2025年高考英语全国一卷读后续写写作思路及技巧 课件-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写 以2025年全国一卷读后续写为例，如何写好读后续写 高分评分标准解读 写作思路及技巧 （以2025高考续写为例） 写作步骤 01 02 03 读后续写 高考读后续写高分作文评分标准 创造了丰富、合理的内容,富有逻辑性,续写完整,与原文情境融洽度高。 使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但完全不影响理解。 01 02 第5档 (21-25分) 有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。 03 高分作文评分标准解读 01 02 03 内容结构 （合理完整清晰） 符合逻辑 （事事有呼应） 融洽度高 （人物语言） 05 词汇语法 （准确丰富多样） 04 字体 赏心悦目 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. _______________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ________________________ 研读文本：5W1H Para.1 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. When：In the early summer（初夏）​ Where：The author’s new home（作者的新家）​ Who：The author, his wife, their family and friends​ What：作者和妻子计划举办一场小型聚会，与家人朋友分享他们的新家。妻子准备了很多零食，作者负责整理后院。 聚会的筹备 研读文本：5W1H Para.2 There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. Para.3 My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. Para.4 It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. When：During the gathering, when it started to rain Where：The author’s home (backyard and indoors) Who：The author, his brother, the brother’s dog Toby, the author’s niece’s small boys, the author’s six-month-old granddaughter, everyone at the gathering What：作者的兄弟带他的狗Toby来参加聚会。作者担心托比会撞倒孩子们，让兄弟看管Toby并让它待在外面。晚饭后，天下起了雨，所有人都进了屋，这导致了一个尴尬的局面。作者不想让Toby在屋里乱跑，而兄弟也不愿意带着一只湿狗开车回家。最终，兄弟决定离开。 聚会中的冲突 研读文本：5W1H Para.5 A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. When：A few days after the gathering Who：The author and his brother What：作者几天都没有收到兄弟的消息。他给兄弟发了短信，希望他能再来，但兄弟回复 “没门”。作者认为兄弟会释怀的。​ 冲突后的僵持 研读文本：5W1H Para.6 Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. When：Two months after the gathering Who：The author, his wife, his brother What：妻子劝作者联系兄弟遭拒，作者良心不安后换位思考，知兄弟遇健康、丧妻困境，Toby 是其陪伴。 反思与理解 分析故事情节，把握文章主题 聚会的筹备（Para.1） 聚会中的冲突(Para. 2-4) 冲突后的僵持(Para.5) 反思与理解（Para.6） 要求续写部分： Para.1 I realized it was me who was at fault. Para.2 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 分析要求续写给出的2个段首句，提出问题，根据关键信息 预设故事情节发展走向 关注段首句和续写部分的衔接 思考故事如何结尾 我：感到愧疚后悔→拜访哥哥（道歉）→哥哥接受道歉并释怀 主题: 同理心，理解，爱 构思续写布局 情节+情感走向 03 时态 02 人称 01 后悔→道歉→哥哥释怀 一般过去时为主 第一人称和第三人称为主 写作思路及技巧 4. 审视初稿 3. 定语言（契合) 2. 定逻辑 1. 10定5句 5. 认真誊写 13 Para.1 I realized it was me who was at fault. ① ② ③ ④ ⑤ 写作思路及技巧:10定5 Para.2 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ① ② ③ ④ ⑤ 我愧疚+我回想当时发生的事情 升华主题：换位思考，理解，爱 结局:哥哥接受道歉 释怀，我和哥哥和好 我敲门+心情描写（紧张） 我去哥哥家+妻子准备好了好饼干 Para.1 I realized it was me who was at fault. ①我愧疚+我回想当时发生的事情 ② ③ ④ ⑤我去哥哥家+妻子准备好了好饼干 写作思路及技巧:定逻辑 Para.2 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ① 我敲门+心情描写（紧张） ② ③ ④结局:哥哥接受道歉 释怀，我和哥哥和好 ⑤升华主题：换位思考，爱 我道歉 哥哥开门，邀请我进屋 告知妻子，妻子提出做些饼干送给哥哥 我决定去拜访哥哥（原文：妻子的建议） 我后悔：不该忽视哥哥和Toby的情感 Para.1 I realized it was me who was at fault. ①我愧疚+我回想当时发生的事情(无灵主语+时间状语从句) A wave of guilt swept over me like an overwhelming flood the moment I thought of what I had done in the small gathering and his unhappy expression when he left. ② Ashamed and regreful, I knew shouldn’t have ignored his bond with the dog Toby that kept him company when he was struggling with health issues and the loss of his beloved wife. ③ Recalling my wife’s suggestion that I should get in touch with my brother, I was determined to pay a visit to him in person, hoping to fix our relationship. ④ No sooner had I told my deicison than my wife offered to make some biscuits for my brother. ⑤我去哥哥家+妻子准备好了好饼干（with 复合结构） With the biscuits packed into a delicate small box, I couldn’t wait to head for my brother’s house. 写作思路及技巧:定语言（契合） 告知妻子，妻子提出做些饼干送给哥哥（半倒装） 我决定去拜访哥哥（原文：妻子的建议）（非谓语 + 同位语） 我后悔：不该忽视哥哥和Toby的情感（adj状+定从） 写作思路及技巧:定语言（契合） Para.2 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ① 我敲门+心情描写（紧张）(独立主格结构) Heart racing and palms sweating, I raised my hand to knock. ② The door opened and there stood my brother with a glimmer of surprise flashing in his eyes, who then invited me into the house. ③ Gathering my courage, I handed him the biscuits, made sincere apologies for my fault and confessed my deep regret, my throat tightning with emotion. ④结局:哥哥接受道歉 释怀，我和哥哥和好(非谓语+独立主格) Hearing this, he gave a faint and softening smile and hugged me tightly, his dog Toby running back and forth cheerfully in his yard.At this moment, I knew our relationship returned to what it used to be. ⑤升华主题：换位思考，爱（强调句） It was through the experience that I came to reaize that putting oneself in others’shoes could bring people together and draws heart closer. 我道歉(固定句型：鼓起勇气→道歉表达遗憾+身体反应) 哥哥开门，邀请我进屋(全倒装) 审视初稿 句子哪些进行高级改写 时态和语态是否一致 主谓是否一致 人称是否一致 单词拼写是否正确 是否能写满格 18 完整稿 Para.1 I realized it was me who was at fault. A wave of guilt swept over me like an overwhelming flood the moment I thought of what I had done in the small gathering and his unhappy expression when he left.Ashamed and regreful, I knew shouldn’t have ignored his bond with the dog Toby that kept him company when he was struggling with health issues and the loss of his beloved wife.Recalling my wife’s suggestion that I should get in touch with my brother, I was determined to pay a visit to him in person, hoping to fix our relationship.No sooner had I told my deicison than my wife offered to make some biscuits for my brother.With the biscuits packed into a delicate small box, I couldn’t wait to head for my brother’s house. Para.2 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.Heart racing and palms sweating, I raised my hand to knock. The door opened and there stood my brother with a glimmer of surprise flashing in his eyes, who then invited me into the house.Gathering my courage, I handed him the biscuits, made sincere apologies for my fault and confessed my deep regret, my throat tightning with emotion.Hearing this, he gave a faint and softening smile and hugged me tightly, his dog Toby running back and forth cheerfully in his yard.At this moment, I knew our relationship had returned to what it used to be.It was through the experience that I came to reaize that putting oneself in others’shoes could bring people together and draws heart closer. 一、研读文本：通过段落大意和故事要素把握文章情节&主题： 我：感到愧疚后悔→拜访哥哥（道歉）→哥哥接受道歉并释怀 主题: 同理心，理解，爱 二、写作布局： 1. 人称：第一人称和第三人称并用 2. 时态：一般过去时 3. 情节+情感走向：后悔→道歉→哥哥释怀 三、写作思路： 1. 定5句 2.定逻辑 3. 定语言 四、审视初稿： 1. 句子哪些进行高级改写 2. 时态和语态是否一致 3. 主谓是否一致 4. 人称是否一致 5. 单词拼写是否正确 6. 是否能写满格 五、认真誊写 简化版续写5步 Empathy 同理心: .Only when we put ourselves in others' shoes, can we truly understand their situations and feelings. 只有当我们设身处地地为别人着想，才能真正理解他们的处境和感受。 Cherishing Family Ties珍惜家庭纽带: Family relationships, often the most precious in our lives, demand our continuous care and dedication. 家庭关系往往是我们生命中最宝贵的东西，需要我们不断地关心和奉献。 Instead of waiting for others to make amends, taking the first step to resolve conflicts is always the best action one could take. 与其等着别人来弥补，不如迈出第一步解决冲突，这是能采取的最佳行动。 亲情、友情:万能句 $$