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满分练14　应用文写作(报道·劳育)+读后续写(脱险) 限时40分钟　 应用文写作　 　　假定你是李华,上周末你们班到阳光生态农场开展研学活动,请你给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动过程;3.你的感想。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 A Study Tour to the Sunshine Eco-Farm 美文诵读 A Study Tour to the Sunshine Eco-Farm Last weekend, our class had a study tour to the Sunshine Eco-Farm, eager to learn about sustainable agriculture and foster a deeper understanding of environmental protection (加深对环境保护的理解). The day began with a brief introduction to the farm, followed by a hands-on experience in planting vegetables and feeding cows. We also learned how to turn leftovers and animal waste into nutrient-rich soil. After a hearty lunch entirely sourced from the farm (来自农场), we visited the solar-powered greenhouses, where we saw various crops growing without chemical fertilizers. This experience was both exciting and enriching. I was thrilled to see first hand how technology can be applied to (用于) agriculture, and it fueled my passion (激发热情) for protecting our environment as well. 读后续写　 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Denise decided to treat herself and a close friend to an exciting vacation in the Bahamas. The two teenagers, coming from the quiet suburbs of Illinois, had never seen the vast ocean. So they were eagerly waiting for their first swimming experience in the vast, open ocean. When they got to the beach, they noticed that no one else was in the water, and that the waves were huge. The sight of the big waves might have frightened others, but that didn’t bother Denise. She had seen in the movies people body surfing and having fun in big waves. She thought it looked amazing and she believed that she could do the same. At that moment, the only soul in sight was a local fisherman who was cleaning his fishing net on the sand. As Denise and her friend began taking off their shoes, the fisherman stopped, his eyes widening in astonishment as he stared at the two girls preparing to brave the waves. He could not believe that someone would dare to swim in such waves. Denise thought it was a bit rude of this strange fisherman to just stand there staring, but she said nothing since she couldn’t help but jump into the vast ocean. Seeing the waves, Denise’s friend felt a bit scared, so she refused to go swimming with Denise. With a heart jumping and spirits high, Denise alone rushed into the water without a second thought. But as soon as she got into the ocean, she was struck by a huge, powerful wave. Denise was completely helpless. She was swirling (旋转) around in that powerful water, choking on a mixture of salt, water, and sand. Every breath was a struggle. As the wave finally released its hold, Denise found herself struggling to stay afloat (漂浮的). All she could hear was her friend’s scream. Her mind was racing with thoughts of survival and the distant hope that somehow, somehow, she would make it back to shore. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　Just then, the fisherman ran up without hesitation. 　　Making sure Denise was safe, the fisherman simply turned around and was about to leave. 原文基本要素 主要人物: Denise, the fisherman 次要人物: Denise’s close friend 原文情节线 Denise和朋友去海边,浪很大,没人下水,但Denise并不害怕→Denise注意到一个渔夫,渔夫对她们要下水的行为很诧异→Denise独自跳入海水中,被巨浪击中而且被海水呛住,生存希望渺茫。 续写情节 第一段:衔接1:首句衔接所给句中的“渔夫毫不犹豫地跑过来”:渔夫跳入海中朝Denise游过去。过渡句:渔夫从海中救出Densie(动作链描写),Denise朋友的反应。衔接2:尾句衔接第二段所给句中的“确认Densie安全”:渔夫确认Denise是否安好。 第二段:衔接3:首句衔接所给句中的“转身准备离开”:Densie对渔夫的感激。过渡句:这次经历让Densie意识到了什么?结尾:Densie被他的善意打动,决定将善意传递下去。 美文诵读 Just then, the fisherman ran up without hesitation. He jumped into the ocean and swam towards Denise, braving against the huge waves (勇敢面对巨浪). Fortunately, he managed to grasp Denise’s hand. With surprising strength, he pulled her out of the water and brought her safely to the beach. Frightened and worried, Denise’s friend ran quickly towards Denise. Once Denise was safe and sound (安然无恙), the fisherman, breathing heavily, stood there for a minute to ensure she was in good condition. Making sure Denise was safe, the fisherman simply turned around and was about to leave. Overwhelmed with gratitude, Denise thanked the fisherman from the bottom of her heart (发自内心地感谢渔夫) for his courageous rescue. This life-threatening experience served as a tough lesson, impressing on her the significance of honoring nature’s strength and cherishing life (让她深刻认识到尊重大自然的力量和珍惜生命的重要性). As the fisherman walked away, his kind-hearted act of heroism left a deep impression on her, showing selflessness could even be found in the most unexpected places. From then on, Denise promised to pay forward the kindness she received (传递她得到的善意), making a commitment to (承诺) always helping others in need. 原文表达借鉴 ①his eyes widening in astonishment 他惊讶地睁大了眼睛　②brave the waves 不顾大浪　③With a heart jumping and spirits high, Denise alone rushed into the water without a second thought. 丹妮斯心跳加速,精神抖擞,独自一人毫不犹豫地冲进了水里。(with复合结构描写情绪)　④Her mind was racing with thoughts of survival and the distant hope that somehow, somehow, she would make it back to shore. 她的脑海里闪过无数幸存的想法和渺茫的希望,希望她不管怎么着都能回到岸上。(无灵主语句) (续写精解深析) 原文分析 第1-2段 Denise decided to treat herself and a close friend to an exciting vacation in the Bahamas. The two teenagers, coming from the quiet suburbs of Illinois, had never seen the vast ocean. So they were eagerly waiting for their first swimming experience in the vast, open ocean. When they got to the beach, they noticed that no one else was in the water, and that the waves were huge. The sight of the big waves might have frightened others, but that didn’t bother Denise. She had seen in the movies people body surfing and having fun in big waves. She thought it looked amazing and she believed that she could do the same.  Denise和好友决定去巴哈马度假,两人来自伊利诺伊州的安静郊区,从未见过大海,因此对在海中游泳充满期待。到达海滩后,她们发现海浪很大,且没有其他人在水中。Denise受到电影中冲浪场景的启发,认为大浪很有趣,决定尝试,而她的朋友则感到害怕,拒绝下水。 第3段 At that moment, the only soul in sight was a local fisherman who was cleaning his fishing net on the sand. As Denise and her friend began taking off their shoes, the fisherman stopped, his eyes widening in astonishment as he stared at the two girls preparing to brave the waves. He could not believe that someone would dare to swim in such waves.  the only soul in sight:视野中只有一个人,没有游客,只有一个当地渔民,侧面说明此时海中不适合游泳。 the fisherman stopped, his eyes widening in astonishment as he stared at the two girls preparing to brave the waves:渔民的惊讶反应暗示海浪的危险性,同时突出Denise的冒险精神和对危险的忽视。  协同点:续写部分可描写渔民毫不犹豫地跳入海中救Denise。这也是一种勇敢善良的英雄主义。 可借鉴的衔接句: ①He jumped into the ocean and swam towards Denise, braving against the huge waves. Fortunately, he managed to grasp Denise’s hand. With surprising strength, he pulled her out of the water and brought her safely to the beach.  ②As the fisherman walked away, his kind-hearted act of heroism left a deep impression on her, showing selflessness could even be found in the most unexpected places.  第4-6段 Denise thought it was a bit rude of this strange fisherman to just stand there staring, but she said nothing since she couldn’t help but to jump into the vast ocean. Seeing the waves, Denise’s friend felt a bit scared, so she refused to go swimming with Denise. With a heart jumping and spirits high, Denise alone rushed into the water without a second thought.  But as soon as she got into the ocean, she was struck by a huge, powerful wave. Denise was completely helpless. She was swirling (旋转) around in that powerful water, choking on a mixture of salt, water, and sand. Every breath was a struggle.  As the wave finally released its hold, Denise found herself struggling to stay afloat (漂浮的). All she could hear was her friend’s scream. Her mind was racing with thoughts of survival and the distant hope that somehow, somehow, she would make it back to shore.  Denise跳入海中后,立刻被巨浪击中,陷入危险之中。她在水中挣扎,呼吸困难,感到很无助。巨浪退去后,Denise努力保持漂浮,脑海中充满了求生的念头。 Denise的冒险与教训:Denise不顾危险跳入海中,表现出她对自然的轻视和对自身能力的过度自信。 协同点:续写部分应协同描写这次危险的经历让她意识到自然的力量和生命的珍贵。 可借鉴的衔接句: This life-threatening experience served as a tough lesson, impressing on her the significance of honoring nature’s strength and cherishing life.  协同点:Denise的朋友在Denise遇到危险时害怕地尖叫,续写部分应协同描写她在Denise被救出后的反应。 可借鉴的衔接句: Frightened and worried, Denise’s friend ran quickly towards Denise.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$