Unit1 writing写作课课件-2025-2026学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

Unit1 Writing Learning aims（学习目标） 1. Read articles about two famous men. 2. Learn how to write about a famous man and know some rules of a good writing. 3. Write an article about a famous man and check your article. When we talk about rice, there is an old man, he wants people to be away from hunger (远离饥饿). Who is he? Pre-writing 袁隆平被称为“杂交水稻之父”。由于他的努力，中国的水稻产量大幅提高。请根据提示对他进行介绍。词数不少于 70。 提示: 1930年生于北京；20世纪50年代大学毕业finished university in the1950s；1973年培育出了杂交水稻developed hybrid rice in 1973；Father of Hybrid Rice杂交水稻之父。 [审题指导] 1.体裁：记叙文 2.话题：介绍“杂交水稻之父”——袁隆平 3.人称： 4.时态： Example Example1 第三人称 一般现在时+一般过去时 [Outline] Para1 Para2 Para3 ［精彩范文］ In people’s opinion, Yuan Longping is called the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He is one of the most famous scientists in China. First, he finished university in the 1950s. Second, he spent plenty of his time developing the new type of rice. At last, in 1973, together with other scientists, he developed the world’s first high-yielding hybrid rice. It was a great success. All in all, because of Dr Yuan’s hard work, China now produces enough rice every year to feed its people. What a great man he is! logical words逻辑词 While-writing 全红婵是我国跳水队运动员，请写一篇短文介绍她，词数80左右,内容包括： 1. 出生日期及地点：2007年3月28日出生于广东省； 2. 早期经历：2014年，她被教练挖掘，从而开始接受跳水训练； 3. 主要成就：多次获得跳水项目金牌； 2023年，在杭州第19届亚运会女子10米跳台决赛中获得金牌； 4. 你对全红婵的评价。 Exercise Before writing Step1:定时态、人称、结构 一般过去时 第三人称： She/Quan Hongchan 一般现在时 How many paragraphs can we write in this article? Three paragraphs Para1： Para2： Para3： basic information 主要成就 achievements 出生日期及地点&早期经历 comment 对全红婵的评价 Step2:定结构 Para1： 出生日期及地点&早期经历basic information 1. 出生日期及地点：2007年出生于广东省； 2. 早期经历：2014年，她被教练(coach)挖掘，从而开始做跳水训练； 参考词汇： ① be born in 出生于... ② Guangdong Province 广东省 ③ discover 发现、挖掘 ④ begin to do sth. 开始做某事 ⑤ do diving training 做跳水训练 Try to write Para.1 by yourselves. was born in was discovered began to do sth Step3:写草稿 Para2： 主要成就achievements 她多次获得跳水项目金牌； 2023年，她在杭州第19届亚运会女子10米跳台决赛中获得金牌； 参考词汇： ① in diving competition 在跳水项目中 ② at the 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou 在杭州第19届亚运会 ③ in the women's 10-meter platform final 女子10米跳台决赛 ④ win a golden medal 获得金牌 Try to write Para.2 by yourselves. won a golden medal Para3： 对全红婵的评价 你的观点+应该向她学习 参考词汇： in my opinion /in my eyes在我看来 There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问的是... talented 有天赋的 hard-working 努力工作的 player 运动员 be proud of 为....感到自豪 感叹句：How+adj+S+V! / What a/an +adj+n单+S+V! Try to write Para.3 by yourselves. Post-writing A good writing Good structure(结构)--- beginning, body, ending Clear topic(主题) Fluent(流畅的)---with logical words and phrases No mistakes Some wonderful sentences Basic rules to follow in finding out mistakes: Do a self-check (自查),then check with your deskmates(同桌检查) What qualities(品质) should we learn from the famous men like Yuan Longping and Quan Hongchan etc? Discussion Your future depends on(取决于) your effort(努力). I know this year you will feel tired and difficult. However, if you study harder than before, your dreams will come true next year. Self-assessment自我评价 How well do you know today? Tick(√) 1. I can use right tense(时态)and personal pronoun(人称). 2. I can spell correct words, phrases and sentence patterns. 3. I can use logical words in writing. 2. I have no grammar mistakes. . 3. I can use punctuation correctly in writing Homework 1. Revise(修改) your article, then write it on your exercise book carefully. 2. Search for more about other famous men and introduce their stories to your friends, share with us next time. $