内容正文:
话题作文
Never giving up is the key to success
我命由我不由天!
I am the master of my destiny!
Did Nezha meet any difficulties on the way of fighting?
Did he finally make a success?
Did he meet any difficulties on the way of fighting?
What is the key to success?
Never giving up is the key to success.
习近平总书记在2025年新年贺词中提到梦虽遥,追则能达;愿虽艰,持则可圆。在成长的道路上,是坚持不懈的品质,帮助我们面对挑战,克服困难,实现目标,请你以“Never giving up is the key to success” 为题,写一篇作文。
内容包括:
your idea about never giving up
one of your stories about never giving up
what you have learned from the experience
Topic
Tense(时态)
Person(人称)
simple past tense
the first person
never giving up
初步感知
What difficulties did you meet before?
study
sports
life skills
habits
To improve my reading skill, I kept________________.
I always made mistakes in English reading exercise.
keep doing!
初步感知
I had little interest in sports and often fell ill.
To keep healthy, I kept __________________________.
keep doing!
I was not good at making meals.
To make delicious food, I kept____________.
keep doing!
I met difficulties when I worked on a project with my classmates.
To create the project successfully, I kept____________________.
keep doing!
I always made mistakes when I played the piano.
To play the piano well, I kept____________________.
keep doing!
play the piano
To do list
keep doing sth. / stick to doing sth.
spent + time+ on sth. / in soing sth.
坚持做某事
花费时间做某事
一次又一次
日复一日
over and over again
day by day
三个月之后
3 months later
努力做某事
尽力做某事
make efforts to do sth
try one’s best to do sth
尽可能地...
as ... as possible
To improve my reading skill, I kept reading articles.
I always made mistakes in English reading exercise.
Three months later, ___________________.
I __________________________.(获得了强烈的成就感)
I was not good at making meals.
To make delicious food, I tried my best to learn the skills of cooking.
Finally,____________________________.
I __________________________.(为自己而骄傲)
I had little interest in sports and often fell ill.
To keep healthy, I spent 2 hours running after achool every day.
Gradually, ____________________________________________.
I met difficulties when I worked on a project with my classmates.
Finally, ________________________________________.
keep doing!
To create the project successfully, I made efforts to search the information and kept trying over and over again and again.
I always made mistakes when I played the piano.
To play the piano well, I kept practicing for 2 hours every morning.
keep doing!
In the end, I ___________________________.
To make delicious food, I tried my best to learn the skills of cooking.
To improve my reading skill, I kept reading articles.
diffiuclties
action
result
story
step 2 条分缕析
Last term, I always made mistakes in English reading exercise.
Last year, I was not good at making meals.
when , what
To ...(In order to... ), how
Three months later, my reading ability improved a lot. I got a strong feeling of satisfaction.
Finally, I successfully made a table of delicious food by myself during the Spring Festival. I was really proud of myself.
In the end/Finally/At last...+ what
feeling
杨鱼虫~ (杨) - TO make the story more complete, wo should add some details
why means the purpose of the action
add it between problems and action
language magic
变换句型
(转为时间状语从句)
I always made mistakes in English reading exercise last year.
I always made mistakes in English reading exercise when____________________.
I was in Grade 8
变换句型
Difficulties
(改为定语从句)
I tried my best to______________________________________.
I met a lot of problems while practicing. I tried my best to solve problems.
solve problems I met while practicing
Action
变换句型
I made every effort to understand the articles and wrote down my own understanding of them.
(改为并列句)
On the on hand, I made every effort to understand the articles.
_______________________________________________________.
On the other hand, I wrote down my own understanding of them.
Mr, Lin gives me a lot of help. I worked hard and made a big progress.
(改为同义句)
With_______________ Mr. Lin, I worked hard and made a big progress.
the help of
I was tired. I didn’t give up.
(改为although引导的让步状语从句)
Although ___________, I _____________.
I was tired
didn’t give up
Action
变换句型
Three months later, I could cook meals easily.
(改为同义句)
Three months later, it was _____ for me ________________.
easy
to cook meals
Result
变换句型
diffiuclties
action
result
整合成文
when + what
why + how
what+feeling
(2-3 sentences)
(3-4 sentences)
(2-3 sentences)
gradually/finally/in the end/at last/two months later
get a strong feeling of satisfaction/achievement
It’s+agj. to do sth.
Whta/How 感叹句
Check List stars
Content problem(2-3sentences)
action (3-4sentences)
result (2-3 sentences)
details (feeling)
Language tense
use some phrases to express never giving up
linking words & time-order words
various sentence structures
grammar / spelling / punctuation(标点) errors(错误)
Hand-writing beautiful
Assessment Chart(评价表)
Great
Good
OK
Although we don’t have the superpower like Nezha, we have the same spirit as Nezha.
Trust your hard work and let never giving up be your superpower.
Every small step you take today is leading you to success.
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