2025-2026学年人教版英语九年级全册摸底考写作原创作文

2025年秋季|人教版九年级摸底考写作原创作文 暑假已经过去，在英语课上，同学们分享了在假期中自己做的有意义的事。假如你是李华，请你写一份报告介绍小组成员的假期活动，并分享你参与的活动。 成员 活动内容 收获 Tina 学习传统技艺，制作剪纸 对传统文化有了史深的了解 Jack 参观科学博物馆，观看机器人展览 Mike 参加志愿者活动， 注意：1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展； 2. 词数80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Meaningful activities in the summer holiday In the English class, we shared our meaningful activities in the summer holiday with our group members. 思 路 点 拨 第一步：审题 关键词：需涵盖表格中Tina、Jack、Mike的活动内容和收获，同时要补充自己（李华）的假期活动及收获。 结构方面：开头已给出，接着分别介绍小组成员的活动与收获，最后可以适当总结。 第二步：写作提纲 开头：作文已给出开头。 主体：按照表格顺序，依次介绍Tina学习传统技艺制作剪纸及收获，Jack参观科学博物馆观看机器人展览等情况（需适当拓展收获），Mike参加志愿者活动的情况（拓展收获） 结尾：最后介绍自己的活动，如参加运动锻炼等及收获，最后简单总结大家的假期都很充实有意义。 第三步：选词组句 可能用到的词语及中文解释： traditional：adj. 传统的。 science museum：科学博物馆。 volunteer activity：志愿者活动。physical exercise：体育锻炼。 高分作文一： Meaningful activities in the summer holiday In the English class, we shared our meaningful activities in the summer holiday with our group members. Tina learned traditional skills and made paper - cuttings. She got a deeper understanding of traditional culture. Jack visited the science museum and watched the robot exhibition. He was amazed by the advanced technology and learned a lot about science. Mike took part in volunteer activities. He helped clean up the park and felt happy to make the environment better. As for me, I did a lot of physical exercise. I ran in the park every morning. Through exercise, I became stronger and more energetic. Our summer holiday was really meaningful. 高分作文二 Meaningful activities in the summer holiday In the English class, we shared our meaningful activities in the summer holiday with our group members. Tina spent her holiday learning traditional crafts and making paper - cuttings. This experience made her have a better knowledge of traditional culture. Jack went to the science museum to see the robot exhibition. He was full of curiosity and learned many new things about robots. Mike participated in volunteer activities. He visited the nursing home and chatted with the old people, bringing them joy. I joined a basketball club. I practiced hard and took part in some matches. I improved my basketball skills and made many friends. We all had a wonderful and meaningful summer holiday. 好 句 背 诵 以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达： 范文1 1.She got a deeper understanding of traditional culture. 中文翻译：她对传统文化有了更深入的了解。 理由：“get a deeper understanding of”这个表达简洁明了，准确地传达出通过学习传统技艺制作剪纸后，蒂娜对传统文化认知程度的加深，是描述收获的常用且实用的表达。 2.He was amazed by the advanced technology and learned a lot about science. 中文翻译：先进的科技让他惊叹不已，他也学到了很多科学知识。 理由：“be amazed by”生动地表现出杰克看到先进科技时的反应，“learn a lot about”则清晰地说明了他在参观过程中的收获，两个短语搭配使用，使句子表意丰富。 3.Through exercise, I became stronger and more energetic. 中文翻译：通过锻炼，我变得更强壮、更有活力。 理由：“through”表示方式，简洁地说明了变得强壮和有活力的途径，“stronger and more energetic”用比较级形式突出了锻炼前后的变化。 范文2 4.This experience made her have a better knowledge of traditional culture. 中文翻译：这段经历让她对传统文化有了更深入的认识。 理由：“make sb. do sth.”是常见的使役动词用法，“have a better knowledge of”与范文1中“get a deeper understanding of”意思相近，但换了一种表达方式，丰富了关于“对……有更深入了解”的表述。 5.He was full of curiosity and learned many new things about robots. 中文翻译：他对机器人充满好奇，学到了很多关于机器人的新知识。 理由：“be full of”形象地描绘出杰克的状态，“learn many new things about”清晰地阐述了他在参观机器人展览时的收获，使读者能很好地感受到他的体验。 6.I improved my basketball skills and made many friends. 中文翻译：我提高了篮球技巧，还交到了很多朋友。 理由：简单直接地说明了参加篮球俱乐部的收获，“improve”和“make friends”都是常用且容易理解的词汇和短语，准确地表达了作者在技能和社交方面的成果。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $