Unit 4 Shopping Day（写作突破专项训练）英语人教新起点版五年级上册

Unit4提纲挈领法描述购物经历 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 I want to buy a pair of pants.（交代购物背景） Then we go to Head start School Shop. There is a blue bag there. It's 110 yuan, but I only have 100 yuan. Then we go to Kids Right Shop. There is a blue bag there. It's small, but it's 60 yuan. I buy it. I'm very happy. （介绍购物过程） 02 写作方法指引-提纲挈领法 Introduction: 交代购物背景 Main Body: 介绍购物过程（买了什么、价格等） Conclusion: 表达购物感受 03写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 A girl went to a stationery shop. She wanted to buy a pencil. （交代购物背景） The salesman asked, "Can I help you?" The girl said, "Yes, please. I want to buy a pencil." The salesman showed her a pencil and said, "This one? It's one yuan. Here you are." The girl took the pencil and said, "Thank you." The salesman was very kind.（介绍购物过程）The girl was happy to get the pencil.（表达购物感受） 01 基础知识精讲-句型 1. 交代购物背景 参考词汇： 地点类：stationery shop（文具店）、toy shop（玩具店）、supermarket（超市）、shop（商店）。 人物类：friend（朋友）、mom/dad（妈妈 / 爸爸）、classmate（同学）、sister/brother（姐妹 / 兄弟）。 参考句型： I go to + 地点 + with + 人物.（我和…… 去……） 示例：I go to the stationery shop with my friend Lingling.（我和我的朋友玲玲去文具店。） 拓展句型：My mom and I go to the supermarket.（我和妈妈去超市。）/ I go shopping with my dad on weekends.（我周末和爸爸去购物。） 2. 详细描述购物时挑选的物品、物品价格，是作文的核心内容。 参考词汇： 文具类：pencil box（铅笔盒）、crayons（蜡笔）、scissors（剪刀）、exercise book（练习本）、pencil（铅笔）、eraser（橡皮）。 玩具类：model car（模型汽车）、toy panda（玩具熊猫）、toy train（玩具火车）、doll（玩偶）、ball（球）。 食品类：apples（苹果）、milk（牛奶）、bread（面包）、cookies（饼干）、candy（糖果）。 价格类：yuan（元）、cheap（便宜的）、expensive（贵的）。 参考句型： I want to buy + 物品.（我想买……） 示例：I want to buy a pencil box.（我想买一个铅笔盒。） It is + 价格 + yuan. / They are + 价格 + yuan.（它 / 它们…… 元。） 示例：It is 20 yuan.（它 20 元。）/ They are 16 yuan.（它们 16 元。） 拓展句型：She wants to buy a doll.（她想买一个玩偶。） / The apples are 8 yuan a kilo.（苹果 8 元一公斤。） 3. 总结购物的心情，让作文有始有终，更完整。 参考词汇：happy（开心的）、glad（高兴的）、excited（兴奋的）、nice（美好的）。 参考句型： I feel + 感受类形容词.（我感觉……） 示例：I feel very happy.（我感觉很开心。） 拓展句型：We are glad to buy new things.（我们很高兴买了新东西。） / It is a nice shopping day.（这是美好的购物一天。） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 一般现在时 （一）语法讲解 一般现在时表示经常发生的动作、存在的状态或客观事实。 动词形式： 当主语是第一人称（I/we）、第二人称（you）、第三人称复数（they / 复数名词）时，动词用原形。 示例：I go to school every day.（我每天去上学。）/ You like apples.（你喜欢苹果。）/ They play football after school.（他们放学后踢足球。） 当主语是第三人称单数（he/she/it/ 单数名词）时，动词要变第三人称单数形式（一般在动词后加 -s 或 -es，如 go→ goes，want→ wants，like→ likes 等）。 示例：He goes to school by bus.（他坐公交车去上学。）/ She wants a new dress.（她想要一条新裙子。） 提分练 用所给动词的适当形式填空。 1.I ______ (go) to the shop with my mom. 2.She ______ (want) to buy a toy panda. 3.They ______ (be) happy. 4.The pencil box ______ (be) 20 yuan. 5.He ______ (like) the new book. 参考解析 1.go 解析：主语 “I” 是第一人称，一般现在时中动词用原形，所以填 “go”。 2.wants 解析：主语 “She” 是第三人称单数，“want” 的第三人称单数形式是 “wants”，所以填 “wants”。 3.are 解析：主语 “They” 是第三人称复数，“be” 动词的复数形式是 “are”，所以填 “are”。 4.is 解析：主语 “The pencil box” 是单数名词，“be” 动词的单数形式是 “is”，所以填 “is”。 5.likes 解析：主语 “He” 是第三人称单数，“like” 的第三人称单数形式是 “likes”，所以填 “likes”。 模拟写作提升1 请参考以下提示问题，写一篇关于你去文具店购物的短文，不少于 7 句话。 提示问题： Where do you go? Who do you go with? What do you want to buy? How much are they? How do you feel? 参考句型 1.Lingling wants to buy a box of crayons. 2.They are 16 yuan. We also buy a pair of scissors and an exercise book. 3.I want to buy... 参考单词 stationery shop（文具店）pencil box（铅笔盒）crayons（蜡笔）scissors（剪刀）exercise book（练习本）happy（开心的） 范文1 I go to the stationery shop with my friend Lingling on weekends. （交代购物背景） I want to buy a pencil box. It is 20 yuan. Lingling wants to buy a box of crayons. They are 16 yuan. We also buy a pair of scissors and an exercise book. The scissors are 12 yuan and the exercise book is 5 yuan. （介绍购物过程） We feel very happy because we get what we want. （表达购物感受） 模拟写作提升2 请根据下面的表格内容，写一篇关于 Mike 购物的短文。 Items（物品） Price（价格） A model car 30 yuan A toy panda 80 yuan A toy train 70 yuan 参考句型 1.First, he sees a model car. 2.It is 30 yuan. 3.Then he sees a toy panda. 参考单词 toy shop（玩具店）model car（模型汽车）toy panda（玩具熊猫）toy train（玩具火车）expensive（贵的）lovely（可爱的） 范文2 Mike goes to the toy shop. He wants to buy some toys. （交代购物背景） First, he sees a model car. It is 30 yuan. Then he sees a toy panda. It is 80 yuan. It is very lovely. He also likes a toy train. It is 70 yuan. But the toy train is a bit expensive, so he doesn't buy it. He buys the model car and the toy panda. （介绍购物过程）He is happy with his new toys. （表达购物感受） 四、武汉汉阳区（真题作文） 写一篇关于 “我的购物日” 的短文，介绍你在购物时的经历，包括去的地方、买的东西和感受。 参考句型 1.We go to a big supermarket. 2.I want to buy some apples. 3.They are red and look delicious.I buy... 参考单词 supermarket（超市）apples（苹果）milk（牛奶）bread（面包）cheap（便宜的）delicious（美味的） 范文3 I go shopping with my mom on Saturdays. We go to a big supermarket. （交代购物背景） I want to buy some apples. They are red and look delicious. They are 8 yuan a kilo. We buy two kilos of apples. Then we buy some milk and bread. The milk is 10 yuan and the bread is 6 yuan. They are cheap. （介绍购物过程） I am happy because I can eat the apples and bread. It is a nice shopping day. （表达购物感受） 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$