Unit 4 Feelings（写作突破专项训练）英语人教新起点版六年级上册

Unit4提纲挈领法描述心情日记 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 I can't find my dog. It makes me cry. I was sad because I was ill. I had to stay in bed. I was worried because I wasn't good at maths. I didn't like maths tests. （介绍心情原因与具体事件） 02 写作方法指引-提纲挈领法 Introduction: 交代时间与整体心情 Main Body: 介绍心情原因与具体事件 Conclusion: 总结感受或表达期望 03写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Look at the girl in the picture. She looks sad. （交代时间与整体心情）She is sad because she is ill. She has a fever and can't play with her friends. She has to stay in bed and take medicine. Her mother is with her, but she still feels worried about missing school. （介绍心情原因与具体事件）I hope she gets better soon.（总结感受或表达期望） 01 基础知识精讲-句型 1. 交代时间与整体心情 参考词汇： 时间类：Monday（周一）、Tuesday（周二）、Wednesday（周三）、Thursday（周四）、Friday（周五）、Saturday（周六）、Sunday（周日）、today（今天）、this week（这周）。 心情类：happy（开心的）、sad（难过的）、excited（激动的）、proud（自豪的）、worried（担心的）、angry（生气的）。 参考句型： Today is...（今天是……） 示例：Today is Monday.（今天是周一。） I feel... today.（我今天感觉……） 示例：I feel happy today.（我今天感觉开心。） 拓展句型：This week, I had different feelings.（这周，我有不同的心情。）/ On Sunday, I was excited.（在周日，我很激动。） 2. 介绍心情原因与具体事件 参考词汇： 事件 / 原因类：get an A（得 A）、win the game（赢比赛）、lose sth.（丢东西）、go to the park（去公园）、have a party（举办派对）、be ill（生病）、study hard（努力学习）、play with friends（和朋友玩）。 参考句型： I feel... because...（我感觉…… 因为……） 示例：I feel happy because I got an A on my maths test.（我感觉开心因为我数学测试得了 A。） I... (past action) and...（我做了…… 然后……） 示例：I played football with my friends and we won the game.（我和朋友踢足球，而且我们赢了比赛。） 拓展句型：She felt sad because she lost her favourite pen.（她感觉难过因为她丢了最喜欢的钢笔。）/ We went to the park with family and had a picnic.（我们和家人去公园并且野餐了。） 3. 总结感受或表达期望 参考词汇：great（极好的）、nice（美好的）、hope（希望）、better（更好）。 参考句型： It was a... day.（这是…… 的一天。） 示例：It was a great day.（这是极好的一天。） I hope...（我希望……） 示例：I hope she gets better soon.（我希望她快点好起来。） 拓展句型：It was the best birthday ever.（这是有史以来最好的生日。） / I hope tomorrow is happy too.（我希望明天也开心。） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 一般过去时 语法讲解 一般过去时表示过去发生的动作或存在的状态。 规则动词： 一般在动词后加 -ed（如 play→ played，study→ studied）； 以不发音的 e 结尾的加 -d（如 like→ liked）； 以 “辅音 + y” 结尾的，变 y 为 i 加 -ed（如 worry→ worried）。 不规则动词： 需特殊记忆（如 is→ was，are→ were，get→ got，win→ won，lose→ lost 等）。 提分练 用所给动词的适当形式填空。 1.I _________ (play) football with my friends yesterday. 2.She _________ (be) sad because she _________ (lose) her pen. 3.We _________ (go) to the park last Sunday. 4.He _________ (get) an A on his English test. 参考解析 1.played 解析：“yesterday”（昨天）是一般过去时标志，“play” 的过去式是 “played”，所以填 “played”。 2.was; lost 解析：主语 “she” 是第三人称单数，一般过去时中 “be” 动词用 “was”；“lose” 的过去式是 “lost”，所以依次填 “was” “lost”。 3.went 解析：“last Sunday”（上周日）是一般过去时标志，“go” 的过去式是 “went”，所以填 “went”。 4.got 解析：“get” 的过去式是 “got”，所以填 “got”。 模拟写作提升1 请参考以下提示问题，写一篇关于你某天心情的短文，不少于 7 句话。 提示问题： What day is it today? How do you feel? Why do you feel this way? What did you do? 参考句型 1. I feel very happy because I got an A on my maths test. 2. In the morning, I had a maths test. 3. I studied hard for it last weekend. 参考单词 Monday（周一）happy（开心的）,get an A（得 A）win the game（赢比赛）excited（激动的） proud（自豪的） 范文1 Today is Monday. I feel very happy because I got an A on my maths test. （交代时间与整体心情）In the morning, I had a maths test. I studied hard for it last weekend. After school, I played football with my friends. We had a game, and I scored two goals. We won the game, so I felt excited and proud. （介绍心情原因与具体事件）It was a great day! （总结感受或表达期望） 模拟写作提升2 请根据下面的表格内容，写一篇关于 Amy 一周心情的短文。 Day Feeling Reason Wednesday happy Got an A on the English test Friday sad Lost her favourite pen Sunday excited Went to the park with family 参考句型 1. Amy had different feelings. 2. On Wednesday, she felt happy because she got an A on the English test. 3. She studied English every day after school. She felt... because... 参考单词 Wednesday（周三）Friday（周五）Sunday（周日）English test（英语测试）favourite pen（最喜欢的钢笔）park（公园）family（家人） 范文2 This week, Amy had different feelings. （交代时间与整体心情）On Wednesday, she felt happy because she got an A on the English test. She studied English every day after school. On Friday, she felt sad because she lost her favourite pen. She looked for it everywhere but couldn't find it. On Sunday, she felt excited because she went to the park with her family. They had a picnic and played games there. （交代时间与整体心情）Amy had a mixed week. （总结感受或表达期望） 四、武汉汉阳区（真题作文） 写一篇关于 “我的开心一天” 的短文，介绍让你开心的事情和原因。 参考句型 1. I was happy because my friends came to my birthday party. 2. My mom made a big chocolate cake for me. 3. We sang the birthday song together. I was happy because... 参考单词 Saturday（周六）birthday party（生日派对）friends（朋友）cake（蛋糕）games（游戏）presents（礼物） 范文3 Today was Saturday, and it was my birthday. （交代时间与整体心情） I was happy because my friends came to my birthday party. My mom made a big chocolate cake for me. We sang the birthday song together. Then we played fun games, like treasure hunt. My friends gave me many nice presents. （交代时间与整体心情） I felt loved and happy. （总结感受或表达期望） 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$