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Dear Chris, I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to secure assistance with a two minute bookstop presentation will will be delivering at school. I've chosen to recommend Alice in wonderland, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and century characters. IT will definitely captivate my audience. However, i'm struggling to convey its unique qualities in such a short time. Given your experience with similar presentations, would you be so kindness to offer some advice on how to structure my talk and keep the audience engaged? I eagerly anticipate your invaluable insights. Thank you in advance for your help. Yours lehua.
第三部分 19类规范保应用文夺13+
满分攻略10 12类书信体应用文
一、求助信和建议信
1.求助信
满分句式
夺人眼球开头句(开篇问候,表明写信目的)
①I’m writing to seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand, as I meet with/come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.
我写信请你帮忙,因为我在策划一个绿色校园活动时遇到了一些问题。
②Faced with/In the face of so tricky a situation, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.面对这个难题,我别无选择只得向你求助。
亮点出彩篇中句(描述问题)
①What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself.困扰我的事情是我不知道如何复习自学的功课。
②Despite time and efforts I devoted to practising writing, little progress has been made.尽管我花了时间和精力练习写作,但进步甚微。
③I’m stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities. 我被难住了,知道你组织过类似活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。
④I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough/so kind as to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress?我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗?
韵味无穷结尾句(表达期望和感谢)
①I would be very grateful if you could spare me some time to help me deal with the problem.如果你能抽时间帮我处理这个问题,我将不胜感激。
②I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance/instructions/help/assistance.如果你能给我一些指导/帮助,我将不胜感激。
③Thanks for considering my request. Your early reply is highly appreciated.多谢您考虑我的请求。如能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
完美佳作
先补写后背诵,同时注意过渡衔接词汇的使用
假定你是李华,你准备参加所在国际学校组织的图书推荐(book talk)活动,做一个两分钟的演讲,请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件,寻求他的建议,内容包括:1.你的推荐书籍与理由;2.请他分享经验和建议。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to seek your assistance with a 2-minute book talk presentation I’ll be delivering at school.
I’ve chosen to recommend Alice in Wonderland, a book that has always fascinated me with its imaginative plot and eccentric characters. It will definitely captivate my audience. ①However, I’m struggling to convey its unique qualities in such a short time. ②Given your experience with similar presentations, would you be so kind as to offer some advice on how to structure my talk and keep the audience engaged (鉴于你有类似演讲的经验,你能就如何组织我的演讲并保持听众参与度提一些建议吗)?
③I eagerly anticipate your invaluable insights (我热切期待你的宝贵见解). Thank you in advance for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.建议信
满分句式
夺人眼球开头句(开篇点题,表明意图)
①You have asked for my advice with regard to/regarding how to learn Chinese well, and I’ll try to offer some practical suggestions here.你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议,我会尽量提出一些实用的建议。
②As for how to improve calligraphy, I’d like to offer you some advice.关于如何提高书法,我想给你一些建议。
亮点出彩篇中句(给出具体的建议和理由)
①There’s no need for you to be so worried and nervous, and I suggest you consult some books concerning the traditional Chinese culture.你没有必要如此担心和紧张,我建议你查阅一些关于中国传统文化的书籍。
②It would be more beneficial if you could carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and gain a deeper insight into it.如果你能以互动和体验的方式进行这项活动,那将会更有益,这意味着学生可以参与并对此有更深的了解。
③Equally important is to organize more events that get students actively involved in English conversations.组织更多的活动,让学生积极参与英语对话同样重要。
④Were it possible, work out regularly in order to keep healthy.如果可能的话,经常锻炼以保持健康。
⑤The top priority is to expose yourself to real situations like joining a Chinese club, where you can put what you have learnt from Chinese dictionaries into use.
当务之急是让自己接触真实的情境,比如加入中文俱乐部,在俱乐部你可以把从汉语词典中学到的东西付诸实践。
韵味无穷结尾句(望采纳建议,表达祝愿或期待)
①I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/beneficial/practical.我希望你会认为这些建议有帮助/有益/可行。
②Personally, it would be beneficial if you follow my advice and have faith in yourself.我认为,如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己,会有益处的。
完美佳作
先补写后背诵,同时注意过渡衔接词汇的使用
学生写给外教的信:语气应礼貌、委婉 思考:会有什么问题?针对这些问题有什么建议?
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. We’re excited about your plan for oral practice, but I’d like to share a different voice. While I appreciate the intention behind random pairings, I see some potential challenges. (感激该计划,表达存在问题)
When two students with different backgrounds are paired randomly, finding common topics can be tough. Additionally, if both students struggle with spoken English, they might not effectively help each other, possibly affecting their motivation to improve. (说明随机分组的问题) Thus, I wonder if you could allow us to pair up freely and you can make adjustments if necessary. This might increase our motivation to speak and learn. Also, it would be more beneficial to group students with mixed English levels intentionally, thus ensuring our mutual improvement. (提出建议并说明理由)
Your understanding and consideration of my suggestions would be greatly appreciated (如您能理解并考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激). (希望采纳建议)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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