内容正文:
Unit 3 Family matters 单元主题作文
记叙文
父母给予我们生命,哺育我们成长,教育我们长大,没有父母便没有我们。我们要懂得报答父母的养育之恩,我们也要珍惜父母的深情,我们更要感恩父母。你校英语报开展“感恩父母”的征文活动,请用英语写一篇短文,向校英语报投稿,内容包括:
1. 父亲或母亲给你印象最深刻的一件事;
2. 自己的感想和从中得到的启示。
审题谋篇
STEP Ⅰ审题构思出框架
1 明确体裁话题→记叙文、关于家庭的回忆。
2 确定时态人称→一般过去时为主;以第一人称为主
3 构思文章框架→三段式:首段:引入话题 中段:叙述故事 尾段:自己的感想和从中得到的启示。
接下来细化主要内容→故事的主要内容(这个是本篇文章的重难点)
在这里给出一个例子:比如考试失利,我的感受很糟糕,是妈妈鼓励了我。
将这些表述清楚即可组成文章中段主要部分。
STEP Ⅱ 完整句子表达
1. 我感激我妈妈为我所做的一切。
I'm grateful for what my mom did for me.
I'm grateful for... 表示“对……心存感激”
还可替换为
I am grateful to my mum for all that she has done for me.
grateful to sb. for sth. 对某人因某事表示感谢
练习(仿写句子)
我很感激老师给我的机会。
I'm grateful for .
我很感谢你提供的建议。
I'm grateful for .
她感谢朋友帮她度过了艰难时期。
She through the difficult time .
我们很感谢志愿者的辛苦付出。
We for their hard work.
(答案见末尾)
2. 我还清楚地记得中学时我考试不及格的那一天。
句子主干:我还记得那天。
I still well remember the day .
那天我考试不及格。
I failed the exam that day.
用定语从句将两句话整合为一句。
I still well remember the day when I failed in an exam in middle school.
3. 我感到非常难过和担忧,甚至对自己有些生气。
I felt very sad and worried, even angry with myself.
还可以用“so ...... that .......”句式表达
I was so sad and worried that I was even angry with myself.
练习(仿写句子)
他非常兴奋和期待,甚至晚上睡不着觉。
He felt very excited and eager, even unable to sleep at night.
她非常疲惫和沮丧,几乎想放弃。
She felt extremely tired and frustrated, almost wanting to give up.
他们非常震惊和困惑,完全不知道该说什么。
They were very shocked and confused, completely unsure what to say.
4. 她看到了我的状态,并告诉我不要太在意分数,而要看到经历本身的重要性。
She saw this and told me not to care too much about grades but to see the significance of experiences.
5. 她让我明白,每一枚硬币都有两面。
She lets me know that every coin has two sides.
好句积累
There are two sides to every story.
每个故事都有两面性
Every cloud has a silver lining.
每朵乌云都有一线光明。
It’s a double-edged sword.
这是一把双刃剑。
You can’t have your cake and eat it too.
鱼与熊掌不可兼得。
Take the rough with the smooth.
接受顺境也要接受逆境。
6. 多亏了她,我学会了换一种方式思考,这对我产生了极大的裨益。
Because of her, I have learned to think in another way, which has benefited me so much.
7. 我永远都不会忘记妈妈为我所做的一切,她的爱、她的关怀、她的鼓励等等。
I'll never forget everything my mum has done for me, her love, her care, her encouragement and so on.
8. 能够成为她的孩子是我最大的幸福。
Being her child is my greatest happiness.
练习(仿写句子)
用 "Being... is my greatest..."结构描述自己的感受。
作为一个音乐爱好者,这是我最大的激情。
活在当下是我最大的满足。
STEP Ⅲ 增加衔接句,成篇。
One possible version
I am grateful to my mum for all that she has done for me.
I still well remember the day when I failed in an exam in middle school. I was so sad and worried that I was even angry with myself. She saw this and told me not to care too much about grades but to see the significance of experiences. She lets me know that every coin has two sides. Because of her, I have learned to think in another way, which has benefited me so much.
I'll never forget everything my mum has done for me, her love, her care, her encouragement and so on. Being her child is my greatest happiness.
参考例句
I’m grateful for the opportunities my teacher gave me .
I’m grateful for the advice you offered .
She was grateful to her friend for helping her through the difficult time .
We are grateful to the volunteers for their hard work .
He was so excited and eager that he couldn’t even sleep at night.
She was so tired and frustrated that she almost gave up.
They were so shocked and confused that they had no idea what to say.
Being a music lover is my greatest passion.
Being in this moment is my greatest contentment.
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