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Dear eric, learning that you are stuck in choosing the club i'm writing to recommend the traditional chinese painting club to you rated is one of the best clubs of our school. The traditional chinese painting club enjoys wide popularity among the students. This club organizes various activities ranging from the visit to chinese painting galleries to the lecture on how to sharpen your artistic skills. Moreover, learning traditional chinese painting can not only cultivate your patients and imagination, but also offer you deep insights into our excEllent history and culture. You just can't miss the chance to join the traditional chinese painting club. If interested, just fill in the application form in the student union office before october third, yours li wa.
Learning from your last letter that you are eager to explore traditional chinese culture, I think the ancient poetry is your best choice, please, that you are going to pay a visit to n. I'm writing to recommend to use some tourist attractions deserving visiting since you show great interest in chinese martial arts and that you desire to learn, i'd like to introduce a martial arts teacher to you. With a history of hundreds of years, the summer palace reflects typical ancient chinese architectural art in wisdom. As one of the world wonders, the great wall is regarded as the symbol of china, which you can't afford to miss. Visiting the summer palace by yourself is bound to greatly promote your understanding of the profound traditional chinese culture. I do hope you can take my recommendation into account, and whenever you need help, don't hesitate to let me know. Hope my recommendation will help you, wish you a good time.
Dear Henry, I am lehua, a seventeen year old student from china. I am writing to apply to participate in the international youth cultural change camp. I believe I am an ideal candidate for this program. To begin with, my cheerful personality allows me to build positive relationships with others, thus I am eager to bring my energy to this program. Furthermore, with over a decade of english study, I have a high proficiency in english, enabling me to share chinese culture with foreigners effortlessly. I sincerely hope to be granted this valuable opportunity. I would appreciate IT if you could consider my application yours iwa.
Learning the school basketball team is looking for new members. I'm excited to apply to be a member of IT. From the advertisement, I know a host is needed for the coming music festival, so I can't wait to apply for the position. I'm competent to do the job for the following advantages, active and sociable. I get along with others easily. With a good command of english, I can communicate with foreign visitors with great ease. I have engaged in several such great activities, thus equipped me with abundant relevant experience. Equally importantly, I previously served as a volunteer several times, which is also an advantage over other applicants. Any favorite able consideration of my application will be appreciated. I'm looking forward to your early reply. If accepted, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
二、推荐/介绍信和申请信
1.推荐/介绍信
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夺人眼球开头句(说明写信目的,指明推荐/介绍的对象)
①Learning from your last letter that you are eager to explore traditional Chinese culture, I think the ancient poetry is your best choice.从你上一封信中得知你渴望探索中国传统文化,我认为古诗是你最好的选择。
②Delighted/Pleased that you are going to pay a visit to Xi’an, I’m writing to recommend to you some tourist attractions deserving visiting.很高兴你要去西安游玩,我写信向你推荐一些值得一游的景点。
③Since you show great interest in Chinese martial arts, and that you desire to learn, I’d like to introduce a martial arts teacher to you.因为你对中国武术很感兴趣,并且想学习武术。我想给你介绍一位武术老师。
亮点出彩篇中句(具体说明推荐/介绍的理由)
①With a history of hundreds of years, the Summer Palace reflects typical ancient Chinese architectural art and wisdom.颐和园有着数百年历史,反映了典型的中
国古代建筑艺术和智慧。
②As one of the world wonders, the Great Wall is regarded as the symbol of China, which you can’t afford to miss.长城是世界奇观之一,是中国的象征,不容错过。
③Visiting the Summer Palace by yourself is bound to greatly promote your understanding of the profound traditional Chinese culture.游览颐和园一定会大大促进你对中国悠久传统文化的了解。
韵味无穷结尾句(表达期待与祝愿)
①I do hope you can take my recommendation into account and whenever you need help, don’t hesitate to let me know.我真的希望你能考虑我的推荐,无论何时你需要帮助,请及时让我知道。
②Hope my recommendation will help you. Wish you a good time/journey.希望我的推荐能帮到你。祝你玩得开心/旅途愉快。
完美佳作
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假定你是李华,你校成立了中国传统绘画、武术和音乐三个学生社团。你的新西兰同学Eric不知如何选择,写信向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.推荐某一社团;2.告知申请方式。
Dear Eric,
Learning that you are stuck in choosing the club, ①I’m writing to recommend the traditional Chinese painting club to you (我写信向你推荐国画俱乐部).
Rated as one of the best clubs of our school, the traditional Chinese painting club enjoys wide popularity among us students. ②This club organizes various activities, ranging from the visit to Chinese painting galleries to the lecture on how to sharpen your artistic skills (这个俱乐部组织各种活动,从参观中国画画廊到如何提高艺术技能的讲座都有). ③Moreover, learning traditional Chinese painting can not only cultivate your patience and imagination but also offer you deep insights into our excellent history and culture.
You just can’t miss the chance to join the traditional Chinese painting club. If interested, just fill in the application form in the Student Union office before October 23rd.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.申请信
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夺人眼球开头句(自我介绍、说明招聘信息并提出申请)
①Learning the school basketball team is looking for new members, I’m excited to apply to be a member of it.
得知校篮球队在招收新队员,我激动地申请成为队员。
②From the advertisement I know a host is needed for the coming music festival, so I can’t wait to apply for the position.我从广告中得知即将到来的音乐节需要主持人,所以我迫不及待地申请该职位。
亮点出彩篇中句(阐述优势:资格、性格特征、交际能力、语言能力和相关经验)
①I’m competent to do the job for the following advantages.因为如下优点,我有能力做好该工作。
②(性格特征)Active and sociable, I get along with others easily.我很活跃,善于交际,很容易与他人相处。
③(交流) With a good command of/my proficiency in
English, I can communicate with foreign visitors with great ease.我精通英语,能与外国游客轻松地交流。
④(经验)I have engaged in several such great activities, thus equipping me with abundant relevant experience.我参加过几次这样的大型活动,积累了丰富的相关经验。
⑤(经验)Equally importantly, I previously served as a volunteer several times, which is also an advantage over other applicants.同样重要的是,我之前做过几次志愿者,这也是我相较于其他申请者的一个优势。
韵味无穷结尾句(表达感谢、期望或决心)
①Any favorable consideration of my application will be appreciated. I’m looking forward to your early reply.如蒙考虑,本人将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。
②If accepted, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.如被录取,我将不遗余力地提供我最佳的服务。
完美佳作
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假定你是李华,剑桥大学将举办国际青少年文化交流营(International Youth Cultural Exchange Camp),现已开放申请,请你给其负责人Henry写一封邮件申请参加。内容包括:1.自我介绍并提出申请;2.个人优势;3.表达希望。
Dear Henry,
I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from China. ①I am writing to apply to participate in the International Youth Cultural Exchange Camp (我写信申请参加国际青少年文化交流营). (自我介绍并提出申请)
I believe I am an ideal candidate for this program. ②To begin with, my cheerful personality allows me to build positive relationships with others; thus, I am eager to bring my energy to this program. Furthermore, with over a decade of English study, I ③have a high proficiency in English, enabling me to share Chinese culture with foreigners effortlessly (英语水平很高,可以毫不费力地与外宾分享中国文化).
I sincerely hope to be granted this valuable opportunity. ④I would appreciate it if you could consider my application (如能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激). (表达希望)
Yours,
Li Hua
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