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满分练9　应用文写作(邀请信·体育)+读后续写(挑战自我) 限时40分钟　 应用文写作　 　　假如你是李华,运动会临近,你想邀请外教Mr. Smith参加你们班的集体活动跳长绳(long rope jumping)。请你写一封邮件给他,内容包括:1.介绍该运动;2.准备事宜。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 美文诵读 Dear Mr. Smith, I hope this email finds you well. As the school sports meet draws near (随着校运动会的临近), I am writing to sincerely invite you to participate in a thrilling and engaging activity with our class—long rope jumping. The event is scheduled for (定于) Nov. 10th at the school’s sports field. It’s a fantastic activity where two people swing a long rope rhythmically while others jump over it. As it requires our perfect collaboration (完美的配合), a practice session is to be arranged to familiarize you with (使……熟悉) the basic rules and techniques. Please let me know a convenient time for you this week. Do wear comfortable shoes suitable for jumping. Anticipating seeing you jump with us soon! Yours, Li Hua 读后续写　 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Around 5:30 a.m., I met my running group—the Los Angeles Road runners training team. I had trained with them for ten long months. That ten months left me with blisters (水疱) and backaches. But my pace leaders reassured me that no matter what, I should keep going. I knew my very first marathon was coming. More importantly, my husband and my daughter promised to wait for me at the finish line. At about 6:30 a.m., I went to the starting gates and my excitement grew as the gun shot for the start and I was on cloud nine. The first few miles were quite easy, but by mile 8 the pain was starting to spread all over my body, as if it were growing like a cancer. I had no choice but to slow down. Slowing down is much better than quitting, so I slowed down from my group and realized that the rest of this race was going to be just me and the road. Mile 12 brought about doubts whether I could even finish this race. By mile 15, my pace had slowed even further. I reminded myself, “Just get to that finish line. Keep running, head held high.” Mile 18 brought me into familiar territory—my neighborhood. I had slowed to a walk by this point because my body didn’t want to move an inch. I wanted to just walk home. But I couldn’t because I had to keep going. By mile 21, I had been told many times by audience, “You’re almost there. Keep it up!” The smile on their faces, and the determined look in their eyes made me realize how much they cared that I could finish. Left foot forward, now right foot forward. Every step I took, the intensity of the pain soaked (浸入) into every cell in my body. I’d been running for 4 hours with what seemed like no end in sight. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　With just 4 miles left, I really wanted to quit. 　　Finally, the smiling faces of my family came into my sight. 原文基本要素 主要人物:I 次要人物:my husband, my daughter 主题:坚持不懈, 挑战自我 原文情节线 “我”加入跑步小组,训练十个月后参加人生第一次马拉松比赛→跑到8英里时开始速度变慢,全身疼(到12英里时自我怀疑)→到15英里时,速度更慢,虽想放弃,但还在坚持→到21英里时,在观众的鼓励下还在坚持。 续写情节 第一段:衔接1:首句衔接所给句“我真的想放弃”:“我”疲惫不堪,气喘吁吁。过渡句:(协同原文第三段中的the pain was starting to spread all over my body)“我”全身疼痛,想到了丈夫和女儿的诺言(协同第一段中my husband and my daughter promised to wait for me at the finish line)。衔接2:衔接第二段首句中的“家人的笑脸映入眼帘”:“我”带着他们的期望,继续努力跑。 第二段:衔接3:首句衔接所给句“家人的笑脸映入眼帘”:“我”加快脚步冲过终点,女儿和丈夫的反应。过渡句:“我”的反应(气喘吁吁,疲惫不堪),丈夫和女儿对“我”的赞扬→“我”的疲倦一扫而光,变得高兴、骄傲。结尾:完成第一次马拉松赛跑(协同第一段中的my very first marathon),也是人生的一次突破。 美文诵读 With just 4 miles left, I really wanted to quit. My legs felt like lead (我的腿像铅一样), my lung burning with every breath. The pain was simply unbearable, and I wondered if I had what it took to inch to the end (一点一点跑到最后). But then, the promise of my husband and my daughter echoed in my mind (在我脑中回响). I thought about how proud they would be to see me finish and I could even picture the scene of them cheering for me. With the promise in my mind, I took a deep breath, wiped the sweat, and dragged my legs to keep going (深吸一口气,擦干汗水,硬撑着继续往前跑). Finally, the smiling faces of my family came into my sight. I quickened my pace (加快脚步), ignoring the pain that had burdened me for the last 21 miles. As I crossed the finish line, my husband and daughter dashed towards me, wrapping me in a warm embrace. At that moment, my eyes were clouded, my mouth wide open, breathing heavily. “Mom, you’re awesome!” shouted my daughter. As I saw the pride on her face, all the pain and suffering faded away, replaced by pure joy and accomplishment (所有的痛苦都消失了,取而代之的是由衷的快乐和成就感). So, I had completed my very first marathon, and it was an experience marking a breakthrough in my life. 原文表达借鉴 ①I went to the starting gates and my excitement grew as the gun shot for the start and I was on cloud nine. (无灵主语句+ 地道表达) 我去了起跑处,随着发令枪一响,我愈发兴奋,高兴极了。 ②Every step I took,the intensity of the pain soaked into every cell in my body.(无灵主语句+夸张的修辞手法) 我每跑一步,身体的每一个细胞都叫嚣着疼痛。 (续写精解深析) 原文分析 第1段 Around 5:30 a.m., I met my running group—the Los Angeles Road runners training team. I had trained with them for ten long months. That ten months left me with blisters (水疱) and backaches. But my pace leaders reassured me that no matter what, I should keep going. I knew my very first marathon was coming. More importantly, my husband and my daughter promised to wait for me at the finish line (家人的支持).  “我”早上与洛杉矶路跑训练队汇合,回顾了十个月的训练经历,提到水疱和背痛,但领跑者鼓励“我”无论如何都要坚持下去。 协同点1: 续写第一段可协同“my husband and my daughter promised to wait for me at the finish line”描写丈夫和女儿的诺言鼓励着“我”坚持跑;续写第二段可协同描写 “我”最终完成比赛,与家人团聚的场景。  续写部分可借鉴的衔接句: But then, the promise of my husband and my daughter echoed in my mind.  As I crossed the finish line, my husband and daughter dashed towards me, wrapping me in a warm embrace.  协同点2:续写结尾可协同“I knew my very first marathon was coming.”描写“我”完成第一次马拉松赛跑。  续写部分可借鉴的衔接句:So, I had completed my very first marathon, and it was an experience marking a breakthrough in my life.  第2-3段 At about 6:30 a.m., I went to the starting gates and my excitement grew as the gun shot for the start and I was on cloud nine. The first few miles were quite easy, but by mile 8 the pain was starting to spread all over my body, as if it were growing like a cancer. I had no choice but to slow down. Slowing down is much better than quitting, so I slowed down from my group and realized that the rest of this race was going to be just me and the road. Mile 12 brought about doubts whether I could even finish this race (暗示了心理上的挑战).  比赛开始,“我”很兴奋,但随着比赛进行,身体疼痛逐渐加剧,“我”不得不放慢速度,开始怀疑自己是否能完成比赛。 协同点3:可协同“the pain was starting to spread all over my body”描写“我”身体更剧烈的疼痛,更无法忍受,同时协同“Mile 12 brought about doubts”描写“我”对自己的怀疑。 续写部分可借鉴的衔接句: The pain was simply unbearable, and I wondered if I had what it took to inch to the end.  第4-5段 By mile 15, my pace had slowed even further. I reminded myself, “Just get to that finish line. Keep running, head held high.” Mile 18 brought me into familiar territory—my neighborhood. I had slowed to a walk by this point because my body didn’t want to move an inch. I wanted to just walk home. But I couldn’t because I had to keep going.  By mile 21, I had been told many times by audience, “You’re almost there. Keep it up!” The smile on their faces, and the determined look in their eyes made me realize how much they cared that I could finish. Left foot forward, now right foot forward. Every step I took, the intensity of the pain soaked (浸入) into every cell in my body (强调了身体的极限状态). I’d been running for 4 hours with what seemed like no end in sight.  “我”在15英里时进一步放慢速度,提醒自己要坚持到终点。18英里时,进入熟悉的社区,身体几乎无法移动,但“我”仍然坚持。观众的支持让“我”意识到他们对“我”完成比赛的关心,尽管身体疼痛难忍,“我”还在坚持。 协同点4: 协同“my pace had slowed even further”可描写最后“我”加快步子, 协同原文中的mile 8, mile 15, mile 18, mile 21和续写第一段所给句中的just 4 miles, 可衔接描写“我”跑了21英里。  可借鉴的衔接句:I quickened my pace, ignoring the pain that had burdened me for the last 21 miles.  协同点5:协同“the intensity of the pain soaked (浸入) into every cell in my body” (无灵主语句,全身疼)可描写身体的极限状态,如My legs felt like lead, my lung burning with every breath.  可借鉴的衔接句:As I saw the pride on her face, all the pain and suffering faded away, replaced by pure joy and accomplishment.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$