专题12 情绪描写（课件） - 2026年高考英语读后续写支架式讲练精美课件

读 后 续 写 专题十二 情绪描写 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 01 情绪表达 contents 02 高阶句式 04 描写生动 03 无灵主语 01 情绪表达 How will you describe your feelings? 情绪 Your description 好害怕。 我生气了。 太感动了。 我太开心了。 我好伤心。 I am so happy. I am so sad. I am so scared. I am angry. I am so moved. Summary n.happiness,joy,delight, pleasure,excitment ... adj.pleased,delighted,cheerful,happy,joyful n.sadness,sorrow,depression,grief... adj.sad,sorrowful, depressed,disappointed, frustrated,upset... n.anger,annoyance,irritation,fury adj.angry,annoyed, annoying,irritated n.disgust,hate n. fear, fright ,scare adj.fearful,fearsome, feared,frighted, frighting adj.disgusted, disgusting,hateful 01 情绪表达 1 1 2 3 内层 直抒胸臆 表层 眉目传情 外层 寄情于景 direct description facial expression body language surroundings How to make character’s emotions vivid in continuation writing? Show, don’t tell 6 What is his feeling? He feels angry. eyes mouth glare at shout grit his teeth sweat wave his fist is ready to hit another guy  [ɡleə]  [fɪst] [ɡrɪt] face 怒目而视 咬紧 挥舞 拳头 body Emotional description Action words Face Body Emotional words Happy, angry, scared……. 01 情绪表达 感受情绪 √ 喜怒形于色 √ How to make character’s emotions vivid in continuation writing? 01 情绪表达 从 面部/肢体和声音 三个方面体现人物的喜怒哀乐 PPT模板下载：/moban/ 行业PPT模板：/hangye/ 节日PPT模板：/jieri/ PPT素材下载：/sucai/ PPT背景图片：/beijing/ PPT图表下载：/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载：/xiazai/ PPT教程： /powerpoint/ Word教程： /word/ Excel教程：/excel/ 资料下载：/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：/kejian/ 范文下载：/fanwen/ 试卷下载：/shiti/ 教案下载：/jiaoan/ 字体下载：/ziti/ She was happy. She clapped her hands together and jumped up and down with joy. She was angry. She was sad. Her leg was trembling with fear. Her head dropped and tears fell into her feet. Her mouth dropped open in surprise. She folded her arms and stared at him. She was surprised. She was scared. Show, don’t tell 01 情绪表达 face ① His smile broadened from ear to ear. ② He clapped his hands together and jumped up and down with joy. ③ He giggled and squealed with excitement. body voice v. 长声尖叫 他笑得合不拢嘴。 [ˈɡɪɡ(ə)l] v. 咯咯地笑 He/She is happy； …… facial expression grin(咧嘴笑) beam(喜笑颜开)..(beam at sb) smile with curved eyes (弯曲的） one’s eyes sparkle/shine/twinkle （闪耀）with happiness/joy Tears of happiness pour down one’s cheek(沿着脸颊奔流而下) face/eyes light/brighten up（照亮） with pleasure body language dance with joy and sweetness cheer for joy jump high for joy （欢欣雀跃） happiness: Let’s learn to practice. 12 face: body: He/She is happy； …… Actions smile with curved eyes eyes were bent with laughter moon one’s eyes light up one’s eyes sparkle/shine with happiness grin dance with joy cheer and jump for joy [kɜːvd] 弯曲的 [bent] 弯曲的 [ɡrɪn] 咧嘴笑 (a nice crescent) meme[miːm] 表情包 12 face: body: Actions He is sad； …… tears in one’s eyes burst into tears tears roll/run down one’s cheeks be close to tears cry one’s eyes out can’t help crying heart was cut by a knife heart is broken 面颊 [tʃiːk] 13 face: body: Actions He/She is scared; …… face turned pale eyes wide open mouth wide open grit his teeth tremble legs are weak can’t move [ˈtrembl] 颤抖 [peɪl] 苍白的 14 face: body: Actions He is angry; …… face turned red frown grit his teeth wave his fist arms fold across the chest [fəʊld] 折叠  皱眉  [fraʊn] 15 Face:face turned pale eyes wide open mouth wide open grit his teeth Action words Body:tremble legs are weak can’t move Face：face turned red frown grit his teeth Body:wave his fist arms fold across the chest Face:roll one’s eyes curl one’s lip tight lipped Body:turn around disgustedly be bored with be fed up with Face:smile with curved eyes eyes were bent with laughter over the moon one’s eyes light up Body:dance with joy cheer and jump for joy Face:tears in one’s eyes burst into tears tears roll/run down one’s cheeks be close to tears can’t help crying Body:heart was cut by a knife heart is broken 01 情绪表达 wave his fist turn around disgustedly with a smile shining like a diamond tears in one’s eyes heart is broken eyes wide open face turned red roll one’s eyes tremble burst with laughter joy sadness fear anger digust Show, don’t tell 02 高阶句式 1. 她激动地跳了起来。 She was ______________ she jumped to her feet. 句型 1. sb was so+情绪adj+that 从句 某人如此......以至于...... so excited that 2. 他如此害怕以至于站在那儿一动不动。 He was ______________ he stood rooted to the spot. so scared that 02 高阶句式 He was so scared that he was unable to utter a single word. 他吓得一句话也说不出来 sb was so+情绪adj+that 从句 02 高阶句式 sb was so+情绪adj+that 从句 She was so sad that she burst into crying. 她太伤心了，突然哭了起来 02 高阶句式 sb was so+情绪adj+that 从句 So+情绪形容词+was sb. that...“某人如此……以至于” Tip:该句式是有”sb was +so+情绪形容词+that，升级而成的倒装句，强调人物的情绪状态。 So excited was she that her tears blurred the university logo. I was so excited that I jumped up and down. So excited was I that I jumped up and down. She was so excited that her tears blurred the university logo. 场景①悲伤 老图书管理员非常悲伤，泪水无声滑落，满是灰尘的书从她颤抖的手指上滑落(slip down)。 So was the old librarian that . 场景②尴尬 她非常尴尬，结结巴巴(stammer)地道歉，摸索(fumble)着那封撕破的信，两颊通红。 So was she that . 运用场景：在某种主要情绪的驱使下，某人发出了某种动作。 her tears slid down silently with a dusty book slipped from her trembling fingers. gloomy embarrassed she stammered an apology and fumbled with the torn letter, with red cheeks 02 高阶句式 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth. 句型 2. 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth. (感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2 1.（感到）既激动又高兴，他跳起来，挥舞着胳膊。 , he to his feet, his arms wildly. Excited and delighted 2.（感到)既紧张又坚定, 她走上舞台，充满热情地演奏钢琴。 , she onto the stage, the piano with passion. Nervous but determined jumped waving walked playing 02 高阶句式 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth. 例句: 【2022全国1卷】感到坚定和受到鼓舞,David抬起头，感激地看着我。 ➢Determined and inspired，David raised his head, looking at me with gratitude. 02 高阶句式 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth. （2022全国1卷) 大卫继续跑步 David kept on running. 大卫信心满满的和充满决心的，继续奔跑 Confident and determined , David kept on running . 大卫信心满满的和充满决心的，继续奔跑，奋力冲向终点线。 Confident and determined , David kept on running, struggling to reach the finish line . 前加情绪形容词 后加非谓语 02 高阶句式 情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth. 1. _________________________(感到坚定和受到鼓舞的）, David raised his head , looking at me with gratitude . （2022全国1卷） 2._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的) , David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude . （2022全国1卷） 3.________________________(既惊讶又感动), Mr. Alder believed what I said, giving me a second chance. (2023广东一模） 4. （感到开心和兴奋的)， he received the admission letter from Oxford University. Determined and inspired Relieved and delighted Surprised and touched Delighted and excited 场景1：比赛失利​ 虽沮丧但仍坚定，他咬紧牙关，捡起球再次开始练习。 yet , he . 运用场景：通过并列情绪词刻画复杂心理状态，适用于人物在矛盾或转折中的心理描写。 场景2:心怀愧疚 心怀愧疚但态度坚决，她咬紧牙关决定承认错误。 yet , she . Frustrated determined set his jaw,picked up the ball and began to practice again. Guilty determined set her jaw and decided to admit her mistakes. 02 高阶句式 情绪形容词+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth. Extremely nervous as/though he was , David became determined to finish the race . 前加让步状语（倒装句型） 句型 3 情绪形容词+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth. 尽管某人（感到）...，某人仍做某事 02 高阶句式 情绪形容词+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth. 例句:【2022广州一模】尽管很着急和不情愿， 我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。 Anxious and unwilling as I was, I still did the dishes at Dad's request. 02 高阶句式 What made sb+情绪词+was that... 句型 4 What made sb+情绪词+was that... 让某人感到……的是 What made her astonished was that she had waited a decade for this day. 句中含有what引导的主语从句，句式更高级 场景1：失败后鼓励​ 令他开心的是，老师立刻给予了支持。 What made him was that . 运用场景：解释人物情绪的深层原因，增强情节合理性。 场景2：助人 令她感动的是，这个陌生人帮助了她却没有要求任何回报。 What made her was that . the teacher immediately gave him his support. delighted grateful the stranger helped her without demanding anything in return. 02 高阶句式 身体部位+非谓语动词, 主+谓+宾. 句型 5 身体部位+非谓语动词, 主+谓+宾. 某人做某事，感觉... 1. 我觉得自己手心冒汗，心跳加速(beat wildly)。 I felt my palms sweating, _____________________ . heart beating wildly 2. Mary独自坐在房中，眼里充满后悔的泪水。 ________________________________ , Mary sat alone in the room. Eyes filled with regretful tears 02 高阶句式 身体部位+非谓语动词, 主+谓+宾. Face lighting up with delight, sb did sth... 脸上洋溢着快乐,... Eyes glittering with joy, sb did sth... 眼里闪着喜悦,... Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth... 眼里充满后悔的泪水... Eyes widening in disbelief/surprise/fear, sb did sth... 眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,... Heart beating/pounding wildly, sb did sth... 心砰砰直跳,... Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking, sb did sth... 胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖,... 03 无灵主语 “I felt happy.” 无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语 (换主语) : “开心(的情绪)抓住了我 ” (加介短) :“ 一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我” (加并列): “开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我” 我感到开心: Delight seized me. A wave of delight seized me. Delight and excitement seized me. 03 无灵主语 A strong sense of delight took hold of me when I heard the good news. 用无灵主语句扩写: 当我听到这个好消息的那一刻，一种强烈的喜悦感抓住了我。 情 绪 名 词 动词 sb “情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth 当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头 03 无灵主语 情绪名词 固定动词 seize 抓住 catch (过去式caught) strike (过去式struck) surround 围绕着 take hold of 控制 wash over 让人感到 come over 包围/支配 envelop 笼罩 overwhelm 使难以承受 sb +as/when sb do sth 03 无灵主语 练习1. 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰和开心给包围了。(2022全国1卷) ➢Relief and delight came over me when David finally became determined to continue the race. 例句: 当我听到这个好消息的那一刻，一种强烈的喜悦感抓住了我。 A strong sense of delight took hold of me when I heard the good news. 03 无灵主语 2. 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰(relief)和开心 给淹没了。 (2022全国1卷) ___________________________________ when David finally became determined to continue the race. 1. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她非常激动。 ___________________________________ when the host announced she won the prize. A great sense of excitement seized / swept over her Relief and delight flooded over me 03 无灵主语 sentence pattern 1: a burst/wave/surge/sense of + 表情感状态的名词 + 有灵动词 + sb./sth. “某人感到...” 或“一阵/一种...向某人袭来” common animate verbs： seize/take hold of(侵袭，突然控制）, swallow(吞噬，淹没)，flood over(充满），creep over（不知不觉地产生）, grip(紧抓），give way to(被…代替）, tear...into pieces(把...撕成碎片）,deprive...of...(剥夺)，sweep over/rush over(袭来，席卷),choke(使说不出话来), clog(堵塞) one's throat, fail(使无能为力), desert/abandon(抛弃)... eg. When I was holding the torch, __________________________(我兴奋地说不出话来). excitement choked my words 03 无灵主语 feelings or emotions nouns feelings or emotions nouns 高兴，快乐 伤心 生气 绝望 兴奋 害怕，恐惧 惊讶，震惊 后悔 焦虑 困惑 感激 宽慰 沮丧 羞愧 happiness, joy, delight, pleasure anger, annoyance, rage, fury, wrath excitement, thrill surprise, amazement shock, astonishment sadness, sorrow, grief despair, desperation, hopelessness fear, scare, terror, dread, trepidation, horror, fright regret, guilt, remorse anxiety, misgiving, worries confusion, puzzlement appreciation, gratitude, thankfulness, gratefulness relief, relaxation discouragement, upset, depression, frustration shame, abashment 03 无灵主语 sentence pattern 2: 身体部位或声音容貌 + 有灵动词 + sb./sth. common nouns：eyes, nose, mouth, ears, hand, arm, leg, heart, cheek, face, laughter, smile, tears, voice... eg. When I was holding the torch, ____________________________(我脸上浮现大大的笑容). a big smile flashed across my face common animate verbs：light up，brighten 照亮；linger 继续存留；well up 涌出；spread/flash across 浮现, 闪过; flash 闪烁；crumple 弄皱；cloud over显得阴沉(恐惧、愤怒、忧愁等）... 04 描写生动 When Mom knows that the naughty David broke a vase again, she __________. angry She stood there, __________.(一言不发） She shouted at him______(愤怒地） How can we describe vividly? She looked at him _________(愤怒地）. adv. prepositional phrase V-ing. angrily with anger saying nothing 04 描写生动 Hearing the news that he got the first place in the exam, he was so . excited/happy He shouted________(兴奋地）. He cheered and jumped high ______(兴奋地）. He jumped up and down, ________________(挥舞着双手）. How can we describe vividly? adv. prepositional phrase V-ing. excitedly with joy waving his hands 04 描写生动 Seeing that the bus is leaving soon, he ran out of the house____. He ran out of the house ___________. He ran out of the house_____________. adv. hurriedly prepositional phrase in a hurry 急匆匆地 急匆匆地 04 描写生动 Adverbs ：carefully， 1. Add adverbs(副词）to make the action vivid. ① With nothing to do, he wandered ___________ (漫无目的地）in the street. ② He jumped ________（小心翼翼地） over the broken vase. ③ She _______（自豪地） displayed her gold medal to her parents. aimlessly carefully proudly For example: properly， anxiously，tightly(紧紧地）,normally，fast，well，calmly， politely，proudly，softly，warmly ，slowly，badly，hard，bravely， aimlessly,immediately ... 1. with+emotional noun（情感名词）： with + delight 2. Add prepositional phrase（介词短语）to make the action vivid. 2. in+noun（名词）： in+ a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice 用..的嗓音 surprise/amazement/shock/astonishment/sorrow For example: He stared at me For example: Her eyes shone /excitement/ joy/fear/anger/patience/pride/caution satisfaction/embarrassment... with excitement/joy. in surprise/shock. 04 描写生动 3. Add V-ing to make the action vivid. ① The old man sat here, ② They walked on the street , ③ She stood in the cold , V-ing forms can be used in the sentence to express active actions happening at the same time, making the sentence more vivid and complete. looking at the sunset in the distance quietly. talking and laughing. shaking wildly . 读 后 续 写 Thank You！ 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 Lavf58.20.100 Lavf58.20.100 Lavf58.20.100 Lavf58.20.100 $