2026届高考英语应用文写作——句式训练5（教师版+学生版）

应用文写作——句式训练 句式：…be about to do/be doing/ had done… when… 基本句式结构： 主语 be about to do sth when + 从句（某人正要做某事时，突然…） 主语 be doing sth when + 从句（某人正做某事时，突然…） 主语 had (just) done sth when + 从句（某人刚做完某事时，突然…） 例句： 1. I was reading a book when the doorbell rang. 2. The workers were about to finish the project when they encountered a technical problem. 3. She had completed her presentation when the audience burst into applause. 句式仿写： 1. 我正要交英语作文时，突然发现最后一段有个严重的语法错误。 I was about to hand in my English composition when I noticed a serious grammar mistake in the last paragraph. 2. 我们刚给无家可归者分发完食物，这时一位老妇人紧紧抱住我们，轻声说“上帝保佑你们”。 We had just finished distributing food to the homeless when an old lady hugged us tightly, whispering "God bless you".​ 3. 爷爷正讲着我们家族起源的故事时，奶奶拿出了旧相册，给我们看儿时的照片。 Grandpa had just told the story of our family's origin when Grandma brought out the old photo album to show us childhood pictures.​​ 4. 学生会正要宣布艺术比赛的获奖者时，火警突然响了 The student council was about to announce the winners of the art contest when the fire alarm suddenly went off.​​ 5. 我正抱怨数学作业太难时，哥哥拍了拍我的肩膀说：“挑战会让你更强。” I was complaining about the difficult math homework when my elder brother patted me on the shoulder and said, "Challenge makes you stronger."​​ 6. 我们刚爬到山顶，这时一道彩虹出现，瞬间驱散了所有的疲惫。 We had just arrived at the top of the mountain when a rainbow appeared, making all our tiredness disappear instantly.​​ 7. 我刚要付咖啡钱，这时收银员告诉我一位陌生人已经帮我们付了，还说：“把它传递给下一个人吧。” I was about to pay for my coffee when the cashier told me a stranger had already covered it, saying, “Pay it forward to someone else.”​​ 8. 我们班正为校运会做准备，这时突然下起暴雨，但我们仍笑着完成了彩排。 Our class was preparing for the school sports meet when it suddenly began to pour, but we still finished the rehearsal with laughter.​​ 9. 我们刚打扫完养老院，这时一位老人笑着感谢我们，说我们给他带来了很多快乐。 We had just cleaned up the old people’s home when an elderly man thanked us with a big smile, saying we brought him great joy.​​ 10. ​我刚要因为练琴太难而放弃时，音乐老师对我说：“坚持就是胜利。” I was about to give up practicing the piano because it was too hard when my music teacher said, “Persistence makes perfect.”​​ 高考在线： 1. 全国乙卷（2023 年）“Learning English beyond the classroom” 相关情境 I was about to give up learning English by myself when I joined an English - learning club. There, I met many partners who shared the same goal with me and we encouraged each other. 我正要放弃自学英语时，我加入了一个英语学习俱乐部。在那里，我遇到了许多和我有相同目标的小伙伴，我们相互鼓励。 2. 新高考Ⅰ卷（2022 年）“Sports and fitness” 相关情境例句 The students were doing morning exercises on the playground when it suddenly started to rain. However, they still kept doing simple indoor exercises in the classroom to keep fit. 学生们正在操场上做早操，这时突然开始下雨了。然而，他们仍然在教室里做简单的室内运动来保持健康。 3. 全国甲卷（2021 年）“A Beautiful Campus” 相关情境例句 I was about to leave the campus when I noticed the beautiful sunset over the teaching buildings. It made me more reluctant to leave this wonderful place. 我正要离开校园时，我注意到教学楼上空美丽的日落。这让我更舍不得离开这个美好的地方。 4. 新高考Ⅱ卷（2020 年）“介绍自己的一次劳动体验” 相关情境例句 We had just finished cleaning the community garden when an old lady came up to us and said, "Thank you so much for making our neighborhood more beautiful." 我们刚打扫完社区花园，这时一位老太太走过来对我们说：“非常感谢你们让我们的社区变得更漂亮了。” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 应用文写作——句式训练 句式：…be about to do/be doing/ had done… when… 基本句式结构： 主语 be about to do sth when + 从句（某人正要做某事时，突然…） 主语 be doing sth when + 从句（某人正做某事时，突然…） 主语 had (just) done sth when + 从句（某人刚做完某事时，突然…） 例句： 1. I was reading a book when the doorbell rang. 2. The workers were about to finish the project when they encountered a technical problem. 3. She had completed her presentation when the audience burst into applause. 句式仿写： 1. 我正要交英语作文时，突然发现最后一段有个严重的语法错误。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我们刚给无家可归者分发完食物，这时一位老妇人紧紧抱住我们，轻声说“上帝保佑你们”。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 爷爷正讲着我们家族起源的故事时，奶奶拿出了旧相册，给我们看儿时的照片。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ​​ 4. 学生会正要宣布艺术比赛的获奖者时，火警突然响了 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我正抱怨数学作业太难时，哥哥拍了拍我的肩膀说：“挑战会让你更强。” ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ​​ 6. 我们刚爬到山顶，这时一道彩虹出现，瞬间驱散了所有的疲惫。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 我刚要付咖啡钱，这时收银员告诉我一位陌生人已经帮我们付了，还说：“把它传递给下一个人吧。” ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 我们班正为校运会做准备，这时突然下起暴雨，但我们仍笑着完成了彩排。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 我们刚打扫完养老院，这时一位老人笑着感谢我们，说我们给他带来了很多快乐。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. ​我刚要因为练琴太难而放弃时，音乐老师对我说：“坚持就是胜利。” ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 高考在线： 1. 全国乙卷（2023 年）“Learning English beyond the classroom” 相关情境 I was about to give up learning English by myself when I joined an English - learning club. There, I met many partners who shared the same goal with me and we encouraged each other. 我正要放弃自学英语时，我加入了一个英语学习俱乐部。在那里，我遇到了许多和我有相同目标的小伙伴，我们相互鼓励。 2. 新高考Ⅰ卷（2022 年）“Sports and fitness” 相关情境例句 The students were doing morning exercises on the playground when it suddenly started to rain. However, they still kept doing simple indoor exercises in the classroom to keep fit. 学生们正在操场上做早操，这时突然开始下雨了。然而，他们仍然在教室里做简单的室内运动来保持健康。 3. 全国甲卷（2021 年）“A Beautiful Campus” 相关情境例句 I was about to leave the campus when I noticed the beautiful sunset over the teaching buildings. It made me more reluctant to leave this wonderful place. 我正要离开校园时，我注意到教学楼上空美丽的日落。这让我更舍不得离开这个美好的地方。 4. 新高考Ⅱ卷（2020 年）“介绍自己的一次劳动体验” 相关情境例句 We had just finished cleaning the community garden when an old lady came up to us and said, "Thank you so much for making our neighborhood more beautiful." 我们刚打扫完社区花园，这时一位老太太走过来对我们说：“非常感谢你们让我们的社区变得更漂亮了。” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$