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满分练5　应用文写作(咨询信·传统文化)+读后续写(志愿服务) 限时40分钟　 应用文写作　 　　假定你是校乐团负责人李华,你校学生乐团Youth Orchestra 将受邀参加在英国举办的国际中学生音乐节,并演奏中国民乐,请给主办机构写一封邮件,内容包括:1.询问各项安排;2.表达期待。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 美文诵读 Dear organizing committee, I am Li Hua, director of Youth Orchestra. Thank you for inviting us to participate in the upcoming International High School Music Festival and I am writing to ask for more details concerning this event. First of all, could you kindly provide details regarding our performance schedule, particularly the date and time of our performance? (问题1) Additionally, information about the performance venue where our performance will take place would be immensely helpful. (问题2) Besides, since we will perform Chinese folk music with various traditional Chinese instruments that require special care (需要特别照顾), arrangements concerning accommodations and transportation (有关住宿和交通安排)would be greatly appreciated. (问题3) We are truly looking forward to this incredible opportunity (绝佳的机会) to share our music with a global audience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 读后续写　 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My friend Jane, a cheerful, humorous and outgoing person, worked for a charity. One day in early December, she called, saying she was putting together some people to sing inspiring holiday songs to some unfortunate families and chat with them on New Year’s Day to cheer them up. Jane invited my husband and me to join them. Although I hadn’t sung in any choir (合唱团) for years, I always enjoyed singing. I was confident with proper songbooks, much rehearsal (排练) time, a good director, and a guitar, we would be great. I told Jane we’d be happy to join her choir. But as she described her plan, my enthusiasm reduced. Jane felt one rehearsal would be enough, and since nobody in the group played the guitar, our voices would be enough. She didn’t know what we’d be singing, but she’d come up with something. I had always admired her free spirit, but I doubted her plan, already regretting my quick decision and worrying. Then, what was worse, Jane called one afternoon, saying our rehearsal would have to be canceled because two members got sick, and provided a list of simple songs for us to practice singing at home. Noticing my concern, she told me what mattered was that we were there and that everything would be fine. At home, my husband and I busily decorated our house for our holiday and sometimes set aside some time for our song practice. Before long, the choir’s singing date arrived. That day, Jane, together with five of us, drove toward our first destination. We would be visiting an old couple who lived alone. The wife had been receiving cancer treatments. I had no idea whether our performance would help make their day. Soon, we walked through the snow and reached a small, simple house. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　An old man who looked worried opened the door. 　　After the cheerful conversation, we began to sing. 原文基本要素 主要人物:Jane (cheerful, humorous and outgoing) 次要人物:my husband and me, an old couple, three other people for charity 主题:慈善助人 原文情节线 “我”的朋友Jane开朗、幽默、外向,在一家慈善机构工作。元旦前她邀请“我”和“我”丈夫一起为一些不幸的家庭唱鼓舞人心的节日歌曲,与他们聊天→“我”认为准备好合唱所需的一切,会表现得很棒,但Jane觉得排练一次就够了,也没人弹吉他,“我”开始怀疑她的计划并后悔自己的决定→两名合唱队员生病无法参加合唱排练,“我”很担忧,Jane安慰“我”说陪伴就够了→合唱日到了,“我们”在一个寒冷的日子出发先去拜访老两口,妻子患癌症正在治疗。 续写情节 第一段:衔接1:首句衔接所给句“一位看起来忧心忡忡的老人开了门”:(协同原文的we walked through the snow)他在这么冷的天看到“我们”六个人是什么反应?(吃惊、困惑)“我们”介绍来访目的。过渡句:老人请我们进屋,“我们”看到了什么?(协同原文We would be visiting an old couple who lived alone. The wife had been receiving cancer treatments.)老妇人脸色不好,桌上有药物等与生病相关的事物描写。她看到“我们”时是什么反应?→“我”此时的心满是怜悯,且不知道如何与他们沟通(协同原文I had no idea whether our performance would help make their day.)。衔接2:尾句衔接第二段所给句中的“愉快的谈话之后”:(协同原文首段首句中My friend Jane, a cheerful, humorous and outgoing person, worked for a charity.和chat with them on New Year’s Day to cheer them up)Jane活跃气氛,开始说话,引领大家谈一些有趣的话题,大家都开心起来。 第二段:衔接3:首句衔接所给句中的“我们开始唱歌”:“我们”唱歌时,老两口的反应(开心,忧心忡忡的表情变淡,也许脸上有了笑容,侧重描写神态变化)。过渡句:(协同原文中的since nobody in the group played the guitar, our voices would be enough)“我们”虽然没有吉他伴奏,但是歌声真诚→“我们”唱完歌时,老两口的感激→(协同原文中作者对这次慈善行为的担忧和怀疑I doubted her plan, already regretting my quick decision and worrying) “我”的担忧和疑虑不见了。结尾(感悟+场景描写):(协同原文的what mattered was that we were there and that everything would be fine)“我”意识到聊天、唱歌和陪伴就足以让他们开心。开心道别,奔赴下一个目的地(协同原文的first destination)。 美文诵读 An old man who looked worried opened the door. He seemed a bit surprised to see a group of people at his doorstep on such a cold winter day. We introduced ourselves and explained the purpose of our visit. He hesitated for a moment but then welcomed us in with a warm smile, gesturing for us to come inside. In the living room, a woman who looked pale greeted us, the table before her littered with medicine (她面前的桌上散落着药物). I couldn’t help but feel a sense of pity (不禁感到一阵怜悯), unsure how to connect with the couple. To my relief, Jane cheerfully started the conversation, guiding it towards light-hearted and enjoyable topics. Finally, all talked, including the couple, whose faces gradually lit up. After the cheerful conversation, we began to sing. As we sang our simple songs, the wife’s eyes sparkled with tears of joy, and the husband’s uneasy expression softened into a gentle grin (丈夫不安的表情变成了温柔的笑容). We didn’t have a guitar to accompany us, and our voices weren’t perfect, but the sincerity in our songs filled the room with a sense of comfort (我们真诚的歌声让房间里充满了舒适感). After our performance, the couple thanked us with tears in their eyes, expressing how our visit had made their day. It was then that my worries totally melted away (我的担忧不见了) and I realized they didn’t need a grand performance. The simple act of chatting, singing, and being present was enough to uplift their spirits. Joyfully, we said goodbye and drove to our next destination. 原文表达借鉴 But as she described her plan,my enthusiasm reduced. (无灵主语句,描写情绪变化) 但当她描述她的计划时,我的热情变淡了。 (续写精解深析) 原文分析 第1-2段 My friend Jane, a cheerful, humorous and outgoing person, worked for a charity. One day in early December, she called, saying she was putting together some people to sing inspiring holiday songs to some unfortunate families and chat with them on New Year’s Day to cheer them up. Jane invited my husband and me to join them.  Although I hadn’t sung in any choir (合唱团) for years, I always enjoyed singing. I was confident with proper songbooks, much rehearsal (排练) time, a good director, and a guitar, we would be great. I told Jane we’d be happy to join her choir. But as she described her plan, my enthusiasm reduced. Jane felt one rehearsal would be enough, and since nobody in the group played the guitar, our voices would be enough. She didn’t know what we’d be singing, but she’d come up with something. I had always admired her free spirit, but I doubted her plan, already regretting my quick decision and worrying.  Jane在慈善机构工作,开朗、幽默、外向。12月初,她打电话邀请“我”和丈夫参加一个为不幸的家庭唱节日歌曲并聊天的活动,以鼓舞他们的情绪。“我”虽然喜欢唱歌,但对Jane的计划感到担忧。Jane认为一次排练就足够了,而且团队中没有人会弹吉他,她也不知道具体要唱什么歌。“我”欣赏Jane的自由精神,但对她的计划感到怀疑,开始后悔自己的决定并感到担忧。 细节的协同:①sing inspiring holiday songs to some unfortunate families and chat with them on New Year’s Day to cheer them up 可这样协同描写:Finally, all talked, including the couple, whose faces gradually lit up. ②Jane felt one rehearsal would be enough, and since nobody in the group played the guitar, our voices would be enough. 可借鉴的协同句: We didn’t have a guitar to accompany us, and our voices weren’t perfect, but the sincerity in our songs filled the room with a sense of comfort.  第3-4段 Then, what was worse, Jane called one afternoon, saying our rehearsal would have to be canceled because two members got sick, and provided a list of simple songs for us to practice singing at home. Noticing my concern, she told me what mattered was that we were there and that everything would be fine.  At home, my husband and I busily decorated our house for our holiday and sometimes set aside some time for our song practice. Jane取消了排练,因为两名成员生病,她提供了简单的歌曲列表让成员在家练习。 “我”虽然感到担忧,但Jane安慰“我”说重要的是我们在那里,一切都会好起来。随后,“我”和丈夫在家中为节日装饰,并抽时间练习歌曲。 细节的协同:what mattered was that we were there and that everything would be fine  可这样协同:The simple act of chatting, singing, and being present was enough to uplift their spirits. 也可以利用老夫妇的表情侧面描写:丈夫的“gentle grin”,夫妻的眼睛“thanked us with tears in their eyes”,这些细节描写突出了合唱团的歌声和陪伴带来的积极影响。  协同点:这两段为下文的情节发展做了铺垫。取消排练和在家练习的情节,与下文团队在没有充分准备的情况下依然成功感动老夫妇的情节相呼应,突出了“真诚比完美更重要”的主题:the sincerity in our songs filled the room with a sense of comfort。 第5段 Before long, the choir’s singing date arrived. That day, Jane, together with five of us, drove toward our first destination. We would be visiting an old couple who lived alone. The wife had been receiving cancer treatments. I had no idea whether our performance would help make their day.  合唱团的活动日很快到来。那天,Jane和包括“我”在内的五个人一起驱车前往第一个目的地——一对独居的老夫妇家。妻子正在接受癌症治疗。“我”不确定“我们”的表演是否能给这对夫妇带来欢乐。 细节的协同:①“我们”开车去第一个目的地“drove toward our first destination”, 续写第二段结尾可这样协同,如 Joyfully, we said goodbye and drove to our next destination. ②老夫妇的家庭情况:老夫妇孤独,妻子患癌症。“我们”进门会看到老夫人与治疗癌症相关的什么情况?续写第一段可以描写老妇人脸色苍白“a woman who looked pale greeted us”,桌上摆满了药品“the table before her littered with medicine” 协同妻子正在接受癌症治疗的情节。   第6段 Soon, we walked through the snow and reached a small, simple house.  寒冷的冬天,雪地中的小房子,突出了老夫妇的孤独和困境。 环境的协同:续写第一段可描写“He seemed a bit surprised to see a group of people at his doorstep on such a cold winter day.” “on such a cold winter day”,与本段环境描写保持了协同性。  续写中人物性格的协同 Jane: Jane开朗乐观、自由随性、富有同情心、行动力强、不拘小节且具有鼓舞他人的能力。虽然合唱团的准备不够充分,但她依然充满信心,认为“一切都会好起来”。在续写段落中,她的性格再次得到体现,她主动引导与老夫妇的对话,将话题转向轻松愉快的内容,表现了她的社交能力和乐观态度。 续写第一段中可这样写:To my relief, Jane cheerfully started the conversation, guiding it towards light-hearted and enjoyable topics.   “我”:Jane提出活动计划,“我”接受邀请,但开始怀疑Jane的准备是否充分。从最初的“自信”和“高兴”逐渐转变为“担忧”和“后悔”。 在续写部分应描写“我”看到老夫妇的反应时,意识到真诚的陪伴比完美的表演更重要。 “我”的担忧完全消失:It was then that my worries totally melted away and I realized they didn’t need a grand performance.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$