Unit4 Section B writing 课件 -2025-2026学年人教版（2012）九年级英语全册

Unit4 Section B Writing I used to be afraid of the dark. Objectives 1.语言能力： 能够围绕“我们所发生的变化”的话题，正确使用used to结构等从多方面描述自己的变化。同时，掌握并运用该话题下的常用词汇和句式。 2.文化意识： 能够懂得每个人都可以通过不懈努力，让自己成为更好的人。同时要感恩那些给予过我们帮助和引导的父母和师长等。 3.思维品质： 能够在老师的帮助下，梳理写作的过程，注意到语篇的整体性、结构性、逻辑性； 4.学习能力： 能够运用本单元目标词汇和句型描述自己的变化。同时，学会如何用五指法描述自己最大的改变是如何发生的，提高对记叙文结构的掌握。 Gray Wolf has changed a lot in the past few years. Do you remember how Li Wen has changed? In the past A long talk Now Personality Study Hobby Friend shy was not able to make friends quickly. less interested in studying, was absent from classes and failed examinations. more outgoing and active. works even harder than he used to. has joined the basketball team. has made some good friends. Li Wen’s changes 1 Appearance 4 Habit 2 Personality 3 Hobby 5 Schoolwork 6 Relationship How to describe one ’s changes? Appearance&Personality&Hobby tall, short, heavy, thin, beautiful, strong, wear/with glasses, of medium height/build, long/brown/straight/curly hair ... funny, quiet, serious, patient, kind, friendly, silent, lovely, shy ,outgoing ,clever, smart, active… sing, dance, swim, travel play chess/basketball/ping pong, play the guitar/piano, go hiking, like insects/listen to music Appearance Personality Hobby Habit&Schoolwork&Relationship go to bed early/stay up late eat vegetables and fruit/eat junk food drink milk every day do exercise every day/seldom exercise do well in English/ be weak in English be active in class/be silent in class dare to ask questions /be afraid of asking questions make more friends /have no friends spend more time with family seldom communicate with family Habit Schoolwork Relationship 3a Write notes about how you have changed (appearance, personality,hobbies,habits,schoolwork and relationship). Aspects now Choose the aspects you have changed appearance personality hobbies habits schoolwork relationship in the past Driving a train(开火车) which one is your biggest change?Say one by one. I used to … but now…. I didn't use to...,but now.... Listen to their stories a poor speaker in English Mary Bill an unhealthy boy The biggest change in my life was that I have made great progress in my spoken English.When I was in Grade 7,my new English teacher told me that my pronunciation was great but I still needed more practice.She advised me to read the textbook aloud and join an English club.Thanks to my teacher and my hard work,my spoken English has become better and better.I also came to realize that I should always believe in myself and keep trying. 1.What’s the biggest change of Mary? 2.When did the change happen? 3.Who played an important role in changing? 4.How did the change happen? 5.What’s the result of the change? 6.What did Mary learn from the change? The biggest change in my life was that I have made great progress in my spoken English.When I was in Grade 7,my new English teacher told me that my pronunciation was great but I still needed more practice.She advised me to read the textbook aloud and join an English club.Thanks to my teacher and my hard work,my spoken English has become better and better.I also came to realize that I should always believe in myself and keep trying. 一般过去时为主 现在完成时为辅 The biggest change in my life was that I have become healthier than before. When I was in Grade 7,I often fell ill and was absent from classes many times. My Chinese teacher was worried about me ,so she always encouraged me to do more exercise.Also,she reminded me to eat more healthy food instead of junk food.In the end,I have had a stronger body and also done better in studying.I am really thankful for my teacher’s encouragement. 1.What’s the biggest change of Bill? 2.When did the change happen? 3.Who played an important role in changing? 4.How did the change happen? 5.What’s the result of the change? 6.How did Bill feel about the change? 一般过去时为主 现在完成时为辅 The biggest change in my life was that I have become healthier than before. When I was in Grade 7,I often fell ill and was absent from classes many times. My Chinese teacher was worried about me ,so she always encouraged me to do more exercise.Also,she reminded me to eat more healthy food instead of junk food.In the end,I have had a stronger body and also done better in studying.I was really thankful for my teacher’s encouragement. 如何描述 事件 when where problem solution result 简要描写 可表达你的收获、感受 按照事情发展的顺序 Para1 Try to write two paragraphs. Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like? Which change is the most important one and why? 3b Para2 General introduction about the changes in your life. The most important change and how it happened. 总的介绍 How I’ve changed! My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________. Now I’m _______________________________. The biggest change in my life was_________________________ This is the most important change because ______________________ ________________________________________________________. 1 2 3 How I’ve changed ! 记叙文 一般过去时 一般现在时 现在完成时 一般将来时为辅 第一人称为主 第三人称为辅 Beginning body ending Lead in the topic-change. General introduction about the changes in your life. the biggest change. time,place,problem,solution,result, gain(收获)/feelings. your wish. call on more students to change for the better. How I’ve Changed Beginning body ending My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to ....but now I ..... The biggest change in my life was that.... When I was.....My mother/teacher advised me to....In the end... I will work hard to make me a better person. As long as we try our best ,we can change ourselves. How I’ve Changed Aspects now appearance personality in the past Beginning General introduction about the changes. short tall,wear glasses quiet active and outgoing I used to be short,but now I am tall and wear glasses. Also,I used to be quiet,but now I am active and outgoing. I used to be short and quiet,but now I am tall and wear glasses.Besides,I am active and outgoing. 一对一 对比 先讲过去， 再讲现在 Word bank the biggest change at the age of... advise sb to do sth. encourage sb to do sth. told me that..... thanks to sb./sth. be thankful for have a great influence on... make great progress in... I come to realize/unders -tand that.... remind sb.to do sth. be proud of/ take pride in succeed in... 比较级and 比较级 step by step good expressions when I was... How I’ve Changed! My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short,but now I am tall and wear glasses.Also,I used to be quiet,but now I am active and outgoing. The biggest change in my life was that I have made great progress in my spoken English.When I was in Grade 7,my new English teacher told me that my pronunciation was great but I still needed more practice.She advised me to read the textbook aloud and join an English club.Thanks to my teacher and my hard work,my spoken English has become better and better.I also came to realize that I should always believe in myself and keep trying.This has made my parents even proud of me. As long as we try our best,we can certainly change ourselves to be better. General introduction about the changes in your life. the biggest change Time,problem,solution,result,gain(收获)/feelings call on more students how to polish the passage? Sample 1 Some good sayings about efforts(努力) Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者，事竟成。 All things come to those who wait.苍天不负有心人。 A thousand miles’ journey starts with the first step. 千里之行，始于足下。 Constant dripping wears away the stone. 锲而不舍，金石可镂。 No pain,no gain.一分耕耘，一分收获。 How I’ve Changed! My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short and quiet,but now I am tall and wear glasses. Besides,I am active and outgoing. The biggest change in my life was that I have become healthier than before.When I was in Grade 7,I often fell ill and was absent from classes many times.My Chinese teacher was worried about me ,so she always encouraged me to do more exercise.Also,she reminded me to eat more healthy food instead of junk food.In the end,I have had a stronger body and also done better in studying.I was really thankful for my teacher’s encouragement. As the saying goes,“Constant dripping wears away the stone.”As long as we try our best,we can certainly change ourselves to be better. remember to add linking words. Sample 2 Writing 时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“How I’ve Changed!”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述你的变化，要点如下，不少于80词： 1. 简述你过去和现在的变化； 2. 你最重要的变化是什么，如何发生的； 3.呼吁同学们通过改变成为更好的人。 项目 标准 自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价 结构 （1-3分） 段落合理(3段)，结构完整 衔接自然 内容 （6-7分） 要点：1.简述你过去和现在的变化； 2.你最重要的变化是什么，如何发生的； 3.呼吁同学们通过改变成为更好的人。 语言 （3-4分） 句法正确，语言优美,内容丰富 卷面 （1分） 书写工整 时态： 体裁： 人称： 一般过去/现在时为主，一般将来时, 现在完成时为辅 记叙文 第一人称为主，第三人称为辅 Self Check 1. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in the box. silent require absent fail interview take pride in be proud of in person influence humorous seldom The mother traveled for many hours to return home to talk to her child _____________. He used to be a very quiet teenager. He remained _________ most of the time and _________ talked to other people. in person silent seldom If you are always _______ from class, you will _______ the examinations. 4. The teacher _____________ helping his students win the English competition. Kate’s grandparents have had a great ____________ on her. absent fail took pride in influence 6. That British teacher is very __________. He always tells us interesting jokes. People are usually _________ to give a general self-introduction in a job _________. 8. Tina played basketball game and her parent ______________ her. humorous required interview were proud of 此处是被要求 2. What did you use to be like when you were in primary school? Complete these statements. I used to wear _______________________________________ . My hair used to be ____________________________________. I used to watch _______________________________________. I used to play ________________________________________. 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