be immersed in沉浸于
③authentic cuisine地道美食
④must-visit spots必游景点
[高分句型]
①Located in Guangxi Province, this city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, especially the Li River with its emerald waters and karst mountains.(非谓语动词作状语)
②Not only can you explore ancient towns like Xingping, but you also have the chance to taste authentic cuisine such as Guilin rice noodles.(倒装句)
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