Unit 5 Here and Now 写作课件 2024-2025学年人教版英语七年级下册

Unit5 Here and Now 写作指导 Can you read? read--------read a book take--------tak pictures play -------play football fly---------fly a kite listen------listen to music talk--------talk to friends V-ing ing ing ing ing ing ing 复习 开小火车读 复习 复习 What are you doing? I am __________. cleaning the room singing listening to music doing my homework watching TV 复习 What is he doing? He is __________. playing football drinking flying a kite. sleeping doing his homework playing basketball 复习 What is she doing? She is __________. dancing singing eating reading playing ping pong running swimming 复习 What are they doing? They are __________. talking riding a bike having classes jogging watching TV 写作指导 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以结合自己的生活实际适当增加，注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍时间、地点，并引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍正在进行着不同的活动：第三步，书写结语。 三段式文章。 1段：点明时间，引入话题 2段：介绍自己及家人正在做的事情。 3段：表达感受。 书面表达 现在是晚上七点钟，假如你是Grace，请根据以下内容，以“What are my family doing?”为题，用英文写一篇短文，描述你的一家人正在做的活动。 Who What Father Drink tea Mother Clean the room I Listen to music Brother Play games Grandparents Watch TV 作文要求： (1) 不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名。 (2) 语句连贯，词数70 词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入词数。 写作练习 What are my family doing? It’s ___________. My family finished dinner just now. Now we all do our own things. My father ______________. He likes drinking tea. My mother ________the room. She is a tidy woman. My brother _____________. And my grandparents ___________. They like ___________. Guess what I am doing. I ______________________ because I think music can make me relaxed. How busy we are! We are all having a great time. 范文 What are my family doing? It’s seven o’clock. My family finished dinner just now. Now we all do our own things. My father is drinking tea. He likes drinking tea. My mother is cleaning the room. She is a tidy woman. My brother is playing games in his room. And my grandparents are watching TV. They like watching the news. Guess what I am doing. I am listening to music because I think music can make me relaxed. How busy we are! We are all having a great time. 范文 评价标准 中考评分标准：按5个档次给分 A.17—20分 涵盖所有内容要点；运用了较丰富的词汇、语法和句式结构；有 效地使用了语句间的连接成分，且表达清楚，书写规范，达到预期的 写作目标。如果有小错误，是因为运用复杂结构所致。 B.13—16分 涵盖主要内容；语法结构和词汇基本准确，虽有少数错误，但书写 工整规范。 C.9—12分 涵盖基本内容，但句子不太连贯，语法错误多。 D.4—8分 能围绕话题写出几个简单的句子。 E.0—3分 不写或抄写与话题无关的内容不得分，能写出一些与话题有关的词 或短语 感谢观看 $$