摘要:
该初中英语课件以“旅行”为核心话题开展写作训练,涵盖旅行经历介绍与计划两种常见角度。课堂导入通过典型例题(给朋友写信介绍中国旅行)和中考真题(校园演讲),串联写作结构解析(开篇点题、具体介绍、表达感受)、句式升级(如see sb. doing sth.合并句子、感叹句转换)、高分范文及实战练习,形成从基础到应用的完整学习支架。
其亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养,以真实旅行情境(如广州公园、美食,宜兴竹公园、地下河)为载体,训练书信与演讲稿两种应用文写作,提供具体写作框架与句式优化示例,提升语言表达准确性;结合中考真题设计练习,强化学习能力。学生能在实践中掌握写作技巧,感受跨文化交流,教师可借助分层训练提升教学效率。
内容正文:
Module 1 Travel
模块话题写作训练
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本模块以“旅行”为话题。常见的写作角度有:介绍一次旅行经历;介绍假期的旅行计划。
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(山东潍坊潍城期末)Lily是育才中学的初三学生,她是一名来自美国的交换生。这一年来,Lily 在学习的同时也游览了中国的许多地方,度过了愉快的时光。她想给她的朋友Susan写一封信,介绍她在中国的一次旅行经历,分享一下她的旅游见闻。假如你是Lily,你会怎样写这封信呢?词数80左右。
内容包括:1. people 2. food 3. ways of life 4. events during the trip
【典型例题】
写作典例
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【思路点拨】
体裁:应用文
时态:一般过去时
人称:第一人称
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【句式升级】
1. I saw some people. They were rowing boats on the lake. (用see sb. doing sth. 合并为一句)
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2. I can’t forget this trip. (改为what引导的感叹句)
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I saw some people rowing boats on the lake.
What an unforgettable trip!
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【高分范文】
Dear Susan,
I am writing this letter to tell you my visit in Guangzhou. Last month, I went to Guangzhou with my friends. We stayed there for three days.
On the first day we visited Yuexiu Park. There was a big lake. I saw some people rowing boats on it. On the second day we went to Zhujiang New City. We visited Guangzhou Library. We ate some delicious food. Then we went to Huangpu. We took a ship. On the third day we went to Chimelong Safari Park. We saw some lovely animals.
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What an unforgettable trip!I had a great time in Guangzhou.
Yours,
Lily
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(湖北襄阳中考)在校园英语文化周,你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示,结合你的旅游或出行经历写一篇英语演讲稿。词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点提示:(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历。
巧学妙练
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Dear schoolmates,
Good morning!I’m glad to make a speech here. _________________________
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That’s all. Thank you!
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【参考范文】
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I'm glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think a trip is a chance for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizons.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the
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morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. We had a good time.
Travelling can help us relax and make friends. Why not plan a trip now?
That's all. Thank you!
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绿卡图书—走向成功的通行证
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