2025年中考英语作文重点攻关（讲义）Lesson 3 分类例文①

初中英语作文重点攻关（讲义） Lesson 3 分类例文① 本部分根据主题分类，收集各类例文，在选材上具有较广的覆盖面和时效性，文章的句型结构和遣词造句也具有一定可模仿性。为了方便学生理解和积累，例文后配有相对应的好词好句以及文章点评，可供学生在实践中学习模仿这些例文中的精髓。 学习生活 How to Improve Our Memory 例文1 Some people have a good memory, while others have a bad one. As for me, I always forget things. In order to improve my memory, I usually repeat or recite some articles in the morning and hopefully remember them. Besides, I also use some pictures so as to link them to the things I want to remember. The more special the pictures are, the better I remember them. If you use these methods, you are sure to improve your memory. 好词好句 have a good memory 记性好 as for me 至于我 link the pictures to the things I want to remember 用图片把我想要记住的事联系起来 improve one's memory 提高记忆力 If you use these methods, you are sure to improve your memory. 如果你用这些方法，你一定能提高你的记忆力。 例文2 More often than not, I forget things because my brain just goes wrong. The question how we can improve our memory puzzles many people, including scientists. Medically, most ordinary people have similar memorizing capacity and it's impossible to enlarge it effectively. In my opinion, improving one's memory means making things less likely to escape his memory. So my solution is to increase repetition as repetition helps memorization. 好词好句 more often than not 经常 go wrong 出错 puzzle many people 困惑许多人 have similar memorizing capacity 有相似的记忆能力 increase repetition 增加重复量 In my opinion, improving one's memory means making things less likely to escape his memory. 在我看来，提高一个人的记忆力意味着使他忘记事情的可能性变得小些。 例文3 Although I don't have a very good memory, I can memorize a lot of things in a short time. My memory is improved by thinking in the right way. For example, I find connections between things so that I can easily realize the relationship between things and build a network of things in my mind. But when it doesn't work, I will use my imagination to make different things into a short story which can be memorized easily. Sometimes I write things down in order not to forget them any longer. In a word, memory-improving is possible if you find a good way. 好词好句 memorize a lot of things in a short time 在短时间内记住很多事情 be improved by thinking in the right way 通过用正确的方式思考来得到提高 build a network of things in one's mind 在心中建立一个事情关系网 use one's imagination 运用想象力 In a word, memory-improving is possible if you find a good way. 总之，如果你找到一个好的方法，提高记忆力是有可能的。 文章点评 如何改善记忆？从上述三篇例文中读者应该多少会有些收获。例文1的作者通过亲身体验，给出个人改善记忆的有效方法：通过反复记忆和象形记忆来提高记忆能力。The more special.... the better...句型的运用使得文章更加具有说服力，方法的描述也更为形象生动。例文2给出了一个对改善记忆很好的解读，即：改善记忆等同于减少遗忘的可能性。观点新颖，也符合逻辑性，让人眼前一亮。例文3的作者非常详细地阐述其记忆一件事物的全过程，包括大脑构造关系网等，非常实际有效，这种从小角度切入的写作方法非常适合题目空泛的命题作文。 My Favourite Subject at School 例文1 My favourite subject at school is Art and Craft. It is true that students in Grade Nine are busy, yet I am always able to spare some time for painting. As the famous saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." I like painting because it can let my brain have a rest. In an Art and Craft lesson I needn't think too much when I draw pictures. I learn this subject well by listening to and following our Art and Craft teacher. And at home I often draw pictures to adjust my mood and relieve my pressure. I like this subject. 好词好句 spare some time 腾出一些时间 adjust one's mood 调整心情 relieve my pressure 缓减我的压力 It is true that students in Grade Nine are busy, yet I am always able to spare some time for painting. 九年级的学生确实很忙，但是我总是能够腾出一些时间来画画。 All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻。 例文2 My favourite subject at school is chemistry. I like it because I can see many interesting experiments during the class. Sometimes students are allowed to do some experiments themselves. They can see the changes slowly. So I like chemistry best. Although the subject is interesting, learning it well is difficult and needs great effort. After school I usually go over the lessons, do some related exercises and I hope to learn it well. 好词好句 see many interesting experiments 看到很多有趣的实验 need great effort 需要付出极大的努力 do some related exercises 做些相关的练习 After school I usually go over the lessons, do some related exercises and I hope to learn it well. 放学后我通常复习功课，做些相关的练习，我希望能够学好它。 文章点评 都说兴趣是最好的老师，例文1的作者充分展示了这句话。从作者自身的实际情况出发，以情说理，表达自己对于美术的喜爱。文中适当地使用了一些连词，比如文中将yet的用法发挥得较好、较活，让句型显得生动、流畅，而不是只有单一的Wh-从句形式。例文2的作者有着很强的动手能力，因为“Sometimes students are allowed to do some experiments themselves. They can see the changes slowly”而愈发喜欢上化学课。两篇文章在描述自己喜爱的课程时，叙述流畅，情感真实，条理明晰。 The Way(s) of My Study 提示： 1．What subject do you like best? 2．How do you learn it? 3．What are you going to do to learn it better? 例文1 I am required to study many subjects and among them I like history best, because it is not only interesting but also enlightening. History tells us students stories. In the meantime, it helps us to tell right from wrong. What is more, through history study, I can draw lessons and avoid repetition of the same mistakes. Besides, through history study, I get to know life is not always smooth and that failure is part of life. Only when one has learned history can he hold a correct attitude towards life. 好词好句 not only interesting but also enlightening 不仅有趣而且给人以启迪 draw lessons 吸取教训 avoid repetition of the same mistakes 避免重复相同的错误 Only when one has learned history can he hold a correct attitude towards life. 只有当一个人学了历史，他才会对生活持有正确的态度。 例文2 Talking of my favourite subject, what comes to my mind is geography. It is full of fun. I take advantage of different kinds of maps to enrich my geographical knowledge. Besides, reading geographical magazines is also helpful. I have subscribed to some other related books and journals to improve my study. My dream is to become a geologist in the future so I will keep this way of learning geography. 好词好句 be full of fun 充满乐趣 take advantage of different kinds of maps 利用不同的地图 enrich one's geographical knowledge 丰富地理知识 subscribe to some other related books 订阅一些其他的相关书籍 My dream is to become a geologist in the future so I will keep this way of learning geography. 我的梦想是在将来成为一个地理学家，所以我将继续地理学习之路。 例文3 I have shown great interest in music since I was a kid. Music is sure to be my favourite subject. My way of learning it is to put theory into practice. First, I read books and listen carefully to the teacher's explanation in class. After class, I practice a lot, such as playing musical instruments and practice singing. Furthermore, I will go to the concert to learn how to appreciate music if I have the opportunity. In my opinion, music makes my life colourful and brings me a lot of happiness. 好词好句 put theory into practice 将理论应用到实践中去 listen carefully to the teacher's explanation in class 课上仔细听取老师的解释 learn how to appreciate music 学习如何欣赏音乐 bring sb. a lot of happiness 带给某人许多快乐 In my opinion, music makes my life colourful and brings me a lot of happiness. 在我看来，音乐使我的生活丰富多彩，并能带给我很多快乐。 文章点评 每个人的学习方法都是独特的，对自己感兴趣的科目自然能学得更好。例文1的作者使用连词把学习历史多个方面的好处有条理地展现出来。文章还通过丰富的词汇和灵活的句式将原本朴实无华的文章加以点缀，提升了整个文章的层次。例文2作者说理循序渐进，恰如其分地证明了作者热爱地理，希望成为地理学家的决心。例文3词汇使用丰富，句式转换得当，体现了作者词汇的积累。总的来说，上述三篇例文都非常真实地反映了中学生心中兴趣和学习的结合。 How to Be a Good Learner 例文1 To be a good learner, it's necessary to form good habits. First of all, you should know what you are to learn. Then you ought to make a reasonable plan and carry it out painstakingly. Besides, when you meet with difficulties in your study, you should discuss them in groups and through discussion you may get enlightened or get some advice from others. What is more, hard work also plays an important role in your study. If you have these good habits, you are sure to be a good learner. 好词好句 form good habits 养成好习惯 make a reasonable plan 制订一个合理的计划 carry a plan out painstakingly 努力实施一项计划 get enlightened 得到启迪 play an important role in your study 在你的学习中起着重要的作用 If you have these good habits, you are sure to be a good learner. 如果你有这些良好的习惯，你一定会成为一个优秀的学习者。 例文2 To be a good learner is not very easy. First, a good learner must have wide interests because interest is the engine of study. With it a learner will study without feeling tired. Second, when a learner comes across difficult questions, he should either discuss them with his classmates or consult a dictionary for answers. Remember that the more questions one comes across, the more likely he is to make progress if he doesn't leave them unanswered. 好词好句 have wide interests 兴趣广泛 the engine of study 学习的动力 study without feeling tired 不知疲倦地学习 come across difficult questions 遇到困难的问题 consult a dictionary 查字典 leave the questions unanswered 问题没有解答就丢之一边 Remember that the more questions one comes across, the more likely he is to make progress if he doesn't leave them unanswered. 记住，遇到的问题越多，只要不把这些问题丢之一边不管，就越有可能取得进步。 文章点评 一个好的学习者，应该善于制订计划并付诸实践，能够多与同伴探讨问题并集思广益，始终保持勤奋学习的劲头。同时，广泛的兴趣是学习的动力和保障，而面对难题能主动想办法解决更是读书人应具备的素质。这两篇例文客观地总结出to be a good learner的条件，通篇行文流畅，分析合理，有说服力。在词汇句式使用上，第一篇特别注意在相同词义的表达上选择不同的词汇如should,may以及ought to等，避免一词反复出现的情况；而第二篇的结尾更是精彩，“the more questions one comes across, the more likely he is to make progress if he doesn't leave them unanswered”道出了学者精神：知识就是从不懂到懂的积累过程。 How to Be a Good Student 例文 How to be a good student? The answer to this question may vary from person to person. But I think a good student should have multi-qualities. Firstly, he should be thirsty for knowledge and learn passionately without fearing difficulties ahead. Secondly, obeying the school rules and respecting his teachers is another must. Thirdly, a good student should be ready to learn from his mistakes. Besides, a definite goal in life is necessary. Even if faced with obstacles, he will never give up halfway. Lastly, he must be selfless and ready to help others. A student only with these qualities is worthy of the title—a good student. 好词好句 vary from person to person 因人而异 have multi-qualities 具有多种素质 learn passionately without fearing difficulties ahead 无惧前方的困难而充满热情地学习 obey the school rules 遵守校规 learn from one's mistakes 从错误中吸取教训 a definite goal in life 明确的生活目标 give up halfway 半途而废 be selfless and ready to help others 无私并乐于助人 A student only with these qualities is worthy of the title—a good student. 只有具备这些素质的学生才配得上“好学生”这个头衔。 文章点评 文章开门见山，点明了作者的观点I think a good student should have multi-qualities。作者利用总—分—总的形式，条理清晰地将a good student所必备的条件一一道明，使读者一目了然。此外，内容丰富也是本文的一大亮点。作者运用了不同的连接词、灵活多变的句型和丰富的词汇让读者对作者的观点印象深刻，也为文章加分不少。 The Moment I Was Praised by My Math Teacher 例文 Yesterday afternoon I was told by my math teacher that I had got the first place in the weekly test. The news was so sudden that I could hardly believe it. The next day she praised me in the face of the class and asked my classmates to learn from me. It was the first time that I, a backward student, had experienced such happiness. The praise from my teacher changed my attitude towards study. From then on, I made up my mind to study harder and made more progress in return. 好词好句 get the first place in the weekly test 在周考中获得第一 praise me in the face of the class 当着全班同学的面表扬我 a backward student 后进生 change my attitude towards study 改变了我的学习态度 It was the first time that I, a backward student, had experienced such happiness. 我作为一个后进生，第一次经历了这样的幸福。 文章点评 本文是一个后进生在学习中收获点滴的真实写照。作者用倒叙的方式先介绍了自己因为考了第一名被表扬所感受到的兴奋和快乐，然而读者意想不到的是，第一名曾经是位后进生。这种写作方式能为读者在阅读过程中带来强烈的冲击和对比，“It was the first time that I, a backward student, had experienced such happiness”一句中足以窥见作者在考取第一名时无比的欣喜和自豪之情。 My Summer Holiday Plan 例文 The summer holiday is coming. In order to make my holiday pleasant and meaningful, I have made a reasonable plan. Firstly, I will buy some new books in the bookstore to enrich my spiritual life. Secondly, I will take this chance to visit some places of interest to broaden my eyes and enjoy the beauty of nature. Last but not least, I will see some of my teachers to thank them for their instructions and academic help. 好词好句 make a reasonable plan 制订合理的计划 enrich one's spiritual life 丰富精神生活 take this chance 利用这次机会 visit some places of interest 参观名胜古迹 broaden one's eyes 开阔眼界 enjoy the beauty of nature 欣赏大自然的美 Last but not least, I will see some of my teachers to thank them for their instructions and academic help. 最后，但不是最不重要的，我将去看一些老师，感谢他们的教导和学术上的帮助。 文章点评 本文围绕“有意义的暑假”这一主题，通过丰富的词汇和短语结构，把作者暑期的计划生动地展现在读者眼前：读课外书丰富精神生活，参观名胜古迹扩大个人眼界，欣赏祖国大好河山陶冶情操。值得一提的是，作者在安排好个人假期计划之外不忘记向辛勤培育学生的老师道谢，全文展现了一个勤奋好学、要求上进的当代学生形象。 Computer Improves My English Study 例文 Computer can improve my English study because it has many functions. Firstly, every time I come across a new word, I can look up its usage in an online dictionary. Secondly, I can download English songs to practise listening. However, I think the most important thing for me is to work hard although computer is helpful. As an old saying goes, "No pains, no gains." So we should make efforts rather than just depend on computers if we desire a good mastery of English. 好词好句 have many functions 有很多功能 come across a new word 遇到一个新单词 look up its usage in an online dictionary 在在线字典中查找它的用法 download English songs 下载英语歌曲 As an old saying goes, "No pains, no gains." 就像一句古老的谚语所说：“不劳无获”。 So we should make efforts rather then just depend on computers if we desire a good mastery of English. 因此假如我们想要很好地掌握英语，我们应当更加努力而不是仅仅依靠电脑。 文章点评 本文主旨明确，在列举电脑对英语学习的帮助之后，话锋一转，指出努力学习才是关键，给读者以正确的导向。文章还恰当运用谚语，结束语既解释谚语又点明中心，连接词和从句都恰到好处，非常精彩。 A Letter to Your Friend Write a body letter of at least 60 words to deal with Mike's problems. （假如你是Jack，你的好朋友Mike来信向你请教如何处理学习问题。结合自己的经验，给他写一封回信。） Mike's problems: a lot of homework; too many tests 例文 Dear Mike, I'm very glad to receive your letter. I know you hate too much homework and too many tests, but in this test-oriented education system, every student is judged by his mark. Though too much homework has led to your bad mood, we students have no way out. If you are really bored, my advice is to listen to some light music or swim for a change. They will relax you and improve your mood. I hope these methods work. Yours, Jack 好词好句 hate too much homework and too many tests 讨厌太多的家庭作业和测验 in this test-oriented education system 在应试教育的体制中 be judged by his mark 根据分数来评价他 lead to your bad mood 导致你的坏心情 listen to some light music 听些轻音乐 I hope these methods work. 我希望这些方法奏效。 文章点评 信函类文章首先要注意格式工整。这份回信内容完整，格式规范，文章中针对Mike的烦恼较为婉转地给出了自己的意见，即in this test-oriented education system, every student is judged by his mark，同时又有针对性地建议其寻找适当的途径排解压力和烦躁的情绪。全文轻松流畅，口语化的对白使得读者有强烈的参与感。 A Letter to Your Friend 根据所提供的内容写一篇不少于60个词的回信： 你的好朋友Billy在外语学习上遇到了困难，请你写信告诉你的朋友怎样做才能成为一个更好的语言学习者（language learner）。重点谈谈你的想法和建议。 1．What are the problems your friend Billy has? 2．What are your suggestions about learning languages better? 例文 Dear Billy, I'm sorry to hear that you have some problems such as spelling mistakes, poor listening and so on. Don't worry. I can give you several suggestions. Firstly, you must not only spell the words you have known but also copy them every day if possible. Secondly, you must do more listening exercises in order to improve your ability of listening comprehension. Thirdly, you must keep yourself confident and believe that your efforts will produce a satisfactory result. Yours, Joy 好词好句 do more listening exercises 做更多的听力练习 improve your ability of listening comprehension 提高你的听力理解能力 keep yourself confident 保持自信 Thirdly, you must keep yourself confident and believe that your efforts will produce a satisfactory result. 第三，你必须保持自信并相信你的努力会产生令人满意的结果。 文章点评 本文句型句式多变，作者对于语言也能灵活驾驭。文章根据之前列举的问题spelling mistakes, poor listening来给予一一解答，用firstly, secondly, thirdly依次说明，虽然保持自信不属于问题当中，但却是提高英语学习的关键。 校园风采 An Interesting Lesson 例文1 Once we had an interesting art and craft lesson. With enough preparation, we made our own sculptures with mud excitedly. In the class, the teacher showed us some wonderful works that had been made by other students. After discussing for a while, our group decided to make some animals. In response to the good idea, we made some animals such as a tiger, a monkey and a rabbit. Though they didn't look vivid, they were lovely and funny. They were the works resulting from the combination of our wisdom and efforts. I enjoy such a lesson. 好词好句 with enough preparation 有了充足的准备 make our own sculptures 制作我们自己的雕塑作品 after discussing for a while 在讨论了一会儿后 look vivid 看起来生动 They were the works resulting from the combination of our wisdom and efforts. 这些作品是我们智慧和努力的结合。 例文2 The most interesting lesson I have ever had was an English lesson given on last Christmas Day. On that day, our English teacher didn't give us an ordinary lesson as usual. Instead, she told us the history of Christmas in English and taught us several Christmas songs. We learned a lot from this special lesson and enjoyed every minute of it. It was not only an interesting lesson but also a joyful party as well. I'll never forget it. 好词好句 give us an ordinary lesson 给我们上了一堂平常的课 as usual 像往常一样 tell us the history of Christmas 告诉我们圣诞节的历史 We learned a lot from this special lesson and enjoyed every minute of it. 我们从这堂特殊的课中学到了很多并且享受这堂课的每一分钟。 It was not only an interesting lesson but also a joyful party as well. 它不仅是一堂有趣的课，也是一个令人愉快的舞会。 例文3 An Unforgettable English Lesson I once had an unforgettable English lesson. It was very special because the lesson was given in the form of an English party. During the lesson we put on many programs. The girls sang English songs, the boys recited an English poem and our English teacher told us an interesting story in English. All the students were excited in that lesson. We all had a good time and learned a lot on that day. I think it a good way to learn English well as we were impressed deeply by these interesting activities. 好词好句 in the form of an English party 以英语派对的形式 put on many programs 上演许多节目 have a good time 玩得愉快 I think it a good way to learn English well as we were impressed deeply by these interesting activities. 我认为这是一种学英语的好方法，因为我们对这些有趣的活动印象深刻。 文章点评 上述三篇文章都以“一堂课”为主题，文笔细腻，娓娓道来。例文1将一堂课描写得栩栩如生，使得文章丰满、有意境，将教师和学生的教与学进行了具体的描写，如：the teacher showed us some wonderful works that had been made by other students. 例文2文笔流畅，用词虽朴素，但见功底，使学生易学易懂，易模仿。如：as usual,not only...but also...,enjoy every minute of it等学生非常熟悉的短语，都大大增加了文章色彩。例文3整体上描写了学生的表现，从男生、女生到所有学生的表演和表现凸显了这是一堂“unforgettable English lesson”。最后用作者的观点“I think it a good way to learn English well as we were impressed deeply by these interesting activities”结尾，再次说明了这一堂课是令人难忘的。行文流畅，紧扣重点。 Our School Life 提示： 1．What is your school life like? 2．Do you enjoy your school life? 例文1 Our school life is colourful. There are many hobby groups in our school, such as singing group, dancing group, science group, and so on. We can learn a lot by joining these groups. For example, we hold a Singing Festival in May. We can enjoy ourselves by singing. It's so interesting that everyone likes it very much. We also have a sports meeting in October. It always makes us excited. Sometimes we even have friendly matches with players from other schools. What an enjoyable school life we have! 好词好句 many hobby groups 许多兴趣小组 learn a lot by joining these groups 通过参加这些小组学到了很多 have a sports meeting 举行运动会 What an enjoyable school life we have! 我们的校园生活是多么令人愉快啊！ 例文2 My school is small, but life in my school is colourful. Unlike students in most schools, we don't go to school early or leave it late. The reasonable amount of homework leaves enough time for us students to watch TV news, play electronic games and develop our hobbies. I think our school is wise to let us plan our time independently. It focuses more on long-term gain than on short-term gain. I love our school. 好词好句 unlike students in most schools 不像大多数学校的学生那样 the reasonable amount of homework 合理的家庭作业量 play electronic games and develop our hobbies 玩电子游戏和培养我们的爱好 plan one's time independently 独立地安排时间 It focuses more on long-term interests than on short-term interests. 它更加注重长期利益而非短期利益。 例文3 How time flies. My four-year-school life in junior school is almost over. In the past four years, I have improved a lot not only in study but also in character and health. Due to the well-prepared lessons and logical explanations, I have learned a lot in school. What is more, I take part in different kinds of sports, such as football, basketball and volleyball. Our school life is so rich and meaningful that I enjoy it very much. 好词好句 four-year-study life 四年的学习生活 not only in study but also in character and health 不仅在学习上而且在性格和健康上 due to the well-prepared lessons 由于备课充分 logical explanations 符合逻辑的解释 take part in different kinds of sports 参加各种运动 Our school life is so rich and meaningful that I enjoy it very much. 我们的学校生活丰富且有意义，我很喜欢我们的学校生活。 文章点评 校园生活是许多人美好的回忆。例文1的作者列举艺术节、体育节的例子来说明Our school life is colourful，使文章更具说服力。文末运用感叹句，加强语气，是全文的感情凝聚点。例文2描述了一个特殊的学校生活，不同于一般的学校，这是一个学习时间完全由学生自己安排的学校，对于大多数的读者来说是很新鲜的，可见其选材得当。文末点题句是全文的亮点，句式使用有深度。例文3洋溢着离校生对校园生活无限的美好回忆，全文没有使用难词生词，但是多变流畅的句式使文章读来地道流利，体现了作者写作时饱含的感情。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$