专题10 表达出彩（课件） - 2026年高考英语读后续写支架式讲练精美课件

读 后 续 写 专题十 表达出彩 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 01 正确选词 contents 02 句子优化 04 表达微技能 03 增分句型 01 正确选词 1 2 3 smile laugh grin 01 正确选词 glare glimpse peek peer 01 正确选词 She kissed her little baby on the forehead, placed him in the crib, turned around and walked away. (The mother had to leave her baby to work in a foreign country. Before she left…) 01 正确选词 She kissed her little baby___________ on the forehead, _________placed it in the crib, _______________ turned around and walked away_________. lovingly gently tearfully reluctantly Can you add some adverbs to show the mother’s feelings more vividly? 01 正确选词 Wanakarn Beach Resort & Spa is a hotel located on the Phuket Island famous for its __________ waters, ___________ beaches, __________ surf, __________ ________cuisine and _____________ sunsets. crystal clear white sandy world-class breathtaking mouth- watering general words（笼统词） concrete words(具体词） walk (蹑手蹑脚地走) run (猛冲) look (瞥见) (怒视) (凝视) say/talk (闲聊) (耳语) cry （啜泣) eat (咬) （咀嚼) (吞下) tiptoe dash/rush glance glare stare chat whisper weep/ sob bite swallow chew Skill 1：Choose Accurate Verbs 用精准动词代替笼统动词 01 正确选词 walk 1. tiptoe vi. 踮着脚走；蹑手蹑脚地走 2. sneak vi. 潜行;偷偷溜走 3. slip vi. 悄悄疾行；溜 4. stagger vi. 蹒跚；摇摇晃晃地走 5. wander vi. 游荡，漫游 6. stroll vi 漫步; 溜达; 闲逛 7. pace vi. 踱步，走来走去 8. rush vi. 猛冲;赶紧离开 9. flee vi.  逃走，逃避，逃跑 Tom came late to school again, so he ___________ into the classroom so as not to make a noise. I found Mark at the hospital, ___________ restlessly up and down . They looked happy and relaxed as they  ___________  in the sunshine along the beach. tiptoed pacing strolled 关于走的动作 01 正确选词 关于说的动作 嘟囔： whisper/mumble/grunt/murmur 结结巴巴地说：stutter/stumble/stammer 宣布：announce/declare 保证：promise/assure 建议：offer/propose/suggest； 问与答：ask询问/answer回答/reply回复 喊叫：cry out喊叫/call喊叫/shout大喊/scream尖叫/yell大喊/exclaim惊叫（因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫） 其它的说：add补充说道= continue继续说道/retort反驳道；  explain解释道/ state陈述道；/protest抗议道/sob哭诉道/agree同意地说/comfort安慰道/blurt out脱口而出/insist 01 正确选词 关于eye的动作闪烁 shine/sparkle/glimmer/glitter/twinkle with + excitement/joy /pride等表示感情色彩的名词 各种哭：cry/sob/weep/wail/burst into tears/burst out crying/fight back tears 睁大眼睛：one’s eyes widened/ grew wide   01 正确选词 关于face/cheek的动作    露出笑容：a smile appeared on/ spread across his face   焕发光彩：one’s face lit up/brightened/glowed   脸红：flush/burn（with embarrassment） 各种笑：smile微笑/laugh出声笑/chuckle轻声笑/giggle咯咯笑/sneer讥讽地笑/beam笑容满面/grin露齿笑 01 正确选词 关于hand的动作 各种打：pound/thump/punch 猛击; beat连续击打；slap打耳光；tap/pat轻拍 各种抓：seize；grasp；grab; clutch; take hold of; catch hold of; hold on to 其他的动作：pull拉/掏；push推；reach 伸；drag拽；pinch捏wipe擦；rub揉；hug/embrace/hold sb in one’s arms拥抱；press按压；roll摇；pick up捡起 01 正确选词 关于foot/knee的动作  dash/rush冲； rise to one’s feet站起来 ; struggle to one’s feet 吃力地站起来;  jump to one’s feet 跳起来; kneel down跪下;   get down on one knee单膝跪地;   slip 滑到； sneak/creep偷偷走； crawl 爬； wobble/limp/stagger/stumble摇摇晃晃地走   start/begin decide cry remember tired see attract get down to doing make up one’s mind burst into tears keep in mind worn out catch sight of appeal to Skill 2：Choose proper phrases用恰当短语代替普通动词 拥抱 hug/embrace 冲向前 跳起来 一把抱住 Skill 3：分解动作，形成动作链 Action chains she dashed forward, jumped up and hugged the boy tightly. Sentence pattern： Sb. 谓语 A, 谓语B and 谓语 C 02 句子优化 非谓语动词+独立主格 介词短语 (尤其with) 三大从句(定从，状从，同位从) 状态形容词,副词 动作链 特殊句式 (倒装,感叹,强调...) 高级 ✱无灵主语 （物作主语） 02 句子优化 1. 伴随状语 【原例】Hearing the scream, Tom dropped his flashlight. 【升级版】Hearing a sharp scream, Tom fumbled with his flashlight, its beam shaking on the wall.（保留sharp scream，增强听觉效果，shaking体现紧张感） 【结构分析】 ① 现在分词Hearing表伴随动作 ② 主句Tom fumbled核心动作 ③ 独立主格its beam shaking补充细节 【错误警示】 ❌ Hearing the scream, the flashlight fell to the ground. ✅ Hearing the scream, Tom dropped his flashlight. 一、非谓语动词作状语（分词结构） 语法本质：将从句精简为短语，保留主从逻辑关系 提分原理：突破“主语+谓语”的单一模式，实现句式降维打击 02 句子优化 2.结果状语 【原例】The dog barked furiously, frightening the intruder away. 【升级版】The dog growled fiercely, sending the intruder running, knocking over a trash can with a loud crash. （用sent...running替代普通动词，knocking展现连锁反应） 【结构分析】 ① 主句The dog growled核心动作 ② 现在分词sending表直接结果 ③ 现在分词knocking表连锁反应 【错误警示】 ❌ The dog barked, making the moon rise. ✅ The dog’s bark startled the birds into flight. 02 句子优化 3.原因状语 【原例】Exhausted by the long chase, the wolf finally collapsed. 【升级版】Too exhausted to run further, the wolf collapsed, its breath painting white clouds in the cold air. （too exhausted直白表原因，painting添加生动细节） 【结构分析】 ① 过去分词Too exhausted表原因 ② 主句核心动作collapsed ③ 独立主格补充细节 【错误警示】 ❌ Being tired, the ground felt hard. ✅ Exhausted from running, he fell onto the hard ground. 02 句子优化 4.目的状语 【原例】He whispered to avoid waking the baby. 【升级版】Holding his breath, he whispered carefully to keep the baby asleep. 【结构分析】 ① 现在分词Holding his breath表伴随 ② 主句核心动作whispered ③ 不定式to keep表目的 【错误警示】 ❌ To pass the exam, notes were copied. ✅ To pass the exam, he studied until midnight. 02 句子优化 5.时间状语 【原例】Turning the corner, she saw the accident. 【升级版】Turning the corner, she froze at the sight of two crashed cars, their broken glass shining under the streetlight. （turning表时间顺序，shining添加环境细节） 【结构分析】 ① 现在分词Turning表时间 ② 主句核心动作froze ③ 独立主格补充场景 【错误警示】 ❌ Opening the door, the room was dark. ✅ Opening the door, she found the room dark. 02 句子优化 动作链示范 【原例】She ran to the door, opened it, and saw the stranger. 【升级版】Tripping over the rug (1), she grabbed the doorknob (2), and saw a shadowy figure (3). 【结构分析】 ① 现在分词Tripping表意外 ② 主句连续动作grabbed...saw ③ 保留基础SV结构 【错误警示】 ❌ Running downstairs, breakfast was ready. ✅ Running downstairs, she smelled breakfast cooking. 02 句子优化 写作核弹级技巧 【动作链描写公式】1个主句 + 2个分词短语 + 1个比喻/无灵主语 例：Tripping over the roots (1), her knees sinking into the mud (2), she glared at the forest, its towering trees now mocking prison bars (3). 【错误集锦】 逻辑主语不一致： ❌ Reading the letter, tears rolled down. （reading的主语不是tears） ✅ Reading the letter, she let tears roll down. 2.错误使用被动： ❌ Being bitten by the dog, the hospital was needed. ✅ Bitten by the dog, he rushed to the hospital. 3.冗余结构： ❌ While walking in the park, a beautiful flower was seen. ✅ Walking in the park, she spotted a flower glowing like a miniature sun. 03 增分句型 仿写句式一：无灵主语开头（没有生命的名词作主语） 【示例】She couldn’t say a word, with tears streaming down her face. 翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。 改写：Words failed her, with tears streaming down her face. 仿写1：I was very afraid as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia. 翻译：当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人他们都戴着徽章时，一阵恐慌席卷了我。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia. 03 增分句型 仿写句式二：部分/完全倒装句开头 【示例】A young man sat by the lake with a book in his hand. 翻译：湖边坐着一个手里拿着一本书的年轻男孩。 改写：By the lake sat a young man with a book in his hand. 仿写1：I was still nervous, but I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start. 翻译：尽管我仍然很紧张，但我努力让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Still nervous as I was, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start. 03 增分句型 仿写句式三：简洁对话或独白开头 【示例】Rachel called to see who got there first as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny. 翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里去！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。 改写：“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny. 仿写1：Kevin added that he said he used to live here and was looking for his father’s watch. 翻译：“他说他以前住在这里，正在找他父亲的手表，”凯文补充道。 改写：(2025浙江1月卷读后续写) “He said he used to live here and was looking for his father’s watch,” Kevin added. 03 增分句型 仿写句式四：介词短语开头 【示例】The man didn’t say a word and picked Jim up off the motorbike. 翻译：那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。 改写：Without saying a word, the man picked Jim up off the motorbike. 仿写1：The moment I saw the scenes, my previous panic was replaced by respect. 翻译：一看到这些场景，我之前的恐慌就让位于尊重。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)At the sight of the scenes, my previous panic gave way to respect. 03 增分句型 仿写句式五：独立主格/with复合宾语结构开头 【示例】As there was no bus, we had to walk home. 翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。 改写：There being no bus, we had to walk home. 仿写1：When the lights dimmed down, I had to watch the film with a frightened heart. 翻译：灯光变暗了，我别无选择，只能带着一颗害怕的心看电影。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)The lights dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart. 03 增分句型 仿写句式六：形容词短语开头 【示例】Sam was curious to know who she was, so he tiptoed into the room. 翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。 改写：Curious to know who she was, he tiptoed into the room. 仿写1：As I was unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears.. 翻译：我无法控制自己的情绪，感动得流下了眼泪。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears. 03 增分句型 仿写句式七：副词开头 【示例】Arthur skipped up the street joyfully. 翻译：亚瑟高高兴兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。 改写：Joyfully, Arthur skipped up the street. 仿写1：My previous fear was quickly replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for. 翻译：顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Instantly, my previous fear was replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for. 03 增分句型 仿写句式八：现在分词短语开头 【示例】As she felt refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out. 翻译：她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。 改写：Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out. 仿写1：I held my wallet tightly, quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed. 翻译：我紧紧地握着钱包，迅速地坐在剧院后面，试图不被人注意。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Holding my wallet tightly, I quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed. 03 增分句型 仿写句式九：过去分词短语开头 【示例】As he was surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful. 翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。 改写：Surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful. 仿写1：I was overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry and waited for the film to start. 翻译：困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写) Overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry, I waited for the film to start. 03 增分句型 仿写句式十：IT高频句型开头 【示例】At that moment I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher. 翻译：就在那一刻，我对老师感激不尽。 改写：It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher. 仿写1：Through this adventure I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside. 翻译：正是通过这次冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内心温柔。 改写：(2025八省联考卷读后续写)It was through this adventure that I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside. 04 表达微技能 Tell:He threw the rock into the river. Show:____________________________________________________________ Show;don't tell He balanced himself , leaned back and threw the rock into the river. Tip:How to show? 细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作，形成动作链。 Tip1: 动作链: 主语+谓语A (,谓语B) and 谓语C. He picked up a rock , leaned back and threw the rock into the river. 04 表达微技能 Tell:They drove to rescue the father and the sister. Show:_________________________________________________________________________________ Show;don't tell They drove to the boat, got closer to the father and the sister and pulled them out of water. Without a second thought, they drove to the boat, got closer to the father and the sister and pulled them out of water. Tip2: 介词短语+句子: 介词短语/副词, 主语+谓语A (,谓语B and 谓语C) . 04 表达微技能 Tell:Afer a while, he was saved. Show:___________________________________________ Show;don't tell Tip3: 时间状语+句子: 时间状语, 主语+谓语A (and 谓语B). Tell:The boat approached and Kiana screamed. Show:__________________________________________________________________________ As the boat was approaching, Kiana pointed to her father and sister and screamed. After what seemed like a century, he was pulled onto the boat. 04 表达微技能 Show;don't tell Tip4: 非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done.... Tell:The girl was excited and unwrapped her gift box. Show:_______________________________________________________________ Wearing a shining smile on her face, the girl unwrapped her gift box. Screaming with excitement, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 04 表达微技能 Tell:He was frightened. Show:____________________________________________________________ Show;don't tell He was stunned (adj.目瞪口呆的)there, with his mouth wide open. Tip5: with+宾语+宾补，句子 / 句子，with+宾语+宾补， A sudden rush of panic ruling him, he was frozen to the spot, with his heart beating violently. He stood still, with his heart beating wildly and his eyes full of horror. 04 表达微技能 Tell:He came to me and smiled. Show:_________________________________________________________________________ Show;don't tell He came up to me, with a smile shining like a diamond.(闪烁着钻石般的微笑） He came up to me, a smile shining like a diamond /his eyes dancing with joy and sweetness. Tip6: 独立主格+句子/句子+独立主格 04 表达微技能 Tell:People on the boat were shocked and anxious when they noticed her and then rescued her. Show:_______________________________________________________________________________________________ Show;don't tell Shocked and anxious, people on that boat noticed her, hurried to operate the engine and then approached her. Tip7: 情感类形容词+句子/ 句子+情感类形容词 Tell:Margarito was relieved and was rescued. Show:___________________________________________________________ Relieved, Margarito reached out for Steve's hand and was rescued. 04 表达微技能 Tell:She was happy at the good news. Show:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Show;don't tell She cheerily grinned from ear to ear at this good news, a big smile spreading across her face, which made her appearance shine like a star. Tip8: 三大从句(定从、状从、同位从) 04 表达微技能 Show;don't tell Tell:My mother had never received such a gift. She was moved . Show:______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Never had my mother received such a gift. So moved was she that she hugged me tightly, tears welling up in her eyes. Tip9: 特殊句式(倒装，感叹、省略，强调...) 读 后 续 写 Thank You！ 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 $