Unit 2 Home Sweet Home写作专训 2025-2026学年人教版（2024）英语八年级上册

Unit 2 Home Sweet Home写作专训 Project 佳作赏析 经典例题 假设你是Susan,在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求,有时你是否感到厌烦?你是怎样解决的?请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文. 父母的要求 每天打扫房间;不能玩电脑游戏;晚上10点前必须睡觉…… 你的看法 虽太严厉,但理解他们…… 你的解决方式 与父母多交流,为父母做些家务…… 高分范文 There are too many rules in my family. 1. I have to clean the room every day. They don’t allow me to play computer games in my free time. I can't hang out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. 2. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. 3. I communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them do housework, 4.such as sweeping the floor, walking the dog and cleaning up the bathroom.. These are my good ways to get on well with them. 名师点评 这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如there be, hang out,fbe strict with,communicate with,as much as possible,share ... with,get on well with等.增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯. 1.用have to 介绍了我必须做的家务。 2. 用be strict with 表达了自己的态度。 3. as much as possible,share ... with的灵活准确的运用体现了作者扎实的语言功底。 4. such as 引导出的具体家务，丰富了文章内容，让本文更丰满生动。 素材积累 【开头句】 1. It is everyone’s duty to do laundry. 2. I think it is necessary for us to do housework. 【中间句】 1. I swept the floor at first and took out the rubbish. 2. What’s more，I also cooked some porridge. 3. I often help my parents with housework,such as cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes. 【结尾句】 1. Doing housework can relax ourselves. 2. Helping out at home brings joy to the family. 【名言警句】 1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 2.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。“写作演练” 小试身手 教育部提出劳动教育是义务教育的重要组成部分。劳动有助于提升我们的生活技能，创造美好生活，也有助于培养我们的精神品质。你校英文杂志社将开展以“Labor Is the Greatest”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿。 提示： 1.What do you think of labor? 2.What kind of labor do you often do? 3.What did you learn from doing so? 思路点拨 1. 文体：说明文　 2. 人称：　第一人称 3. 时态：一般现在时 4. 按照要求首先谈一下自己对劳动的看法，然后介绍自己在家和学习经常做的劳动，最后说一下自己在劳动中学到了什么。 写作提纲 妙笔生花 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作专训 Project Labor is part of our life. It helps us develop our life skills. We should share some labor work both at home and at school. As for me, I often do some laundry, such as cleaning the floor, washing the dishes, making the bed, cooking meals and so on at home. At school, I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides ,I join in some garbage sorting activities in the community. I learn a lot from labor work. It helps me learn to look after myself and develop my life skills. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$