2025年中考英语作文重点攻关（讲义）Lesson 7 分类例文⑤

2025年中考英语作文重点攻关（讲义） Lesson 7 分类例文⑤ My View on Computers 提示： 1．Do you think computers are helpful or not? 2．Is it good or bad for students to play games online? Why? 3．What advice would you give to them? 例文 With the development of science and technology, computers are playing a more and more important role in our life. They help us a lot. With computers, we get huge amounts of knowledge and information easily without going out. What is more, computers have made it more convenient to communicate with friends and relatives. But every coin has two sides. The negative side is that some students are so keen on playing online games that they show little interest in study. So it is teachers' duty to guide students to make good use of computers. 好词好句 with the development of science and technology 随着科学技术的发展 play a more and more important role in our life 在我们生活中起着越来越重要的作用 get huge amounts of knowledge and information easily without going out 不用外出就能容易地得到大量的知识和信息 the negative side 消极的一面 be keen on playing online games 沉溺于玩网络游戏 Every coin has two sides. 凡事都有两面性。 So it is teachers' duty to guide students to make good use of computers. 因此指导学生更好地利用电脑，老师责无旁贷。 文章点评 “Every coin has two sides.”这一句话透露出作者在写作构思中的全局观，既看到电脑对人类生活巨大的贡献，即足不出户获取各类信息知识、亲朋好友之间实现异地远程交流的同时，也看到一批沉溺于网络游戏的学生因此荒废学业。面对这种情况，作者适时地给出了自己的观点：作为教师，应该担负起引导学生正确使用电脑的责任。 Shopping on the Internet 提示： 1．Would you like to do some shopping online? 2．Why or why not? 例文 Nowadays, shopping on the Internet has become fashionable, especially for young people, but I don't think shopping online is wise because I can not make sure that the goods online are of good quality. I am afraid that I will be cheated because many customers are reported to have been cheated. Though the prices are tempting, it will be wise to give up the idea of shopping online before it is too late. 好词好句 make sure 确定 be of good quality 质量好 be reported to have been cheated 有报道受到欺骗 give up the idea of shopping online 放弃了网上购物的想法 Though the prices are tempting, it will be wise to give up the idea of shopping online before it is too late. 虽然价格诱人，但在受骗之前放弃网上购物的想法还是明智的。 文章点评 以评价在线购物成为当代年轻人购物方式的潮流开篇可谓客观大气，后文又简单明了给出作者独到的见解，认为在线购物不安全，并给出详实可靠的原因“because many customers are reported to have been cheated”，文末又权衡了在线购物的利弊，即价格吸引人的同时风险很大，最后重申作者的观点：在线购物不可取。全文不乏好词佳句，结构流畅清晰，说理明确。 人生哲理 A Successful Person in My Eyes 短文需包含下列要点： 1．Who is the successful person in your eyes? 2．Why do you think he/she is successful? (Give two reasons) 3．What can you learn from him/her? 例文1 People judge a successful person by different standards. Some by the amount of money he possesses and others by the high post he holds, while my standard to judge a successful person is to see how much he has done to help others and how much pleasure he has brought to the people around. The successful person in my eye is my father. He is open-minded and ready to help whoever is in difficulty. With his guidance, our neighbours have earned money from the stock market. Out of his kindness, some orphans received red packets on the New Year's Eve last year. I will study hard and help whoever is in trouble when I grow up. 好词好句 judge a successful person by different standards 用不同的标准来评价一个成功者 bring pleasure to the people around 带给周围的人们快乐 in my eye 在我眼中 be open-minded 心胸开阔 be ready to help whoever is in difficulty 乐于帮助任何处境困难的人 with his guidance 在他的指导下 earn money from the stock market 从股市中赚钱 I will study hard and help whoever is in trouble when I grow up. 我要努力学习，等长大后去帮助那些处境困难的人。 例文2 My grandpa is a successful person. There are at least three reasons why I regard him as a successful person. Firstly, although he is sixty-three years old, he is still healthy and active toward life. Secondly, he has so much knowledge about history that when I have difficulty in learning history I will turn to him for help. Thirdly, he used to be in the army, fought several big battles and caught a war prisoner. I will learn from my grandpa and become a useful person to our country. 好词好句 at least 至少 regard him as a successful person 把他看做一个成功的人 have much knowledge about history 有许多历史知识 turn to him for help 向他求助 I will learn from my grandpa and become a useful person to our country. 我要向祖父学习，做一个对国家有用的人。 例文3 Different people have different opinions about the definition of success. In my viewpoint, a nurse is a successful person because her duty is to heal the wounded and rescue the dying. It is known to all that we often call nurses angels in white because with their help, people get away from diseases and pains. Like angles, they bring people happiness and hope. That's why I think they are successful. In addition, they teach us by action that it's everyone's responsibility to help others out of trouble and be always ready to give the weak a hand. 好词好句 have different opinions about the definition of success 对于成功的定义有不同的见解 in my viewpoint 在我看来 heal the wounded and rescue the dying 救死扶伤 call nurses angels in white 称护士为“白衣天使” teach us by action 以实际行动教导我们 help others out of trouble 帮助别人脱离困境 In addition, they teach us by action that it's everyone's responsibility to help others out of trouble and be always ready to give the weak a hand. 此外，她们以实际行动教导我们，帮助别人脱离困境并且随时准备给弱者以帮助是每个人的责任。 文章点评 上述三篇文章都以“我眼中的成功人士”为主题，角度多样，且结合具体事例。例文1的作者以评判什么样的人是成功人士展开讨论，词句使用精准却不张扬，如：I will study hard and help whoever is in trouble when I grow up. 结尾十分有力，是值得学习的写作方法。例文2以爷爷来描绘作者心中的成功人士，用firstly...secondly...thirdly简洁明了。从几个侧面介绍爷爷，内容真切、生动。用词丰富，如：regard...as, so much...that..., used to be..., learn...from, to be a useful person to our country，可见只要运用恰当、灵活，同样也可使文章出彩。例文3文章条理清晰，整篇文章紧扣主题，并且作者运用了大量的好词好句，恰当地描述了a successful person in my eyes，使读者产生共鸣，同样也将文章内涵又提升了一个层次。 The Most Important Thing in My Life 提示： 1．What are the important things in your life? 2．Which one do you think is the most important thing? 3．Why do you think so? 例文1 It is true that health is the first wealth. No matter what you do, you must have good health. A student needs progress, but without good health progress is only a daydream. Though a scientist wants to make contributions to his country, his poor health prevents him doing so no matter how great his ambitions are. A doctor's duty is to relieve pains and cure patients of diseases, but however skillful he is he can not perform his duty well if he is not healthy. From the above three examples we can come to a conclusion that nothing is more important than health. 好词好句 be only a daydream 只是一场白日梦 make contributions to his country 为他的国家做出贡献 relieve pains and cure patients of diseases 缓解疼痛及治愈病人 perform his duty well 很好地履行他的职责 From the above three examples we can come to a conclusion that nothing is more important than health. 根据上面的三个例子我们可以得出结论：没有什么比健康更重要。 例文2 In my short life, I have met with many things which I think are valuable. But the most important thing in my life is natural affection. East or west, home is the best. Every time I am in trouble, parents are always the first to help me without hesitation. Equivalently, when I achieve success, they feel on top of the world. Blood is thicker than water. Whatever mistakes I have made, they will forgive me with tolerant heart and help me correct them. So with their kind care and strong support, I feel nothing can defeat me. 好词好句 in my short life 在我短暂的生命里 natural affection 亲情 with tolerant heart 以宽容的心 Whatever mistakes I have made, they will forgive me with tolerant heart and help me correct them. 无论我犯了什么错，他们都能以宽容的心原谅我并且帮助我改正错误。 So with their kind care and strong support, I feel nothing can defeat me. 因此在他们亲切的关怀和坚强的支持下，我觉得没有任何事能打败我。 文章点评 上述两篇文章都以“在我生命中重要的是……”为主题。例文1的作者阐明了没有健康的体魄，即使本领再大都无法施展，生动地说明了健康的重要性。作者思路敏捷，用词有力，句型多样，如：No matter what you do, you must have good health. However skillful he is he can not perform his duty well if he is not healthy. 例文2则通过描写作者遇到困难、收获成功和犯下错误时父母的态度，详细叙述了亲情对于作者的重要性，并灵活地运用了各种句式、词汇，使文章的整体难度上升且更加吸引人的眼球。 Honesty Is Important 例文1 Honesty is the first policy. From this point, we can see why it's important for us to be honest. As a student, we should tell the truth to others and do homework by ourselves instead of copying others'. We shouldn't cheat parents, teachers or even ourselves. Telling lies will cause you to lose respect, trust and friends as a result. Since honesty is so important to us that we must be honest. 好词好句 from this point 从这一点看 tell the truth 说真话 copy others' homework 抄袭别人的作业 lose respect, trust and friends 失去尊重、信任和朋友 Since honesty is so important to us that we must be honest. 既然诚信对我们来说那么重要，我们必须诚实。 例文2 More and more people have realized the importance of honesty. In schools, without honesty, students will cheat on exams, making the results of the exams useless. In academic field, without honesty, copyright is not respected and no one wants to write books. As a result, people will not enjoy rich spiritual life and their life will become less colourful. Among friends, without honesty, you are not able to make real friends. So we must practice honesty. 好词好句 realize the importance of honesty 意识到诚信的重要性 cheat on exams 考试作弊 in academic field 在学术领域 enjoy rich spiritual life 享受丰富的精神生活 Among friends, without honesty, you are not able to make real friends. 朋友之间，没有诚信，你就无法交到真正的朋友。 例文3 To become a successful person, many different kinds of qualities are necessary, and among them, in my opinion, honesty is the most important one that everyone must have. Honesty is often used to judge a person's quality and it is also one of the standards by which enterprises recruit employees. So if you are honest, you will win respect and trust, and even get a windfall. Thus we should keep a pure heart to get along with others and bear in mind that honesty is the best policy. 好词好句 in my opinion 在我看来 judge a person's quality 评判一个人的品质 recruit employees 招募员工 win respect and trust 赢得尊重和信任 So if you are honest, you will win respect and trust, and even get a windfall. 因此如果你很诚实，你将赢得尊重和信任甚至会有意外的收获。 Thus we should keep a pure heart to get along with others and bear in mind that honesty is the best policy. 因此我们应该怀有一颗纯洁的心来与人相处并且谨记诚信方为上策。 文章点评 三篇文章从三个不同的角度紧扣“诚实的重要性”进行论述。第一篇站在学生的角度告诉读者，作为一个学生应该做的和不该做的；第二篇运用假设的手法，从校园、学术领域以及人际交往等方面更为鲜明地展现了诚实的可贵；第三篇从社会的视角出发，总结出诚实对于成功的个人和企业的重要性。虽然三篇都短小精悍，但都有一定的教育意义，内涵深厚。另外，在措辞用句方面，状语从句和热点词汇academic field,copyright等的使用将文章层次提升了一个台阶。文章的结尾也很有特色，以第三篇最为突出，“Thus we should keep a pure heart to get along with others and bear in mind that honesty is the best policy”成为点睛之笔，为文章加分不少。 Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way 提示： 1．What do you think of this famous saying? 2．Give example(s) to support your idea(s). 3．Do you have any suggestions to others? 例文1 Where there is a will, there is a way. I'm quite in favor of this famous saying. It tells us that you can really be what you want through your strong will and hard work. Confucius traveled around the country to accumulate knowledge and his ideas are still playing an important role in modern time. Many presidents realized their dreams because they had a will of becoming a successful man. So we should follow this saying if we want to succeed. 好词好句 accumulate knowledge 积累知识 play an important role in modern time 在当代起着重要作用 realize their dreams 实现他们的梦想 follow this saying 按照这句谚语说的去做 So we should follow this saying if we want to succeed. 因此假如我们想要获得成功，就要按照这句谚语说的去做。 例文2 Where there is a will, there is a way. This saying may mislead kids because it overstates the function a will can perform. Many scientists devoted their lives to their research, but no breakthrough was made in their fields, leaving regrets. This example tells us that a strong will can encourage a person to do his work wholeheartedly throughout his life, but success depends on more than one element. My advice is that a strong will is important, but we must look at it objectively and not overstate its function to avoid disappointment. 好词好句 mislead kids 误导孩子 overstate the function a will can perform 夸张了毅力所能起到的作用 devote their lives to their research 致力于他们的研究 make no breakthrough in their field 在他们的领域没有突破 leave regrets 留下遗憾 do his work wholeheartedly throughout his life 他一生全心全意地工作 depend on more than one element 不只取决于一种因素 look at it objectively 客观地看待它 My advice is that a strong will is important, but we must look at it objectively and not overstate its function to avoid disappointment. 我的建议是，坚强的意志虽然重要，但为了避免失望，我们要客观地看待它而不要夸大它的作用。 例文3 Where there is a will, there is a way. This saying means that a strong will can make a great person. In Chinese history, Si Maqian endured the agony and wrote one of the great historical works—Records of the Historian with a strong will. The strong-willed person Sun Bin's knees were pared by knives, but he finished a book on art of war. It was a strong will as well as a sense of responsibility that brought them through difficult times, leaving the great works to the world. 好词好句 make a great person 成就一个伟人 endure the agony 承受巨大的痛苦 a sense of responsibility 责任感 bring them through difficult times 使他们度过了艰难的时期 leave the great works to the world 给世界留下了巨著 It was a strong will as well as a sense of responsibility that brought them through difficult times, leaving the great works to the world. 是坚强的意志力和责任感使他们度过艰难的时期，给世界留下了巨著。 例文4 In my opinion, one must have a strong will if he wants to achieve success because a strong will gives one the confidence he needs to overcome the difficulties in life. Deng Yaping, a famous table-tennis player, is short. In spite of this disadvantage, she did not give up, and with her great efforts, this strong-minded girl changed the coaches' opinion about her and proved to the world that she made it, making impossible possible. Remember that a strong will matters a lot in life. 好词好句 achieve success 取得成功 overcome the difficulties in life 克服生活中的困难 in spite of this disadvantage 虽然有这样的弱点 with her great efforts 在她的不懈努力下 make it 成功 make impossible possible 使不可能成为可能 matter a lot in life 在生活中很重要 With her great effort, she... proved to the world that she made it, making impossible possible. 她付出了巨大的努力……向世界证明了她的成功，变不可能为可能。 文章点评 “有志者，事竟成。”对于这句谚语，只有第二篇文章提出了不同的看法：这句话夸大了意志力的作用，误导了很多孩子，因为成功取决于很多因素，所以作者承认意志力是重要的，但是建议大家客观看待它，不要夸大其作用以免引起失望。这篇文章具有独到见解的同时又富含逻辑性和思想性，对于初中生而言是十分难能可贵的。因此，这篇例文是以内容出彩而让人印象深刻。其余三篇则教会了读者写议论文的基本结构：提出论点—引用事实论证—总结归纳。不同的是各自选择了不同的材料：孔子、司马迁、孙膑、邓亚萍，作者从各事例的角度说明坚持和意志对于成功的重要性。运用了多变的句式，丰富的词汇，条理明晰，论述流畅，表现了作者良好的逻辑性和写作功底。 The Value of Time 例文 As an old proverb goes, "Time and tide wait for no man." From this point, we should know how valuable time is. However, many people think that they have a lot of tomorrows, so they don't value time. In their view, today's work can be left for tomorrow. They spend time drinking, playing mahjong or video games. But it must be pointed out that our life is made up of time and wasting time is equal to wasting life. When time is gone, it never returns. If you don't make full use of time now, you will feel regretful when you are old. Let us cherish time, for it is a part of our life. 好词好句 value time 珍惜时间 in their view 在他们看来 be left for tomorrow 留到明天 be equal to wasting life 等同于浪费生命 be made up of time 由时间组成 make full use of time 充分利用时间 cherish time 珍惜时间 Time and tide wait for no man. 岁月不等人。 If you don't make full use of time now, you will feel regretful when you are old. 如果你现在不充分利用时间，老了你会后悔的。 文章点评 “Time and tide wait for no man.”这句谚语提炼出了时间的价值，立意深远。显然作者对于时间的价值有深刻的理解，通过分析许多人忽视时间、浪费时间、永远抱着“时间用不完”的态度生活，说明时间对于人生的重要性，时间一去不复返。抒情中蕴含着说理，情理相结合的行文风格清新自然。文末劝告所有人好好利用时间，切莫等到老了才后悔，因为明日复明日，明日何其多啊。 热点话题 Better Manners, Better Life 例文1 Good manners are the basis of a better life. As a student, we should start to do so from ourselves in daily life. We should offer a seat to the old when taking a bus or an underground, say "Hello" and smile when we meet someone. Good manners show respect to others and receive it in return. Good manners also play an important role in the building of our harmonious society. The better manners our citizens show, the more civilized our society will be. Let's show better manners to make our lives better. 好词好句 the basis of a better life 更好生活的基础 offer a seat to the old 给老人让座 show respect to others 尊重别人 receive respect in return 作为回报得到了尊重 play an important role in the building of our harmonious society 在建设我们的和谐社会中起着重要的作用 The better manners our citizens show, the more civilized our society will be. 我们的公民越有礼貌，我们的社会就会变得越文明。 例文2 Manners can be a very important thing when we judge a person. Good manners can be seen from anything good you do, especially those small things such as smiling, chewing quietly and so on. I often say "Hello" to my neighbors and never talk loudly in public places. Though they are little changes, they bring joy to people. A lot of little changes can add up to a very big and most welcome change. If every one keeps good manners, we can enjoy a better life. 好词好句 judge a person 评判一个人 chew quietly 安静地咀嚼 talk loudly in public places 在公共场合大声地说话 bring joy to people 给人们带来快乐 If every one keeps good manners, we can enjoy a better life. 如果每个人都有礼貌，我们的生活会更美好。 文章点评 上述两篇文章都以“Better manners, better life”为主题，角度新颖，内容多样且具体。例文1体现的是一种典型的写作构思方法，从“让座”、“微笑打招呼”等具体事例说明了礼貌是社会生活的基础，人们相互尊敬就是礼貌的本质，进而阐明礼貌是社会和谐的关键。例文2则从另一角度来说明礼貌在人们生活中的重要性，一个人的生活习性可以成为区别评价的标准。用词清晰明了，如：Manners can be a very important thing when we judge a person. Better City, Better Life 例文1 I think that the theme of the 2010 Shanghai World Expo, "Better City, Better Life" has signaled a change of our development pattern, that is, from the pursuit of more food and clothing to the pursuit of quality life. In my view, better city generally means a city which can provide everything a happy life needs, for example, fresh air and clean water, roomy house and rich spiritual life besides stable prices. They are the basis of a better life. I think, with nationwide efforts, "Better City, Better Life" will come true. 好词好句 the theme of the 2010 Shanghai World Expo 2010上海世博会的主题 signal a change of our development pattern 标志着我们发展模式的改变 from the pursuit of more food and clothing to the pursuit of quality life 从对食品和衣服的追求到对有质量生活的追求 stable prices 稳定的价格 I think, with nationwide efforts, "Better City, Better Life" will come true. 我想，在全国人民的努力下，“城市，让生活更美好”将会成真。 例文2 “Better City, Better Life" is the theme of the 2010 World Expo. It means that Chinese government has begun to focus more on the quality of life. In the aspect of transport, the theme means people can enjoy more convenience and faster speed; in the aspect of environment, the theme means people will enjoy better health besides the natural beauty created by God and reduce the possibility of suffering from diseases of all kinds. In a word, "Better City, Better Life" is a new target. With more efforts, it will certainly come true. 好词好句 focus more on the quality of life 更加注重生活的质量 enjoy more convenience and faster speed 得到更多的便捷和更快的速度 reduce the possibility of suffering from diseases of all kinds 减少罹患各种疾病的可能性 In the aspect of transport, the theme means people can enjoy more convenience; in the aspect of environment, the theme means people will enjoy better health besides the natural beauty created by God and suffer less from diseases of all kinds. 在交通方面，这主题意味着人们可以享有更多的便捷，在环境方面，这主题意味着人们除了可以享受上帝创造的自然美以外，还可以享有更好的健康并减少患病的可能性。 例文3 It is known to all that Shanghai Expo is being held, whose theme is "Better City, Better Life". It is obvious that better life is based on better city. From this point, we must speed up the development of our city and focus more on the environmental protection, because it is closely related to the quality of our life. We must protect and improve our environment while developing economy. In this way, better life won't be a daydream. 好词好句 be based on better city 建立在美好城市的基础上 from this point 从这一点来看 speed up the development of our city 加速我们城市的发展 focus more on the environmental protection 更加关注环保 develop economy 发展经济 In this way, better life won't be a daydream. 这样，更好的生活就不会只是一场白日梦。 文章点评 上述三篇文章都以“Better City, Better Life”为主题。例文1行文内容有深度，对学生而言是一篇很好的、具有思想性的例文，如signaled a change of our development pattern等好词好句，为文章加分不少。例文2不同于上一篇在深度上的挖掘，而是具体地从侧面描写better life和the quality of life。从交通、环境对健康的影响谈到保持健康的生活方式的本质就是保证生活质量。从语言结构上看，作者恰如其分地运用了in the aspect of和连词in a word等，使文章读来通顺连贯。例文3从城市美好的生活环境是基础谈到在发展经济的同时我们应该关注环保，最后用“In this way, better life won't be a daydream”结尾，可以看出作者文笔老练，收文十分有力。 Is It Helpful to Study Abroad? 提示： 1．Nowadays, one of the most popular things for students is to study abroad. Is it really helpful? 2．Why or why not? (Give at least two reasons) 例文 In recent years, more and more students in China went abroad for further study. Most Chinese people think it is helpful to study abroad. But I don't think so. For one thing, students are too young to study and live independently. For another, studying abroad needs too much money. It is not easy for parents to earn so much money to support their children's study. So I don't agree to the idea of studying abroad. 好词好句 go abroad for further study 去国外深造 for one thing 一方面 study and live independently 独立学习和生活 for another 另一方面 I don't agree to the idea of studying abroad. 我不赞成留学的想法。 文章点评 本文以出国留学为话题展开，作者鲜明地表明个人观点，以for one thing和for another来说明原因，理由中肯实在，表达也很连贯，句式灵活多变不重复。最后，再一次表示不赞成出国留学来重申个人观点。 环境保护 Stop Using Plastic Bags 例文 Many countries are faced with white pollution. It is true that plastic shopping bags have many functions in our daily life, but when we enjoy the convenience of plastic bags, they've also caused serious problems such as resource waste and pollution. We must reduce the use of plastic bags and replace them with the environmental-friendly paper bags or cloth bags. In response to the ban on plastic bags, we should try to use paper or cloth bags instead of plastic ones. We have only one earth, so let's protect and cherish it. 好词好句 be faced with white pollution 面对“白色污染”问题 enjoy the convenience of plastic bags 享有塑料袋的便利 cause serious problems 造成严重的问题 resource waste and pollution 资源浪费和污染 in response to the ban on plastic bags 对“限塑令”的回应 We have only one earth, so let's protect and cherish it. 我们只有一个地球，让我们保护并珍惜它。 文章点评 本文具有新闻通讯类的写作风格。由塑料袋的使用引申出对于环保问题的关注，作者在分析使用塑料袋对环境构成危害的同时，呼吁减少使用塑料袋，并给出相应的替换对策，即replace them with the environmental-friendly paper bags or cloth bags，文末以“一个地球”呼唤读者关注保护地球，减少污染。 Environment Around Us 提示： 1．What do you think of the environment around us nowadays? 2．As students, what should we do to protect the environment around us? 例文 The environment is important to us all. We need fresh air, clean water and so on. There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean, but now they disappeared for one reason or another and were replaced by dirty water and polluted air. Due to the terrible pollution, people's health is getting worse from bad. What is worse, the greenhouse effect is changing our climate, which may lead to even more serious consequences. 好词好句 be important to us all 对我们大家都很重要 need fresh air 需要新鲜空气 disappear for one reason or another 因某种原因而消失 the greenhouse effect 温室效应 lead to even more serious consequences 甚至导致更为严重的后果 What is worse, the greenhouse effect is changing our climate, which may lead to even more serious consequences. 更糟糕的是，温室效应正在改变我们的气候，这一改变也许会导致更为严重的后果。 文章点评 开篇提到环境对于生存的重要性，点明人类生活需要新鲜的空气和干净的水源，之后作者笔锋一转，转到目前的生存环境现状：空气质量恶劣，水质恶劣，健康受到威胁，这些与人类最初的需求相比大相径庭，这种对比的描写方式让读者能更加直观地感受到环境恶化带来的影响，从而激发起读者的环保意识，作者巧妙地用one reason or another回避罗列引起环境恶化的诸多具体原因，文章构思周到全面。 We Must Do Something to Protect Our Environment 例文 The greenhouse effect is becoming more and more serious with the current development pattern. Huge amounts of greenhouse gas such as carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere contributes to climate change. And excessive burning of fossil fuels which is done by human seems to be the key factor. Something must be done to stop this. We must plant more trees to absorb carbon dioxide. In addition, we must develop solar power and wind power. They are more environmental friendly. Otherwise, the terrible environment will claim a number of victims. 好词好句 be released into the atmosphere 被释放到大气层中去 contribute to climate change 造成气候变化 key factor 主要的因素 absorb carbon dioxide 吸收二氧化碳 develop solar power and wind power 发展太阳能和风能 Otherwise, the terrible environment will claim a number of victims. 否则，这恶劣的环境将会夺去许多人的性命。 文章点评 作者对于温室效应了解的知识较为丰富，对其相关的英语表达也较为熟悉。本文用了大量的词汇来描述造成气候变化的原因和解决的办法，解说较为全面。全文的词汇和句型的运用非常老练，可见作者有一定的积累。 Earth Hour 例文 On March 29th, an activity was launched by World Wide Fund for Nature to call for people to leave the lamps off for an hour to protect our earth. This activity is held annually and this year about 371 cities in the world participated. In response to this call, these cities left their lamps off from 8:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m., aiming at arousing more people's consciousness of the climate changes. In my opinion, the idea of launching this activity is quite good, but the result is not as good. And more people will restore their past practice after the activity as old habits die hard. So the hard-gained results are short-lived, unable to live up to the expectations. In conclusion, the fundamental solution to checking the trend that our environment is developing from bad to worse is to educate more people and change their lifestyle besides tapping new energy such as solar energy and wind energy. 好词好句 in response to this call 作为对此呼吁的回应 aim at arousing more people's consciousness of the climate changes 旨在唤醒更多人对气候变化的意识 restore their past practice 恢复他们之前的做法 the fundamental solution to checking the trend 遏制这种趋势的根本解决方法 change their lifestyle 改变他们的生活方式 tap new energy 开发新能源 In my opinion, the idea of launching this activity is quite good, but the result is not as good. 在我看来，发起这一活动的创意相当的好，但是结果没有那么好。 文章点评 文章取材新颖，紧跟时代步伐。全文行文思路清晰，开头先简述了Earth Hour活动的主要内容及其目的，进而以“In my opinion, the idea of launching this activity is quite good, but the result is not as good”过渡，引出了下文对环境气候恶化的描述。最后再以一句复杂的复合句提出了对于恶劣的现状人们应该如何解决。作者灵活地进行句式变换，且运用了丰富的词汇，足可见其作文的深厚功底。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$