内容正文:
Unit 5 Fun Clubs
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
写作主题:
本单元写作情境聚焦于 “人与自我” 主题范畴中的 “生活与学习”,围绕 “丰富多彩的校园生活” 展开。在实际校园生活中,学校俱乐部是学生培养兴趣、发展特长、结交朋友的重要平台。通过撰写学校俱乐部招聘广告、个人推荐信和自我介绍,学生能够运用英语准确表达自己的特长、爱好,以及对不同俱乐部的向往,同时明确阐述俱乐部招收成员的要求。这不仅有助于提升英语语言表达能力,还能引导学生关注自身兴趣与能力,更好地融入校园集体生活,体现英语在实际生活中的应用价值。
写作框架:
写作任务类型与结构:本单元主要涉及两种功能性写作文体:
1. 俱乐部招聘广告 (Club Recruitment Poster/Ad)
写作目的: 吸引新成员,介绍俱乐部,说明要求。
文体结构:
部分 (Part)
内容与功能 (Content & Function)
核心句型与词汇 (Key Expressions)
1. 吸引人的标题
(Catchy Title)
清晰写出俱乐部名称,可加口号。
e.g., Join the Art Club! / Calling All Book Lovers!
Join us!, Welcome to..., ... Club Wants You!
2. 俱乐部介绍
(Introduction)
简要说明俱乐部的宗旨、活动和乐趣。
e.g., We draw pictures and make crafts.
It's fun and relaxing.
We are a group of..., We love to..., It's a great place to...
relax, make friends, learn new skills
3. 成员要求
(Requirements)
明确说明需要什么样的成员(兴趣、技能、承诺等)。
e.g., You should be interested in art.
You need to come every week.
You should be..., You need to..., If you love..., ...is a must.
4. 活动信息
(Logistics)
写明具体活动时间、地点、联系方式。
e.g., Time: Every Tuesday after school
Place: Room 301
Contact: Li Hua
Time: ..., Place: ..., Day: ..., Contact... for more information.
5. 呼吁行动
(Call to Action)
最后鼓励大家加入。
e.g., Come and join us!
Don't wait! Sign up today!
Come and have a try!, We are waiting for you!
2. 加入俱乐部申请/自我介绍信 (Self-Introduction Application Letter)
写作目的: 说服俱乐部负责人接纳自己为成员。
文体结构:
部分 (Part)
内容与功能 (Content & Function)
核心句型与词汇
(Key Expressions)
1. 问候与意图
(Greeting & Purpose)
礼貌问候并直接表明写信目的——想加入哪个俱乐部。
e.g., Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to join the Music Club.
Dear ..., My name is..., I am writing to apply for...
I would like to become a member of...
2. 自我介绍
(Self-Introduction)
介绍自己的基本信息(年级、班级)。
e.g., I am Li Ming from Class 2, Grade 7.
I am a student in..., I am in Class... Grade...
3. 兴趣与特长
(Interest & Strengths)
这是核心段落。 阐述你为什么对该俱乐部感兴趣,以及你具备的相关特长或经验。
e.g., I love singing. I have learned piano for 3 years.
I am good at drawing cartoons.
I am interested in..., I am crazy about..., My hobby is...
I am good at..., I can..., I have experience in...
4. 承诺与愿望
(Promise & Wish)
表达如果加入后,你会怎么做(如:积极参加活动、乐于学习),并再次强烈表达加入的愿望。
e.g., I promise I will take part in activities actively.
I hope I can join the club.
I can take part in..., I will be active and friendly.
I really hope to..., Thank you for your consideration.
5. 结尾与署名
(Closing & Signature)
礼貌结束语和署名。
e.g., Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Yours, / Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
词汇积累:
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三、词汇句式
(一)常用词汇
俱乐部名称:
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· Music Club(音乐俱乐部)
· Art Club(美术俱乐部)
· Basketball Club(篮球俱乐部)
· Reading Club(读书俱乐部)
· English Club(英语俱乐部
· Dance Club(舞蹈俱乐部)
特长与爱好相关:
·
· be good at(擅长)
· do well in(在…… 方面做得好)
· like/enjoy doing sth.(喜欢做某事)
· love(热爱)
· be interested in(对…… 感兴趣)
· talent(天赋)
· hobby(爱好)
· skill(技能)
表达意愿:
·
· want to(想要)
· would like to(想要)
· hope to(希望)
· look forward to(期待)
其他:
·
· member(成员)
· join(加入)
· need(需要)
· requirement(要求
· free time(空闲时间)
(二)常用句式
1.介绍特长与爱好
I am good at... (我擅长……)
I do well in... (我在…… 方面做得好)
I like/enjoy doing... (我喜欢做……)
My hobby is... (我的爱好是……)
I have a talent for... (我在…… 方面有天赋)
2.表达想要加入的俱乐部
I want to join... because... (我想加入…… 因为……)
I would like to be a member of... (我想成为…… 的一员)
I’m looking forward to joining... (我期待加入……)
3.说明俱乐部招收要求
We need members who... (我们需要…… 的成员)
Are you good at...? (你擅长…… 吗?)
Do you have...? (你有…… 吗?)
Can you...? (你能…… 吗?)
真题示例:
每个学生都在某方面有才能,可以通过参加学校的俱乐部去展现。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示为你们学校的俱乐部制作一张海报,邀请学生积极加入。
思路点拨:
第一步:审题。
文体:应用文 人称:第一人称、第二人称 时态:一般现在时
第二步:列提纲。
第三步:列出主要的短语和句型。
1.绘画俱乐部 drawing club
2.音乐俱乐部 music club
3.游泳俱乐部 swimming club
4.弹吉他 play the guitar
5.擅长 be good at/do well in
6.英语俱乐部 English club
7.说英语 speak English
8.你想加入……吗?Do you want to join…?
9.你会……吗?Can you…?
第四步:重点句子仿写。
1. …and so on. ……等等。
2. Can you…?你会……吗?
3. call sb. at…给某人打电话。
第五步:运用and,or,so,because 等连接词将以上要点连成文章,并注意句型的多样化。
Students Wanted for School Clubs
There are many clubs in our school. We have a swimming club, a drawing club,a maths club and so on.(介绍学校俱乐部总体情况)
We have a music club,too.(介绍其中一个俱乐部)It’s new. We can practise playing musical instruments and learn about music there.(俱乐部特点)Can you sing? (询问特长一)Can you play the guitar or the drums? (询问特长二)
Do you want to join us? If you do,please call Mr Wu at 678⁃3267.I believe our club will make you happy and relaxed.(发出邀请)
Passage 1
1.假如你是李华,你想参加学校正在举行的英语征文活动,活动主题为"我的校园生活"。征文内容要求积极向上,展示丰富多彩的校园活动。请根据以下提示,完成一篇征文。
★What subjects do you study?
★What club(s) are you in?
★What are your teachers and classmates like?
★What is your school field trip like?
★…
要求:
1.按照征文要求进行描述,可适当发挥;
2.文章不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My School Life
My name is Li Hua. I am from Class 1, Grade 7.
【答案】My School Life
My name is Li Hua. I am from Class 1, Grade 7. Now I would like to share my school life with you.
We have subjects like English, Chinese, Maths, History and so on. Among all these subjects, my favorite one is English. We also have different activities to choose from. Some students like to play sports, while others prefer to join clubs. I enjoy reading, so I join in the Reading Club. I can have the chance to read more books with classmates. People in my school are very friendly. Our teachers are very strict but also very nice. They usually take care of us and they work very hard to help us master the knowledge. Our classmates are very kind. We help each other when we are in trouble.
I think my school life is very wonderful. I love it very much.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文,主要介绍自己的学校生活。时态是一般现在时,首先引出话题介绍自己的学校生活;然后介绍自己学的科目、加入的俱乐部;其次介绍老师同学和学校场地的情况;最后总结。注意运用好词好句,同时注意恰当使用连词,使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】这篇作文是一篇非常优秀的校园生活征文。作者以清晰的思路、丰富的内容和流畅的语言,生动地描绘了自己的校园生活。从所学科目到社团活动,再到身边的人和事,最后到对校园生活的整体感悟,全方位地展现了校园生活的丰富多彩。文章不仅符合征文的各项要求,而且在语言表达和结构安排上都表现出色,充分体现了作者扎实的英语写作基础和良好的语言运用能力。总体而言,这是一篇值得学习和借鉴的佳作。用词准确恰当,使用了丰富的词汇来描述校园生活,如share...with...、be strict but nice、take care of、master the knowledge、help each other等,准确地表达了相应的意思,体现了较好的词汇量。句式多样,运用了多种句式,包括陈述句、一般疑问句、并列句如Our teachers are very strict but also very nice.等,使文章表达更加灵活多样,避免了单调。
Passage 2
假设你是李华,请根据提示写一篇短文,介绍你的学校生活。提示:1. 每天有多少节课,最喜欢的科目及原因;2. 课后经常做什么;3. 学校有哪些俱乐部,你参加了哪个;4. 对学校生活的感受。
要求:1. 词数60-80;2. 语句通顺,语法正确;3. 可适当发挥。
【答案】Hello, I'm Li Hua. I'm in Grade 7. I have seven classes every day. My favorite subject is English because it's useful and I like my English teacher. After class, I often play basketball with my friends or read books in the library. Our school has many clubs, like the music club and the chess club. I'm in the music club and I learn to play the guitar there. My school life is colorful and happy. I love my school!
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇材料作文写作,要求考生以李华的身份写一篇英语短文介绍自己的学校生活。内容包括:1. 阐述写作主题;2. 具体阐述校园生活(课程、喜欢的科目及原因、课后活动以及俱乐部);3. 表达对校园生活的喜爱。注意:1. 时态为一般现在时;2.注意不要遗漏写作要点,详略得当/可适当拓展,突出写作重点;3. 注意语句表达规范流畅,逻辑正确,条理清晰,语义连贯;4. 不能使用真实的名称;5. 写作词数为60到80个左右。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使作文显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇书面表达表达上要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用了一定数量的句式结构,让句子表达更加生动传神,同时使用了较多的高级词汇和固定短语,提高了文章的档次,体现了对英语书面表达熟练的驾驭能力。例如:1. 高分句子: My favorite subject is English because it's useful and I like my English teacher.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句以及and连接的并列句); I'm in the music club and I learn to play the guitar there. (运用了and连接的并列句)。2. 亮点词汇:learn to do sth学习做某事; play the guitar弹吉他;colorful多姿多彩的。
Passage 3
假如你是张华,转眼进入初中校园已一个学期。请根据导图提示,以邮件形式向你的澳大利亚朋友Oliver介绍一下你的学校吧!
注意: (1)邮件必须包含导图中的至少三点相关信息,可适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (3)词数70左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi Oliver,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Hi Oliver,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.(引出话题)My school is very beautiful with a large playground. We have fun teachers who make learning enjoyable.【高分句型一】There is a drama club where I can develop my acting skills.【高分句型二】My classmates are very friendly and we often help each other. We have a basketball game every month which is very exciting. We study different subjects such as math,English,science and history.(具体介绍学校情况)I really enjoy my school life here.(感受)
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以张华的身份给澳大利亚朋友Oliver写一封邮件,介绍自己的新学校。内容方面:邮件必须包含导图中的至少三点相关信息,且可适当发挥。导图中给出了关于学校的信息点,包括"a large playground"(一个大操场)、"fun teachers"(有趣的老师)、"a drama club"(一个戏剧俱乐部)、"friendly classmates"(友好的同学)、"a basketball game"(一场篮球比赛)、"different subjects"(不同的科目)。写作思路:开头:已给出"Hi Oliver, I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.",直接表明写信目的。中间:从导图中选取至少三点信息进行介绍。例如,可以先介绍学校有一个大操场,自己经常和同学在那里玩耍;接着说有有趣的老师,他们让课堂很有趣;还可以提到有友好的同学,大家相处融洽。结尾:可以用"I really enjoy my school life here."表达对学校的喜爱,然后以"Yours, Zhang Hua"结尾。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
【点评】该邮件整体结构清晰,内容丰富,很好地完成了题目要求。作者围绕新学校展开描述,涵盖了操场、老师、戏剧俱乐部、同学、篮球比赛以及不同学科等多方面信息,且语言流畅自然,符合邮件的写作规范。文中有一些好的词句,例如: My school is very beautiful with a large playground. 运用了介词短语作原因状语;We have fun teachers who make learning enjoyable.运用了限制性定语从句;There is a drama club where I can develop my acting skills.运用了there be句式,限制性定语从句;My classmates are very friendly and we often help each other.运用了并列句; We have a basketball game every month which is very exciting.运用了限制性定语从句。
Passage 4
假如你是阳光中学的李华, 请根据以下的问题提示, 以"My happy school life"为主题, 用英语写一封电子邮件向你的美国笔友Jim介绍你的校园生活。
What do you learn at school?
What are your hobbies and which club are you in?
What activities do you have at school? ( help children in poor area, have a fashion show. . . )
How do you feel?
要求:(1)词数90词左右, 开头已给, 不计入总词数;(2)语句通顺, 意思连贯, 可适当发挥;(3)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Jim,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Sunshine Middle School.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Sunshine Middle School.
We learn many subjects at school. We have Chinese, Maths and English lessons every day. English is my favourite. In my free time, I enjoy reading because books help me learn more about the world. There are lots of clubs in my school and I am in the Reading Club. There, I read and talk about books with others.
We have some wonderful activities at school. Sometimes we collect things to help the children in poor areas. I think it's really great! There is a sports meeting and a fashion show every year.
I always have a good time at school. I love our school!
All the best,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】这是一篇英语文,要求以"My happy school life"为主题, 用英语写一封电子邮件向你的美国笔友Jim介绍你的校园生活。内容包括在学校学习什么,自己的兴趣爱好以及参加了什么俱乐部,学校里有什么活动,自己的感受等。时态是一般现在时,人称是第一人称,写作过程中注意要点全面,逻辑清晰,语言流畅,没有语法和单词拼写错误,使用连词保证上下文连贯,语言的使用符合英语的表达习惯。
【点评】这篇应用文文涵盖要点全面:范文紧密围绕题目要求,对校园生活的多个方面进行了介绍。在学习内容上,提到每天有语文、数学和英语课,且表明英语是自己的最爱;兴趣爱好与社团方面,阐述自己喜欢阅读并加入了阅读俱乐部,在俱乐部里与他人读书交流;校园活动部分,列举了帮助贫困地区儿童、运动会和时尚秀等活动;最后还表达了自己在学校很开心,热爱学校,完整地回应了题目中的所有问题提示。内容具体生动:在描述各个要点时,并非简单罗列,而是添加了具体细节。例如在介绍阅读爱好时,说明喜欢阅读的原因是"books help me learn more about the world";在描述帮助贫困地区儿童的活动时,用"collect things"具体说明了帮助的方式,使内容更加丰富真实,让读者能更好地感受到作者的校园生活。语法正确:整篇文章语法运用准确,没有明显的语法错误。句子结构完整,时态使用恰当,如"We learn...""I enjoy...""There is..."等句型的使用都符合英语语法规则,体现了作者扎实的语法基础。词汇丰富:运用了多样化的词汇来表达相同或相似的意思,避免了词汇的重复使用。例如描述活动时,使用了"collect things" "sports meeting" "fashion show"等不同的词汇,使文章表达更加丰富多样。语句通顺连贯:句子之间过渡自然,使用了合适的连接词和过渡语,如"Sometimes" "and" "I think"等,使文章的逻辑清晰,层次分明,读者能够轻松理解作者的思路。
Passage 5
假如你是李华,今年刚上初中。你的美国笔友 Josh发邮件询问你的近况,请根据以下要点和要求回复Josh。
要求:1)参考以上提示信息,可适当发挥;2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3)文中不得出现任何你的真实信息 (校名、姓名和地名等);4)词数:不少于60词 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) 。
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. Now let me tell you about myself.
How do you like it? Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. Now let me tell you about myself. I'm currently in a new school, where the teachers and classmates are very friendly. The subjects are more challenging but very exciting. I've made new friends here, and we often study and play sports together after classes. I've also joined the school's music club, as I love playing the guitar. Additionally, I enjoy reading novels in my spare time. How do you like it? Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】考查提纲作文。 美国笔友Josh发邮件询问你的近况, 要求根据以下要点和要求回复Josh。 要求包括提示中的所有内容,并可适当增加内容,合理使用连接词,使得语句通顺,语意连贯,注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系,符合英语表达习惯,本文主要使用第一人称单数,一般现在时。
【点评】考查提纲作文,内容切题,语法正确,时态运用灵活,准确,一些固定短语,如 after classes 课后, play the guitar 弹吉他,enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事,等等,及句型结构,如Now let me tell you about myself.(let型祈使句), I'm currently in a new school, where the teachers and classmates are very friendly.(where引导的非限制性定语从句),等等的运用较为得体,使得文章更加流畅,自然。
Passage 6
英语社团正在招募新成员。假定你是该社团的一名负责人, 请你根据下面的海报,用英语写一篇短文介绍社团, 号召更多的同学加入。
English Club
Time:5:00 p. m.-6:00 p. m. every Wednesday
Place: Classroom 2A
Activities: Learning writing and speaking;
Watching English films
Teacher: Miss Green
Tel:803-9675(Carol)
要求:(1)参考提示内容, 可适当发挥;(2)语句通顺,意思连贯, 书写工整;(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); (4)词数: 不少于60词。
Welcome to the English Club
Do you like English?
【答案】
Welcome to the English Club
Do you like English? Are you good at English? Are you interested in learning English? Come and join our English club! We usually meet from 5:00 to 6:00 on Wednesday afternoons in Classroom 2A. You can not only learn to write stories and talk to others in English, but also watch English films. Miss Green is our teacher. She is kind. At the same time, our club will give you a chance to meet new people and make new friends. If you want to join us, please call Carol at 803-9675.
【解析】【分析】考查提纲作文。要求根据下面的海报,用英语写一篇短文介绍所在的英语社团, 号召更多的同学加入。 要求包括提示中的所有内容,并可适当增加内容,合理使用连接词,使得语句通顺,语意连贯,注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系,符合英语表达习惯,本文主要使用第一人称单数,一般现在时。
【点评】考查提纲作文,内容切题,语法正确,时态运用灵活,准确,一些固定短语,如be good at 擅长,be interested in 对……感兴趣, talk to others 和他人交谈, At the same time 同时,等等,及句型结构,如 Come and join our English club! (祈使句的肯定句),. If you want to join us, please call Carol at 803-9675.(if引导条件状语从句)等等的运用较为得体,使得文章更加流畅,自然。
Passage 7
假设你是李明同学,对英语学习很感兴趣,想报名参加学校的英语俱乐部,请根据以下内容提示用英文从个人基本情况、兴趣爱好和参加理由等方面写一封自荐信。
内容提示:
What's your basic (基本的) information?
What are your favorite food, sports or subject?
Why do you want to join the English Club?
Something more about yourself.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数50左右;格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is
Thank you very much!
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Ming. I am 13 years old. My birthday is on May 10th. I like playing football with my friends after school because I think it's really fun. I like rice, carrots and milk. I think they are healthy. My favorite subject is English because it's interesting and useful. But I'm not good at it. That's why I want to join the English Club. I hope to be a member in the English Club soon!
Thank you very much!
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文,要根据所给材料写一封自荐信,信中要包含自己的基本信息、最后的食物运动和课程、为什么想加入英语俱乐部和一些关于自己的更进一步信息,文章要使用一般现在时态,采取合理的篇章结构,注意不要遗漏要点。
【点评】考查提纲作文。文章开头首先介绍了自己的姓名、年龄、生日和爱好。在介绍爱好时使用了原因状语从句;在介绍最喜欢的食物、运动和科目时都解释了原因,使用了play basketball、be good at、That's why……等结构,最后用I hope to be a member in the English Club school作为结尾。
$Unit 5 Fun Clubs
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
写作主题:
本单元写作情境聚焦于 “人与自我” 主题范畴中的 “生活与学习”,围绕 “丰富多彩的校园生活” 展开。在实际校园生活中,学校俱乐部是学生培养兴趣、发展特长、结交朋友的重要平台。通过撰写学校俱乐部招聘广告、个人推荐信和自我介绍,学生能够运用英语准确表达自己的特长、爱好,以及对不同俱乐部的向往,同时明确阐述俱乐部招收成员的要求。这不仅有助于提升英语语言表达能力,还能引导学生关注自身兴趣与能力,更好地融入校园集体生活,体现英语在实际生活中的应用价值。
写作框架:
写作任务类型与结构:本单元主要涉及两种功能性写作文体:
1. 俱乐部招聘广告 (Club Recruitment Poster/Ad)
写作目的: 吸引新成员,介绍俱乐部,说明要求。
文体结构:
部分 (Part)
内容与功能 (Content & Function)
核心句型与词汇 (Key Expressions)
1. 吸引人的标题
(Catchy Title)
清晰写出俱乐部名称,可加口号。
e.g., Join the Art Club! / Calling All Book Lovers!
Join us!, Welcome to..., ... Club Wants You!
2. 俱乐部介绍
(Introduction)
简要说明俱乐部的宗旨、活动和乐趣。
e.g., We draw pictures and make crafts.
It's fun and relaxing.
We are a group of..., We love to..., It's a great place to...
relax, make friends, learn new skills
3. 成员要求
(Requirements)
明确说明需要什么样的成员(兴趣、技能、承诺等)。
e.g., You should be interested in art.
You need to come every week.
You should be..., You need to..., If you love..., ...is a must.
4. 活动信息
(Logistics)
写明具体活动时间、地点、联系方式。
e.g., Time: Every Tuesday after school
Place: Room 301
Contact: Li Hua
Time: ..., Place: ..., Day: ..., Contact... for more information.
5. 呼吁行动
(Call to Action)
最后鼓励大家加入。
e.g., Come and join us!
Don't wait! Sign up today!
Come and have a try!, We are waiting for you!
2. 加入俱乐部申请/自我介绍信 (Self-Introduction Application Letter)
写作目的: 说服俱乐部负责人接纳自己为成员。
文体结构:
部分 (Part)
内容与功能 (Content & Function)
核心句型与词汇
(Key Expressions)
1. 问候与意图
(Greeting & Purpose)
礼貌问候并直接表明写信目的——想加入哪个俱乐部。
e.g., Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to join the Music Club.
Dear ..., My name is..., I am writing to apply for...
I would like to become a member of...
2. 自我介绍
(Self-Introduction)
介绍自己的基本信息(年级、班级)。
e.g., I am Li Ming from Class 2, Grade 7.
I am a student in..., I am in Class... Grade...
3. 兴趣与特长
(Interest & Strengths)
这是核心段落。 阐述你为什么对该俱乐部感兴趣,以及你具备的相关特长或经验。
e.g., I love singing. I have learned piano for 3 years.
I am good at drawing cartoons.
I am interested in..., I am crazy about..., My hobby is...
I am good at..., I can..., I have experience in...
4. 承诺与愿望
(Promise & Wish)
表达如果加入后,你会怎么做(如:积极参加活动、乐于学习),并再次强烈表达加入的愿望。
e.g., I promise I will take part in activities actively.
I hope I can join the club.
I can take part in..., I will be active and friendly.
I really hope to..., Thank you for your consideration.
5. 结尾与署名
(Closing & Signature)
礼貌结束语和署名。
e.g., Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Yours, / Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
词汇积累:
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三、词汇句式
(一)常用词汇
俱乐部名称:
·
· Music Club(音乐俱乐部)
· Art Club(美术俱乐部)
· Basketball Club(篮球俱乐部)
· Reading Club(读书俱乐部)
· English Club(英语俱乐部
· Dance Club(舞蹈俱乐部)
特长与爱好相关:
·
· be good at(擅长)
· do well in(在…… 方面做得好)
· like/enjoy doing sth.(喜欢做某事)
· love(热爱)
· be interested in(对…… 感兴趣)
· talent(天赋)
· hobby(爱好)
· skill(技能)
表达意愿:
·
· want to(想要)
· would like to(想要)
· hope to(希望)
· look forward to(期待)
其他:
·
· member(成员)
· join(加入)
· need(需要)
· requirement(要求
· free time(空闲时间)
(二)常用句式
1.介绍特长与爱好
I am good at... (我擅长……)
I do well in... (我在…… 方面做得好)
I like/enjoy doing... (我喜欢做……)
My hobby is... (我的爱好是……)
I have a talent for... (我在…… 方面有天赋)
2.表达想要加入的俱乐部
I want to join... because... (我想加入…… 因为……)
I would like to be a member of... (我想成为…… 的一员)
I’m looking forward to joining... (我期待加入……)
3.说明俱乐部招收要求
We need members who... (我们需要…… 的成员)
Are you good at...? (你擅长…… 吗?)
Do you have...? (你有…… 吗?)
Can you...? (你能…… 吗?)
真题示例:
每个学生都在某方面有才能,可以通过参加学校的俱乐部去展现。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示为你们学校的俱乐部制作一张海报,邀请学生积极加入。
思路点拨:
第一步:审题。
文体:应用文 人称:第一人称、第二人称 时态:一般现在时
第二步:列提纲。
第三步:列出主要的短语和句型。
1.绘画俱乐部 drawing club
2.音乐俱乐部 music club
3.游泳俱乐部 swimming club
4.弹吉他 play the guitar
5.擅长 be good at/do well in
6.英语俱乐部 English club
7.说英语 speak English
8.你想加入……吗?Do you want to join…?
9.你会……吗?Can you…?
第四步:重点句子仿写。
1. …and so on. ……等等。
2. Can you…?你会……吗?
3. call sb. at…给某人打电话。
第五步:运用and,or,so,because 等连接词将以上要点连成文章,并注意句型的多样化。
Students Wanted for School Clubs
There are many clubs in our school. We have a swimming club, a drawing club,a maths club and so on.(介绍学校俱乐部总体情况)
We have a music club,too.(介绍其中一个俱乐部)It’s new. We can practise playing musical instruments and learn about music there.(俱乐部特点)Can you sing? (询问特长一)Can you play the guitar or the drums? (询问特长二)
Do you want to join us? If you do,please call Mr Wu at 678⁃3267.I believe our club will make you happy and relaxed.(发出邀请)
Passage 1
1.假如你是李华,你想参加学校正在举行的英语征文活动,活动主题为"我的校园生活"。征文内容要求积极向上,展示丰富多彩的校园活动。请根据以下提示,完成一篇征文。
★What subjects do you study?
★What club(s) are you in?
★What are your teachers and classmates like?
★What is your school field trip like?
★…
要求:
1.按照征文要求进行描述,可适当发挥;
2.文章不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My School Life
My name is Li Hua. I am from Class 1, Grade 7.
Passage 2
假设你是李华,请根据提示写一篇短文,介绍你的学校生活。提示:1. 每天有多少节课,最喜欢的科目及原因;2. 课后经常做什么;3. 学校有哪些俱乐部,你参加了哪个;4. 对学校生活的感受。
要求:1. 词数60-80;2. 语句通顺,语法正确;3. 可适当发挥。
Passage 3
假如你是张华,转眼进入初中校园已一个学期。请根据导图提示,以邮件形式向你的澳大利亚朋友Oliver介绍一下你的学校吧!
注意: (1)邮件必须包含导图中的至少三点相关信息,可适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (3)词数70左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi Oliver,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Passage 4
假如你是阳光中学的李华, 请根据以下的问题提示, 以"My happy school life"为主题, 用英语写一封电子邮件向你的美国笔友Jim介绍你的校园生活。
What do you learn at school?
What are your hobbies and which club are you in?
What activities do you have at school? ( help children in poor area, have a fashion show. . . )
How do you feel?
要求:(1)词数90词左右, 开头已给, 不计入总词数;(2)语句通顺, 意思连贯, 可适当发挥;(3)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Jim,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Sunshine Middle School.
All the best,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假如你是李华,今年刚上初中。你的美国笔友 Josh发邮件询问你的近况,请根据以下要点和要求回复Josh。
要求:1)参考以上提示信息,可适当发挥;2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3)文中不得出现任何你的真实信息 (校名、姓名和地名等);4)词数:不少于60词 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) 。
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. Now let me tell you about myself.
How do you like it? Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
英语社团正在招募新成员。假定你是该社团的一名负责人, 请你根据下面的海报,用英语写一篇短文介绍社团, 号召更多的同学加入。
English Club
Time:5:00 p. m.-6:00 p. m. every Wednesday
Place: Classroom 2A
Activities: Learning writing and speaking;
Watching English films
Teacher: Miss Green
Tel:803-9675(Carol)
要求:(1)参考提示内容, 可适当发挥;(2)语句通顺,意思连贯, 书写工整;(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); (4)词数: 不少于60词。
Welcome to the English Club
Do you like English?
Passage 7
假设你是李明同学,对英语学习很感兴趣,想报名参加学校的英语俱乐部,请根据以下内容提示用英文从个人基本情况、兴趣爱好和参加理由等方面写一封自荐信。
内容提示:
What's your basic (基本的) information?
What are your favorite food, sports or subject?
Why do you want to join the English Club?
Something more about yourself.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数50左右;格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is
Thank you very much!
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