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HELLO
Welcome to our school
Integration 2
beautiful
What do you think of our school?
modern
old(ancient)
great
...
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beautiful
Our campus is beautiful.
There are green trees all around.
You can see different kinds of flowers everywhere.
We study and live in bright and comfortable buildings.
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3
beautiful
Our campus is beautiful.
We have patient teachers.
Our classmates are friendly and kind.
We have hard-working teachers.
We have kind/nice teachers.
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4
We have modern buildings.
We have modern labs/teaching equipment(设备).
We also have an old/ancient pavilion(凉亭).
modern
old(ancient)
Our school has a long history and rich culture.
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Can you write an email to your primary school classmate about your new school?
What can we write about our school?
general introduction
different places at school
teachers and classmates
feelings about school
Tip1: We often begin with “Dear...” and end with “Best wishes” in an email or letter to friends or family members.
the person you write the email to
what is the email mainly about
Greeting and introduction of the topic
Main body主干
Closing结尾
Signature签名
Opening开头
Tip2 : A formal email follows the same structure, greeting and sign-off as a formal letter.
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general introduction
different places at school
teachers and classmates
feelings about school
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general introduction
The school is old, but I like it.
Tip: Proper conjunctions can make your sentence or article more logical.
The school is modern with beautiful buildings, and I like it.
Practice
Further thinking: Do you like a school which has deep cultural
heritage(深厚文化底蕴) or a totally new one?
The school is old. I like it.
My favourite place at schoo is ... because we ...
different places at school
Your favorite place What can you do at this place? Why do you like the place?
We can enjoy nice meals and chat with friends happily in the dining hall, so I like it very much.
Tip:More details can make your article more real and attractive.
Further thinking: Do you think it is necessary for a school to have very
modern facilities(设施)?
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Our teachers are quite nice.
teachers and classmates
Our teachers are quite/very/so nice.
Our teachers are quite nice/helpful/responsible/hard-working.
Our teachers are so nice that all the students like them.
Our teachers are quite nice because they care about us a lot.
Tip: Rich adjectives,adverbs and different sentence patterns can make your article more vivid.
Practice
Further thinking: What kind of teacher do you like best?
They are friendly and helpful.
teachers and classmates
My classmates are great too.
My classmates are very/quite great too.
My classmates are so great that I really love all of them.
They are both friendly and helpful to everyone.
They are friendly and always ready to help others.
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feelings about school
Can you write about your feelings about your school? (2min)
Practice
Further thinking: What does a school mean to you?
Our school is a special place for me because it is modern but it also has ancient places. It is not only a great place for learning, but also a warm place for living. It’s really a great pleasure to be a student here.
general introduction
different places at school
teachers and classmates
feelings about school
Para1
Para2
Para3
structure
content
language
Tip: Rich adjectives,adverbs and different sentence patterns can make your article more vivid.
Tip:More details can make your article more real and attractive.
Tip: Proper conjuctions can make your sentence or article more logical.
Summary
Writing
Writing Goals Score
Does the email have a correct structure?
Does the email have a clear and short beginning or introduction?
Are the emal’s several parts organized into paragraphs?
Are there details to support each main idea?
Are there different kinds of sentences that help make the article beetter?
Are there any proper adjectives, adverbs and linking words?
Are there any mistakes in spelling, grammar or punctuations?
Does the writer have beautiful handwriting?
Excellent
Very good
Good
Acceptable
Needs improvement
Evaluation
Great
Green environment
Responsible teachers
Tidy campus
Abuntant activities
Excellent classmates
It is a great place for learning.
It is a great place for living.
It is a ... place for ...
Summary
It is a warm place for living.
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We have helpful teachers and classmates.
We have a wonderful school.
We should be thankful to what we have.
We are sure to have a hopeful future.
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Homework
Must do:
1. Memorize the writing skills;
2. Complete your article and polish it;
3. Exchange your article with your classmates and make it better.
Choose to do:
1. Read the article My dream school on Workbook;
2. Write an article My dream school.
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HELLO
Welcome to our school
Thank you!
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