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高考预测练(二十三) 书信类应用文写作
1.邀请信
假如你是李华,上周你校新开设了劳动体验
课。请给你的留学生朋友Alen写一封邮件
邀请他同去体验。内容包括:
(1)介绍课程内容;(2)表达邀请。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位
置作答。
DearAlen,
Yours,
LiHua
2.建议信
假定你是李华,你校外教Alice准备在课后
开展英语原版名著阅读活动,现向同学们征
求意见。请给她写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你 对 本 次 活 动 的 态 度;(2)你 的
建议。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位
置作答。
DearAlice,
Yours,
LiHua
3.推荐信
假如你是李华,你校交换生 Harvey在校园
网上发布了一则广告,寻找一个合适的寄宿
家庭 (hostfamily),以更好地体验当地人的
生活和提高他的中文水平。请你给他写一
封邮件,推荐自己的家,内容包括:
(1)推荐的理由;(2)学习中文的建议。
注意:(1)词数80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
DearHarvey,
ImLiHuafromClass3.
Yours,
LiHua
4.申请信
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地
美术馆要举办中国画展览,正在招募活动志
愿者。请写一封信申请信。要点包括:
(1)写信目的;(2)个人具备的条件;
(3)表达态度,期盼回复。
注意:(1)词数80~120;
(2)可 以 适 当 增 加 细 节,以 使 行 文
连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:recruit招募 Chinesepainting
exhibition中国画展览 participatein参加
DearSir/Madam,
MynameisLiHua,aChinesestudent
whoistakingasummercourseinLondon
now.
Yours,
LiHua
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5.感谢信
假定你是李华,刚从新西兰的 Universityof
Canterbury游学归来。请你代表中国交换
生给该校校长DrJohnWood写封信。内容
包括:
(1)感谢接待;(2)谈谈收获;(3)邀请
来访。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位
置作答。
6.道歉信
假定你是李华,你和你的外国朋友Caroline
约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国航天
展”,但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件,内
容包括:
(1)表示歉意;(2)解释原因;(3)你的
期待。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位
置作答。
DearCaroline,
Sincerelyyours,
LiHua
7.求助信
假定你是李华,本学期你校开设了英语口语
课,但是你不太适应外教的授课。你决定给
英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件,寻求他的帮
助。要点包括:
(1)告知困难;(2)寻求求助。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可 以 适 当 增 加 细 节,以 使 行 文
连贯。
DearAndrew,
Yours,
LiHua
8.咨询信
假定你是李华,你将要参加“全国英语创新大
赛(NationalEnglishInnovationContest)”夏令
营。请你给该夏令营的外籍负责人写一封
信,内容包括:
(1)自我介绍;(2)咨询比赛的相关情况
(时间、地点、流程等)。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可 以 适 当 增 加 细 节,以 使 行 文
连贯。
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班级: 姓名:
高考预测练(二十四) 非书信类应用文写作
1.短文投稿类
你们学校正在举办“讲好中国故事”英语征
文活动,请你以一个名胜古迹为主题,写一
篇短文投稿。内容包括:
(1)古 迹 的 简 介 和 历 史;(2)意 义 或
启示。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位
置作答。
2.倡议书
假如你是学校英语社社长李华,为了迎接世
界读书日,英语社计划以“ReadingForFun”
为主题在学校组织一场读书活动。请你代
表英语社写一份英文倡议书,内容包括:
(1)活动目的;(2)活动内容;(3)发出
倡议。
参考词汇:WorldBookDay世界读书日
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dearfelowstudents,
3.通知
假定你是李华,最近你校将举办以“Food
AndCulture”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请
你以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知张贴
到学校的国际部,内容包括:
(1)比赛时间和地点;(2)比赛的要求;
(3)希望积极参与。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位
置作答。
Notice
Dearstudents,
Thestudentunion
4.演讲稿
你校 正 在 举 行 英 语 素 养 大 赛,请 你 以
“ReadingEnrichesLife”为题写一份英语演
讲稿参赛。要点如下:
(1)阅读的意义;(2)呼吁阅读。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)可 以 适 当 增 加 细 节,以 使 行 文
连贯;
(3)开头与结尾已给,不计人总词数。
ReadingEnrichesLife
Ladiesandgentlemen,
Thanksforyourlistening.
5.图表类
你校 英 文 报 正 在 开 展 以 StudentsTime
SpentonPhysicalExerciseWeekly为题的
讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短
文投稿,内容包括:
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(1)描述调查结果;(2)分析其原因并给
出建议。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
StudentsTimeSpentonPhysical
ExerciseWeekly
Nowadays,manystudentsareawareof
the significance of physical exercise,
althoughthetimetheyspendonitvaries.
6.图画类
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,为积极响
应并落实“双减”政策,你们学校上周组织了
一场“校园运动周”活动。请根据以下四幅
图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个
过程。
提示词:(1)“双减”政策 doublereduction
policy;
(2)踢毽子shuttlecockkicking;
(3)跳绳ropeskipping;
(4)抖音Douyin。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可 以 适 当 增 加 细 节,以 使 行 文
连贯。
7.热 点话题(话 题 很 好,范 文 较 长,供 大 家
参考)
Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin
120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructions
givenbelow.
为了更好地控制疫情,许多上海市民目
前处于居家办公,居家学习的状态。“非必
要不出门”成了大家的常态。日前,出现在
朋友圈的一幅图片赢得了大家的会心一笑。
请根据图片所反映的问题谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:
(1)描述图片内容;(2)对此现象给出合
理建议。
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班级: 姓名:
OurfocusshouldbeonimprovingstudentsEnglish
languageskils.Whilelearning about British cultureis
interesting,itmaynotbedirectlyrelevanttotheirlanguage
development.Therefore,Isuggest wecontinue withour
currentlessonplan.
However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistory
thatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainly
incorporateitintoourlessons.Butoveral,ourprimary
objectiveshouldbetoimprovestudentslanguageproficiency.
Bestregards.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】 本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国外
教Andrew写一封邮件,就是否需要在接下来的课程中介绍
一些有关英国的历史知识表明态度并提出建议。
(1)词汇积累
感谢:thank→appreciate
应该:should→besupposedto
集中于:focuson→concentrateon
建议:suggest→advise
(2)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:Thankyouforyourasking meaboutwhetherto
introducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinourupcoming
lessons.
拓展句:Thankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhetheryou
shouldintroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinour
upcominglessons.
【点 睛】 [高 分 句 型 1]However,Ibelievethatitisnt
necessary.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]However,ifthereisaspecificaspectofBritish
historythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecan
certainlyincorporateitintoourlessons.(运用了if引导的条
件状语从句和that引导的定语从句)
2.【参考范文】
Notice
Aimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreadingour
traditionalculture,anewyearconcertwil beheldonthe
schoolsportsfieldnextmonth.WewilinvitetheBeijing
Chinese Traditional Music Bandtogiveaperformance.
Certainly,weneedourownperformers,too.Anyonewith
musicaltalentcanattend.Wearealsoputtingtogetherachoir
tosingwiththeband.Thisisawonderfulchanceforyouto
sing with musicstars,whichcan makeyourelaxedand
happy.Thosewhowanttohelpoutcandosomevoluntary
work.Volunteersofalkindsarewelcome.Donthesitateto
joinus.Letsjointogethertomakethenewyearconcertthe
bestever.
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一则关于学
校即将组织迎新年音乐会的通知。
(1)词汇积累
目的是做某事:(be)aimedatdoing→beintendedtodo
确实:certainly→withoutdoubt
极好的:wonderful→excelent
机会:chance→opportunity
(2)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreading
ourtraditionalculture,anewyearconcertwilbeheldonthe
schoolsportsfieldnextmonth.
拓展句:Anewyearconcertwilbeheldontheschoolsports
fieldnextmonth,whichaimstoenrichourlifeoncampusand
spreadingourtraditionalculture.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Thisisawonderfulchanceforyouto
sing with musicstars,whichcan makeyourelaxedand
happy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分 句 型2]Thosewhowanttohelpoutcandosome
voluntarywork.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
高考预测练(二十三) 书信类应用文写作
1.【参考范文】
DearAilen,
Iamwritingtosharesomeexcitingnews.Lastweek,our
schoolintroducedanewcoursecaled“LaborExperience”,whichisaimedtoprovidestudentswithhands-onexperienceinvarioustypesofwork.
Welaunched acampaign,Beautiful Campus,wherestudentsdosomecleaningandplantcolorfulflowers.Thenalaborbasewassetupforstudentstoexperience growing
,
pickingandharvesting.Ourschoolalsoofferstraininglessons
toequipuswithlivingskilslikerepairingappliancesandcooking.Throughtheseactivities
,welearnteamworkand
improveproblem-solvingcompetence.
Ibelieveitsauniqueandvaluableexperience.Wecanworktogether,learnfromeachother,andhavefun.Sincerely
inviteyoutojoinusinournextclass.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,上周你
校新开设了劳动体验课。请给你的留学生朋友Alen写一封
邮件邀请他同去体验。
(1)词汇积累
提供:offer→provide
能力:competence→ability
宝贵的:valuable→precious
玩得高兴:havefun→enjoyoneself
(2)句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Wecanworktogether,learnfromeachother,andhave
fun.Sincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinournextclass.
拓展 句:Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinusinournextclass
becausewecanworktogether,learnfromeachother,and
havefun.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Lastweek,ourschoolintroduceda
newcoursecaled “LaborExperience”,whichisaimedto
providestudentswithhands-onexperienceinvarioustypesof
work.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Ibelieveitsauniqueandvaluableexperience.
(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
2.【参考范文】
DearAlice,
Imgladtoknowthatyouplantocarryoutreading
activitiesoforiginalEnglishclassicsafterclass.Isupportthis
readingactivityverymuch.
IstronglyrecommendthatweshouldaddasectiononEnglish
literature.Wecanhaveathoroughcommandofthehistory
anddevelopmentofEnglishliterature.Besides,itcandevelop
studentsreadingability,whichispopularwithstudents.Last
butnotleast,whatmakesstudentsexcitedisthediscussion
section,wherestudentscanfreelyexpressthemselvesona
certaintopicinEnglish.
Hopefuly,youcantakemyadviceintoconsideration.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教 Alice
写一封邮件,表达一下对英语原版名著阅读活动的 态 度 和
建议。
(1)词汇积累
高兴的:glad→happy
支持:support→favor
建议:recommend→suggest
兴奋的:excited→thriled
(2)句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Hopefuly,youcantakemyadviceintoconsideration.
同义句:Iwilappreciateitifyoucanconsidermysuggestion.
【点睛】 [高 分 句 型 1]Besides,itcandevelopstudents
readingability,whichispopularwithstudents.(运用了which
引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,whatmakesstudentsexcited
isthediscussionsection,wherestudentscanfreelyexpress
themselvesonacertaintopicinEnglish.(运用了 what引导
的主语从句和where引导的定语从句)
3.【参考范文】
DearHarvey,
Im Li Hua from Class 3.Having noticed your
advertisementforahostfamilyontheschoolwebsite,Im
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writingtorecommendmyhome,whichIthinkistheperfect
placeforyou.
Myhomeislocatedinabeautifulneighborhood,andits
just5minuteswalktoacitypark,andmanypeopleoften
playtraditionalinstruments,ChinesechessandTaiChithere.
Furthermore,everymorningonthestreettherearevarious
localsnackswithreasonableprice.Asformyfamily,theyre
alfriendlyandeasy-going.Bytheway,thebestwayto
improveyourChineseisthatyouneedcommunicateasoften
aspossiblewithnatives.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写邮件向寻找寄
宿家庭的交换生推荐自己家。
(1)词汇积累
位于:belocatedin→besituatedin
此外:furthermore→ whatsmore
各种各样的:various→avarietyof
改善:improve→enhance
(2)句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:Myhomeislocatedinabeautifulneighborhood,andits
just5minuteswalktoacitypark,andmanypeopleoften
playtraditionalinstruments,ChinesechessandTaiChithere.
拓展句:Myhomeislocatedinabeautifulneighborhood,and
itsjust5minuteswalktoacitypark,wheremanypeople
oftenplaytraditionalinstruments,ChinesechessandTaiChi.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Havingnoticedyouradvertisementfor
ahostfamilyontheschoolwebsite,Imwritingtorecommend
myhome,whichIthinkistheperfectplaceforyou.(运用了
which引导的非限制性定语从句及现在分词作状语)
[高 分 句 型2]Bytheway,thebestwaytoimproveyour
Chineseisthatyouneedcommunicateasoftenaspossible
withnatives.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
4.【参考范文】
DearSir/Madam,
MynameisLiHua,aChinesestudentwhoistakinga
summercoursein London now.Knowingthatyou are
recruitingvolunteersforthecomingLondonChinesepainting
exhibition,Immorethandelightedtowritewiththeintention
ofapplyingtobeavolunteer.
HavingstudiedEnglishfor12years,Ipossessagood
commandofspokenEnglish.Whatsmore,Ihaveparticipated
inseveralsimilaractivities,whichequipmewitharelevant
experience.Ifaccepted,Icanserveasaguide,introducing
Chinese paintings and answering questions.I have the
confidencethatmyenthusiasmanddevotionwilsurpassyour
expectation.
Idappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationinto
consideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封申请
信,申请成为当地美术馆要举办的中国画展览的志愿者。
(1)词汇积累
展览:exhibition→display
高兴的:delighted→pleased
另外:whatsmore→inaddition
参加:participatein→takepartin
(2)句式拓展
同义句
原句:MynameisLiHua,aChinesestudentwhoistakinga
summercourseinLondonnow.
拓展 句:MynameisLiHua,aChinesestudenttakinga
summercourseinLondonnow.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Whatsmore,Ihaveparticipatedin
severalsimilaractivities,whichequip me witharelevant
experience.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Idappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplication
intoconsideration.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
5.【参考范文】
DearDrJohnWood,
Imwritingonbehalfofaltheexchangestudentsto
expressourgratitudeforyourhospitalityandgenerosity
duringourstayinNewZealand.
Whatimpressedusdeeplywerethedeliciouslocalcuisine
andthecomfortableaccommodation wel-preparedforus.
Also,theactivitiesyouarrangednotonlygoteveryoneofus
involvedinlearning,butbuiltaculturalbridgebetweenus,
forwhichwewererealygrateful.
Thanksagainforalyoureffortsandwesincerelyhope
youcancometoChinaandvisitusinthenearfuture!
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,刚从新
西兰的UniversityofCanterbury游学归来。请你代表中国
交换生给该校校长DrJohnWood写封信。
(1)词汇积累
代表:onbehalfof→represent
表达:express→extend
美味的:delicious→tasty
感谢的:grateful→thankful
(2)句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Whatimpressedusdeeplywerethedeliciouslocalcuisineand
thecomfortableaccommodationwel-preparedforus.
拓展 句:Itwasthedeliciouslocalcuisineandthecomfortable
accommodationwel-preparedforusthatimpressedusdeeply.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Whatimpressedusdeeplywerethe
deliciouslocalcuisineandthecomfortableaccommodation
welpreparedforus.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]Also,theactivitiesyouarrangednotonlygot
everyoneofusinvolvedinlearning,butbuiltaculturalbridge
betweenus,forwhichwewererealygrateful.(运用了介词
+关系代词结构的非限制性定语从句)
6.【参考范文】
DearCaroline,
ImwritingtotelyouIcannotattendtheChinaSpace
ExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywithyou.Iamsosorry
aboutmyabsenceofthevisit.Pleaseexcuse meforthe
inconveniencecausedbyme.
Iwasrealyexcited whenIgottwoticketsforthe
wonderfulexhibition.Ivealreadysearchedmuchinformation
aboutthisshow to equip myselfas a guideto you.
Unfortunately,yesterdaymyEnglishteacherinvitedmeto
takepartinaSpeechcontesttobeheldnextSaturday.
Tomakeyourtriptheremorefulfiled,Iwilrecommend
youseveraldocumentariestohelpyoulearnmoreaboutChina
spaceindustry.Ihopeyouenjoythetripyourself.
Apologizeformyabsenceagain!
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你和你
的外国朋友Caroline约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国
航天展”,但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件。
(1)词汇积累
参加:takepartin→participatein
不幸:unfortunately→unluckily
充实的:fulfiled→contented
了解:learnabout→knowabout
(2)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:To make yourtrip there morefulfiled,I wil
recommendyouseveraldocumentariestohelpyoulearnmore
aboutChinaspaceindustry.
拓展句:Iwilrecommendyouseveraldocumentariestohelp
youlearnmoreaboutChinaspaceindustrysothatyourtrip
canmorefulfiled.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]ImwritingtotelyouIcannotattend
theChinaSpaceExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywith
you.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]IwasrealyexcitedwhenIgottwoticketsfor
thewonderfulexhibition.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
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7.【参考范文】
DearAndrew,
ImwritingtosharewithyouaproblemImcurrently
facing.Thissemester,ourschoolhasintroducedanoral
Englishcourse,andImstrugglingtoadapttotheteaching
styleofourforeignteacher.Ifinditchalengingtounderstand
his/heraccentandfolowthepaceoftheclass.Asaresult,
ImfeelingquitefrustratedandIm worriedthatmyoral
Englishskilswontbeeffectivelyimproved.
Iwaswonderingifyoucouldoffermesomeadviceortips
onhowtobettercopewiththissituation.Perhapsyouhave
someexperienceorsuggestionsthatcouldhelpmeimprove
mycomprehensionandcommunicationskilsinaforeign
languageenvironment.
Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友
Andrew写一封邮件,就本学期你校开设了英语口语课,但是
你不太适应外教的授课向他寻求帮助。
(1)词汇积累
适应:adaptto→adjustto
步伐:pace→step
建议:advice→suggestion
期望:lookforwardto→expect
(2)句式拓展
句式转换
原句:Iwaswonderingifyoucouldoffermesomeadviceor
tipsonhowtobettercopewiththissituation.
拓展句:Iwaswonderingifyoucouldoffermesomeadviceor
tipsonhowIcanbettercopewiththissituation.
【点睛】 [高 分 句 型 1]Asaresult,Imfeelingquite
frustratedandImworriedthatmyoralEnglishskilswont
beeffectivelyimproved.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高 分 句 型 2]Perhaps you havesome experience or
suggestionsthatcouldhelpmeimprovemycomprehension
andcommunicationskilsinaforeignlanguageenvironment.
(运用了that引导的定语从句)
8.【参考范文】
DearSir/Madam,
MynameisLiHua,aSeniorThreestudent.Ihavebeen
offeredtheopportunitytoparticipateinthesummercampof
“NationalEnglishInnovationContest”.SoIm writingto
inquireaboutthedetailsofit.
Firstly,Idliketoknowtheexacttimeandplaceofthe
contest.Idbeverygratefulifyoucouldletmeknowthe
procedurethatIlhavetogothrough.Lastbutnotleast,I
wonderifyoucouldtelmewhatIneedtoprepare.
Yourearlyreplywouldbehighlyappreciated.Thankyou
inadvance!
Yoursfaithfuly,
LiHua
高考预测练(二十四) 非书信类应用文写作
1.【参考范文1】
TheLegacyoftheGreatWal
TheGreat Wal,a marvelofhumaningenuityand
determination,stretches across northern China,weavingthrough mountainsanddeserts.Thisancientfortification
,
datingbacktothe7thcenturyBC
,wasinitialybuiltto
protectagainstinvaders.Overcenturies,itgrewtobecomea
symbolofChineseunityandatestamenttotheresilienceof
itspeople.TheGreatWalteachesusthatunity,hardwork,andperseverancearekeystoovercomingchalengesanddefendingwhatweholddear.Itslegacycontinuestoinspiregenerations,remindingusofoursharedhumanityandthepowerofunityinthefaceofadversity.【参考范文2】
TheEnchantingTerracottaWarriors
LocatedinXian
,China,theTerracottaWarriorsarea
marvelofancientcraftsmanship.
Datingbackover2,000years
,theselife-sizedstatues
werecreatedtoguardthetombofEmperorQinShiHuang.
Each warrior hasa uniquefacialexpression and pose,
showcasingtheskilanddedicationoftheancientartisans.Notonlyaretheyatestamenttoancientmilitarymight
,buttheyalso offera windowinto Chinasrichculturalandhistoricalheritage.TheTerracottaWarriorsremindusofthe
legacyofEmperorQinShiHuangandhisvisionforaunified
andprosperousnation.Theystandasasymbolofresilience,
unity,andtheenduringspiritoftheChinesepeople.
【参考范文3】
TheLegacyoftheForbiddenCity
TheForbiddenCity,locatedinBeijing
,isamagnificent
complexofpalacesandtemplesthatonceservedastheroyal
courtofChinasEmperors.
Thiswaledcitywithinacityisamasterpieceofancient
architecture,withintricatecarvingsandvibrantpaintingsadorningitswals.Foroverfivecenturies
,itwasthecenterof
politicalpowerinChina,housingover24EmperorswhoruledthevastMingandQingempires.TheForbiddenCityisnotonlyasymbolofChinasrichculturalheritagebutalsoatestamenttotheresilienceandunityoftheChinesepeople.Itteachesusabouttheimportanceoftraditionandrespectfor
history,remindingusthatwearetheguardiansofourculturallegacy.【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在举办“讲好中
国故事”英语征文活动,要求考生以一个名胜古迹为主题,写
一篇短文投稿。
(1)词汇积累
奇迹:marvel→ miracle
智慧:ingenuity→ wisdom
决心:determination→resolution
最初:initialy→originaly
(2)句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:TheGreat Wal,a marvelofhumaningenuityand
determination,stretches across northern China,weaving
throughmountainsanddeserts.
拓展 句:TheGreatWal,amarvelofhumaningenuityand
determination,stretchesacrossnorthernChina,whichweaves
throughmountainsanddeserts.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]TheGreatWal,amarvelofhuman
ingenuityanddetermination,stretchesacrossnorthernChina,
weavingthroughmountainsanddeserts.(运 用 了 现 在 分 词
weaving作状语)
[高 分 句 型2]TheGreatWalteachesusthatunity,hard
work,andperseverancearekeystoovercomingchalengesand
defendingwhatweholddear.(运用了that和what引导的宾
语从句)
2.【参考范文】
Dearfelowstudents,
InordertocelebratetheupcomingWorldBookDay
,an
interestingreadingcampaignwilbelaunched.Notonlydoestheactivitystimulateourcreativityandshapeourcharacter
,
butitcanalsoenrichourlivesinauniqueway.Thefolowingareactivitiesinvolvedin thereadingcampaign.Asscheduled
,readingclubsareorganizedingroups
forasharedtopicinthelibraryeveryWednesdayafternoon.
Participantsarewelcometodiscussfiguresinthebook,whoarethesourceofmotivationtohelpthembeattheoddsandcreatemiracles.Inaddition
,everyparticipantisrequiredto
submitareadingreportwithingiventimetoenhancetheir
criticalthinkingabilityandwritingcapability.
Alinal,byimmersingourselvesinthecharmofbooks
,
thisactivitydefinitelyoffersendlessfuntous.Mydear
felows,pleasejoinusassoonaspossible!
EnglishClub
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为学校英语社
计划组织的以“ReadingForFun”为主题的读书活动写一份
倡议书。
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(1)词汇积累
激发:stimulate→motivate
主题:topic→theme
此外:inaddition→besides
提高:enhance→improve
(2)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Inaddition,everyparticipantisrequiredtosubmita
readingreportwithingiventimetoenhancetheircritical
thinkingabilityandwritingcapability.
拓展句:Inaddition,everyparticipantisrequiredtosubmita
readingreportwithingiventime,whichisintendedtoenhance
theircriticalthinkingabilityandwritingcapability.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Participantsarewelcometodiscuss
figuresinthebook,whoarethesourceofmotivationtohelp
thembeattheoddsandcreatemiracles.(运用了who引导的
非限制性定语从句)
[高 分 句 型 2]Notonlydoestheactivitystimulateour
creativityandshapeourcharacter,butitcanalsoenrichour
livesinauniqueway.(运用了部分倒装)
3.【参考范文】
Notice
Dearstudents,
OurschoolwilholdanEnglishspeechcontestwhosethemeis“FoodAndCulture”.ThecontestwilbeheldnextFridayintheschoolauditorium.
Alstudentsarewelcometoparticipate.Everycontestant
isrequiredto deliveraspeechofnolessthanthreeminutesandnomorethanfiveminutesinEnglish,demonstratingagoodunderstandingofthetopic,andshowinglogicalandinnovativethinking.Wehopethatalstudentswilactivelyprepareforthiscontestandshowcasetheuniquefoodandcultureoftheirowncountries.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorneedanyassistance
,please
feelfreetocontactthestudentunion.Welookforwardto
yourparticipation.
Thestudentunion
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,最近你
校将举办以“FoodAndCulture”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请
你以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知张贴到学校的国际部。
(1)词汇积累
举行:hold→takeplace
参加:participate→takepart
发表演讲:deliveraspeech→addressaspeech
准备:preparefor→makepreparationsfor
(2)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Everycontestantisrequiredtodeliveraspeechofno
lessthanthreeminutesandnomorethanfiveminutesin
English,demonstratingagoodunderstandingofthetopic,and
showinglogicalandinnovativethinking.
拓展句:Everycontestantisrequiredtodeliveraspeechwhich
islimitedtonolessthanthreeminutesandnomorethanfive
minutesinEnglish,demonstratingagoodunderstandingof
thetopic,andshowinglogicalandinnovativethinking.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]OurschoolwilholdanEnglishspeech
contestwhosethemeis“FoodAndCulture”.(运用了whose
引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]Everycontestantisrequiredtodeliveraspeech
ofnolessthanthreeminutesandnomorethanfiveminutes
inEnglish,demonstratingagoodunderstandingofthetopic,
andshowinglogicalandinnovativethinking.(运用了现在分
词作状语)
4.【参考范文】
ReadingEnrichesLife
Ladiesandgentlemen,
Iamhonoredtostandheretosharemyopiniononthe
topic“ReadingEnrichesLife”.Asafamoussayinggoes,
“Readingmakesafulman.”Ifirmlybelievereadingplaysa
crucial role in shaping our lives and enriching our
experiences.
Firstandforemost,readingbroadensourhorizonsand
deepensourunderstandingoftheworld.Throughreading,we
cantraveltodistantplaces,exploredifferentculturesandgain
insightintootherslives.Moreover,readingisapowerfultool
forpersonalgrowthandself-improvement.Theknowledge
andwisdomfoundinbookscaninspireustostriveforour
goals.
Letspickupabookandstartajourneyofenrichingour
lifethroughreading.
Thanksforyourlistening.
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在举行英语素
养大赛,要求考生写一份主题为“阅读丰富生活”的英语演讲
稿参赛。
(1)词汇积累
荣幸的:honored→privileged
坚定地:firmly→resolutely
关键的:crucial→key
遥远的:distant→remote
(2)句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Iamhonoredtostandheretosharemyopiniononthe
topic“ReadingEnrichesLife”.
拓展句:Itismyhonortostandheretosharemyopinionon
thetopic“ReadingEnrichesLife”.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Ifirmlybelievereadingplaysacrucial
roleinshapingourlivesandenrichingourexperiences.(运用
了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Theknowledgeandwisdomfoundinbookscan
inspireustostriveforourgoals.(运用了过去分词found作
定语)
5.【参考范文】
StudentsTimeSpentonPhysical
ExerciseWeekly
Nowadays,manystudentsareawareofthesignificanceof
physicalexercise,althoughthetimetheyspendonitvaries.
Itcanbeseenfromthesurveythatthepercentageof
studentswhospend2-3hoursaweek,3-4hoursaweekand
4-5hoursa weekisrespectively30%,40% and18%.
However,therearestil12%ofstudentswhoonlyspend1-2
hoursaweek.
Thesurveyshowsthatasignificantnumberofstudents
arecommittedtophysicalexercise.Thistrendmaybedueto
increasedawarenessoftheimportanceofphysicalfitnessand
promotionofsportsactivitiesbytheschool.
AsfarasImconcerned,bycontinuingtopromoteand
supportphysicalactivitieswithintheschoolenvironment,we
canensuretheoveralwel-beingandhealthofourstudents.
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在学校校英文
报正 在 开 展 以 StudentsTimeSpentonPhysicalExercise
Weekly为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文
投稿。
(1)词汇积累
展示:show→showcase
重要的:significant→essential
提高:improve→promote
确保:ensure→makesure
(2)句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:However,therearestil12% ofstudentswhoonly
spend1-2hoursaweek.
拓 展 句:However,therearestil12% ofstudentsonly
spending1-2hoursaweek.
【点 睛】 [高 分 句 型 1]However,therearestil12% of
studentswhoonlyspend1-2hoursaweek.(运用了who引导
的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Thesurveyshowsthatasignificantnumberof
studentsarecommittedtophysicalexercise.(that引导的宾
语从句)
6.【参考范文】
Inresponsetothedoublereductionpolicy,anactivity
caled“CampusSports Week”washeldinourschoollast
week.Althestudentscouldntwaittotakeanactivepartin
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it.Notonlydidwedobodybuildingexercises,folowingour
monitor,butalso we did shuttlecock kicking and rope
skipping.Whatsmore,theprocessofoursportsweekfulof
joywasfilmedbyourclassmates.Intheend,thevideo
concerningourhappinessandeffortwasuploadedtoTik
Tok,apopularvideosharingplatform.Ihopeitcangetas
manylikesaspossibleandthatwewilhavemoreactivities
likethis.
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求仔细观察图片
并理解图片内容,结合所给提示,写一写学校上周组织的一
场“校园运动周”活动。
(1)词汇积累
举办:hold→launch
此外:Whatsmore→Inaddition
充满:fulof→filedwith
像……一样/与……相似:like→similarto
(2)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原 句:Intheend,thevideoconcerningourhappinessand
effortwasuploadedtoTik Tok,apopularvideosharing
platform.
拓展句:Intheend,thevideoconcerningourhappinessand
effortwasuploadedtoTikTok,whichisrecognizedasa
popularvideosharingplatform.
【点睛】 [高 分 句 型1]Notonlydidwedobodybuilding
exercises,folowingourmonitor,butalsowedidshuttlecock
kickingandropeskipping.(运用了Notonly开头的部分倒装
句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Ihopeitcangetasmanylikesaspossibleand
thatwewilhavemoreactivitieslikethis.(hope后运用了两
个并列的宾语从句)
7.【参考范文】
Asisshownfromthepicture,amanquarantinedathome
isstandingonachairandtryinghisbesttolookoutofthe
window,hopingtogoouteagerly.Thepicturereflectsa
commonmentalstateofmostpeopleinShanghaiduringthe
epidemic.
Inordertobettercontroltheepidemic,manyShanghai
residentsarecurrentlyworkingandstudyingathome.“Dont
gooutunlessyouhaveto”hasbecomethenormal.Itseems
thattherearealotofbenefitstoworkandstudyathomeand
peoplewilcherishandenjoytherareopportunityprobably.
Forexample,peopledonthavetogetupearlytocatchthe
busorsubwayorspendmuchtimecommutingeveryday.And
peoplemightbeabletosavesomemoneyontheirclothesand
evencosmetics.However,thefactsarejusttheopposite.Most
peoplearedyingtogoout,becauselongperiodsofisolation
canmakepeoplefeelboredandevenmad.Besides,theydont
liketobeforcedtostayathome.
Inmyopinion,workingandstudyingathomeisthe
policymadebythegovernment,whichisreducingthespread
ofepidemiceffectively,so we mustsupportit.Toadapt
ourselvestothecurrentsituationwel,weshouldnotonly
workandrestontime,butalsosticktotakingexercise
regularly.Trytokeepagoodmoodandbelievetheepidemic
wilbeoversoon,whenwecangooutfreely.
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生描述图片
内容,结合目前上海市民为更好地控制疫情,所处的居家办
公、学习,“非必要不出门”的状态谈谈自己的看法,给出合理
建议。
(1)词汇积累
隔离:quarantine→isolate
心理的、精神的:mental→psychological
好处、优势:benefit→advantage
发疯的:mad→crazy
减少:reduce→decrease
锻炼:takeexercise→workout
(2)句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Toadaptourselvestothecurrentsituationwel,we
shouldnotonlyworkandrestontime,butalsosticktotaking
exerciseregularly.
拓展句:Inorderthatwecanadaptourselvestothecurrent
situationwel,weshouldnotonlyworkandrestontime,but
alsosticktotakingexerciseregularly.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Asisshownfromthepicture,aman
quarantinedathomeisstandingonachairandtryinghisbest
tolookoutofthewindow,hopingtogoouteagerly.(运用了
以关系代词as引导的非限制性定语从句及现在分词作伴随
状语)
[高分句型2]Inmyopinion,workingandstudyingathomeis
thepolicymadebythegovernment,whichisreducingthe
spreadofepidemiceffectively,sowemustsupportit.(运用了
以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句和连词so引导
的并列句)
高考预测练(二十五) 记叙文类写作
1.(1)【参考范文】
LastweekfromNovember13thto17th,ourschoolheld
anactivitywiththethemeof“ChineseCultureWeek”,which
wasaimedtopromoteChinesecultureandenrichstudents
life.
Duringtheweek,avarietyofmeaningfulactivitieswere
held,includinglecturesonChinesefestivals,exhibitionsof
Chineseartworks.BeijingOperaperformances,solvinglantern
riddlesandsoon.Andalteachersandstudentstookanactive
partinthem.
I strongly believe that,by participating in these
activities,notonlydideveryonehaveagoodtime,butalso
everyonewasofferedagoldenchancetofurtherexploreour
culture.
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校上周开展了“中国
文化周”主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
(1)词汇积累
举行:hold→takeplace
目的是:beaimedto→beaimedat
各种各样的:avarietyof→awiderangeof
参加:takeanactivepartin→participateinactively
(2)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Duringtheweek,avarietyofmeaningfulactivitieswere
held,includinglecturesonChinesefestivals,exhibitionsof
Chineseartworks.
拓展 句:Duringtheweek,avarietyofmeaningfulactivities
wereheld,whichincludelectures on Chinesefestivals,
exhibitionsofChineseartworks.
【点睛】 [高分句型1]Lastweekfrom November13thto
17th,ourschoolheldanactivitywiththethemeof“Chinese
CultureWeek”,whichwasaimedtopromoteChineseculture
andenrichstudentslife.(运用了 which引导非限制性定语
从句)
[高分句型2]Istronglybelievethat,byparticipatinginthese
activities,notonlydideveryonehaveagoodtime,butalso
everyonewasofferedagoldenchancetofurtherexploreour
culture.(运用了that引导宾语从句和倒装句)
(2)【参考范文】
ASelf-DiscoveryJourneyat“KnowYourself”
LastFriday,Ihadtheprivilegeofattendingthe“Know
Yourself”eventorganizedbyourschoolsPsychologyClub-a
journeyintoself-discoverythat was both enriching and
enjoyable.
Theevent,heldintheschoollibrary,aimedtoguide
studentsingainingadeeperunderstandingofthemselvesand
promotingmentalwel-being.Theactivitieswerediverse,
rangingfromgroupdiscussionsonstress-copingstrategiesto
enjoyablepsychologicalteststhatunveiledpersonalitytraits
andbehavioraltendencies.
Throughtheseactivities,Igainedinsightsintomycoping
mechanismsunderpressure.Additionaly,thepsychological
testsprovidedmewithnewperspectivestobetterplanmy
futuredevelopment.Ibelievesuchexperiencesareinvaluable
foral participantsandwil haveapositiveimpactonour
futuregrowth.
【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报
写一篇报道,报道学校心理社举行的“认识你自已”活动。
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