内容正文:
Period 5 Reading for Writing (Ⅱ) 培优写作课
游记(jounal):是对旅行进行记录的一种文体,现在也多指记录游览经历的文章。游记分很多种类,有带议论色彩的,有带科学色彩的,有带抒情色彩的。
构建框架
Introduction:make the reader eager to read
Body:①Transitions ②Details and examples
(结尾:总—总结)
Ending:Let the reader know that the passage ends.Help the reader remember your writing.
去年暑假,你有机会参加一个去美国旧金山的夏令营,为期三天。请你写一篇游记,介绍一下你在旧金山的所见、所闻和所感。词数100左右。
Step 1 谋篇布局
体裁:游记
Tips
·Day One
A ride on a cable car;Fisherman's Wharf (the district where Italian fishermen first came to San Francisco)
·Day Two
The city and Chinatown
·Day Three
Angel Island
时态:一般过去时
人称:第一人称
Step 2 组织语言
1.坐上缆车到山顶鸟瞰旧金山湾和整座城市。
①take_a_ride_on_a_cable_car 坐缆车
②get a whole view of the city 鸟瞰整座城市
③用不定式作目的状语翻译句子:
To_get_a_whole_view_of_San_Francisco_Bay_and_the_whole_city,we_took_a_ride_on_a_cable_car_and_got_to_the_top_of_the_hill.
2.这是意大利渔民在十九世纪晚期首先到达旧金山并开创渔业的地方。
①Italian_fishermen 意大利渔民
②in_the_late_19th_century 在十九世纪晚期
③the_fishing_industry 渔业
④用定语从句翻译句子:
This_is_the_district_where_Italian_fishermen_first_came_to_San_Francisco_in_the_late_19th_century_and_began_the_fishing_industry.
3.我们太累了,不想做任何其他事情。
课文原句仿写:
Exhausted,we_don't_feel_like_doing_anything_else.
4.中国移民在十九世纪五十年代在这里定居。
①Chinese_immigrants 中国移民
②in_the_1850s 在十九世纪五十年代
③settle_down_in_the_city 在这个城市定居
④翻译句子
Chinese_immigrants_settled_down_in_the_city_in_the_1850s.
5.我们看到了很多有趣的寺庙,很多市场,很多餐馆还有包含文档、照片的博物馆。
①temple 寺庙
②a number of/a great many 很多
③补全句子:
We saw many interesting temples,a_number_of markets as_well_as_a_great_many restaurants and museums containing documents and_photographs.
6.天使岛是著名的移民站点,早期中国人在那里申请美国居住权。
①immigration_station 移民站点
②apply_for 申请
③right_to_live_in_the_USA 美国居住权
④用定语从句翻译句子:
Angel_Island_was_a_famous_immigration_station_where_early_Chinese_people_applied_for_right_to_live_in_the_USA.
7.1940年,民事当局改革了体系,以便更多的中国人能够抓住机会在美国定居。
①civil_authorities 民事当局
②reformed_the_system 改革体系
③grasp_the_opportunity 抓住机会
④用含有so that引导的目的状语从句翻译句子:
In_1940_the_civil_authorities_reformed_the_system_so_that_many_more_Chinese_people_were_able_to_grasp_the_opportunity_of_settling_in_the_USA.
Step 3 润色成篇
San Francisco is a land of diversity and an amazing city.Everyone who has ever been there will never forget it.
To get a whole view of San Francisco Bay and the whole city, we took a ride on a cable car and got to the top of the hill.It's so spectacular.Down from the hill, we went to Fisherman's Wharf.This is the district where Italian fishermen first came to San Francisco in the late 19th century and began the fishing industry.Exhausted, we don't feel like doing anything else.On the second day, we visited the city and Chinatown.Chinese immigrants settled down in the city in the 1850s.We saw many interesting temples, a number of markets as well as a great many restaurants and museums containing documents and photographs.Angel Island was a famous immigration station where early Chinese people applied for right to live in the USA.In 1940 the civil authorities reformed the system so that many more Chinese people were able to grasp the opportunity of settling in the USA.
San Francisco is such an attractive place that I am longing to visit it again.
识记话题词汇
常用游记词汇:
diversity 多元化 amazing 令人惊奇的
view 景观 spectacular壮观的
district 地区 cable car缆车
exhausted 疲劳的 temples 寺庙
settle 定居 attractive 吸引人的
背诵话题金句
1.The world is a book, but people who do not travel read only one page.
世界是一本书,而不旅行的人只读了其中一页。
2.Travelling costs a lot of money, but it makes you understand the society.
旅行虽颇费钱财,却使你懂得社会。
3.Life is like a journey.What you should care about is not the destination, but the scenery on the way and your mood when you see the scenery.
人生就像一场旅行,你应该在乎的不是目的地,而是沿途的风景以及看风景时的心情。
4.If you don't travel, you will miss more than scenery.
如果你不去旅行,你错过的不只是风景。
5.The Great Wall in Beijing is the place I want to visit most not only because of its long history but also because of its important historical position in Chinese culture.
北京长城是我最想参观的地方,不仅是因为它的悠久历史,而且因为它在中国文化中重要的历史地位。
项目
课标要求
语音知识
连读
重要词汇
1.hold on抓牢;坚持不懈;稍等一下 hold on to紧紧抓住;坚持,不放弃
hold up举起;耽误 hold back 阻挡;(使)退缩;忍住
2.individual adj.单独的;个别的 n.个人
3.puzzle over/about苦思冥想;绞尽脑汁 be/feel puzzled about对……迷惑不解
4.break away from脱离;背叛,逃脱
break down(机器)出故障;(谈判等)失败 break out(战争、火灾等)爆发
5.belong to是……的财产;是……的组成部分;是……的成员(属于)
belongings n.财产;所有物;相关事物
6.as well as 同(一样/也);和;还 as well也(置于肯定句句末)
may/might as well do sth.最好做某事
7.in defence of=in one's defence保卫……;为……辩护
defend sb./sth.from/against...保护某人/某物免遭……;保卫某人/某物抵御……
8.surround...with...使……包围…… be surrounded with/by 被……包围
9.free of charge=for free免费 in charge(of)主管;负责;照顾
charge sb.with sth.因某事控告某人
10.It has been announced that...已经宣布……
11.a large/small amount of大/少量的 large/small amounts of大/少量的
in large amounts大量地
重要词汇
12.an approach to...做某事的方法/途径;接近,靠近
at the approach of在快到……的时候
13.ensure vt.保证;确保;担保
14.be eager for渴望…… be eager to do渴望做……
15.greet...with...用……迎接…… greeting n.问候;招呼
send one's greetings to向……问候
16.crowd n.人群;一群人;民众 vt.挤满;使……拥挤
crowd in涌上心头;涌入脑海 a crowd of...一群……
be crowded with...挤满着……
重要句式
1.Why do you think William said his hometown was similar to Qufu?
2.So what is the difference between them,if any?
3.Almost everywhere you go in the UK, you will be surrounded by evidence of four different groups of people who took over at different times throughout history.
4.The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
重要语法
过去分词作定语和宾语补足语
1.Things bought through computers are much cheaper.
2.The injured workers are now being taken good care of in the hospital.
3.When I opened the door, I found the ground covered with snow.
4.Before driving into the city, you are required to get your car washed.
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