高考读后续写主题通关——师生情谊（课件）-2026年高考英语读后续写精讲

2023 年新课标全国 I 卷 高考读后续写主题通关 ——师生情谊 Learning Objectives 紧扣 “挑战中成长”“指导的重要性” 等主旨，续写内容需承接原文冲突，遵循 “逻辑连贯、细节支撑、呼应主旨” 原则，确保与原文风格一致。 理解 “师生情谊” 核心内涵（引导、成长），能迁移到类似场景，续写中体现坚持、接受反馈等积极价值，呼应原文主旨。 提取原文人物、事件、时间、情感等核心要素，厘清师生关系线索与情节逻辑，避免误读关键信息（如文体特征、成长细节）。 积累并运用写作相关动词、情感描写句型及高分句式（如强调句、with 复合结构），通过细节描写增强故事真实感与感染力。 contents 原文解码 What to read 01 逻辑构思 What to write 02 语言提升 How to write 03 实践演练 04 迁移训练 05 原文解码 What to read 01 续写原文 When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to 续写原文 Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice. What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care. 续写原文 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 段落大意 Para. who what when emotion 1         2         3         4         “我”（初任记者）、编辑 “我” “我” “我”、编辑 编辑让 “我” 写一篇关于当地社区中心的特写报道，要求周末完成 为写报道，“我” 研读新闻书籍、采访相关人员并做笔记 写作时盯着空白屏幕，反复删改，过于关注细节而忽略整体 编辑发现 “我” 的困难并约谈，指出稿件材料零散，需确定主题 “我” 二十出头，刚任初级记者时 接到任务后 开始写作时 “我” 即将放弃时 excited and terrified 无明显情绪，侧重行动 纠结、困惑（隐含） （“我”）迷茫；（编辑）关注、指导（隐含） 段落大意 Para. who what when emotion 5         6         7         8         “我” “我”、编辑 “我”、编辑 “我” 受编辑启发，“我” 重新写作，聚焦采访对象及社区中心对他们生活的影响，将故事串联 “我” 完成初稿并交给编辑，编辑认为有进步但仍需完善 编辑与 “我” 一起润色稿件，教 “我” 精简文字、运用生动语言等，最终稿件发表 “我” 继续为报社写作，虽遇挑战和挫折，但因首次发表的成就感而坚持 编辑指导后 重新写作当天及之后几小时 接下来几天及发表当天 首次发表后 light bulb going off proud、crossing my fingers heart swelling with pride、grateful 坚定（隐含）、有动力（因成就感） 段落大意 Para. who what when emotion 9         “我” 多年后回顾，“我” 意识到这段经历教会了 “我” 坚持、接受反馈、不放弃梦想 多年后 感悟、感恩（隐含） 关键线索 时间： _________________________________________________________​ 地点： _________________________________________________________​ 人物关系：_________________________________________________________​ 未解决冲突：_________________________________________________________ “我” 二十出头刚任初级记者时、多年后 当地报社、社区中心（采访地点） “我” 与编辑是上下级兼师徒关系，编辑指导 “我” 成长 “我” 接到为全国性杂志写特写文章的邀请，但临近截稿仍不知如何动笔 学生常见误读案例 误将 “feature story” 理解为 “短故事”，忽略其 “特写报道” 的新闻体裁特征，续写时偏离纪实性、深度性要求。 过度强调 “我” 的写作天赋，忽略原文中 “反复修改”“编辑指导” 等体现成长过程的细节，续写中未体现克服困难的过程。 遗漏 “编辑的指导作用” 这一线索，续写时未让编辑在 “我” 此次遇到写作困境时发挥类似之前的引导作用，导致情节脱节。 逻辑构思 What to write 02 主旨推导 原文情感词 / 动作词提炼​ 情感词：_________________________________________________________​ 动作词：_________________________________________________________​ 主旨预判​ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ excited（兴奋）、terrified（恐惧）、proud（自豪）、grateful（感激） approached（走近）、poring over（研读）、interviewed（采访）、stared at（盯着）、deleted（删除）、retyped（重新输入）、wove（编织、串联）、refine（润色）、published（发表）、struggled（挣扎）、persevere（坚持） 原文通过 “我” 从初任记者时在编辑指导下完成首篇报道并从中获得成长的经历，展现了在成长过程中，面对挑战时的坚持、接受他人指导的重要性以及从挫折中汲取力量实现自我突破。续写应围绕 “我” 面对为全国性杂志写稿的新挑战，如何在可能的指导或自我激励下克服困难、完成写作，进一步体现成长与突破的主题。 语言提升 How to write 03 语言积累：场景化表达库 高频动词 / 动词短语 写作相关：poring over（研读）、deleted and retyped（删改）、wove together（串联）、refine（润色）、cut out（删减）、structure（构建） 情感相关：heart swelling with pride（心充满自豪）、crossing my fingers（祈祷、期待） 行动相关：approached（走近）、interviewed（采访）、stared at（盯着）、struggled（挣扎）、persevere（坚持） 语言积累：场景化表达库 高分句型 动作描写类 ① v-ing/v-ed + 其它，主语 + 动作 1 + 其它 eg: Staring at the blank screen, I deleted and retyped sentences over and over again.（盯着空白屏幕，我一遍又一遍地删除和重新输入句子。） ② 主语 + 动作 1 + 动作 2，and 动作 3 + 其它 eg: He taught me how to cut out unnecessary words, how to use more vivid language, and how to structure my paragraphs for maximum impact.（他教我如何删减不必要的词语，如何使用更生动的语言，以及如何构建段落以达到最大效果。） 语言积累：场景化表达库 情感描写类 ③ 形容词 1 and 形容词 2，主语 + 动词 + 其它 eg: Excited and terrified, I didn't know where to start my first feature story.（既兴奋又恐惧，我不知道我的第一篇特写报道该从哪里开始。） ④ Sb. felt a sense of + 情绪名词 + welling up from one’s heart. eg: I felt a sense of pride welling up from my heart when I held the published newspaper.（当我拿着发表的报纸时，一种自豪感从心底涌起。） 语言积累：场景化表达库 主旨句 ⑤ 强调句型 eg: It was the editor's guidance that helped me grow into a qualified writer.（正是编辑的指导帮助我成长为一名合格的作家。） ⑥ 倒装句 eg: Never had I thought that the challenging first assignment would become a precious memory.（我从未想过那次充满挑战的首次任务会成为珍贵的回忆。） ⑦ 定语从句 eg: The community center, which had a great impact on people's lives, became the focus of my first feature story.（那个对人们生活有很大影响的社区中心，成了我第一篇特写报道的焦点。） 语言积累：场景化表达库 其它 ⑧ With 复合结构 eg: With the editor's patient help, I gradually mastered the skills of writing feature stories.（在编辑的耐心帮助下，我逐渐掌握了写特写报道的技巧。） ⑨ 无灵主语 eg: Inspiration suddenly struck me when I recalled the editor's words.（当我想起编辑的话时，灵感突然来了。） ⑩ 独立主格结构 eg: Notes spread out on the desk, I tried to sort out the key points of the interview.（笔记摊在桌子上，我努力整理采访的要点。） 小试牛刀 ①意识到自己的错误后，我知道是时候主动联系哥哥，修复我们的关系了。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ②编辑走进办公室，拿起我的稿件，仔细阅读后提出了修改建议。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Realizing my mistake, I knew it was time to take the initiative to contact my brother and repair our relationship. The editor walked into the office, picked up my manuscript, and put forward revision suggestions after careful reading. 小试牛刀 ③ 迷茫又焦虑，我不知该如何完成这篇难度远超以往的报道。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ④ 当看到自己的文章发表在杂志上时，我感到一种巨大的成就感从心底涌起。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Confused and anxious, I didn't know how to finish this report which was much more difficult than ever before. When I saw my article published in the magazine, I felt a sense of great accomplishment welling up from my heart. 小试牛刀 ⑤ 正是那些艰难的时刻让我学会了在写作中不断突破自我。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑥ 直到多年后，我才明白编辑那些严厉的批评对我而言是多么宝贵。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was those tough moments that taught me to constantly break through myself in writing. Not until years later did I realize how precious the editor's harsh criticisms were to me. 小试牛刀 ⑦ 那本记录着采访细节的笔记本，成了我写作路上的重要伙伴。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑧ 随着截稿日期的临近，我更加努力地寻找这篇报道的核心主题。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The notebook that recorded the details of the interview became an important partner in my writing journey. With the deadline approaching, I worked harder to find the core theme of this report. 小试牛刀 ⑨ 新的写作任务带来的压力，让我再次想起了第一次写报道时的情景。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑩ 稿件散落一地，我坐在椅子上，努力理清混乱的思绪。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The pressure brought by the new writing task reminded me of the scene when I wrote the first report. Manuscripts scattered all over the floor, I sat on the chair, trying to sort out my confused thoughts. 实践演练 04 情节构思三原则 逻辑连贯：___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 细节支撑：___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 呼应主旨：___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 续写应承接 “我” 接到全国性杂志邀请却不知如何动笔的情节，可引入编辑再次给予指导，或 “我” 借鉴首次写报道的经验找到思路，避免出现与原文无关的新人物或情节。 通过描写 “我” 面对空白屏幕的焦躁、翻看过往笔记的动作、与编辑交流时的神态等细节，展现 “我” 的困境与转变，让故事更真实可感。 结尾需体现 “我” 成功完成写作，再次感悟到坚持与接受指导的重要性，与原文中 “挑战带来成长” 的主旨相呼应。 写作示例 Paragraph 1: One day, I received an invitation to write a feature article for a national magazine. My heart skipped a beat, excitement mixing with panic. This was a bigger stage, and the pressure weighed on me like a heavy stone. I stared at the invitation letter, my mind going blank. Memories of my first feature story flooded in, but this time, the topic—a profile of a renowned scientist—seemed far more daunting. I rummaged through my old notebooks, hoping to find some inspiration, but the words on the pages just blurred together. 写作示例 Paragraph 2: With the deadline approaching, I still had no idea how to start this article. I decided to visit my former editor, now retired, who lived nearby. Hearing my dilemma, he smiled and said, “Go talk to him. Listen to his stories, not just his achievements.” Taking his advice, I spent a whole afternoon with the scientist, asking about his failures and struggles. As I left, ideas started popping into my head. Rushing home, I sat down and began to write, weaving his personal stories with his scientific contributions. When I finished, I knew this was my best work yet. 得分点 情节连贯，承接原文 “我” 的写作困境并引入编辑指导，符合逻辑；通过 “heart skipped a beat”“rummaged through” 等细节描写展现 “我” 的情绪与动作；体现了接受指导和从交流中获取灵感，呼应成长与突破的主旨。 迁移训练 05 核心步骤回顾 文本解读融主旨，段落拆解要素明。​ 人事物时情细看，时空人物冲突清。​ 背景信息莫轻弃，误读陷阱要绕行。​ 情感动作细提炼，主旨方向早判定。​ 贴合原文不偏离，核心思想显其形。​ 价值导向藏文中，呼应主题贯始终。 知识迁移创新 故事背景：“我” 参加学校的作文比赛，主题是 “最难忘的一天”。“我” 想写小学时第一次在全校面前演讲的经历，但总觉得写不出当时的紧张与成长。眼看截稿日期快到了，“我” 对着稿纸发呆，这时曾经鼓励 “我” 演讲的老师走过来看了看 “我” 的草稿。 The teacher tapped the draft gently, her eyes full of understanding. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Inspired by the teacher's words, I began to describe the way my voice trembled at first, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 The teacher tapped the draft gently, her eyes full of understanding. “Do you remember how your hands shook when you held the microphone?” she asked, smiling. “That’s the detail that can make the story come alive.” I thought back to that day, the sound of my own heartbeat echoing in my ears. Suddenly, I picked up the pen, ready to start writing again. 参考范文 Inspired by the teacher's words, I began to describe the way my voice trembled at first, and how it grew steady as I saw her nodding at me from the audience. When I finished, I read the essay aloud, and it felt like I was reliving that unforgettable day. I handed in the essay, knowing that whether I won or not, I had captured the true spirit of that moment. THANKS $$