内容正文:
应用文写作素材与模板积累
【考情分析】
年份
卷区
体裁
话题
命题形式
2025年
全国一卷
建议信
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项做出选择
提纲类
全国二卷
咨询信
咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展
提纲类
浙江卷1月
发言稿
发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演讲稿
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议
提纲类
天津卷
推荐信
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐
提纲类
2024年
新高考I和II卷
告知信
分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历
提纲类
全国甲卷
发言稿
以Development of Transport in China为题的发言稿
图标类
北京卷
建议信
对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议
提纲类
天津卷
发言稿
“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿
提纲类
浙江卷1月
征文投稿
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动
提纲类
上海卷
安慰信
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做饭
提纲类
2023年
新高考全国卷
建议信
提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受
提纲类
浙江卷1月
报道
报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议
提纲类
天津卷
申请信
申请参加“中国工坊” 活动
提纲类
2022年
新高考全国卷
邀请信
邀请外教做访谈
提纲类
浙江卷
邀请信
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
邀请外国留学生一同体验
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
回忆经历
回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
英语学习方式图标的调查投稿
提纲类
北京卷
邀请信
邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
提纲类
天津卷
视频文字稿
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
2021年
新高考全国卷
征文投稿
庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿
提纲类
浙江卷
宣传稿
宣传学生国画作品展
提纲类
浙江卷 (1月)
发言稿
欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞
提纲类
全国甲卷
咨询信
咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法
提纲类
全国乙卷
发言稿
以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿
提纲类
北京卷
道歉信
你因故不能赴约周末一起外出
提纲类
天津卷
征文投稿
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
提纲类
类型
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学科网(北京)股份有限公司
2. 通知信
3. 新闻报道
4. 咨询信
5. 介绍信
6. 短文投稿
7. 发言稿
8. 邀请信
9. 推荐信(申请信)
10. 建议信
11. 感谢信
12. 调查报告
13. 咨询回复信
14. 道歉信
15. 祝贺信
16. 求助信
17. 慰问信
18. 投诉信
19. 经理感受信
1.通知信
【写作指导】
Para.1
开头:通知的背景/目的等
Para.2
主体:通知的具体内容(时间、地点、人员安排、提出的方法、措施和步骤等)
Para.3
结尾:自然收束
【句式凝练】
活动类
1. In order to arouse our passion to face and get us fully prepared for the upcoming Gaokao, our school will hold an oath-taking rally in the stadium at 7 p.m. next Tuesday. 为激发我们的斗志,充分备战即将到来的高考,我校将于下周二晚7点在体育场举行誓师大会。
2. It’s required that all the people, including students, teachers and parents involved, should attend it.
要求所有相关人员,包括学生、教师及家长均需参加。
3. Do remember to gather in the stadium at 6.30 p.m. on time.
请务必于晚上6:30准时到体育场集合。
4. As safety always comes first, please queue up in lines to enter the hall orderly and do NOT push each other.
安全第一,请排队有序进入会场,切勿相互推搡。
招聘启示类
5.We’re in need of twenty volunteers for an exchange conference for international middle school students which is to take place on July 24, 2020.
我们需要20名志愿者参加将于2020年7月24日举行的国际中学生交流会。
6.The volunteers will be in charge of providing services for foreign representatives, like arranging their accommodation and showing them around.
志愿者将负责为外国代表提供服务,如安排他们的住宿和带他们参观。
7. Therefore, applications are welcome from those who are skilled in spoken English and communicating with others.
因此,欢迎有英语口语和沟通能力的人来申请。
8. Those who have experience in volunteering are preferred.
有志愿工作经验者优先。
9. If you’re interested, please email your application to studentcouncil@sohu.com no later than June 10, 2020.
如果您感兴趣,请将您的申请电邮至studentcouncil@sohu.com不迟于2020年6月10日。
【高考回顾】
【2018▪全国卷II】
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together, 内容包括:
1. 短片内容:学校的发展;
2. 放映时间、地点;
3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Notice
In order to learn more about the development of our school, all the students are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together, which is a documentary on the history of our school. Produced by our teachers and us senior students, it reflects years of hard work. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn’t miss this excellent opportunity! We encourage any kind of feedback on the film from our viewers.
It will show in Room 1, First Teaching Building, from 7:00 pm to 8:00 pm, June 10, Sunday.
We are looking forward to your participation.
The Students’ Union
June 8, 2018
【满分范文】
(2025·河北廊坊·押题信息卷)假定你是校英语学习俱乐部的主席李华。为了提高学生们的英语口语,俱乐部决定成立口语练习小组。请你写一则英文通知,内容包括:
1.小组活动的时间、地点和内容;
2.报名截止时间和报名方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students' Union
【范文】
Notice
With the aim of improving our English speaking skills, the English Learning Club has decided to form an English Speaking Practice Group where students can practice in a diverse and supportive environment.
The group will meet every Friday afternoon from 3:00 pm to 4:30 pm in Room 301 of the Classroom Building. Our activities will include engaging in lively conversations on a wide range of topics, participating in role-playing exercises, and practicing with native speakers whenever possible.
If you are interested, please send an email to ESPG@163.com or sign up at the club office. The deadline for registration is June 15th.
English Learning Club
June 8th
2.新闻报道
【写作指导】
Para.1
导语:一句话或一段话概述新闻或活动发生的时间、地点、人物、事件
Para.2
主体:详细描写所报道的事实
Para.3
结束语:对该事件进行简要总结、评价或预测
【句式凝练】
活动类
1. Last week, our school successfully held a remarkable Science and Technology Festival, which drew the enthusiastic participation of all students.
上周,我校成功举办了一场精彩的科技节,吸引了全体学生的热情参与。
2.One highlight was the robot design competition, where students showcased self-made robots. Another popular activity was the VR space exploration, offering an immersive experience of the universe.
机器人设计比赛是活动的一大亮点,学生们展示了自制的机器人。另一项受欢迎的是VR太空探索,它提供了沉浸式的宇宙体验。
3.This festival not only sparked our interest in science and technology but also cultivated our practical and innovative abilities.
科技节不仅激发了我们对科学技术的兴趣,更培养了我们的实践能力和创新精神。
4. It serves as a vivid reminder that science and technology are the keys to unlocking a brighter future.
它生动地提醒我们:科学技术是开启更光明未来的钥匙。
叙事类
5.Organized by our school, all the students paid a visit to the farm on the morning of October 1st, aiming to savor the experience of nature and broaden their horizons.10月1日上午,我校组织全体同学参观了农场,体验自然,开阔视野。
6.On arriving at the destination, students, guided by the owner, were taken to admire the breathtaking beauty of various plants, followed by a quiz about distinguishing the name of the plants.
到达目的地后,在厂主的带领下,学生们被带着欣赏各种植物令人惊叹的美丽,然后进行分辨这些植物名称的小测验。
7. To enhance mutual understanding, today we had an online class with our sister school in the UK , introducing our traditional festivals to each other .
为了增进相互了解,今天我们与英国的姐妹学校进行了在线课程,介绍了我们的传统节日。
【高考回顾】
【2023▪1月浙江卷】
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动的过程;2. 收获与感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
__________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【2020▪全国新高考卷】
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
___________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.
【满分范文】
1.(2025·安徽六安·月考)假定你是李华,是你校英文报的记者。你校为传承中华美德,近期开展了为期一周的活动,题为“Pass on Virtues, Start with Me”。请你写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 你对这次活动的评价。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Pass on Virtues, Start with Me
_________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】
Pass on Virtues, Start with Me
Recently, our school launched a week-long campaign titled “Pass on Virtues, Start with Me” to promote traditional Chinese virtues among students. The activities included lectures on moral values, charity events, and volunteer work. Students were encouraged to practice kindness, honesty, and respect in their daily lives.
This campaign was well-received, as it not only deepened our understanding of traditional virtues but also inspired us to incorporate these values into our actions. Overall, it was a meaningful and impactful event.
3.咨询信
【写作指导】
1. 明确写作目的
核心任务:获取信息/帮助(如活动细节、课程安排、申请流程等)
常见题型:询问夏令营信息、请求推荐学习资源、咨询志愿者项目等
2. 三段式结构
开头段:自我介绍 + 写作目的
例句: As a student interested in..., I am writing to inquire about... I would appreciate it if you could provide me with details regarding...
主体段:分点提问(2-3个具体问题)
逻辑框架:
问题1(核心需求)→ 问题2(补充细节)→ 问题3(可选,如后续步骤)
例句: Could you please inform me whether...? Additionally, I would like to know how...
结尾段:表达感谢 + 期待回复
例句:Your prompt response would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you in advance for your assistance.
3. 审题关键点
身份设定(学生/申请者/读者等) 收信对象(学校/机构/专家等) 隐藏要求(如必须包含联系方式、需礼貌语气等)
【句式凝练】
1. 礼貌用语升级
基础→高级替换: "I want to know..." → "I would be grateful if you could clarify..."
"Can you tell me...?" → "Would it be possible for you to inform me...?"
2. 高频句型
开头句: I am writing on behalf of... to seek information about...
Having learned that..., I am eager to inquire about...
提问句: Would you mind explaining the procedure for...?
It would be helpful to know whether...
结尾句: I look forward to your guidance at your earliest convenience.
Please feel free to contact me via... for further communication.
3. 衔接词优化
逻辑衔接:First and foremost, Furthermore, Lastly
补充说明:Specifically, To be more precise
I wonder if you could tell me the information about...
我想请问您是否能告诉我有关……的消息。
I am writing for the information about...
我写信是想知道关于……的消息。
I would like to know whether you can provide me with information regarding...
我想知道你是否能提供我关于……的信息。
I wish to request materials for...
我想要关于……的资料。
I'd very much appreciate your advice on such matters as how to contact the officers who would be willing to assist...
如何联络那些愿意帮助……的官员,请您提供建议,我将不胜感激。
Would you be so kind to tell me...?
你可以告诉我有关……?
I look forward to your immediate response.
我期待着你的及时反馈。
Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
感谢你对此信的关注。
I am waiting for your quick reply.
我在等待你的快速答复。
Thank you in advance for your cooperation/assistance.
提前谢谢你的帮助。
【高考回顾】
(2023年高考真题) 假设你是李华,想申请某国际夏令营,写邮件咨询项目细节。
Dear Sir/Madam,
As a senior high student passionate about cross-cultural communication, I am writing to inquire about the 2024 International Summer Camp...
Firstly, could you specify the eligibility criteria for applicants? Additionally, I would appreciate it if you could clarify whether financial aid is available for students from developing regions...
Thank you for your time, and I eagerly await your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
假定你是李津,一名高三学生,打算高中毕业后去英国深造,你给某国际中介机构写一封信,咨询相关细节(如:如何申请、申请程序、有无留学年龄限制,对英语有何要求等)。注意:1.词数130左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Sir,
I’m a senior student from China and plan to go to Britain for further study after graduation from high school. I am writing to ask for some detailed information. (首段)
Initially,I wonder how I apply for a British university as a foreign student. Could you please tell me the procedure of application as specifically as possible? What deserves my special attention is whether there is an age limit and any requirement for my English level? I there any possibility that I can win a scholarship? Additionally, what should I do to prepare for the study in Britain? Ultimately, is there something I should pay attention to during my stay there?
I would be grateful if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience. (尾段)
Yours sincerely
Li Jin
4.介绍信
【写作指导】
• 第一段:道明来意,介绍名称
• 第二段:具体介绍事物
• 第三段:礼貌结束
1. 审题四要素
明确介绍类型:
人物介绍(如交换生、新成员)→ 突出个人特质、成就与适配性;
地点/文化介绍(如家乡、学校)→ 强调特色景观、历史意义或社会价值;
组织机构介绍(如社团、企业)→ 说明宗旨、活动与影响力。
锁定读者身份:
校方/合作机构→ 正式语言,强调专业性;
同龄人/友好团体→ 亲切语气,增加互动性。
提炼核心信息:
用关键词概括被介绍对象的独特价值(如“multicultural ambassador”“eco-friendly campus”)。
附加要求:是否需要邀请对方行动(如安排接待、参与活动)或表达合作意愿。
2. 结构模板(三段式黄金框架)
开头段 | 写作目的 + 背景简述
I am writing to formally introduce..., who/which has...
主体段 | 核心特质分点说明(2-3点)
First and foremost,... Additionally,... Last but not least,...
结尾段 | 表达期待 + 联系方式
We sincerely hope that... For further details, please contact...
3. 内容深化技巧
数据化支撑:用具体数据增强可信度(如“接待500+国际学生”→“hosted over 500 international students since 2015”)。
故事化细节:通过典型事例体现特质(如介绍学生→“organized a charity bazaar raising ¥10,000 for rural education”)。
文化适配:针对读者背景调整内容(向西方学校介绍中国学生→强调跨文化沟通能力)。
【句式凝练】
首句提升表达
1.Informed that you are passionate about the activity held in our school, I am writing with exceeding delight to share it with you.
听说你对在我们学校举办的活动十分热心,我很开心地写信跟你分享此次活动。
2.Hearing that you will pay a visit to our school and participate in the ...next week, I am writing to send my sincere welcome and share something about the event.
得知你下周将来参观我们学校并参加……活动,我写信表达我真诚的欢迎,并和你分享活动的内容。
尾句提升表达
1. I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.
以上是全部内容,我真诚地希望你能够参加这个活动和我们一起分享快乐。
2. Overall, the event was a great success and we look forward to hosting similar events in the future.
总的来说,这次活动取得了巨大的成功,我们期待未来举办类似的活动。
3. Based on the above, I hope more and more students will actively participate in this meaningful activity.
基于以上信息,我希望越来越多的学生积极参与此次有意义的活动。
4. I hope you can experience…, I’m sure you will feast your eyes on it.
希望你能体验…,我相信你一定会大饱眼福的。
【高考回顾】
(2023·上海)
你是明启中学高三学生吴磊,你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览,邀请每个同学提供一件生活中物品参展,并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读,要求描述展品以及选择原因。
内容必须包括:
1.对该物品的简要描述;
2.你选择该物品参展的原因。
I’m glad to know that our school is organizing an English festival with the theme "Happy Childhood" , where each student is invited to provide an item from their life to be exhibited. After much consideration, l have decided to exhibit my favorite childhood book, “The Adventures of Peter Rabbit
The Adventures of Peter Rabbit is a classic children's book, it tells the story of a rabbit named Peter and his exciting adventures in Mc Gregor's Garden. l chose this book for the exhibition because it represents the joy and innocence of my early years. lt reminds me of the carefree days of my childhood where l could immerse myself in the enchanting word of stories
By exhibiting this book, l hope to share the happiness and wonder of my childhood with others. l believe that everyone deserves to experience the joy of a carefree and imaginative childhood.
【满分范文】
假定你是学生李华,你去参加英语夏令营,老师要求每个学生介绍自己的家乡。请你写一篇介绍稿介绍你的家乡。要点如下:
1. 地理位置。
2. 人口历史。
3. 其他情况。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear friends,
I would like to introduce my hometown to you.My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province of China. It has a history of more than 300 years and a population of two million. With its highly-developed economy, the people in my hometown are leading a happy life. It offers children modern education and 90% of the high school leavers are admitted to universities.
Every year the picturesque scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad. What’s more, my hometown enjoys warm and wet climate, so it is abundant in fruits and vegetables, most of which are exported to other countries.
Thank you and welcome to my hometown!
假定你是学生李华,现在有外国学生来你校交流学习。请你用英语写一篇介绍稿向他们介绍国宝——大熊猫。要点如下:
1. 大熊猫的习性。
2. 大熊猫的象征意义。
3. 其他你所了解的关于大熊猫的信息。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear friends,
It’s a great honor for me to introduce our national treasure — the panda.
The panda is a world-famous wild animal born in China. It only inhabits the forests in the west part of China. It has lived on the earth for over 10,000 years. Although they have fat figures, pandas are better at climbing trees than any other animal. The favorite food they depend on for living is bamboo shoots.
Pandas like drinking much water, so when finding water, they’ll drink like crazy. Originally, the name “panda” was given by a Frenchman. As is known, the panda is the symbol of luckiness and friendship, and the messenger of peace. Finally and interestingly, the panda tends to lose its temper easily when disturbed.
5. 短文投稿
【写作指导】
语篇结构
概述
常用措辞
引言
简要介绍主题或写作背景,引出文章的主要内容
Recently,I have experienced.
As is shown in...
I'd like to share my thoughts on...In my years of campus life, one unforgettable experience is..Today, I'd like to discuss...
描述事件或经历
如参与活动的经历某个事件的详细介绍。
I still remember the time when...
During the event, we participated in...The class/activity aims to...This experience has left a deep
impression on me...Seeing these achievements, I was inspired by...
表达观点或分析原因
对于讨论类话题,可以提出自己的观点或分析现象的成因。
This trend can be attributed to...
The reason behind this phenomenon is...In my view, this is mainly because...One possible reason for this is...This approach allows us to...
具体建议或收获
可以给出合理的建议或总结个人的收获,强化内容的实用性或启发性.
I believe it is essential to...
It is recommended that we...
From this experience, I've earned...This activity has taught me the importance of...To make the most of this experience, it's important to..
结尾
总结或升华主题,表达对未来的期望、祝福或鼓励,并结束全文。
Overall, this experience has been...hope to see more activities like this in the future.This unforgettable memory will always be cherished.Look forward to contributing moret0...
I am grateful for this opportunity and hope to continue growing.
【句式凝练】
1.传统文化
(1)Last year,not only did I experiment with paper-cutting I had just learned,but I also succeeded in creating various beautiful “longs” or Chinese dragons.
去年,我不仅尝试了我刚刚学会的剪纸,还成功地创造出了各种美丽的“龙”。
(2)The Chinese Lunar New Year is one of the most important festivals in China and the customs and traditions of celebrating the event vary from place to place.
中国农历新年是中国最重要的节日之一,各地庆祝该活动的习俗和传统不尽相同。
2.城市介绍
(1)Home to over 20 million people,the capital of China is also the political centre of the country.There are many famous historical places of interest in the city of Beijing,which attract a large number of tourists from all over the world every year.
中国的首都拥有2 000多万人口,也是中国的政治中心。北京市有许多著名的历史名胜古迹,每年都吸引着来自世界各地的大量游客。
(2)When you stay in Beijing,tasting the famous Beijing Roast Duck is a must.
当你待在北京时,品尝著名的北京烤鸭是一件必做的事。
3.文化遗产
(1)Among the many symbols that represent China and its unique culture,the Great Wall is on the top of my recommendation list.
在代表中国及其独特文化的众多象征中长城是我的首选推荐。
4.中国发展
(1)With the increase of China’s national strength,China is playing an increasingly important role in the world.
随着中国国力的增强,中国在世界上发挥着越来越重要的作用。
(2)China has a long history and boasts colorful,mysterious and unique cultures,which makes it more attractive.
中国历史悠久,拥有丰富多彩、神秘、独特的文化,这使其更具吸引力。
5.社会实践活动
(1)We visited a nearby community and engaged in various activities.
我们参观了附近的一个社区,并参加了各种活动。
(2)We helped clean up the environment and interacted with residents,organizing cultural performances.
我们帮助清理环境,通过组织文化表演与居民互动。
(3)The highlight was assisting at a local charity event,where we raised funds for needy families.
最精彩的是在当地的一个慈善活动上提供援助,我们为贫困家庭筹集资金。
6.体育运动
(1)There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us,which can not only build up our body but also benefit us mentally.
毫无疑问,做运动对我们很有帮助,不仅能增强我们的体质,还能让我们在思想方面受益。
(2)What’s more,doing sports can help to relax ourselves.The most important is that we can make friends when we do sports.
更重要的是,做运动可以帮助我们自己放松。最重要的是,我们在做运动时可以交朋友。
7.安全知识
(1)It is crucial to enhance our awareness of fire safety and equip ourselves with essential self-rescue measures to effectively cope with such emergencies.
提高消防安全意识和配备必要的自救措施对有效应对这些紧急情况至关重要。
(2)During a fire,quick thinking and immediate action can make all the difference.
在火灾中,快速的思考和立即的行动会使结果大不相同。
(3)Firstly,it’s important to stay calm and call the fire department immediately to report the fire.If possible,escape through fire escape exits and use stairs instead of elevators.If trapped,seal off doors with wet towels to keep smoke out.
首先,必须保持冷静,并立即致电消防部门报告火灾。如果可能,从消防出口逃生,用楼梯代替电梯。如果被困,用湿毛巾密封门,防止烟雾。
(4)Remember to cover your nose and mouth with wet cloth while crawling low beneath smoke to avoid breathing in poisonous gases.
记得用湿布捂住鼻子和嘴,同时匍匐在烟雾下,以避免吸入有毒气体。
(5)It is our collective responsibility to prioritize the fire safety.
优先考虑消防安全是我们的共同责任。
【高考回顾】
【2024浙江1月卷】
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,
内容包括: 1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
【2023▪全国甲卷】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1.人物简介及事迹;
2. 意义或启示。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【2023▪全国乙卷】
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginners. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【2022年全国甲卷】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括: 1.海洋的重要性;
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
6. 发言稿
【写作指导】
发言稿是参加者为了在会议室或重要活动上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。它能节省时间、集中、有效地围绕议题把话讲好,不至于走题或把话讲错。
写发言稿时,要注意三点:1.观点鲜明;2. 条理清晰;3.语言简洁、明快。
通常包括三部分内容:
开篇(第一段):自我介绍,说明发言稿的主题
正文(第二段):陈述发言的具体内容,表达观点
结尾(第三段):总结发言,提出期望,表达感谢
【句式凝练】
1.表达荣幸
1. It’ s my great honor to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school. 我很荣幸能代表我们学校向您表示热烈的欢迎。
2. On behalf of ...,I feel honored to have the opportunity to give/ make/ deliver you a speech. 谨代表......, 我很荣幸能有这个机会给大家发表演讲。
3. Words can’ t express how thankful / luck I am. 言语表达不了我的感激之情/ 我有多幸运。
2.演讲的主题
1. I feel honored to give you a speech, whose topic is ... 我很荣幸能给你们做一个演讲,演讲的主题是......
2. I feel greatly honored to be here to share with you something about ... 我很荣幸能在这里和你们分享一些关于......的信息。
3. Today I want to talk to you about a very important subject. 今天我想和你们谈一个非常重要的话题。
4. The topic of my speech is ... 我演讲的主题是......
3.总结
1. From where I stand ... 从我的立场来看......
2. What I want to stress / emphasize is that ... 我想强调的是......
3. In a word / All in all / In sum ... 总的来说,总而言之......
4. As far as I’ m concerned / In my opinion / Personally speaking... 就我而言/ 依我看来......
5. Let me conclude my speech with the following comments. 让我用下面的话来总结我的演讲。
6. From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that ... 通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论......
7. I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening! 我希望上面所提到的能对你有帮助!谢谢你的聆听!
【高考回顾】
[2021年全国乙卷]
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 分析优势与不足;
2. 提出学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
Online learning is an important way to study recently.
【参考范文】
Be smart online learners
Online learning with an important way to study recently. And beings smart online learn plays a significant role here. Therefore, I’ d like to share my opinions regarding its advantages and disadvantages.
Undoubtedly, the Internet is like an endless ocean of knowledge, which can broaden our horizons. However its disadvantages cannot be ignored, one of which is easy to distract those who lack self- control to things like computer games, TV shows , and so on.
To be smart online learners, we can take advantage of the large quantity of resources effectively. And the key is to make strict plans and reasonable schedules. Most importantly, balance the time for study and entertainment.
【2020年5月天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议,探讨如何利用网络学习英语,请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿:
1. 介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少两点)
2. 简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法;
3. 请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Good morning, dear friends!
My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. I regularly attend online classes given by our expert teachers, through which I can not only acquire basic knowledge but also interact with the teacher and discuss with my classmates in time. Besides, the Internet is also an efficient channel for me to practice my listening and speaking abilities in English.
From where I stand, online learning is rewarding as long as it is made full of, which brings me much convenience and confidence.
Would you be so kind as to share your ideas about learning English online with us? It will be hopeful and meaningful.
Thank you.
【满分范文】
【2022年广东一模】
假定你是李华,正在准备明天英语课堂的“一分钟汇报”。你打算讲述你们小组上周获得学校表彰的研究项目“Interviewing Older Generations about Their Lifestyles”,内容包括:
1. 项目的目的;2. 项目成功的经验; 3. 你的祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【参考范文】
Dear fellow classmates,
With joint effort of our group, our project “Interviewing Older Generations about Their Lifestyles” turned out to be a huge success. (背景) Here, I’m honored to share our experience in how to carry it out.
Aiming to bridge generation gap and deepen mutual understanding, the project offers us an insight into various lifestyles seniors have. (要点1:项目目的) To conduct an in-depth interview, you’d better make a full preparation in advance, including the lists of interviewees and questions. During the interview, gentle words and soft tone are necessary to encourage the old to open their hearts and share more. Last but not least, don’t forget to organize the collected information and write a report. (要点2:项目经验)
Hopefully, you’ll find our experience useful and be ready to start your own project. (要点3:祝愿)
Thank you!
【2022年八省第一次联考】
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“My dream job”为题写一篇发言稿参赛.内容包括:
1.你的理想工作;
2.你选择的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My dream job
Good morning, everyone.
【参考范文】
My dream job
Good morning, everyone . I feel it an honor to address a speech titled “ My dream job ”.
Of the wide range of jobs around us , I will choose to be a teacher. My mother accounts for my choice first. Her commitment to teaching and happiness of being a teacher motivate me. Additionally, it is the inquisitive faces from my future students that reinforce my idea. At last, I am eager to make a difference to those for whom education is their only ticket to success .
Not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons , but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
Thank you !
7. 邀请信
【写作指导】
1. 审题定位
明确目的:邀请对方参加活动,需清晰说明活动主题、时间、地点及意义。
对象身份:根据收信人身份调整语气(如外教需体现尊重与文化互动,同学可用更亲切表达)。
内容要点:时间地点(必写)、活动内容(必写)、邀请原因/意义(必写)、请求回复(可选)。
2. 结构框架
经典三段式结构:
开头段:自我介绍 + 邀请意图 + 活动基本信息(主题、时间、地点)。
主体段:活动具体内容(亮点) + 邀请原因/意义(文化、教育、情感等)。
结尾段:表达期待 + 请求回复 + 礼貌结束语。
3. 高分关键点
细节具体化:避免笼统描述,用“live demonstrations”“Q&A session”等具体活动名称。
意义升华:从个人到集体、从文化到国际视角递进(如“enhance cultural awareness”“promote global understanding”)。
情感真挚:通过“We would be honored”“Your presence is highly valued”等传递真诚邀请态度。
【句式凝练】
1. 万能高分句型
(1) 开头段
自我介绍 + 邀请意图: On behalf of [团体], I am writing to cordially invite you to...
It is my great pleasure to extend an invitation to you to join...
活动基本信息:The event, themed "[主题]", will take place at [地点] from [时间] to [时间] on [日期].
We have scheduled the activity for [日期], and it will be held in [地点].
(2) 主体段
活动内容:The event will feature [活动1], [活动2], as well as [活动3].
Participants will have the opportunity to [体验内容], which aims to...
邀请原因/意义: What makes this event meaningful is that it serves as a platform for...
Your expertise/participation would undoubtedly add a unique perspective to...
We believe this activity will not only... but also...
(3) 结尾段
表达期待: Your presence would be a great honor for us, and we sincerely hope you could attend.
We would be truly grateful if you could spare some time to join us.
请求回复: Kindly confirm your availability at your earliest convenience.
Please let us know whether you are able to make it by [日期].
3. 复杂句式应用
(1) 定语从句合并短句:
原句:The exhibition will be held next Friday. It will display students’ works.
升级:The exhibition, which will display students’ works, will be held next Friday.
(2) 分词作状语表结果:
The event combines art and technology, thereby creating an immersive experience for attendees.
(3) 强调句突出意义:
It is your expertise that we believe will inspire our students.
(4) 虚拟语气委婉请求:
We would be grateful if you could share your insights with us.
【高考回顾】
(2022·新高考全国Ⅰ卷·高考真题)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Caroline,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m Li Hua, the coordinator of our school’s English radio program "Talk and Talk," which aims to foster cultural exchange through conversations with international guests. We would be delighted to invite you for an interview.
The program, broadcast weekly to over 500 students, features discussions on language learning and cross-cultural experiences. We’ve scheduled the interview for Friday, June 10th (4:00–4:30 PM) in the broadcasting room. The focus would be on your teaching journey in China and cultural comparisons, though we’re flexible to your suggestions.
Your participation would bring unique perspectives to our listeners. Kindly confirm your availability or suggest another time. Thank you for considering this invitation!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
(24-25高三下·湖南长沙·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的美国留学生朋友Frank很喜欢中国文学。请你给他写一封信,邀请他一起去观看下周六将上演的话剧《雷雨》(Thunderstorm)。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.话剧表演的时间、地点以及注意事项;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Frank,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to watch the play “Thunderstorm” next Saturday. It’s a classic Chinese literature adaptation that I think you’d love, given your interest in Chinese culture.
The performance will be at 7:30 pm. at the City Theatre. Please arrive early as seating can get tight. Also, remember to turn off your phone during the show out of respect for the actors and audience. What is also important is that everybody should keep silent all the time.
I’m really looking forward to your company. Please let me know if you can make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文示例(主题:邀请外教参加书法展):
Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of the Art Club, I am writing to sincerely invite you to our Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition, which will take place in the school gymnasium from 3:00 p.m. to 6:00 p.m. this Friday, June 28th.
The event will feature not only a display of classical calligraphy works but also interactive workshops where participants can try brush-writing techniques. Considering your profound understanding of Western art, your presence would bridge cultural gaps and offer students a chance to explore artistic diversity.
We would be truly honored if you could attend. Please inform us of your decision by Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8. 推荐信(申请信)
【写作指导】
1. 文体定位与核心逻辑
文体特殊性:推荐信需兼具 客观性(基于事实)与 说服力(突出优势),避免主观臆断或过度赞美。
逻辑链:
推荐对象(Who)→ 推荐理由(Why)→ 具体优势(What)→ 对方受益(How)
例:推荐同学(对象)→ 领导力强(理由)→ 组织活动成功(优势)→ 助力团队合作(受益)
2. 审题四步法
1. 划关键词:明确推荐类型(人物/事物/活动)、收信人身份(学校/公司/朋友)、核心要求(如“推荐班长候选人”)。
2. 确定语气: 对机构/上级:正式严谨(It is my honor to recommend...)
对朋友/同事:半正式(I am confident that...)
3. 列内容清单:用思维导图列出必答点(推荐对象、优势、证据、受益)。
4. 避题陷阱:防止混淆推荐信与介绍信(需强调“主动推荐”而非“客观描述”)。
3. 段落展开技巧
开头段: 公式:身份/关系(1句) + 明确推荐(1句)
例:As the advisor of the Science Club, I am writing to enthusiastically recommend Li Hua as the ideal candidate for...
主体段:
核心优势:分点说明(每点含“优势+证据”)。
例:Academic Excellence(优势): Ranked top 5% in national chemistry competitions(证据)
对方受益:关联推荐对象与收信人需求。
例:His innovative thinking will contribute to your research team’s breakthroughs.
结尾段: 两步法:重申推荐(1句) + 提供联系方式(1句)
例:I strongly believe Li Hua will exceed your expectations. Feel free to contact me at [email] for further details.
【句式凝练】
1. 高分句型(场景分类)
推荐人物:I have no hesitation in recommending [Name] for...
推荐活动:This program stands out for its unique focus on...
推荐书籍:The book offers profound insights into..., making it an invaluable resource.
强调优势:What distinguishes [Name] is his/her exceptional ability to...
2.倒装句:强调优势
例:Not only does she possess academic brilliance, but she also demonstrates remarkable leadership.
同位语从句:补充说明
例:The fact that he volunteered for 200 hours reflects his compassion.
比喻修辞:增强感染力
例:Her creativity is a spark that ignites innovation in our team.
【高考回顾】
(2021年全国卷) 题目:推荐同学担任国际文化节学生代表
Dear Organizing Committee,
As the president of the Student Union, I am honored to recommend Zhang Wei as the student representative for the International Culture Festival.
Zhang Wei possesses three outstanding qualities. Firstly, her multilingual skills (fluent in English and Spanish) enable effective communication. Secondly, she organized last year’s festival, attracting over 1,000 participants. Lastly, her cross-cultural awareness, cultivated through exchange programs, ensures respectful dialogue.
Her expertise will undoubtedly enhance the festival’s global appeal. For any inquiries, please contact me at union@school.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游,让你推荐个城市,你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封推荐信,内容包括:
1.推荐城市;
2.推荐理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday.Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.
When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is WestLake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years. Besides, there aremany tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring,The Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway. Most importantly,Hangzhou is home to delicious food, such as Dongpo Pork and Longjing Shrimp.
I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make yourtrip more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
9. 建议信
【写作指导】
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力,通常包括:
1. 说明写信目的;
2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;
3. 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
【句式凝练】
1、 建议信-开头:引出建议背景/缘由
句型1得知你……(遇到的问题/情况),特提供建议—Learning that you’re facing + 具体问题(如difficulty in memorizing English words/trouble adapting to the new school life), I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions.
得知你在准备雅思阅读时遇到时间不够用的问题,特提供建议,翻译:Learning that you’re facing the problem of running out of time when preparing for IELTS Reading, I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions.
句型2就……(事项),想和你分享一些建议—Regarding + 相关事项(如your plan to study abroad/improving your public speaking skills), I’d like to share some suggestions with you
就你提升英语口语流利度的计划,想和你分享一些建议,翻译:Regarding your plan to improve the fluency of your oral English, I’d like to share some suggestions with you.
二、建议信-主体:提出具体建议+说明理由
句型3核心建议:建议你……,因为……—First of all, I strongly suggest that you (should) + 具体行动(如practice listening for 20 minutes every day/join a study group), because + 理由(如it can help you build a sense of language/you can learn from classmates’ strengths).
建议你每天用英语写5句日记,因为能帮你灵活运用所学语法和词汇,翻译:First of all, I strongly suggest that you (should) write 5 English sentences in a diary every day, because it can help you flexibly use the grammar and vocabulary you’ve learned.
句型4 补充建议:另一个实用方法是……,这能让你……—Another practical tip is to + 具体行动(如watch English short videos without subtitles/read simple English stories), which allows you to + 好处(如improve your listening comprehension step by step/expand your vocabulary in a fun way).
另一个实用方法是每周和外教聊一次天,这能让你克服“开口恐惧”并熟悉地道表达,翻译:Another practical tip is to chat with the foreign teacher once a week, which allows you to overcome the “fear of speaking” and get familiar with authentic expressions.
句型5针对细节的建议:考虑到……,你可以尝试……—Considering that + 具体情况(如you are busy with homework on weekdays/you prefer visual learning), you could try + 具体行动(如focus on English reading on weekends/using mind maps to organize grammar points).
考虑到你周末时间较充裕,你可以尝试精读一篇英语新闻,积累高频写作素材,翻译:Considering that you have more free time on weekends, you could try intensive reading of one English news article to accumulate high-frequency writing materials.
三、建议信-结尾:表达期待/礼貌收尾
句型6希望建议有帮助,期待你的进步—I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you, and I’m looking forward to seeing your progress in + 相关领域(如English learning/the new school life).
希望这些建议对你提升数学解题能力有帮助,期待你的进步,翻译:I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you in improving your math problem-solving skills, and I’m looking forward to seeing your progress.
句型7若有疑问,可随时联系我—If you have any questions about the suggestions above, please feel free to contact me.
若对上述提升写作的建议有疑问,可随时联系我,翻译:If you have any questions about the above suggestions for improving writing, please feel free to contact me.
【回顾高考】
(2025年全国一卷)
假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:(1)你的选择;(2)说明理由。
Sample 1
Learning that you have proposed two options for our class English newspaper, I'm writing to express my preference for "Fun at my school". I'd like to give you some reasons.
To begin with, this option provides an opportunity for students to show diverse aspects of campus life through creative formats like short stories or photos. Additionally, it is beneficial for classmates to discover hidden talents by sharing unique experiences, which contributes to fostering a better understanding. What's more, you might as well organize a writing contest titled Funniest School Moment, which enables participants to enhance their English skills
I hope my suggestion will be helpful. If you need further discussion, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Sample 2
Thank you for asking me how to choose between the two column proposals. It is highly recommended that you prioritize "Fun at My School". The following are some reasons.
To begin with, it allows students to show their diverse campus life through creative formats like short stories or photos. Additionally, organizing a writing contest titled Funniest School Moment is also of benefit.Not only can this enable participants to enhance their English skills, but it is also beneficial for classmates to discover hidden talents by sharing unique experiences. What's more, it is a wonderful idea to feature student-submitted content regularly. Because there is something to be said for empowering learners' significant engagement.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great help to you. I'm sure you can finalize the column selection before long.
【满分范文】
(24-25高三下·山东潍坊·开学考试)假设你是李华,你的英国好友 Jim 准备参加中国文化网举办的“Sharing China”春节文化影像展全球作品征集活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.拍摄内容建议;
2.简要说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re going to enter the Spring Festival Image Exhibition. I would like to give some advice.
It’s a good idea to take pictures of dragon and lion dances in Chinatown. These dances, performed to drive away evil spirits and welcome in prosperous times, offer a glimpse into the festive atmosphere of Spring Festival. Alternatively, you can consider capturing a scene of family members making jiaozi together. Nothing is better at displaying the essence of Spring Festival — family reunions. I’m confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.
Hope you can get some inspiration! Feel free to ask me if you need further help.
Yours,
Li Hua
10. 感谢信
【写作指导】
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。通常写作结构为:
第一段:点明写信目的,表达感谢;
第二段:描述事件经过;
第三段:再次表示感谢,表达回报的决心。
【句式凝练】
黄金结构
Paragraph 1: 聚焦式感谢
公式:情感动词+具体事件+文化收获例句:
Words fail to express how grateful I am for your family's warm reception during the architectural boat tour on the Chicago River, which unveiled the city's glorious history.
Paragraph 2: 细节化回忆
公式:感官描写(视觉/味觉/听觉)+文化洞察例句:
The moment I tasted the gooey deep-dish pizza while listening to blues music at Buddy Guy's Legends, I truly grasped Chicago's soul as a cultural melting pot.
Paragraph 3: 过渡性邀请
公式:文化呼应+具体方案例句:
Just as you introduced me to Chicago's "Bean" sculpture, I long to guide you through the Summer Palace's marble boat—a poetic dialogue between Eastern and Western architectures.
Paragraph 4: 礼仪性结尾
公式:重申感谢+开放邀请例句:
Once again, my deepest appreciation for turning my winter break into an enlightening journey. My home in Beijing will always welcome you with steaming jasmine tea and stories of the Silk Road.
1、首段常用语
① I am writing to express my thanks to you for your great efforts to ...
我写信的目的是感谢您为 ...... 所付出的巨大努力。
② I'm so grateful to you for your encouragement and I'm writing to tell you that I have made great progress in ...
我写信想要感谢您的鼓励,并且告诉您我在 ...... 方面取得了巨大进步。
③ I'm writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care, without which I wouldn't ...
我写信是感谢您对我的帮助和关心,没有您的帮助和关心,我不会 ......。
2、主体部分常用语
① What I should do now is ... When I become economically independent in the future, I will ...
我现在该做的是 ...... 今后我经济独立时,我会 ...... 。
② Without your guidance, I couldn't ... In spite of your busy schedule, you set aside a few days to help me. Besides, ... you recommended are of great help to me.
没有您的指导,我不可能...... 尽管您的日程很紧,您还是抽出了几天的时间来帮我。此外,您推荐的 ...... 对我帮助很大。
3、结尾常用语
① Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and we will remember them forever.
没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远将其铭记于心。
② Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you!
我再次对您表示衷心的感谢!
【高考回顾】
(2021·天津·高考真题)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
(1) 表示感谢并问候;
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情;
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation.
Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
2.(2020·全国·高考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介;
2. 指导内容;
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.
Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
3.(2019·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;3. 临别祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
(2023年四川成都·高三石室中学测试)假定你是李华,得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学(University of Oxford)录取,请给他写一封英文邮件,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;
3.美好祝愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Frank,
Good news travels fast! Please accept my hearty congratulation on your graduation from senior school and admission to University of Oxford.
I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success. I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” It is a reward for your diligence and persistence. Your success is also a great encouragement to me to study harder and I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.
I believe it will be a new beginning and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2023·重庆市万州二高高三校考阶段练习)假定你是李华,外教Smith 邀请你本周日陪他去大明湖游玩,但你因故不能前往。请你写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.感谢邀请;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________、
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Smith,
Thank you for inviting me to go to Daming Lake with you this Sunday. However, I am afraid that I could not manage it, because there will be an important test next Monday.
With tons of notes to go through, I can hardly squeeze any time for the trip this weekend. I wonder if it is possible that we reschedule it for another time.Will next Sunday suit you?Please let me know whether you are available. I hope this will not bring you too much inconvenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
11. 调查报告
【写作指导】
首段:简单介绍一下背景信息,如什么活动。
中段:活动的过程。重点介绍整个活动的过程,中间主体部分很重要,由于面对的是全体师生,要有读者意识,将活动写的生动而真实。
尾段:收获与感想,这个点也可以适当放在中间部分,总之整篇文章要将两个要点涵盖。
【句式凝练】
一、开头
1.Campus Top Ten Singers Competition, whose theme was to enrich school life and give full play to youth as well as their positive outlook, was launched last weekend.
校园十大歌手大赛于上周末启动,其主题是丰富学校生活,充分发挥年轻人和他们的积极态度。
2.Organized by our school, all the students paid a visit to the farm on the morning of October 1st, aiming to savor the experience of nature and broaden their horizons.10月1日上午,我校组织全体同学参观了农场,体验自然,开阔视野。
3.On arriving at the destination, students, guided by the owner, were taken to admire the breathtaking beautyof various plants, followed bya quiz about distinguishing the name of the plants.
到达目的地后,在厂主的带领下,学生们被带着欣赏各种植物令人惊叹的美丽,然后进行分辨这些植物名称的小测验。
4.To enhance mutual understanding, today we had an online class with our sister school in the UK , introducing our traditional festivals to each other .
为了增进相互了解,今天我们与英国的姐妹学校进行了在线课程,介绍了我们的传统节日。
5.In order to enrich our campus life , our school organized a 5 km cross - country running race last Sunday .为了丰富我们的校园生活,我校于上周日组织了一场5公里越野跑比赛。
6.An activity , whose theme was protecting the environment / with the theme of protecting the environment , was held by the Students ' Union .
学生会举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。
7.Last Friday afternoon, we...
上周五,我们......
1. As is reported...据报道......‘
二、中间段
1.As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours.
2.It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end.
3.The activity was so popular with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them.
4. After a while, some students were so tired that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates.
5. The competition started at 7 p.m. and lasted two hours.→ The competition which started at 7 p.m. lasted two
hours.
6. After the heated competition, the student who gave superb performance was presented an award by our head teacher.
7. Looking at these pictures, all people realized the importance of protection and they all said they would do whatever they can to protect --- and to make the oceans cleaner.
8. The class meeting, which is composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother.
9. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply.
10.Representatives of each class took an active part in the competition.
11. Participants were required to prepare an English classic poem to recite within 5 minutes.
12. At last, competitors who were good at both voice control and emotional expression reached the final.
13. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
14. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
15. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finishing line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
16、Every runner was trying their best, with their classmates giving them help and encouragement all the way.
三、结尾段
1.Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
在整个活动中,我被世界上存在的令人难以置信的植物所震惊,我了解了用于医疗目的的植物,以及那些为动物提供食物和住所的植物。
2.It was through this activity that we fully realized thatthe awareness of respecting the old should be raised .
正是通过这次活动,我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
3.Undoubtedly, the activity proved meaningful and beneficial, which helped the students involved in to know the society better and how to help people around.
毫无疑问,这项活动被证明是有意义和有益的,这帮助参与的学生更好地了解社会,以及如何帮助周围的人。
4.It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised .
正是通过这次活动,我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
5.By participating in the activity, not only did the students have a better understanding of modern agriculture but also broadened our horizons and raise students’ awareness of green life as well.
通过参与这个活动,学生不仅对现代农业有了更好的了解,而且拓宽了我们的视野,提高了学生对绿色
生活的认识。
【高考回顾】
【2023年浙江1月卷】上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:1. 活动的过程;2. 收获与感想。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
___________________________________________________________________________________________________Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about
plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【满分范文】
【湖北省十堰市2024-2025学年高三上学期1月期末】假定你是李华,上周你校举办了环保知识竞赛。请你写一篇英语报道,发表在校刊《英语角》专栏,内容包括:1. 知识竞赛情况介绍;2. 你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Exciting Environmental Knowledge Contest
___________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文:
An Exciting Environmental Knowledge Contest
Last week, our school held an exciting environmental knowledge contest, which attracted numerous participants from different grades. The contest consisted of various challenging questions related to environmental protection, testing students’ awareness and understanding of eco-friendly practices.
The atmosphere was tense yet lively as students eagerly answered the questions. It was heartening to see everyone so engaged and passionate about the environment. Personally, I found the contest extremely educational and inspiring. It not only broadened my knowledge but also reminded me of the importance of preserving our planet. Such events should be held regularly to enhance our environmental awareness.
12. 咨询回复信
【写作指导】
咨询回复信恰好与咨询信相反,是指收到来信人对某方面的信息感兴趣或有疑问,希望了解详细信息或征求建议,从而进行回复的信件。写咨询回复信时,需注意三点:1. 回信具体、及时;2. 所咨询的信息/ 问题一一回答;3. 所给出的信息准确无误。通常包括三部分内容:
开篇(第一段):引出话题,说明写作目的
正文(第二段):针对问题给出答复或提出建议,并说明原因
结尾(第三段):提出期望或祝愿
【句式凝练】
一、引出话题
1. I’ m glad to learn that ... 我很高兴得知......
2. In your last letter, you have asked me about ... and I am writing back to reply you on that matter. 在你的上次来信中,你问我关于......的事情,我这次回信会对那个问题作出答复。
3. As for your last letter asking about ..., I’ m more than delighted to tell you something in detail. 对于你在上次来信询问的......, 我非常乐意告诉你一些细节。
4. I’ m writing to answer the questions mentioned in your last letter. 我写信是为了回答你一封信中提到的问题。
5. Delighted to know you have great interested in ..., I’ m writing to inform you of some relevant information. 我很高兴地得知你对......有着浓厚的兴趣,我写信告诉你一些相关信息。
6. Knowing / Learning that you are interested in ..., I would like to / I am writing to share with you some details. 得知你对......感兴趣,我写这封信是想和你分享一些相关信息。
二、回答所咨询问题
1. Regarding to your question in your last letter, I think / think ... 对于你上次来信时所提到的问题,我认为/ 相信......
2. Here is some relevant information that you are deeply concerned about. 下面是你非常关心的相关信息。
三、提出建议
1. In my opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action. 在我看来,拟采取以下行动是明智的。
四、提出期望
1. I will be very glad if you think ... 如果你觉得......我将非常高兴。
2. If you want to know any other information, please don’t hesitate to contact me. 如果您还想了解其他信息,请尽管联系我。
3. Hopefully what I mentioned above can be of some help to you. 希望我上面提到的能对你有所帮助。
4. Wish you a good trip in China. 祝你的中国之行旅途愉快。
5. Hopefully, you’ ll come to China and experience it yourself one day. 希望有一天你能来中国亲自体验一下。
【高考回顾】
(2018年全卷III)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:
1. 学校的体育场馆;
2. 主要的运动项目;
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to learn that you’ re interested in our school’s sports activities. Since sports are important for students’ health, our school has built a large playground and a gym where there are all kinds of sports equipment. We do morning exercises every day and take PE classes very week. What’ s more, we play various sports after class. Most of us like playing basketball, volleyball and table tennis. As for me, football is my favourite. I’m a member of the school football team and we practice it regularly. I hope you like it too and we can play together some day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry 将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 到达时间;
2. 合适的礼物;
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
Hearing that you’ re invited to a Chinese friend’ s home, I’ m delighted to tell you some information about Chinese customs. Firstly, make sure to arrive on time, or a bit earlier. If you’ d like to bring a gift, fruit is usually a good choice. At the dinner table, it’ s appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating. But if they insist that you start first, just go ahead. Sometimes the host offers guests more food than they need. In that case, it’ s OK to let them know you are full.
Enjoy your visit.
Yours,
Li Hua
13. 道歉信
【写作指导】
道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。
通常包括以下三部分内容:
1. 开门见山,表明写信目的,表示歉意。
2. 说明出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施。
3. 再次致歉,请求原谅,希望得到理解(语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实)。
【句式凝练】
1.I’m terribly/awfully sorry I couldn’t...
十分抱歉我不能……
2.It is much to my regret that...
我感到很遗憾……
3.I feel it a great pity to...
我感到非常遗憾……
4.I have no choice but to say sorry to you.
我别无选择,只能向你道歉。
5.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning?
无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗?
6.Shall we put it off till...?
我们把它推迟到……好吗?
7.Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再次道歉。
8.Will you please accept my apologies?
请你接受我的道歉,好吗?
9.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
我由衷地希望你能宽容地接受我的歉意。
10.Once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
1. 高频词汇升级
基础表达:sorry → apologize sincerely, deeply regret, feel awful about
原因说明:because → due to, owing to, on account of
补救措施:make up for → compensate for, take measures to, rectify the situation
2. 高分句型模板
开头句:
Please accept my heartfelt apology for...
I am writing to express my deepest regret for...
解释原因:
Unfortunately, I was unable to... because of an unexpected situation.
To be honest, it was entirely my fault that...
补救措施:
To make amends, I would like to...
I promise this will never happen again, and I will...
结尾句:
Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
I sincerely hope you can forgive my carelessness.
3. 衔接词优化 逻辑衔接:To begin with, / Furthermore, / Most importantly...
【高考回顾】
(2016年新课标III卷高考真题)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2014·北京·高考真题)你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括:
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2.由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意: 1.词数不少于50.
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
Do you remember our plan? We planned to visit Yunnan in July. But now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Joe
3.(2013·山东·高考真题)假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件:
1.未及时回信的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)
注意:1. 词数:120-150;
2 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.
Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.
I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
(24-25高三上·重庆·期中)假设你是李华,因为个人原因,无法按时提交外教 Mr Black 布置的英文名著读书报告,特给他发送一封电子邮件道歉,要点如下:
1. 表达歉意并解释原因。
2. 提出补救措施。
3. 希望得到谅解。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Black,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Black,
I am writing to convey my heartfelt apologies for the delay in submitting my reading report on the English literature masterpieces on time. A sudden illness that struck me last week led to this delay.
Feeling a lot better now, I am eager to make it right. I will devote myself to working on it in the following couple of days, and I assure you that a thorough analysis and detailed reflection of the classics will be included in my assignment. I plan to finish it by next Friday morning and email it to you immediately.
I deeply regret any inconvenience this may have caused and hope you can understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作
点评
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry that I won’t be able to go hiking with you this Saturday.I began to cough yesterday morning,so I went to see a doctor.She told me it was a bad cold,and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.
I’d really like to spend some time with you.Is it OK with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday?It’s one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics.Please let me know what you think.
Once again,I’m sorry about the inconvenience caused.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.文章开篇表明写作意图,表达歉意,使用了道歉信的套语:I am sorry that I won’t...。随后解释不能赴约的原因,使用了so构成的并列句和省略that 的宾语从句。
2.书信的主体部分提出了补救措施,再次相约。使用了复杂结构:if引导的条件状语从句,以及what引导的宾语从句。
3.信的结尾使用了道歉信的套语:Once again,I’m sorry about the inconvenience caused.再次道歉以表达其诚意。
4.最后表达希望。
14. 祝贺信
【写作指导】
在英语中,祝贺信使用频率很高。遇到重大的喜庆节日,如圣诞节、新年、婚礼和生日等等,亲友间要写祝贺信。亲友晋升、毕业、考试成功或出国留学时也要写祝贺信。祝贺信相对而言是比较容易写的,用词亲切有礼、表达出真诚的喜悦感情。祝贺信审题:写作要求会直接点出对方所获奖励或成就,让你表示祝贺;时态以一般现在时为主,语态以主动语态为主。
具体写作步骤:第一部分:表明祝贺事由,对对方的成就表示祝贺。
第二部分:展开评论事件,包括对方过去的努力及其优点。
第三部分:表达自己的愿望或再次表达祝贺。
【句式凝练】
(1 )I am much delighted to learn that…/I have learned with great delight that...很高兴得知...
(2 )This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.
这是一个特殊的时刻、一个高兴的时刻,我为你的成就而感到骄傲。
(3 )I believe this position will be a new beginning, a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a
brilliant future career.
我相信这是一个新的开始,这个机会将使你拥抱一个充实的生活、并为你将来的灿烂未来打下基础。
(4 )Please accept my most sincere congratulations。请接受我最诚挚的祝福!
(5) I would like to extend to you my congratulations on your success。我想要对你的成功表达我的祝贺。
(6) I know this is surely the result of your diligence and intelligence.我知道这一定是你的勤奋和天赋的结果。
(7) It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest。你赢得比赛对于我而言丝毫不奇怪。
开头常用句式:
1.It was exciting news for me to learn of..
2.Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on ...
3.It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on ..
4.I am really happy to learn that you have been elected as……
5.Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to..
结尾常用句式:
1.Wish you good luck!
2.We wish to share your honor and joy.
3.I wish you success and fulfillment in the coming years .
4.All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
5.Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
其他常用句式:
1.Good news travels fast!
2.It was a splendid performance / a great triumph。
3.I only want to let you know how happy I am for you.
4.It is with the greatest pleasure that I offer you my sincerest congratulations on your …
【高考回顾】
假如你是李华,你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1)祝贺他获奖;2)肯定他付出的努力;3)询问何时方便,在网上切磋棋艺。
注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
【品读范文】
Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.
“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest. Finally, you succeeded in wining the online competition!
So I’m so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.
Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom在汉语书法比赛(the Chinese calligraphy competition)中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件,以表祝贺。内容包括:1.写邮件目的;2.表示祝贺;3.赠送书法教学书。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning first prize in the Chinese calligraphy competition.
I’m amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it is difficult for a foreigner to write Chinese characters so well. It’s your devotion and diligence that contribute to the success. And I’d like to give you a Chinese calligraphy teaching book, which contains the copies of the masterpieces of Wang Xizhi, a famous calligraphist in ancient China. I hope it could help you make more progress in the future.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
假定你是李华,得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University),他来自贫困地区,是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信,要点如下:1. 考上理想大学,父母骄傲;2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务;3. 对未来祝福。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
【答案】Dear Wang qiang,
Congratulations! I have learned with delight that you are admitted to Peking University, your ideal one! I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so I’m truly happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success.
This is a new start for you and it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. I wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter在你校为留学生举办的中文诗歌大赛中获奖。请你给他写一封邮件,告知获奖事宜,并对他表示祝贺。内容包括:1.祝贺获奖;2.评价诗歌内容;3.期待更多作品。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm writing to inform you that your poem in Chinese has won the first place in the International Students, Chinese Poem Competition held by our school. Congratulations!
I have read your poem, which not only reflects your knowledge of Chinese language and your love for Chinese culture, but is also full of unique and creative thinking. Therefore, the first time I read your poem, I was deeply impressed by the inspirational lines and I read it three times in a row. Additionally, I hear that all the award-winning poems will be included in our school's Excellent Poetry Collection.
You are indeed a great poem writer, and I sincerely hope you can create more poems for us to read.Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
15. 求助信
【写作指导】
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。注意语气委婉真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。通常包括三部分内容:
开篇(第一段):表明写信目的,请求帮助
正文(第二段):说明缘由,陈述需求助的具体内容
结尾(第三段):表达感谢,希望得到帮助
【句式凝练】
(一)写信的目的
1.I’m writing to ask for your help.
我写信的目的是希望得到您的帮助。
2.I’m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.
我写信是想问您能否帮助我。
3.Sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I’m in desperate need of your help.
很抱歉打扰您,但我有些困难迫切需要您的帮助。
4.I have some difficulties in doing ... which bothers me a lot. I am wondering whether you could do me a favor.
我在做......方面有困难,这很困扰我。我想知道您能否帮助我。
(二)求助事项
1.Recently, I’ve been having many difficulties in ..., and I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
最近,我在......上遇到了一些困难,我别无选择,只能向您求助。
2.We will be grateful if you can give us some advice on ...
如果您能在......上给我们提供建议,我们将不胜感激。
3.I find it extremely hard for me to ...
我发现......对我来说太难了。
4.I’m dying for your effective advice to address these problems.
我渴望得到您的有效建议来解决这些问题。
5.What bothers me most is that it’s difficulty for me to ...
最困扰我的是我很难......
(三)表达感谢
1.I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and spare some time for ...
如果您能花点时间帮助我......,我将不胜感激。
2.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
谢谢您的关注,期待收到您尽早的恢复。
3.I’m eager to get your timely help. / I’m eager for your timely help.
我渴望得到您的及时帮助。
4.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some timely help.
如果您能向我提供一些及时的帮助,我将不胜感激。
5.I would appreciate it very much if you can give / lend me some practical advice.
如果您能给我一些切实可行的建议,我将不胜感激。
【高考回顾】
【2021年全国甲卷】假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Recently our school is planning to hold a theme class meeting to introduce traditional Chinese cultures,which will be posted on some English websites. Therefore,I’m wondering what kind of traditional Chinese cultures attracts you foreigners most.
As you know,choosing the cultures that most foreigners are interested in may trigger(引起)more people to learn about Chinese cultures. Our current plan is to introduce traditional Chinese festivals, operas and paper cutting. But that’s not our final decision, which is why I’m writing to you.
Looking forward to your early reply and any suggestion is welcome. Thanksin advance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2020年全国卷III】
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短句。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans,
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
I am Li Hua from your English class.I’m writing to ask for your guidance onadapting a short play for the English Festival next month. We’re interested in one story from our English textbook, The Million Pound Bank Noteby Mark Twain. It is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen. Could you please give us some advice onhow to make dialogues based on the story?
Would it be possible for us to meetin our classroom at 5 p. m. this Friday? Thank you for your kindness!
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
1.(2024年模拟题)假定你是李华,本学期你校开设了英语口语课,但是你不太适应外教的授课。你决定给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件,寻求他的帮助。要点包括:
1.告知困难;
2.寻求帮助。
参考范文:
Dear Andrew,
How is everything going? I’m writing to seek your advice as I’m struggling to adapt to my new oral English class taught by a foreign teacher.
The main problem lies in the teaching pace. Our teacher speaks at native speed and seldom simplifies complex expressions, leaving me struggling to catch up. Additionally, group discussions often involve abstract topics like modern art and philosophical ideas, which I find challenging due to limited vocabulary. To make matters worse, I feel too intimidated to ask questions in front of the whole class.
Could you share some strategies to improve my listening comprehension? Any tips on quickly expanding my topic - related vocabulary or overcoming speaking anxiety would be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your insights!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【2025年广东二模】假定你是李华,你班计划组织首次野外徒步活动,请给酷爱户外运动的外教Mr.Green写邮件,内容包括: 1. 活动筹备情况; 2. 请求专业指导。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Green,
Best regards,
Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Mr. Green,
I hope this email finds you well. Our class is organizing its first hiking trip and we’d love your expertise to ensure its success.
We’ve chosen a beginner-friendly trail in Green Valley, scheduled for May 15th. Basic preparations—route research, packing lists (maps, first-aid kits, water/snacks), and group assignments—are complete. However, as novices, we’d greatly value your professional input. Could you kindly review our plan for safety and practicality? We’d also appreciate tips on pacing or essential gear checks.
Your experience would make this adventure both safe and memorable. Please let us know if you can join or advise. Thank you!
Best regards,
Li Hua
16. 慰问信
【写作指导】
段落布局1.表示安慰;2. 提出建议或措施;3. 表达愿望或祝福。
慰问信是向遇到挫折、失败、生病、愁苦等的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类书信感情要真诚、尽量以乐观的口吻减轻遭受者的烦恼和痛苦,并鼓励对方对日后的生活或学习充满信心。
【句式凝练】
1. I was (awfully/extremely/excessively) sorry to hear/learn that you’re trapped in bad mood, which is because you didn’t make it in the driving test.
2. I just can’t tell you how sorry I was when I was informed of your sudden illness in your new school.
3. I’m sorry to learn you’re having difficulty learning ancient Chinese poems. However, there’s no need to feel upset about it. I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
4. Having known that you are under painful state and great pressure now, I’m writing to express my great comfort to you.
5. Upon/On hearing the bad news that ..., I felt seized by a burst of sadness/worry/sorrow/grief.
6. 无灵主语句 My sorrow is beyond words for hearing you have trouble getting along with your classmates.
7. 无灵主语句Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that your left leg got badly injured in an car accident.
8. It’s normal that you feel it challenging to fit in with the new school due to cultural difference and new surroundings.
9. It can’t be better if you can share your experiences with others, thus helping them become familiar with you in a short period of time.
10. Actually, there’s no need to worry about it. Such problem is not uncommon among Chinese language learners.
11. If there is anything you need me to do, don’t hesitate to let me know/don’t hesitate to contact me.
12. Remember, I won’t be far away/I will always be here if you need any help!
13. I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes.
14. If I can be of any assistance to you, I hope you’ll let me know immediately/instantly.
15. Hope you can have yours troubles removed soon.
16. We’re hoping for your quick return to health./We’re looking forward to your speedy and full recovery.
【满分范文】
假定你是李华,你班来自美国的交换生Peter生病住院了。请给他发封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示关心 2.提供帮助 3.祝愿康复。
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you had your leg severely injured accidentally in the football match, I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you.
How is your leg? You must have suffered from the unbearable pain when the accident happened. But you were brave enough not to let out a cry, which is admirable. To our relief, you have been discharged from(discharge v. 通知出院)the hospital and are recovering well at home. As for the lessons you have missed, I am willing to help you make them up.
I wish you a speedy recovery.
Best,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信说他现在心情很不好,因为在上周结束的校篮球比赛中,他所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。请你给他写一封信,内容如下:1. 表示安慰;2. 提出建议。
Dear Mike,
I’m very sorry to hear that your team lost the basketball match last weekend. It’s understandable for you to be in a bad mood. However, if you can adopt different perspectives, the loss may be a blessing.
First, it’s normal to lose in a basketball match, for you can either win or lose.【If you’ve tried your best, why not lift your spirits to face up to the result?】Anyway, the essence of competition lies not in victory but in participation. Besides, you can also benefit from your loss by figuring out your strengths and weaknesses.
I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你叫李华,你的澳洲朋友David参加汉语水平考试(HSK)未能通过。请你写一封信给他,
内容包括: 1. 表示安慰; 2. 提出建议。
Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.
As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really count. Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.
Good luck next time.
Yous,
Li Hua
17. 投诉信
【写作指导】
第一段
自我介绍,表明投诉这次服务。
第二段
写明投诉原因,陈述问题,说明影响。
第三段
阐述要求,并表示自己期望回复。
【句式凝练】
表达不满:express/voice/convey my dissatisfaction/disappointment at/with your service
抱怨/投诉:complain about/make a complaint about the unpleasant dining experience03
投诉内容:描述问题:only to find // be oflow quality // poor service/bad manners
描述自己的失望:fall to live up to my expectations // ... far from satisfactory
描述问题对自己的不好影响:bring much inconvenience to me // bother me alot
没有保留预定位置:there served table was not available
食物不新鲜:The dishes that were far from fresh and lacked inviting flavor
服务员态度不好:The waiters show us no friendly/amiable/cordial attitude
妥善处理:
全额退款:claim a full refund / get my money back as compensation for my terrible experience
真诚道歉:offer asincere apology
调查事件:look into/investigate the incident
说明问题句式:
What is beyond acceptance is that ... // which is more than I could bear / tolerate//, which contributed to my great annoyance. // worse still, ...
【满分范文】
(22年镇海中学一模)假定你是李华,你和家人住在向Mr.Smith 租的房子里。你对一些家具的状况不满意,且曾向房东反馈无果。
请给Mr.Smith 写一封信,内容包括:1.自我介绍,2.指出问题,3.期待解决。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, your renter from Flat 3 on Riverside Street and I'm writing to lodge/register/make/raise a complaint about the furniture.
Upon moving into the house, I noticed several scratches on the leather sofa. Worse still,one of the worn sofa's legs somehow broke, so now we could only sit on the floor while watching TV, which affects our daily routine. If convenient, please replace the broken sofa with a new one as long as it works well.
As I got no answer to my previous complaint on WhatsApp, I sincerely look forward to your reply and hope some effective measures will be taken.
Yours,
Li Hua
18. 经理感受信
【写作指导】
经历感受就是把已经发生的事情叙述出来并加上个人的感想。常考的话题有参加某场活动的记录或某次经历的叙述。以一般过去时为主,按事情发展的先后顺序来进行讲述。通常包括三部分内容:
开篇(第一段):事情发生的时间和地点
正文(第二段):发生的经过和结果
结尾(第三段):对事物的看法或个人感受
【句式凝练】
一、引入话题
1. Last weekend, I participated with ... in ..., which turned out to be fruitful and meaningful.
上周末,我与......一起参加了......,事实证明是富有成果和有意义的。
2. I can never forget that afternoon in ..., from which I’ve learned that ...
我永远不会忘记那个下午,从中我学会了......
3. It was an unforgettable experience that happened during my first year in high school.
那是一段难忘的经历,发生在我高中的第一年。
二、说明事件
1. As soon as we ..., what came into sight was / were ...
我们一到达......,就看到了......
2. Once there was a ...
从前,有一个......
3. Early in the morning, we gathered at the school gate and went to that village by school bus.
一大早,我们在校门口集合,坐校车去了那个村庄。
三、对事物的看法/ 个人感受
1. Through this activity, we have a better understanding of ...
通过这次活动,我们可以更好的了解......
2. As long as we have the courage to face our failure and make up our mind to deal with it, we are actually winners in life.
只要我们有勇气面对失败并且下决心去解决它,我们实际上是人生的赢家。
3. Therefore, we should ... and make efforts to ...
因此,我们应该......,并努力去......
4. From this experience, I realized that ..., which not only ..., but also ...
从这次经历中,我意识到......,这不仅......,而且......
5. Though tired and exhausted, we all regarded ... as a good way of ...
尽管疲惫不堪,我们都认为......是......的一种好方法。
【高考回顾】
【2020年全国卷II】上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1. 农场情况;
2. 采摘过程;
3. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
【参考范文】
My Weekend
Last weekend, our whole class participated in a picking activity, which turned out to be fruitful and meaningful. We set off from school and as soon as we arrived at the farm, what came into sight were different varieties of green fresh vegetables and fruit trees. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, and the other packing them up.
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of how hard the farmers’ work, and we should treasure whatever comes from the farmlands and make efforts to make the world better.
【2020年7月天津卷】假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你与今晚给Chris回一封电子邮电,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
1. 成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
2. 对活动的感受;
3. 对自己未来的展望。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony 新冠肺炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you. In response to your last letter in which you showed great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held in our school on June 8th, I’m writing to briefly introduced it to you.
In this ceremony,not only did we look back on what we had gone through over the past three years, but also we watched touching videos about how our schoolmates fought against the COVID-19. Excitement and admiration welled up within me.
I hope I can shoulder responsibility as an adult and face challenges just like our brave and selfless schoolmates in the future.
【2021年6月浙江卷】昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英语报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1. 展览时间、地点;
2. 观展感受;
3. 推荐观展。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! Aiming at promoting Chinese culture, a students’ traditional Chinese painting exhibition is held by our school in the library from May 30thto June 5th.
As someone who visited the exhibition yesterday, I personally thought it was amazing. It not onlyshowed us different types of painting, but also various tools related to painting, such as brush pens, paper and so on. Apart from displaying, there are many other great activities like a painting knowledge quiz, lectures and games.
It is a visual feast that anyone who’s interested in traditional Chinese painting should not miss.
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