2025年人教版中考英语作文重点攻关（讲义）Lesson 8 分类例文⑥

2025年中考英语作文重点攻关（讲义） Lesson 8 分类例文⑥ 其他 The New Year's Eve 例文 As we all know the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, but the New Year's Eve is even more unforgettable. On New Year's Eve, family members get together and have a big dinner. During the dinner they eat delicious food and talk about some interesting topics happily. After dinner children usually receive red packets from their uncles and aunts and then they go out to set off firecrackers with their friends. 好词好句 the Spring Festival 春节 be even more unforgettable 甚至更令人难忘 get together 聚在一起 talk about some interesting topics happily 兴高采烈地谈论一些有趣的话题 receive red packets from their uncles and aunts 收到叔叔和阿姨给的红包 set off firecrackers 放鞭炮 文章点评 作者清晰地勾画了一幅传统中国人除夕夜的美景：家庭聚餐、情感交流、长辈给小辈发红包以及放烟火等习俗，按照事物发展的先后顺序对除夕夜活动进行描写，只要是读过此文，即便是异国的朋友也能体会到中国the New Year's Eve所具有的传统魅力，感受到丰富的活动内容。全文通俗易懂，内容真实客观，能作为读者了解中国除夕日活动的参考。 各省市中考题 北京 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内） 假如你叫李玲，是英国中学生露茜的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什么。 Dear Li Ling, These days Tom Cruise, a film star, always comes into my mind. I think of him night and day. I just sit in my room and watch videos of his films again and again. I've written hundreds of letters to him and sent e-mails to his fan club, but all I get back are only photos with his names on them. I dream that some day I'll meet him and that he'll feel the same way about me. I don't want to learn my lessons any more, and I'll have final exams next month. I'm thinking of running away to Hollywood（好莱坞）to meet him. Can you help me with the problem? Yours, Lucy 例文 Lucy, I am so glad to hear from you thousand miles apart. There is nothing wrong that you are fascinated by a super star. However, you cannot go too far since you are still a student. Why not try doing some sports or reading more interesting books in your leisure time? Running away to Hollywood is just a waste of time and money. What you should do is to work hard and get along well with your parents and friends. I believe you are sure to go through the confusion with your own efforts. Yours, Li Ling 好词好句 hear from sb. 收到某人的来信 be fascinated by a super star 被超级明星所吸引 in your leisure time 在你的闲暇时光 a waste of time and money 浪费时间和金钱 get along well with your parents and friends 与你的父母和朋友相处得好 I believe you are sure to go through the confusion with your own efforts. 我相信你一定能够通过自己的努力渡过这个困惑期。 文章点评 本文对于青少年追星族过于狂热的表现给予了恰当合理的建议。为了让Lucy更容易接受，首先作者并没有完全否定她的行为，只是进行恰当的制止并提出了建议。如何解决问题是本文的关键，作者用简洁有力的语句做到了。 河北 假如你叫李华，刚收到原同班好友John的来信。John是上学期随父母回加拿大的。这次来信，他想了解学校、班级的近况。 请你根据以下内容提示给他回信。（信的开头及结尾已给出） 提示： 1．新同学Ann的情况。 2．学校、班级最近举行的一项活动，如运动会、球赛、郊游、英语晚会等。 要求： 1．回信必须包括以上两方面内容，可适当发挥。 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、学校名或地名。 3．词数为60～80。 Dear John, I'm happy that everything is going on well with you! Best wishes! Li Hua 例文 Dear John, I'm happy that everything is going on well with you! This term we meet a new classmate from Canada. Her name is Ann. She's pretty with straight blond hair and big blue eyes. She shows great interest in Chinese and we help each other in language learning. Yesterday we went for an outing. It was so wonderful an experience that we had a close contact with nature. Everyone was attracted by the beautiful scenery in the park. How happy we are! Best wishes! Li Hua 好词好句 show great interest in Chinese 对汉语表现出极大的兴趣 go for an outing 外出郊游 have a close contact with nature 与大自然亲密接触 be attracted by the beautiful scenery 被美丽的风景所吸引 She's pretty with straight blond hair and big blue eyes. 她很漂亮，有着金色的直发和蓝色的大眼睛。 文章点评 本文的完成需要有一定的想象力。根据提示的两项内容，将其合情合理地扩展充实。人物描写时，既有外表又有兴趣爱好和行为。写班级活动时，重点强调效果和意义，各有侧重。文章表达完整，句式多变，有较多可取之处。 浙江绍兴 看图表达 假设你是中学生李华，曾有一个幸福的家庭，但父亲的变化使你非常担心。请你根据以下四幅图画，给你父亲写一封信，说说你的心里话，并给他提一些建议。 注意：1．信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 2．词数：80左右。 Dear dad, I want to have a talk with you. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 例文 Dear dad, I want to have a talk with you. We once had a very happy family. At that time you were a very good doctor loved by all your patients. You always helped Mum do housework every day. However, now you are a quite different person. You play cards all night and often quarrel with my mum. I just can't put my heart into my studies. I am very worried about our family and you. Dad, I hope you can get rid of your bad habits and care more about our family. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 好词好句 help sb. do housework 帮忙某人做家务 play cards all night 整夜打牌 quarrel with my mum 和妈妈吵架 Dad, I hope you can get rid of your bad habits and care more about our family. 爸爸，我希望你能改掉坏习惯，多关心我们的家。 文章点评 作者充分理解了四幅图的内容并且进行了完整的描述，同时还站在Li Hua的角度，通过真情实感向父亲诉说，非常感人。文章语言表达完整，信息全面再加以感情色彩，使其成为一篇较好的看图说话习作。 浙江 假设你是李华，请从下面小题中选择部分信息，给你在英国的笔友Harry写一封信，谈谈你的暑假安排，80词左右。 注意：信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 例文 Dear Harry, Summer holiday is coming. How excited I am! I can have more time to arrange by myself. First, I am going to have a trip to West Lake by bike with my friend. I'm sure it will be a lot of fun! In addition to the entertainment, I will do some exercise to improve my math because I am not so good at it. Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking meals and cleaning rooms. What do you think of my plan? Please write back soon. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 好词好句 have more time to arrange by myself 有更多的时间可以自己支配 in addition to the entertainment 除了娱乐 Summer holiday is coming. 暑假即将来临。 Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking meals and cleaning rooms. 当然，对我来说，做一些像烧饭、打扫房间等等的家务也是必要的。 文章点评 作者把暑假生活安排分成三类：旅游、学习和做家务，并且分别展开论述，用一句话能基本完整地进行描述。一些连词的使用让文章增色不少，如：first, in addition to, of course...等，起到承上启下自然过渡的作用。 南京 假如你是李强，你的美国笔友Shirley正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Miss Li。 要求： 1．词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。 3．根据所给信息做适当发挥，要求条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。 Dear Shirley, Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he has a good sense of humour. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Li. Best wishes. Your sincerely, Li Qiang 例文 Dear Shirley, Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he has a good sense of humour. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Li. Miss Li is a nice slim teacher who has taught us for three years. She looks young and energetic though she is over 40. She likes reading and she often travels when she is free. That is why she is knowledgeable and is always sharing us with her interesting experience. As a teacher, she is also very patient. She spends lots of time explaining difficult points on textbooks, helping us have a good command of English. Besides, she got the first prize in the teaching competition. All of us like her. Best wishes. Your sincerely, Li Qiang 好词好句 have a good sense of humour 有幽默感 look young and energetic 看上去年轻且精力充沛 share us with her interesting experience 和我们分享她有趣的经历 explain difficult points on textbooks 解释课本上的难点 That is why she is knowledgeable and is always sharing us with her interesting experience. 这就是为什么她的知识丰富又经常和我们一起分享她的有趣经验的原因。 文章点评 文章清楚生动地刻画了一个充满活力又知识丰富的英语老师的形象。从外表特征到兴趣爱好以及师生关系都有讲到，尤其以第二点给人印象最深。用that is why she is...的句型将其爱好和个性特点一句话全部概括，很有特色。 苏州 某英语杂志社“中学生专栏”在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。 注意： 1．词数90左右。（短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数） 2．短文需包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇：自信：confidence (n.), confident (adj.)；打败：beat (beat, beaten) (v.) 例文 Learn to Smile Smile is an attitude towards life. As we all know, life is not always smooth and something sad will happen to you, such as failure in the exam. However, you should learn to smile to yourself. Smile makes you feel more confident. If you smile to the others, you will be much closer to your friends. Smile is the common language throughout the whole world that everyone can understand. Therefore, in order to make life better, just keep smiling to yourself as well as to everyone around you. 好词好句 an attitude towards life 对待生活的一种态度 keep smiling 保持微笑 Smile is the common language throughout the whole world that everyone can understand. 微笑是整个世界上每个人都能理解的共同语言。 文章点评 本文主题为“微笑”，较为抽象。但是作者有效的安排令层次清晰，结构明朗。文中一些语句很有哲理，如：Smile is an attitude towards life或Life is not always smooth，发人深省。最后一句重申主题。 重庆 假如你是张红，你想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，请用英语写一份申请。申请的开头和结尾已给出。 内容应包括： 1．你参加这次活动的目的； 2．你的兴趣、特长； 3．你希望住在什么样的美国家庭。 要求： 1．词数：80词左右； 2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。 提示词语：夏令营summer camp Dear Sir/Madam, _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hong 例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I want to join in the summer camp. It's a good way to improve my English and can help me know more about American culture. I often surf on the Internet to keep up with the time. I am an outgoing person. Sports and pop music are my hobbies. Besides, I do quite well in English and can talk with foreigners freely. English is important for me to communicate with native speakers. I hope I could stay in a large American family with three or four children. I'm sure we'll have a great time together. Thank you! Yours, Zhang Hong 好词好句 know more about American culture 对美国文化了解更多 surf on the Internet 上网 an outgoing person 一个活泼外向的人 communicate with native speakers 和说本族语的人交流 I'm sure we'll have a great time together. 我相信我们一定能够在一起度过非常美好的时光。 文章点评 本文层次清晰，观点明确。以申请书的语气介绍自己的兴趣特长，充满自信。句型多变，词汇丰富，完整有效地表达清楚了必要的信息，实现了书信的目的。 扬州 暑假即将到来，阳光中学的学生正计划外出旅游，好好休息一下。请结合有关旅游去向的调查结果和中文提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 注意：要点完整、语法正确、上下文连贯，可适当发挥。首句已给出（不计入总词数）。 提示： 1．到大城市可参观博物馆并游览名胜； 2．到小城市可享受美食； 3．到农村可呼吸新鲜空气（fresh air）并领略大自然的美丽（beauty）。 The summer holidays are coming. _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ 例文 The summer holidays are coming. Many students are planning for their trips. Half of the students prefer to visit big cities since there are a lot of places of interest and museums there. Only one-sixth of the students mean to go to small cities. They think they can taste the delicious food in a small city. The other one third are willing to travel in countryside, where they can not only breathe the fresh air but also enjoy the natural beauty. 好词好句 prefer to visit big cities 更喜欢去参观大城市 places of interest 名胜古迹 mean to go to small cities 计划去小城镇 They can not only breathe the fresh air but also enjoy the natural beauty. 他们不但能呼吸到新鲜空气，还能领略到大自然的美丽。 文章点评 在调查报告这类文章中，如何避免重复是最主要的问题。本文调查学生的旅游去向，用了三种方式来表示“想去”：prefer to visit, mean to go to, are willing to travel。同时作者还用不同的从句分别表示去做的事情，句式多样不单调。全文围绕中心，言简意赅，作者语言运用娴熟，词汇积累较多，有很多的可学之处。 天津 请你以学校学生会的身份，写一份有关即将在本校举办英语夏令营活动的书面通知，内容如下： 注意：1．词数在80～100个左右； 2．意思连贯，语言通顺，避免逐条翻译； 3．开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：做演讲make a speech (give a lecture)；辩论have a debate June 6, 2006 Dear Students, The English Summer Camp will _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ Students' Union 例文 June 6,2006 Dear students, The English Summer Camp will be held in the school hall from July 29 to August 1. Many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in. During the camp, you can give a lecture and have a debate over the hot issues. Besides,the students who are good at English study will share with you their secret to success. The teachers and the students will work together to organize an English party. In the end, you'll have a chance to go sight-seeing in Tianjin. Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it. Don't forget to tell us what you think of the camp in your diary. Students' Union 好词好句 during the camp 在夏令营期间 have a debate over the hot issues 举行有关热点问题的辩论会 share with you their secret to success 和你分享他们的成功秘诀 take an active part in it 积极参与 In the end, you'll have a chance to go sight-seeing in Tianjin. 最后，你将有机会游览天津市。 文章点评 本文内容充实，信息全面。有关夏令营的所有要点都能完整扼要地表达出来，同时还能加以恰当的补充，加上连接词的使用，使文章更加连贯。此外，本文作为号召性的通知功能凸显，以“Many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in”开头并且自然过渡，和结尾“Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it”遥相呼应，为文章加分。 福建 假如你的英文名字叫Jenny，请你给曾经教过你的外籍教师Miss Rona发一封e-mail。 内容提示： 1．爸爸在福州找到新工作，你现在就读于福州第101中学； 2．校园绿树成荫，整洁美丽； 3．放学后常去学校游泳池游泳，周五下午去英语角（the English Corner）练习口语； 4．与老师和同学相处融洽； 5．你对校园生活的感受。 要求： 1．所给信息必须全部用上； 2．内容充实，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范； 3．可适当发挥，词数80词左右，不包含已给出的句子。 例文 Dear Rona, How's everything going? I'm now in Fuzhou because my father has just started a new job here. I'm studying at No. 101 Middle School. It's very clean and beautiful. There are many green plants in it. There is a big swimming pool in my school, so I often go swimming after school. It is so cool for us to swim in summer. Every Friday afternoon, I go to the English Corner to practice speaking English. There are a lot of students gathering together to share their experience of learning English. I get on very well with my teachers and classmates. They are friendly with me. I like my new school. I really enjoy my school life here. Love, Jenny 好词好句 go swimming after school 放学后去游泳 go to the English Corner 去英语角 practice speaking English 练习说英语 share their experience of learning English 分享他们的学英语的经验 I get on very well with my teachers and classmates. 我和老师、同学都相处得非常好。 文章点评 本文层次清楚，内容全面。在有效的文字里包含所有必要信息，但又不是简单的罗列与翻译，每条都加上了个人评论或观点，并且衔接自然，意思连贯。尤其是“There are a lot of students gathering together to share their experience of learning English”这句，给文章增色不少。 上海 Use the following points as a reference: 1．What kind of person are you? 2．What makes you proud of yourself? (Give an example/examples) 3．Why are you proud of yourself? 例文 I'm Proud of Myself Having studied in school for about 9 years, I have learned to be helpful to others. So I think I'm a helpful and considerate student. As long as I have spare time after school, I often go to a nearby nursing home to help the old to do some things within my ability. In daily life, if I see someone in trouble, I will give him a hand without hesitation. As we all know helping others helps build a harmonious society. A student only with good marks is not enough to be regarded as a role model. But I can say that I am a good student and I am proud of myself because my help has brought happiness to people in need. 好词好句 a helpful and considerate student 一个乐于助人、考虑周到的学生 spare time 业余时间 a nearby nursing home 附近的敬老院 within one's ability 力所能及的 give him a hand 帮助他 be regarded as a role model 被认为是一个楷模 A student only with good marks is not enough to be regarded as a role model. 一个仅仅成绩优异的学生不能被认为是楷模。 文章点评 文章句句紧扣主题“I'm proud of myself”，将题干中要求的三点内容自然地融入文章中。且运用不同的句式、多样的词汇点缀文章，将文章的层次提升了一个台阶。加之最后一句“But I can say that I am a good student and I am proud of myself because my help has brought happiness to people in need”，用肯定的语气重申了主题，加深了读者的认同感，使文章有了一个很好的收尾。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$