内容正文:
第二部分 分门别类 直取应用文写作
专项提能 写作篇
第三讲 非应用文体之记叙类
文体1 人物介绍
人物介绍属于记叙类的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料。要做到主题鲜明,内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。具体写作结构为:
写作素材要记牢——人物介绍常用表达(温馨提示:以下内容,尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——介绍人物的基本情况】
1.Whenever I talk about the Dragon Boat Festival, I can’t help thinking of Qu Yuan,a great patriotic poet in Chinese history.每当我谈到端午节,我都会不由自主地想起屈原,中国历史上伟大的爱国诗人。
2.Martin, whose Chinese name is Ma Lin,is our oral English teacher this term.马丁,中文名叫马林,是我们这学期的英语口语老师。
3.Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history,...is my favorite,who has a gift in...在中国历史上的杰出人物中,……是我最喜欢的,他/她有……的天赋。
4.As we know,most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts.For me,Yuan Longping is actually a national hero.我们知道,大多数人心中都有一个或多个民族英雄或多个英雄。对我来说,袁隆平确实是一位民族英雄。
【引人入胜篇中句——详细介绍人物事迹】
1.It goes without saying that Confucius has a great effect on the values of later generations.毋庸置疑,孔子对后世的价值观有很大的影响。
2.She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.她凭借她的智慧和勇气受到中国人民的高度尊敬。
3.Owing to the fact that he can do whatever he has chosen to do with great perseverance,he has made great achievements in many fields.由于他能坚持不懈地做任何他选择做的事情,他在许多领域都取得了巨大的成就。
4.He seems to never feel tired of doing whatever he can to help others,which may be what makes him so popular among all of us.他似乎从不厌烦尽他所能帮助别人,这可能是他受我们所有人欢迎的原因。
5.By being devoted to what he does no matter how boring it is,he sets a good example to us.不管多无聊,他都全身心地投入他所做的事情中,给我们树立了一个好榜样。
6.His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others.他的个人魅力在于一个简单的事实:他从不犹豫去帮助别人。
【画龙点睛结尾句——总结全文】
1.He set so good an example for us students that we all should learn from him.他为我们学生树立了一个如此好的榜样,我们都应该向他学习。
2.His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and fortune,his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great merits we should follow!他的毅力、对个人名利的漠不关心以及他对研究工作的投入和深刻的洞察力,也是我们应该追随的伟大优点!
3.Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.她的精神激励着我和数百万女孩过独立的生活,并为我们自己的决定负责。
范文佳作要背诵——关于中国故事的征文
(2023·全国甲卷改编)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹; 2.意义或启示。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
The Historical Figure in China
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The Historical Figure in China
①When it comes to the historical figure I admire most,the first that comes to my mind is Confucius.
②Confucius was an influential Chinese philosopher who emphasized moral character and social harmony,serving as a guiding light for navigating the complexities of life.As we all know,his teachings shaped Chinese culture promoting values of respect and ethical conduct.Meanwhile,Confucius believed in the power of education and the pursuit of wisdom for personal growth and social progress.
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In conclusion,Confucius has a profound influence on the civilization,providing timeless lessons for individuals and societies worldwide. ③By embracing Confucian principles,we can foster a more compassionate and harmonious world.
1.词汇美
想起:think of→come to one’s mind
有影响力的:powerful→influential
塑造,形成:form→shape
深远的:deep→profound
促进,培养:develop→foster
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2.句式美
本文运用了多样化的高级句式。
①When it comes to...,the first that comes to my mind is Confucius.(状语从句;定语从句)
②Confucius was... who..., serving as...
(定语从句;现在分词短语作状语)
③By embracing Confucian principles,we...(动名词作宾语)
3.结构美
文章运用了三段式结构,结构清晰明了。
写作精进要训练——如何写“我最喜欢的诗人”
(2024·东北育才学校适应性考试)中国古典诗词是中华民族的文化瑰宝,为鼓励同学们讲好中国故事,你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的诗人”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.该人物及其主要贡献简介; 2.该人物对你的影响。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
My Favourite Poet
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My Favourite Poet
Many celebrated Chinese poets of the Tang Dynasty have displayed their extraordinary talents and unique intelligence in Tang poetry. Among all these poets, Li Bai has always held a special place in my heart.
As a poet, Li Bai’s major contribution lies in the exquisite craftsmanship of his poems, which effortlessly blend vivid landscapes with deep philosophical musings.
Besides, his ability to capture the beauty of nature and the human experience resonates deeply with readers worldwide. His timeless verses of profound imagery and emotion have left a long-lasting mark on literature.
In essence, Li Bai’s poetry serves as a timeless reminder, continuing to inspire generations of readers, including myself. His poems have taught me to appreciate the fleeting moments of beauty, explore my own creativity, and express my feelings through writing.
文体2 叙事短文
叙事短文属于记叙类的写作范畴,文章多以事件为中心,以时间和空间为线索,按事件的发生、发展、结局的顺序展开故事。具体写作结构为:
写作素材要记牢——叙事短文常用表达(温馨提示:以下内容,尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——点明事件的概要】
1.Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which was “Love Our Motherland”.我们学校在周三下午组织了一场校园合唱比赛,主题是“爱我们的祖国”。
2.To promote students’ awareness of tidiness and family responsibility,an activity named “Housework,I can do it” was held.为了提高学生们的整洁意识和家庭责任感,举办了一项名为“家务,我能做”的活动。
3.Recently, our school newspaper has conducted a survey on what English extracurricular reading brings us.最近,我校校报就英语课外阅读给我们带来了什么进行了一项调查。
【引人入胜篇中句——介绍故事详情】
1.In response to the activity sponsored by our school,I carried out my housework plan last weekend, ranging from tidying up rooms to cooking meals.为了响应我们学校主办的活动,我在上周末实施了我的家务计划,从打扫房间到做饭。
2.Early in the morning,I removed unwanted items and cleaned the house until it was spotless.一大早,我就把不想要的东西拿走,把房子打扫得一尘不染。
3.At almost eleven,I prepared a lunch—fried rice, for which my parents praised me. Tired as I was,I felt so proud.快十一点的时候,我准备了一顿午餐——炒饭,我的父母称赞了我。虽然我很累,但我感到很自豪。
4.Having done the cleaning, some of us made a well-prepared funny show, which made them very delighted.打扫完后,我们中的一些人准备了一场精心准备的滑稽表演,这使他们非常高兴。
【画龙点睛结尾句——总结个人感受】
1.By doing interesting experiments myself,I had lots of fun as well as gaining knowledge.通过亲自做有趣的实验,我既玩得开心也获得了知识。
2.Through the involvement in the household chores, not only have I established a sense of family responsibility,but also I have fully understood that doing housework is of great importance.通过参与家务,我不仅建立了家庭责任感,而且我完全理解了做家务很重要。
3.From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.从这个有意义的活动中,我发现我们应该关心和尊重老人。
4.I’ve also learned that if I stick with my goals and passions, I’ll finally succeed.我还学到,如果我坚持我的目标和激情,我最终会成功。
范文佳作要背诵——分享自己在假期中学到的新技能
(2023·全国乙卷改编)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.简要描述; 2.体验和感受。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Learning a New Skill
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Learning a New Skill
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. ①That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson for beginners. In the beginning, it was quite challenging to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours practicing the piano.
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②Although my fingers were painful after a few hours’ practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a musical piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue it as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing the piano as my hobby. ③It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
1.词汇美
机会:chance→opportunity
极好的,极出色的:wonderful→fantastic
困难的,艰难的:difficult→challenging
打击:discourage→demoralize
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2.句式美
本文运用了多样化的高级句式。
①That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance.(It/That was the first time that sb. had done sth.)
②Although my fingers were painful..., I...if I could...(状语从句)
③It is simply because...(表语从句)
3.结构美
文章运用了三段式结构,结构清晰明了。
写作精进要训练——分享一次自己参与的校园活动
假定你是李华,毕业在即,你校英文报举办了以“An Unforgettable Activity in High School”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英文短文投稿,分享一次你参加过的校园活动。内容包括:
1.活动内容; 2.活动感受。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
An Unforgettable Activity in High School
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An Unforgettable Activity in High School
During my high school years, one unforgettable activity I participated in was the charity bazaar organized by the school. Students set up booths selling handmade crafts and baked goods to raise funds for a local orphanage. I helped at a face-painting booth and saw the joy on children’s faces as their designs came to life.
The sense of unity and purpose among everyone involved was inspiring.It taught me the value of giving back and working together for a meaningful cause, making it a truly valuable experience in my high school journey.
文体3 报道
报道通常需要直截了当地给出事件发生的时间、地点、涉及的人物、事件的起因、经过和结果,语言要具体、简明精炼、通俗易懂。具体写作结构为:
写作素材要记牢——报道常用表达(温馨提示:以下内容,尝试背诵)
【先声夺人开头句——概括说明主要事件】
1.Aiming to/In order to enrich our school life, our school held an impressive Food Culture Festival last week.为了丰富我们的校园生活,上周我们学校举办了一个让人印象深刻的美食文化节。
2.An activity, whose theme was protecting the environment/with the theme of protecting the environment, was held by the Students’ Union.学生会举办了一项以保护环境为主题的活动。
【引人入胜篇中句——详细介绍事件的经过】
1.Teachers and students who are interested in traditional Chinese culture joined in/participated in/took part in the activity.对中国传统文化感兴趣的老师和学生都参加了这次活动。
2.First of all,our school provided all the materials for cooking and places to cook and all the students were allowed to take part in the cooking.首先,我们学校提供了所有的烹饪材料和烹饪场所,所有的学生都被允许参加烹饪。
3.What’s most amazing was that all the students and teachers started to taste any kind of food they wanted.最令人惊奇的是,所有的学生和老师都开始品尝他们想要的任何食物。
4.As scheduled,the activity started at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours.按照计划,活动在周六早上8点开始,持续了3个小时。
5.It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end.直到晚上六点半活动才结束。
6.After a while,some students were so tired that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates.过了一会儿,一些学生太累了以至于跟不上他们的同学。
【画龙点睛结尾句——简要评论】
1.It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised.正是通过这一活动,我们充分认识到应该提高尊重老人的意识。
2.Not only did this festival provide us a chance to learn cooking by ourselves, but it also made us have a better understanding of/learn more about food culture.这个美食文化节不仅给我们提供了一个自己学习烹饪的机会,也使我们更了解美食文化。
3.The activity was indeed extremely successful,and the students involved realized that even small acts could make a difference to the earth.这项活动确实非常成功,参与的学生意识到,即使是很小的行为也可以改变地球。
4.In my opinion,the activity can relieve our mental pressure.More importantly,it is a good chance to strengthen our will,which is beneficial to our life and study in the future.在我看来,这项活动能缓解我们的精神压力。更重要的是,这是一个很好的机会,可以增强我们的意志,这有利于我们未来的生活和学习。
5.Undoubtedly,this event can not only enrich our school life,but also offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills!毫无疑问,这次活动不仅可以丰富我们的学校生活,而且还为我们提供了学习更多日常实践技能的机会!
范文佳作要背诵——报道学校开展的运动会
(2024·江苏宿迁一模)上周你校开展了为期两天的运动会。请你以“A Memorable Sports Meeting”为题,给校英文报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的; 2.活动流程; 3.活动感受。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
A Memorable Sports Meeting
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A Memorable Sports Meeting
To build up our body and increase our enthusiasm for sports, our school sports meeting was held in our playground last week.
More than 200 participants were involved in the sports meeting. They took an active part in every event. Zhang Qiang, a boy in Grade One, jumped highest of all.①A team of Grade Three who were very strong ran very fast and won the boys’ 400-metre relay race. Besides, all the other students cheered for the athletes in their class.
It turned out to be a great success. ②Not only was this school sports meeting of great benefit to our health but it also enriched our school life.
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1.词汇美
强身健体:make sb. strong→build up one’s body
参与,参加:take part in→be involved in
结果证明是:prove to be→turn out to be
有益于:be good to→be of benefit to
2.句式美
本文运用了多样化的高级句式。
①A team of Grade Three who were very strong ran very fast and won the boys’ 400-metre relay race.(定语从句)
②Not only was this school sports meeting... but it also...(倒装句)
3.结构美
文章运用了三段式结构,结构清晰明了。
名师点评
写作精进要训练——报道一次学校活动
(2024·湖北三市联考)上周末你校举办了“急救知识进校园”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的过程; 2.活动的影响。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
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First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
Last weekend, our school hosted an event titled “First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus”.
The event began with a lecture by a professional trainer, covering CPR techniques, wound dressing, and handling common emergencies. Following the lecture, students participated in hands-on workshops, practicing their skills under the guidance of experts.
This initiative not only equipped our students with valuable lifesaving skills but also raised awareness of the importance of prompt first aid. The positive feedback from students shows the need for more such practical and informative events on campus.
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