2025年中考英语作文重点攻关（讲义）Lesson 2 写作技巧

初中英语作文重点攻关（讲义） Lesson 2 写作技巧 本部分主要介绍一些常见的写作技巧，包括句子合并、主题句、切题和结尾方法。通过分类比较和相应的练习来帮助学生理解、模仿并且掌握这些技巧，以便在考试中节省写作时间，提高写作质量。 句子合并 造房子需要砖块，只有有了大小各异的砖块，才能满足造房子的需求。同样，写文章需要句子，只有有了长短各异的句子，才能写出精彩的文章。对于初三学生而言，英语作文虽然只有短短几十字，但是每次写作文的时候，总是苦于无从下笔，或是好不容易憋出一篇作文，但是总得不到高分。造成这一问题的主要原因就是词汇量有限和对英语常用句型的结构不够熟练。过于简单的词组和单一的句型使得文章陷于平庸，无法吸引评分老师的眼球。好的作文不光是没有语法错误，同时也需要内容来充实。如何熟练运用长短各异的句子？这个问题不是一朝一夕能够解决的，掌握词汇和句型都需要经过一段时间的积累和反复练习。针对学生遇到的这个难题，我们整理出了初中生英语学习中最常用的一些连接词，并配以相应的例句帮助学生理解和消化句型的结构，使学生通过最开始的模仿，循序渐进，直到游刃有余地掌握这些句型。这些连接词的出现使得句型不再单一，如果能够熟练运用，一定能写出精彩的文章。 句子合并通常可采用两种方法：即并列句和表示主从关系的句子。 1．并列句通常有下列并列连词引导： and, but, yet, so, for, not only...but also..., neither...nor..., both...and..., either...or..., as well as等。 EXAMPLES 1）I like English./I want to have a good command of English. Key: I like English and want to have a good command of it. 我喜欢英语并且想要很好地掌握它。 2）Mr White is my teacher./Mr White is one of my best friends. Key: Mr White is not only my teacher but also one of my best friends. 怀特先生不仅是我的老师，也是我最好的朋友。 3）It must have rained last night./The ground is still wet. Key: It must have rained last night, for the ground is still wet. 昨晚一定下过雨了，因为地上仍然是潮湿的。 4）Playing online games is not good for eyesight./Playing online games is not good for academic improvement. Key: Playing online games is neither good for eyesight nor good for academic improvement. 打网络游戏对视力不好，也对学业进步不好。 5）You can take a spring outing on Saturday./You can take a spring outing on Sunday. Key: You can take a spring outing either on Saturday or on Sunday. 你要么星期六要么星期天去春游。 6）English is the most widely-used language in the world./It is important for us to learn English well. Key: English is the most widely-used language in the world, so it is important for us to learn it well. 英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言，因此对我们来说学好英语很重要。 练习Ⅰ：用并列句合并下面的句子。 1）Peter can speak French./Peter can speak Chinese. _________________________________________ 2）Lu Xun is a great writer./Lu Xun is a great thinker. _________________________________________ 3）I have improved a lot in study./I have improved a lot in character and health. _________________________________________ 4）It must be pointed out./Our life is made up of time./Wasting time is equal to wasting life. _________________________________________ 5）As a result, people will not enjoy rich spiritual life./Their life will become less colourful. _________________________________________ 6）They can't provide children with good living conditions by earning enough money./They can not take their children away for an outing and enjoy the beauty of nature when spring comes. _________________________________________ 7）A child doesn't have good health./A child can't go to school./A child can't study efficiently. _________________________________________ 8）I can know culture from other countries through reading books./I can also know customs from other countries through reading books. _________________________________________ 9）No one is perfect in every respect./Every one can be perfect in one respect. _________________________________________ 10）He worked hard at math./He didn't make much improvement in math. _________________________________________ 11）I have failed in this exam./I will work harder. _________________________________________ 12）I would like to share my happiness with others./I would like to share my secrets of happiness with others. _________________________________________ 13）Health matters to today's life./Health matters to tomorrow's life. _________________________________________ 2．主从关系的句子通常有主语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、表语从句、状语从句、介词短语和非谓语动词组成。句子合并时，我们通常将次重要的部分用从句、介词短语或非谓语动词的形式来表示。 EXAMPLES 1）The 2010 World Expo has been held in Shanghai./It is known to everyone.（主语从句） Key: That the 2010 World Expo has been held in Shanghai is known to everyone. 或It is known to everyone that the 2010 World Expo has been held in Shanghai. 2010世博会已在上海举行，这是众所周知的。 2）He was sure to take part in the social activities in the coming weekend./I promised.（宾语从句） Key: I promised that he was sure to take part in the social activities in the coming weekend. 我保证他一定会参加即将来临的周末举行的社交活动。 3）There is no doubt./One has to eat three meals a day.（同位语从句） Key: There is no doubt that one has to eat three meals a day. 毫无疑问一个人一天得吃三顿饭。 4）The boy cheated in the exam./The boy should be punished.（定语从句） Key: The boy who cheated in the exam should be punished. 考试作弊的那个学生应当受到惩罚。 5）The negative side is that some students are so keen on playing online games./They show little interest in study.（表语从句） Key: The negative side is that some students are so keen on playing online games that they show little interest in study. 消极的一面是有些学生沉溺于打网络游戏，结果对学习不感兴趣。 6）The question is very difficult./No one is able to answer it.（结果状语从句） Key: The question is so difficult that no one is able to answer it. 这问题很难，没有人能回答出来。 7）I have improved my English./I have understood that efforts will pay off.（介词短语） Key: Through the improvement of my English, I have understood that efforts will pay off. 通过我英语的提高，我懂得了努力定会获得成功。 8）You tell lies./These lies will cause you to lose respect, trust and friends as a result.（动名词） Key: Telling lies will cause you to lose respect, trust and friends as a result. 说谎会使你失去尊重、信任以及朋友。 9）China promotes her relationship with other counties./China wants to maintain the world peace.（不定式） Key: To maintain the world peace, China promotes her relationship with other countries. 为了维护世界和平，中国推动了和其他国家之间的关系。 10）He entered the classroom./He held a bunch of roses.（分词） Key: He entered the classroom,holding a bunch of roses. 他走进教室，手捧一束玫瑰。 练习Ⅱ：用主从关系的句子合并下面的句子。 主语从句 1）Maybe it is true./He doesn't know what he has got until he loses it. _________________________________________ 2）He gets a long-term happiness at the cost of a short-term hard work./It is worthwhile. _________________________________________ 3）All you need is enough encouragement./You want to keep going in your own way. _________________________________________ 4）The things make a big difference./They are expectations of life. _________________________________________ 宾语从句 1）Some people think./The more you eat, the healthier you are. _________________________________________ 2）Nowadays more and more people have realized./Health is the most important thing in their lives. _________________________________________ 3）We all know./Our living environment determines the quality of our life./Our living environment determines the amount of happiness./Our living environment determines the degree of health. _________________________________________ 4）I hope./My suggestions will work./You deal with your pressure. _________________________________________ 5）You fear./There must be something wrong with whatever seems to be so right. _________________________________________ 同位语从句 1）We have been informed of the latest news./Free plastic bags are not allowed to use in the supermarkets. _________________________________________ 2）We can draw a conclusion./Computer has changed our life. _________________________________________ 3）In my opinion, there is a risk./You will become a victim of your own success if you can not look at praise with the right attitude. _________________________________________ 4）She accepted the task with a promise./She would complete it successfully. _________________________________________ 定语从句 1）I have learned the spirit from her./The spirit always cheers me up when I am in a bad mood. _________________________________________ 2）A good attitude is half the battle./It is known to us all. _________________________________________ 3）I always feel the pleasure./I give the help to those people./They are in need of the help. _________________________________________ 4）The more books I read, the more I want to read and the better my Chinese becomes./This has formed a good cycle. _________________________________________ 表语从句 1）You are really bored./You should listen to some light music or swim for a change./This is my advice. _________________________________________ 2）She has married the person she should not have married./That is the trouble. _________________________________________ 3）He will get excited if he knows the news./This is my guess. _________________________________________ 4）Stress can serve as motivation if we can deal with it appropriately./That is the truth. _________________________________________ 状语从句 1）My dream comes true./I'll do my best to help the guests at home and abroad. _________________________________________ 2）Breakfast can't be skipped./Breakfast makes a difference to the efficiency of your study. _________________________________________ 3）I can't play football very well./I still like football./Through playing football I will be strong in health and character. _________________________________________ 4）Our school life is rich and meaningful./I enjoy it very much. _________________________________________ 5）You don't make full use of time now./You will feel regretful when we are old. _________________________________________ 6）Time is gone./Time never returns. _________________________________________ 7）We develop car industry./We must focus more on our living environment. _________________________________________ 8）Its negative effect has become the concern of the public./Time goes by. _________________________________________ 9）I finish the exams./I will make a plan and keep regular exercise to reduce weight. _________________________________________ 10）I can hardly spare enough time for physical exercise./I am like most junior three students./I have to study wholeheartedly. _________________________________________ 11）I would like to be a teacher./I grow up./I love children. _________________________________________ 12）I have not been chosen as a volunteer./I will try my best to learn English well./I will get ready to offer help if needed. _________________________________________ 13）Every one of us has tried his best./The performance will surely turn out to be successful. _________________________________________ 14）You have these good habits./You are sure to be a good learner. _________________________________________ 15）They didn't look vivid./They were lovely and funny. _________________________________________ 16）He is faced with obstacles./He will never give up halfway. _________________________________________ 17）I succeed./She is always the first to congratulate me. _________________________________________ 18）I am sad./She encourages me and helps me get rid of the bad mood. _________________________________________ 介词短语 1）I am unlike students in most schools./We don't go to school early./We don't leave school late. _________________________________________ 2）You don't have love./You can hardly get on well with them. _________________________________________ 3）Many people feel down./They are in face of pressure. _________________________________________ 4）We should try to use paper or cloth bags./We should not use plastic bags. _________________________________________ 5）He has a sense of humour./Dull spoon-fed lessons can be replaced by vivid ones. _________________________________________ 非谓语动词 1）I was criticized by the teacher./I felt very depressed. _________________________________________ 2）You stand on the Eiffel Tower./You can get a bird's eye view of Paris. _________________________________________ 3）I followed my father's advice./Three months later, I found my English improved. _________________________________________ 4）A good teacher should have a good sense of humor./A good teacher wants to make lessons vivid. _________________________________________ 5）I will buy some new books in the bookstore./I want to enrich my spiritual life. _________________________________________ 6）Helping others helps create our harmonious society./Helping others brings happiness to me. _________________________________________ 句子合并参考答案 练习Ⅰ 1）Peter can speak both French and Chinese. 皮特既能说法语也能说中文。 2）Lu Xun is a great writer as well as a great thinker. 鲁迅是一个伟大的作家，也是一个伟大的思想家。 3）I have improved a lot not only in study but also in character and health. 我不仅学习有了提高，性格和健康也得到了改善。 4）It must be pointed out that our life is made up of time and wasting time is equal to wasting life. 必须指出，我们的生活是由时间组成的，浪费时间就等于浪费生命。 5）As a result, people will not enjoy rich spiritual life and their life will become less colourful. 结果，人们将无法享受丰富的精神生活，他们的生活也将逊色不少。 6）They can't provide children with good living conditions by earning enough money, nor can they take their children away for an outing and enjoy the beauty of nature when spring comes. 他们无法赚足够的钱为孩子们提供良好的生活条件。当春天来临时，他们也无法带孩子们外出欣赏大自然的美。 7）Without good health, a child can't go to school, nor can he study efficiently. 没有健康的身体，孩子无法上学，也无法高效率地学习。 8）I can know not only culture but also customs from other countries through reading books. 通过阅读书籍，我不仅了解了不同国家的文化，也了解了不同国家的风俗。 9）No one is perfect in every respect, but every one can be perfect in one respect. 没有人在每个方面都完美，但是，每个人在一个方面可以做到完美。 10）He worked hard at math, but he didn't make much improvement in it. 他努力学习数学，但却没有获得很大的提高。 11）I have failed in this exam, yet I will work harder. 虽然我这次考试没及格，但是我会更加用功的。 12）I would like to share my happiness as well as my secrets of happiness with others. 我想和他人分享我的幸福以及我幸福的秘诀。 13）Health matters not only to today's life but also to tomorrow's life. 健康不仅对今天的生活重要，对明天的生活也很重要。 练习Ⅱ 主语从句 1）Maybe it is true that he doesn't know what he has got until he loses it. 他直到失去时才知道自己所拥有的，这也许是真的。 2）That he gets a long-term happiness at the cost of a short-term hard work is worthwhile. 他用短期的辛苦换取长期的幸福是值得的。 3）All you need is enough encouragement to keep going in your own way. 你所需要的是足够的鼓励来继续走自己的路。 4）What make a big difference are expectations of life. 促成重大变化的是对生活的预期。 宾语从句 1）Some people think that the more you eat, the healthier you are. 有些人认为，吃得越多越健康。 2）Nowadays more and more people have realized that health is the most important thing in their lives. 当今越来越多的人意识到健康是他们生活中最重要的事情。 3）We all know that our living environment determines the quality of our life and the amount of happiness as well as the degree of health. 我们都知道我们的生活环境决定了我们的生活质量、幸福的多少和健康的程度。 4）I hope my suggestions will work in dealing with your pressure. 我希望我的建议在你应对压力时会奏效。 5）You fear that there must be something wrong with whatever seems to be so right. 你担心在看似很正确的事情中，一定有些是错的。 同位语从句 1）We have been informed of the latest news that free plastic bags are not allowed to use in the supermarkets. 我们已经被告知最新的消息，即免费的塑料袋不允许在超市中使用。 2）We can draw a conclusion that computer has changed our life. 我们可以得出结论，电脑改变了我们的生活。 3）There is a risk, in my opinion, that you will become a victim of your own success if you can not look at praise with the right attitude. 在我看来，如果你不能以正确的态度对待表扬，就有一种风险，即你将成为成功的牺牲品。 4）She accepted the task with a promise that she would complete it successfully. 她接受了任务，并承诺会成功完成这项任务。 定语从句 1）The spirit I have learned from her always cheers me up when I am in a bad mood. 我从她身上学到的精神总是能在我心情不好时使我振作起来。 2）A good attitude is half the battle,as is known to us all. 良好的态度是成功的一半，这是众所周知的。 3）I always feel the pleasure whenever I give the help to those who are in need of it. 每当我给那些需要帮助的人以帮助时，我总感到很快乐。 4）The more books I read, the more I want to read and the better my Chinese becomes, which has formed a good cycle. 书看得越多，我越想看书，我的中文也越好，这形成了一个良好的循环。 表语从句 1）If you are really bored, my advice is that you should listen to some light music or swim for a change. 如果你真的感到乏味，我的建议是你应该听些轻音乐或游泳来换一下心情。 2）The trouble is that she has married the person she should not have married. 问题是她嫁给了不该嫁的人。 3）My guess is that he will get excited if he knows the news. 我猜要是他知道这消息会非常激动的。 4）The truth is that stress can serve as motivation if we can deal with it appropriately. 事实是压力可以充当动力，如果我们能够很好地应对它的话。 状语从句 1）If my dream comes true, I'll do my best to help the guests at home and abroad. 要是我的梦想实现的话，我将尽力帮助国内外宾客。 2）Breakfast can't be skipped because it makes a difference to the efficiency of your study. 早餐不能不吃，因为它会影响你的学习效率。 3）Though I can't play football very well, I still like it because through playing football I will be strong in health and character. 虽然我足球踢得不好，我仍然喜欢踢球，因为通过踢球，我的身体和性格都会变得坚强。 4）Our school life is so rich and meaningful that I enjoy it very much. 我们的校园生活丰富且有意义，我非常喜欢我们的校园生活。 5）If you don't make full use of time now, you will feel regretful when we are old. 如果你现在不充分利用时间，老了你会后悔的。 6）When time is gone, it never returns. 岁月流逝不会回来。 7）When we develop car industry, we must focus more on our living environment. 发展汽车工业时，我们必须更加注重我们的生活环境。 8）Its negative effect has become the concern of the public as time goes by. 随着岁月的流逝，负面的影响已经成为公众关注的焦点。 9）When I finish the exams, I will make a plan and keep regular exercise to reduce weight. 当我考完试后，我将会制订一个计划来定时锻炼以减轻体重。 10）I can hardly spare enough time for physical exercise because, like most junior three students, I have to study wholeheartedly. 我几乎腾不出足够的时间进行体育锻炼，因为像大多数的初三学生一样，我不得不埋头学习。 11）I would like to be a teacher after I grow up because I love children. 长大后我想当老师，因为我喜欢孩子。 12）Though I have not been chosen as a volunteer, I will try my best to learn English well and get ready to offer help if needed. 虽然我没有被选为志愿者，但是我将竭尽全力学好英语并且在需要时做好准备提供帮助。 13）As long as every one of us has tried his best, the performance will surely turn out to be successful. 只要我们每个人竭尽全力，演出一定会圆满成功。 14）If you have these good habits, you are sure to be a good learner. 如果你有这些良好的习惯，你一定会成为一个优秀的学习者。 15）Though they didn't look vivid, they were lovely and funny. 虽然看起来不生动，但是它们非常可爱。 16）Even if he is faced with obstacles, he will never give up halfway. 即使面对困难，他也绝不会半途而废。 17）When I succeed, she is always the first to congratulate me. 我获得成功时，他总是第一个向我祝贺。 18）When I am sad, she encourages me and helps me get rid of the bad mood. 我沮丧时，她鼓励我并且帮助我摆脱坏心情。 介词短语 1）Unlike students in most schools, we don't go to school early or leave it late. 不像大多数学校的学生，我们上学不早，离校也不晚。 2）Without love, you can hardly get on well with them. 没有爱心，你很难和他们相处好。 3）Many people feel down in face of pressure. 面对压力，许多人感到沮丧。 4）We should try to use paper or cloth bags instead of plastic ones. 我们应该尽量使用纸袋或布袋而不是塑料袋。 5）With his sense of humour, dull spoon-fed lessons can be replaced by vivid ones. 由于他的幽默感，乏味的填鸭式课堂变得生动了。 非谓语动词 1）Criticized by the teacher, I felt very depressed. 挨了老师的批评，我感到非常沮丧。 2）Standing on the Eiffel Tower, you can get a bird's eye view of Paris. 站在埃菲尔铁塔上，你能鸟瞰巴黎。 3） Following my father's advice, three months later I found my English improved. 听从了父亲的建议，三个月后，我发现我的英语提高了。 4）A good teacher should have a good sense of humor to make lessons vivid. 要把课上得生动，一个优秀的老师应该要具有幽默感。 5）I will buy some new books in the bookstore to enrich my spiritual life. 我将在书店里买些新书来丰富我的精神生活。 6）Helping others helps create our harmonious society besides bringing happiness to me. 除了给我带来快乐以外，帮助他人也有助于创造我们的和谐社会。 主题句 主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它告诉读者文章要讲什么。主题句通常出现在一篇文章的开头或结尾。全文对主题句进行解释、扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点： 1．归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点。 2．提炼出一句能概括上述几个要点的话。 3．主题句应具有可读性，能吸引读者。 例文 Money Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that "money talks”, but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I don't think we should regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. 文章点评 这篇文章的主题句非常精练：“金钱确实是重要的，但是金钱不是一切”。文章开门见山向读者表述了自己的观点，然后围绕主题句展开，层层推进，论述金钱的意义。整篇文章行文流畅，逻辑清晰，紧扣主题，可见主题句对写好一篇文章所起的作用有多大。 切题 很多初中学生是第一次接触英语写作，经常会因为考场时间紧迫、心理紧张等因素而遇到无从下笔、思绪混乱等问题，从而造成作文的偏题。好不容易写成的文章由于偏离主题而得不到高分是令人非常遗憾的，所以我们在写作的过程中，必须对题目有一个清晰的理解，对通篇的文章布局有一个大概的构思。针对写作中常见的偏题问题，我们要注意以下几点： 1．开始部分（opening paragraph）——开门见山地写出文章的主题句。 2．正文部分（body paragraphs）——围绕主题句展开叙述、讨论或举例说明。 3．结尾部分（concluding paragraph）——对全文进行总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出，段落之间必须联系紧密，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。 例文 修改前： Summer Vacation My summer vacation was very interesting. I have picked up a lot of English during the vacation. I have great interest in English. English is very important for the young generation so I am sure to have a good command of it. With the help of English, I can go abroad for further study and communicate with foreigners. How interesting the vacation was! 这篇文章的题目是Summer Vacation，很明显，用意就是让大家谈谈自己的暑假。这位学生确实在开头写到自己暑假里学习英语，但是之后却一味强调学习英语的重要性和意义，把假期生活完全抛之脑后了，使得文章本末倒置，偏离了主题。虽然文章在表述上比较流畅，无重大语法错误，但是一旦偏离了主题，得分会很低。相反，如果本篇文章的题目是“学习英语的重要性”或者“我们为何要学习英语”，得分可能会高很多。 修改后： Summer Vacation My summer vacation was very interesting. First of all, I have picked up a lot of English during the vacation, which helped me a lot in communication with foreigners. Second, I did sports every morning to keep healthy. Besides, my parents and I made a trip to Hangzhou. The scenery there was so impressive that we decided to stay for a couple of days. How interesting this vacation was! 经过修改以后，文章围绕具体的假期内容展开，写到了学英语、锻炼身体、和家人出游这三个方面的经历，没有偏离主题。 连接词 连接词是指在文章中用来说明上下句或前后两个意思之间关系的词或词组。连接词通常用于开篇，引出扩展句；也可用于句中，尤其是用于较长的复合句中，以作为上下文的连接纽带；还可以置于文章末尾或段落末尾，用于总结上文或结束本段落的内容。在中考作文中，学会正确灵活地使用连接词可以使行文更加清晰流畅，也能使文章内容富有逻辑性。鉴于初中学生刚刚接触写作不久，我们对这些常用连接词进行分类并且配以例句，希望同学们能够通过揣摩和仿写例句来领会连接词的使用方法。 （1）表示平行、对等或选择关系的连接词：and, both...and, as well as, as well, neither...nor..., or, either...or..., not only...but also...等。 ●Both textbook knowledge and practical experience are important to my academic progress. ●Neither he nor I am interested in math. ●Either my father or my mother will attend my graduation ceremony. ●Reading not only enriches my knowledge but also broadens my mind. （2）表示转折关系的连接词：but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand, in spite of, nevertheless, though, although, otherwise等。 ●What you said sounds reasonable, however, I can hardly agree to your opinion. ●On the other hand, most of the parents show concern for their children when they decide to send them abroad for further study. ●In spite of the unexpected difficulties, I will try my best to fulfill my goal. （3）表示因果关系的连接词：because, for, so, therefore, as a result , because of, due to, thanks to等。 ●I didn't go to see him because a heavy snow was falling. ●He didn't work hard, and as a result he failed in the exam. ●Due to the terrible weather, the flight has been canceled. （4）表示时间顺序的连接词：first, first of all, second..., then, next, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, eventually等。 ●First of all, fast food is lacking in nutrition. ●Second, fast food contains huge amounts of heat and energy beyond the need of our everyday life. ●In the end, Peter made great progress in his oral English through great efforts. （5）表示空间顺序的连接词：on the right, to the left, on one side of, on the other side of, at the foot/top/end/of, in the middle/center of等。 ●On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side stands our library. ●In the center of the city is People's Square. （6）表示解释说明的连接词：that is (to say), in other words, such as, for example/instance, namely, actually, to tell you the truth, and so on等。 ●Soccer is popular throughout the world, that is to say, it is regarded as the king of sports. ●In other words, I love my hometown and the people there. ●Miss Li has a wide scope of interests, such as reading, traveling, collecting stamps and so on. ●To tell you the truth, I am in bad need of money. （7）表示递进关系的连接词：what's more/worse/better, besides, in addition, to make things worse, moreover, furthermore, above all等。 ●What's more, private cars will lead to serious environmental pollution. ●In addition, steps should be taken to punish those who have cheated in exams. ●Above all, we should make good use of every minute of life. （8）表示总结的连接词：in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as far as I know, as far as I am concerned, on the whole, to sum up等。 ●In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load. ●In a word, great changes have taken place in our country since the reform and opening-up policy were adopted by the government. ●As far as I know, he is always ready to help those who are in trouble. ●To sum up, reading benefits us in many ways. 结尾方法 1．点题法 点题就是用扼要的文字把文章的中心意思提示出来，中考作文的篇幅并不长，所以在收尾的时候，用一句简明扼要的句子来总结文章的中心可以使文章的主题更加突出。 例文 Better Manners, Better Life A better life needs better manners. Actually it is easy for us to have good manners. When there is a queue, we should stand at the back instead of jumping it; when someone is making a phone call, we should lower our voice. Although they are just little things, they show politeness. If every one of us does things in consideration of others, our life will be better and more beautiful. Better manners make a better life. 好词好句 need better manners 需要良好的行为举止 jump a queue 插队 make a phone call 打电话 lower our voice 降低声音 show politeness 表示尊敬 in consideration of others 考虑到别人 If every one of us does things in consideration of others, our life will be better and more beautiful. 如果我们每个人在做事的时候都考虑到别人，我们的生活会更加美好。 文章点评 这篇例文谈到的是良好的行为会让我们的生活变得更加美好。第一句开门见山地提出了“美好的生活需要良好的行为举止”这一主题，之后列举了一些生活中常见的例子，如自觉排队不插队。最后通过“Better manners make a better life”再次点明主题，首尾呼应，凸显了文章的中心思想，给读者留下了深刻的印象。 2．反问和建议 反问是用疑问的形式表达确定的意思，以加重语气的一种修辞手法。反问只问不答，答案暗含在反问句中。人们可以从反问句中领会到表达者的真意。在文章结尾使用反问句来提出一个建议可以加强语气，发人深思，激发读者的感情，加深读者的印象，增强文中的气势和说服力。 例文 Reading I hold the belief that reading is an indispensable part of our life. Undoubtedly, reading can broaden our mind, widen our sight as well as enrich our knowledge. Most importantly, we may well tell right from wrong gradually through reading. I myself enjoy reading very much. So as we can see, reading is really of great benefit to us. Why not get into the habit of reading from now on? 好词好句 hold the belief 认为 be an indispensable part of our life 是我们生活中必不可少的一部分 broaden one's mind 拓宽视野 tell right from wrong 分辨是非 be of great benefit to us 对我们大有好处 Most importantly, we may well tell right from wrong gradually through reading. 最重要的是，我们可以通过阅读渐渐明辨是非。 文章点评 这篇文章谈到的是阅读，开头总起句表述了作者的观点：阅读是我们生活中必不可少的一部分。之后从拓展视野、丰富知识、明辨是非等几个方面论述了阅读给我们带来的裨益。结尾的时候，作者巧妙运用了“Why not get into the habit of reading from now on? ”这个反问句，不仅承接上文的主题，还让读者在反问的语境中感受到作者建议养成阅读习惯的必要性和紧迫性。 例文 Shopping on the Internet Nowadays, shopping on the Internet has become popular. More people choose to do so for the following reasons. First, it is convenient because the online shops are open 24 hours a day and we don't have to stand in a long queue. Second, shopping online is often cheaper in comparison with traditional shopping and it is also easy to find out what we want online. Additionally, we can save a lot of time. Don't you think it is better to do shopping online? 好词好句 be open 24 hours a day 24小时开放 in comparison with traditional shopping 与传统的购物相比 save a lot of time 节省大量的时间 shopping online 网上购物 文章点评 本文谈到的是网上购物。在对网络购物的优势逐一阐述之后，作者直接提出了“你难道不认为网上购物更好吗？”这个反问句，很明显，答案已经藏在这句结尾句中了。这种反问的结尾方式语气更加强烈，更具有说服力。 3．展望未来 展望未来是一种常见但是却能增加文章感情色彩的结尾方法，因为美好的展望往往能够感染读者，营造一种积极向上的氛围。 例文 Make Our Hometown Green I think the earth, our hometown, is getting hotter, and the time in spring and autumn is turning shorter due to the greenhouse effect. Now there are too many cars on roads. They produce exhaust which pollutes air and causes climate change. The potential risk has become the concern of more scientists. We must plant more trees, because trees can absorb CO2 . If every one of us plants a tree, our hometown will become greener and friendlier. 好词好句 due to the greenhouse effect 由于温室效应 produce exhaust 产生废气 cause climate change 引起气候变化 absorb CO2 吸收二氧化碳 If every one of us plants a tree, our hometown will become greener and friendlier. 如果我们每个人都种上一棵树，我们的家园将会变得更加绿意盎然，更加和谐美好。 文章点评 这篇文章谈到了当下非常受关注的环保问题。开头直接提出了地球在不断变暖这一客观事实，随后分析了造成这一现象的原因并提出通过植树来吸收二氧化碳，保护环境。最后，作者运用条件状语从句对未来进行了一个假设：如果我们每个人都种上一棵树，我们的家园会变得更加绿意盎然，更加和谐美好。这个对未来的展望可以让读者更真切地感受到植树的积极意义，从而使这一观点更具有说服力和影响力。 4．逻辑性结尾 逻辑性的结尾方式一般建立在对某一现象或者问题的客观分析上，是承接之前内容所得出的一个符合逻辑的总结。 例文 My Opinions About Fast Food Some people think that fast food is convenient and cheap as well, while I think it's really expensive because we pay not only money but also health for it. As far as I am concerned, I advocate having fresh food instead of fast food. Fast food usually contains huge amounts of heat and energy beyond the need of our everyday life. And it produces few nutrients besides fat which we usually don't lack. So we'd better avoid eating it as long as we can. In a word, I have a strong disapproval of having fast food. 好词好句 beyond the need of our everyday life 超出了每日生活的需求 produce few nutrients 产生很少的营养 avoid eating fast food 避免食用快餐 have a strong disapproval of having fast food 强烈反对吃快餐 As far as I am concerned, I advocate having fresh food instead of fast food. 就我而言，我提倡吃新鲜的食物而不是快餐。 文章点评 这篇文章的观点非常明确，作者从开头就提出了“快餐不利于健康”这一观点，之后的分析紧扣这一观点，从快餐含热量过高、没有营养这些方面来进行论述，再次呼吁大家避免食用快餐，最后的结尾就是非常精练的一句话： In a word, I have a strong disapproval of having fast food，这是结合上文内容做出的一个总结，使文章首尾呼应，条理清晰。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$