Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals Project写作专训 2025-2026学年人教版（2024）英语八年级上

Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 写作专训 Project 佳作赏析 经典例题 在报纸上看到一篇《救救老虎》的报道。你又想到近来看见有人在路边销售老虎骨头(bone)等事，对此感到担忧。请你写一篇报道，呼吁大家保护老虎等野生动物。 要点如下：1.老虎是国家保护动物，目前数量日趋减少； 2.写信原因是目睹到有人为赚钱滥捕滥杀老虎； 3.森林的大量砍伐破坏了老虎的生存环境。呼吁严惩捕猎者(hunter)希望大家努力，创造一个人类和动物和平共处的幸福家园。 高分范文 I've just read an article in a newspaper about saving tigers. 1. It says that the number of tigers is becoming smaller in our country. It's terrible. 2. I saw a few people sell bones of tigers by the roadside the other day. I also learned that some people killed tigers 3. in order to make money. And the huamns cut down too many trees. 4. The places where tigers used to live were destroyed. Tigers are in danger of dying out. Our government should take actions to protect the tigers. We should try our best to make our earth pleasant and peaceful, not only for human beings but also for animals. 名师点评 这篇文章是应用文，作者先介绍了路边看到的现象，接下来介绍环境的恶化，造成老虎数目减少。然后作者向政府建议采取措施惩罚捕猎者，尽量保护动物，我们的环境会更美。 通篇运用不同短语使文章的句式长短变化，固定结构used to do sth.， try one’s best让语言地道，优美。是不可多得的好文章。 1.用宾语从句和短语 the number of点出问题。 2. 用see sb do sth 表达了亲眼所见，增加了文章的感染力。 3. in order to, cut down等短语的使用让文章的语言更生动和多样化。 4. 定语从句和短语used to do sth.， take actions 和try one’s best等显示了作者丰富的语言积累。 素材积累 【开头句】 1. I think the most endangered animal is tiger. 2. Many animals are in danger because of human’s activities. 【中间句】 1. As we all know, pandas live on bamboo. 2. Elephants are smart animals, and they have good memories. 3. They live in the sea and eat small fish. 4. One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water. 【结尾句】 1. It is high time we should do something to protect the pandas. 2. Let’s take action right away to protect wild animals! 【名言警句】 1. A dog is a man's best friend.狗是人类最好的朋友。 2. Where there is love for animals, there is love for humanity.哪里有对动物的爱，哪里就有对人类的爱。 “写作演练” 小试身手 鲸鱼长相憨厚可爱，深受全世界人民喜爱。但其数量却很少，请你谈谈鲸鱼的现状以及我们应该如何保护鲸鱼，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。 思路点拨 1. 文体：说明文　 2. 人称：　第一人称和第三人称 3. 时态：一般现在时 4. 介绍鲸鱼的现状，点出鲸鱼面临的危险，最后提出建议。 写作提纲 妙笔生花 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Whales are huge animals. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water. Another interesting fact is that they can sing songs. Therefore, many people around the world love them However, some kinds of whales are in danger because humans catch them for meat, fat and oil, and use whale parts to make things like candles and soap. What’s more, water pollution gets more serious and human activities cause more problems, whales cannot find enough clean place to live and they are having fewer babies. We should protect whales from water pollution. I think people should stop putting rubbish into the sea, make rules on whale protection and learn more about whales. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$