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Period 5 Reading for Writing (Ⅱ) 培优写作课
演讲稿——音乐对人类生活的影响(How music can change a person's life)
阐述话题
本单元的写作任务是以演讲稿的形式谈一谈音乐对人类生活的影响。在写作中尝试使用比喻(明喻,暗喻),拟人,引用,重复等修辞方法。
概述文体
1.本文文体为演讲稿,主要谈论音乐对人们生活的影响,比如:音乐可以放松人的心情,音乐使人健康,音乐给人以鼓舞……并通过具体例子加以佐证,让人们真正意识到音乐对人类生活的积极影响。
2.人称多为第一人称。
3.时态多为一般现在时,但要视具体情况而定,也可穿插其他时态(比如在讲述自己的经历时常用过去时)。
构建框架
1.自我介绍并给出演讲的话题。
2.你的音乐体验以及音乐对你的影响。
3.把自己的体验同观众联系起来并结束你的演讲。(开篇:自我介绍及演讲话题)
My name is ________ and it's an honor for me to be here and share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.
(主体:自己的音乐体验以及音乐对自己所产生的影响)
There was a time when I felt so depressed...that...One day I overheard the song...Not only... but also... touched me deeply...It was like a stimulant(兴奋剂)and filled me with...,inspiring me to overcome...It is the song that gives me...So next time when you have the same problem, you might as well...
(结尾:把自己的体验同观众联系起来并结束你的演讲)
As the saying goes, without music, life is of no value.When you are stressed,...When you are depressed,...When you are tired,...In a word, music makes you...I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it part of your life.That's all for my speech.
人们体验音乐的方式各不相同,音乐也给人们带来了不同的体验,你认为音乐对你有什么样的影响?假如你是李华,请结合自己的经历写一篇演讲稿,谈一谈音乐对你的生活的影响。要点如下:
1.自我介绍并给出演讲的话题
2.你的音乐体验
3.音乐对你的影响
4.把自己的体验同观众联系起来并结束你的演讲
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Step 1 谋篇布局
体裁:应用文
Tips
基本信息:name, the topic of the speech
主体:my experience with music
how music made me feel
结尾: treasure music and make it part of your life
Thank you
时态:一般现在时/一般过去时
人称:第一人称
Step 2 组织语言
1.很荣幸能代表所有的学生发表关于音乐对我们生活的影响的演讲。
①It's_a_great_honor_to_do 很荣幸做某事
②on_behalf_of 代表
③发表演讲 deliver/give a speech
④连词成句:
It's_a_great_honor_for_me_to_deliver_a_speech_about_the_effect_that_music_has_on_our_life_on_behalf_of_all_the_students.
2.众所周知,音乐在我们生活中起着重要的作用。
①As we all know 众所周知
②play_an_important_part_in...
在……中起重要作用
③连词成句:
As_we_all_know,music_plays_an_important_part_in_our_life.
3.有一段时间因为连续的考试失败,我是如此沮丧以至于我想放弃。
①so depressed that... 如此沮丧以至于
②放弃 give_up
③用when引导的定语从句:
There_was_a_time_when_I_felt_so_depressed_because_of_the_continuous_failure_in_the_exams_that_I_even_wanted_to_give_up.
4.不仅它的歌词还有它的节奏都深深地打动了我。
①not_only...but_also... 不但……而且……
②touch 触动,打动
③用not only...but also... 结构
Not_only_the_lyrics_but_also_the_rhythm_touched_me_deeply.
5.它像一支兴奋剂一样给了我力量,激励着我战胜困难。
①overcome_the_difficulties 战胜困难
②stimulant 兴奋剂
③用比喻的修辞翻译句子:
It_was_like_a_stimulant_and_filled_me_with_strength,inspiring_me_to_overcome_the_difficulties.
6.正是那首歌给了我强大的动力,无尽的希望和光明的未来。
①强大的动力 strong_motivation
②unlimited hope 无尽的希望
③用强调结构来翻译句子:
It_is_the_song_that_gives_me_strong_motivation,_unlimited_hope_and_bright_future.
7.下一次当你有同样的问题时,你不妨听一听激昂的音乐。
①不妨 might_as_well
②passionate music 激昂的音乐
③连词成句:
Next_time_when_you_have_the_same_problem,_you_might_as_well_listen_to_some_passionate_music.
8.常言道,没有音乐,生命是没有价值的。
①As_the_saying_goes 常言道
②be of no value 没有价值
③连词成句:
As_the_saying_goes,without_music,life_is_of_no_value.
Step 3 润色成篇
Good morning,my name is Li Hua.It's a great honor for me to deliver a speech about the effect that music has on our life on behalf of all the students.
As we all know, music plays an important part in our life.There was a time when I felt so depressed because of the continuous failure in the exams that I even wanted to give up.One day I overheard the song Start All Over Again by Liu Huan.Not only the lyrics but also the rhythm touched me deeply.It was like a stimulant and filled me with strength, inspiring me to overcome the difficulties.Since then I have become more and more confident and done better and better in the exams.It is the song that gives me strong motivation, unlimited hope and bright future.So next time when you have the same problem, you might as well listen to some passionate music.
As the saying goes, without music, life is of no value.When you are stressed, music can reduce your stress.When you are depressed,music can help melt away a bad mood.When you are tired, music can make you relaxed and when you are giving up,music can give you strong motivation.In a word, music makes you happier and healthier.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it part of your life.That's all for my speech.
识记话题词汇
1.音乐种类:
traditional music传统音乐
classical music古典音乐
light music轻音乐 dancing music舞曲
pop music流行音乐 folk music民间音乐
country music乡村音乐
Jazz爵士乐
rock & roll摇滚 pop rock流行摇滚
blues布鲁斯,蓝调 swing摇摆乐
campus songs校园歌曲
civic ballad民谣
national music民族音乐
world famous music世界名曲
folk songs民歌 art songs艺术歌曲
art ballad艺术民谣或歌曲
heavy metal重金属音乐
2.相关词汇:
lyrics歌词 beat节拍
composition音乐作品 melody旋律
national anthem国歌 rhyme韵律
tempo拍子,音乐速度
3.形容词:
black;blue忧郁的 melodious悠扬的
pleasant悦耳的 relaxing令人放松的
soulful深情的
4.兴趣爱好:be good at(擅长),be fond of(喜爱),be interested in(对……感兴趣),be crazy about(对……着迷),do well in(在……方面做得好),have a strong desire to do(非常渴望做某事),long for(渴望),put one's heart into(全心投入),enjoy(喜欢),love(热爱)等。
背诵话题好句
1.If you are unhappy, music will make you happy, and if you are happy, music will make you happier.
如果你不开心,听音乐会让你开心;如果你开心,听音乐会让你更开心。
2.Classic music will remind me of some beautiful things hapened long long ago.
古典音乐会让我想起以前发生的美好的事情。
3. Music can also cure some illness.
音乐能治疗疾病。
4. Soft music can help some people to fall asleep.
柔和的音乐可以帮一些人入睡。
5.Music has charm to soothe a savage breast, to soften rocks or bend a knotted oak.(William Congreve,British dramatist)
音乐有着抚慰粗野的胸怀、软化顽石或使千年老橡树弯腰的魅力。(英国剧作家威廉·康格里夫)
6.Music is the only language in which you cannot say a mean or sarcastic thing.(John Erskine,American educator)
音乐是唯一不能表达卑鄙的或讽刺的事物的语言。(美国教育家约翰·厄斯金)
7.音乐从我耳边飘过,就像邮差送来一封不属于我的信。
Music drifted past my ears like a letter from a postman which didn't belong to me.
8.音乐中蕴藏着如此悦耳的催人奋进的力量。
Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force.
9.只要有音乐,就不会有世界末日。
As long as there is music, there won't be the end of the world.
10.对我来说,音乐是灵魂的完美表现。
For me,music is the perfect expression of the soul.
项目
课标要求
语音知识
爆破音:
How many roads must a man wal(k) down?
How many seas must a whi(te) dove sail?
Before they're allow(ed) to be free?
重要词汇
1. have the energy to do sth.有精力做某事 full of energy 精力充沛
energetic adj.精力充沛的
2.feel like 想要;摸起来像
3.have (an/the) opportunity to do sth.有做……的机会
take the opportunity抓住这次机遇
4.perform a(n)...role in在……中起……作用
perform an operation/a play进行一场手术/演一场戏
perform one's duty/promise尽某人的责任/履行某人的承诺
performance n.执行;表演;演奏;履行
put on/give a performance 表演
5.enable sb.to do sth.能使某人做某事
6.prove+名词/代词
prove+宾语+宾语补足语(形容词、名词、动词不定式等。to be通常可以省略)
prove+宾语从句
7.award sb.sth.=award sth.to sb.给某人颁发……
win/receive an award赢得/收到奖(品)
8.in relief 如释重负;松了口气
to one's relief 使某人感到轻松的是;令人宽慰的是
9.a cure for...针对……的治疗(法)
cure sb.of sth.治愈某人的疾病/改掉某人的恶习等
10.(be) absorbed in...全神贯注于…… absorb...from...从……中吸收……
absorb...into... 把……吸入……
absorb oneself in ...专心于;全神贯注于…… absorbed adj.全神贯注的
11.aim to do sth.旨在做某事 aim at doing sth.=be aimed at 目的是;旨在
take aim at...瞄准……
with the aim of以……为目标;意在……
12.try out参加……的选拔;测试;试验
try (one's best) to do sth.尽(某人最大的)努力做某事
try doing sth.试着做某事 try on试穿
13.show/have a talent for有……的天赋 talented adj.有天赋的
14.assume that...假定,认为……
It's assumed that...假定……;人们认为……
assume...to be...认为……是……;假定……是……
15.in addition此外 in addition to除……之外
16. satisfy one's needs满足某人的需求
with one's satisfaction使某人满意的是……
to satisfaction满意地 be satisfied with 对……满意
17.a variety of=varieties of种种的;各种各样的
vary from ...to...由……到……不等
vary with随……变化 vary in在……方面变化
重要句式
1.This will help you make it easier to understand.
2.Imagine having the opportunity to sing together with hundreds of other people while you are at home alone.
3.When he got absorbed in his world of music,he felt as if he could “see” the beauty of the world around him...
4.During those times,music can help you in the same way that it helped me.
重要语法
过去分词作表语和状语
1.They all felt challenged.
2.Seen from the building,the garden looks beautiful.
3.Questioned by the police, Mr Brown was at a loss what to do.
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