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Integration D
1.To grasp some new words and phrases.
2.To learn about the different school lives in the USA and China through reading and listening.
3.To talk about what makes your school life special.
4.To write a suggestion letter on how to improve school life for students.
Learning objectives
A: What makes your school life special, ...?
B: For me, I’d say it’s ... There are .../I can .../I love ... What about you, ...?
A: I think it's ... I like ... We have ...
B: That’s really nice/wonderful/great!
Talk about your school life. Use the conversation below as a model.
Review
Writing
D Sunshine Middle School has asked each student to write a suggestion letter on how to improve school life for students.
The school has provided a survey below. Complete the survey with the information about your school.
D1
Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables, so more students can play ping-pong during breaks. Second, I think we should have more books in the library because the library is a great place for us to enjoy reading and open our minds. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Xinyue
D2 Read Millie’s suggestion letter to the head teacher of Sunshine Middle School and analyse its structure.
Salutation (称呼)
Main body: Politely
make your suggestions and give reasons.
Introduction: Say
why you are writing.
Conclusion: Add a sentence to conclude the letter.
Closing (结束语)
Signature (署名)
Structure
Salutation
Para. 1 Introduction: Say why you are writing.
Para. 2 Main body: Politely make your suggestions and give reasons.
Para. 3 Conclusion: Add a sentence to conclude the letter.
Closing
Signature
D3 Write your suggestion letter to your head teacher based on the information in Part D1. Use Millie’s letter as a model.
Useful expressions
I am writing (this letter) to make suggestions on …
First, I would like to suggest …
Second/Moreover/Finally, …
I think it will be a good idea to …
I have a suggestion for …
I hope you find my suggestions useful/helpful/…
TIP:
In a suggestion letter, we need to state our purpose clearly and use a formal tone and polite language.
1. My school back home in the USA is quite different from Sunshine Middle School.
① different 形容词,意为“不同的”,be different from 与……不同
e.g. My opinion is different from yours. 我的意见与你的不同。
② differently 副词,意为“不同地”。
e.g. Boys and girls may behave differently.
男孩儿和女孩儿的表现可能不同。
Language points
③ difference 作名词,意为“差异,不同(之处)”,
make a difference 产生影响;起作用。
e.g. The things you did may make an important difference to people around.你做的事情可能对周围的人产生重要的影响。
2. Our classes are not as big as the ones here, and we have fewer students in each class.
e.g. The clubs Tom joined are not as many as Tomoya in the school.
汤姆在学校加入的俱乐部不如Tomoya多。
not as…as 不如……
as……as 和……一样
e.g. Millie runs as fast as Lucy.
e.g. Robin makes friends as many as Lily does.
3. So, they spend more time with their classmates and get to know each other better, but we get to know more students.
(1) spend time with sb. 与某人共度时间
spend + 时间/金钱 + on sth. | spend + 时间/金钱 + (in) doing sth.
花费时间/金钱在(做)某事
e.g. Tob spent the happy holiday with his family.
Tob 和家人一起度过了愉快的假期。
Tob spent two hours on basketball.
=Tob spent two hours (in) playing basktball.
Tob 花了两个小时打篮球。
e.g. Tob has much time to get to make some good friends and talk their intrerst.
Tob 有很多时间逐渐交一些好朋友并且谈论他们的兴趣。
(2) get to do sth. 逐渐开始做某事;得以做某事;有机会做某事
根据汉语提示完成句子,每空一词。
1. 我和我妹妹的爱好不同。
My hobbies ______ _________ ______ my sister’s.
2. 这家餐厅的食物不如家里的好吃。
The food in this restaurant is ______ ______ delicious ______ at home.
3. 我们可以通过阅读来了解不同的文化。
We can ______ ______ ________ different cultures by reading.
are different from
not as/so
as
get to know
4. We often need to borrow books from the library or search online to finish our homework.
e.g. He borrowed a lot of money from his friends.
他从他的朋友那借了很多钱。
Tob borrowed a lot of books from the school library.
Tob 从学校图书馆借了很多书
(1) borrow sth. from somewhere/sb. 从某处/某人借来某物
(2)lend 借给 lend sth. to sb.=lend sb. sth. 把某物借给某人
e.g.Tob lent his magic to Mary=
Tob lent Mary his magic
Tob 把他的魔力借给了玛丽。
5. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online.
“so that 为了,以便”,引导目的状语从句。
e.g. Tob hurried to go to the bus station ,so that he won`t bo late.
Tob 匆忙赶往车站,以便不会迟到。
so……that…… 如此……以至于……
e.g. Tob run so fast that he can get to the company in time.
e.g. Each students stay quiet ao that they can listen to the teacher carefully.
6. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
本句中的 I hope 后接宾语从句,从句中常用一般现在时表示将来。
e.g. She hopes she passes her driving test next month.
她希望通过下个月的驾驶考试。
hope that……希望……
hope to do sth. 希望做某事
e.g. Tob hoped to be NO.1 in the following exams.
1. Understand the topic
Think about your suggestion letter to your head teacher.
2. Plan the structure and make a list of ideas
* Dear...,
* Introduction: Say why you are writing.
* Main body: Politely make your suggestions and give reasons.
* Conclusion: Add a sentence to conclude the letter.
* Signature
Before Writing: Planning and Brainstorming
During Writing: Expression and Organization
1. Add specific details
2. Use smooth transitions
After Writing: Review and Polish
1. Check grammar and spelling
2. Check the flow and logic
3. Check for coherence
写作前:规划与头脑风暴
1. 理解主题
2. 规划段落结构并列出想法
写作中:表达与组织
1. 添加具体细节
2. 使用流畅的过渡语
写作后:检查与润色
1. 检查语法和拼写
2. 检查行文流畅性和逻辑性
3. 检查连贯性
One possible version:
Dear Head Teacher,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school life. Here are some ideas that I hope can help make our school a better place.
First, I would like to suggest changing the school lunch break. The lunch time is too short, and we always have to eat quickly. I think it will be a good idea to make the lunch break 15 minutes longer so we can eat slowly and have time to talk with friends. Second, I have a suggestion for the school library. The books there are old, and we don’t have many new ones. It would be great to buy more interesting storybooks and science books. Finally, about the sports facilities, there aren’t enough basketballs and badminton equipment. I think it will be a good idea to get more sports equipment. This way, more students can play sports after class and keep healthy.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Linlin
What I can do Me Partner
1 I can describe different schools around the world.
2 I can compare the amount of things, use as ... as,
and use the suffixes -ish, -ian, -ese and -n correctly.
3 I can talk and write about how to improve school
life with the new words in this unit.
4 I now understand more about the fun of school
life and the importance of education.
* Assess your learning of new words and grammar by doing the exercises on page 125.
Result: □ Weak □ Good □ Wonderful
I am good at _________________________________________________
I need to spend more time on ____________________________________
My action plan: _______________________________________________
Assessment
1. Finish your suggestion letter and hand it in.
2. Preview Unit 3 Welcome to the unit.
Homework
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