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Unit2 Chinese Traditional Festivals Writing 写作目标 壹 贰 叁 能描述某个节日的时间，庆祝活动，意义以及感受。 能在写作过程中最好能用到本单元所学的重要语法知识——宾语从句。 掌握写作微技能——列提纲（make a outline） 2 Brainstorm (头脑风暴) What Chinese festivals do you know? (你知道有哪些中国节日吗？) Let’s watch a video about Chinese traditional culture! Lead in Tang原创课件,请勿侵权！ 小红书/抖音：Tang原创课件 淘宝：Tang原创课件 4 What is your favorite Chinese festival? Why? Lead in Tang原创英语课件 小红书：Tang 淘宝：Tang原创课件 5 the Spring Festival the Lantern Festival Qingming Festival the Dragon Boat Festival the Double 7th Day / the Chinese Valentine’s Day the Mid-Autumn Festival the Double 9th Day Lunar New Year’s Eve When on the first day of the first lunar month on the 15th day of the first lunar month April 5th on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month on the 7th day of the seventh lunar month on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month on the 9th day of the ninth lunar month on the last night of the last lunar month … is celebrated on … Chinese Festivals Tang原创英语课件 小红书：Tang 淘宝：Tang原创课件 6 How can we write an article about traditional festivals？ Read the following passage ang have a summary. My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It’s a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day people usually eat zongzi and hold dragon boat races. They also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort(艾草) around the doors and carry a spice bag around with them. What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit — everybody tries their best to win the race. It is very exciting and interesting. So my favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. Para 1 name, date, Para 2 things to eat, things to do Para 3 feelings， reasons Summary Para 2 Para 1 Para 3 name, date, significance （庆祝意义） things to eat, things to do， feelings， reasons Traditional Festival 语言积累 name ，date， significance a.lies on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month. b.lies on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month c.lies on the first day of the 1st lunar month. d.is on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month e.is on April 4th or 5th 1. The Dragon Boat Festival （ ） 2. The Lantern Festival （ ） 3. Tomb Sweeping Day （ ） 4. Chinese Spring Festival （ ） 5. Mid-Autumn Festival （ ） Match the following festival names with dates. b a e c d 10 names of the festivals 1、Every year there is a Spring Festival in China. 2、Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most popular festivals in China. 3、It is a traditional Chinese festival called … 4、My favorite Chinese festival is... How can we express when the festival is? 如何表达节日时间？ It is celebrated in/on... When do people celebrate it? 1、Things to eat How do people celebrate it? 2、Things to do During this festival,people... Chinese Spring Festival It represents a new beginning when people send off the old days and welcome the new ones. 14 Mid-Autumn Festival It represents people’s good wishes to be reunited with (与...团聚) their families. The Lantern Festival It represents the last day of the Lunar New Year celebration. 16 The Gragon Boat Festival People celebrate the festival to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. 17 Tomb Sweeping Day It is a special day for the living to show love and respect to their dead friends or relatives. 18 语言积累 things to eat, things to do. Chinese Spring Festival things to eat things to do Dumplings; Niangao;Fish; Chicken Before the Spring Festival: clean the house, sweep the floor , put up couplets go shopping , prepare for family dinner， watch the Spring Festival Gala During the Spring Festival: wear new clothes , visit relatives and friends, get some lucky money 20 things to eat things to do Mid-Autumn Festival mooncake ， desserts， fruit，crabs admire the moon ， have a family reunion dinner， fly sky lantern The Lantern Festival things to eat things to do watch the lantern show， guess the lantern riddles， watch the firework, watch lion dance sweet dumplings / Yuan Xiao / Tang Yuan 22 The Gragon Boat Festival things to eat things to do Zongzi , Realgar Wine(雄黄酒) hanging pictures of Zhong Kui, hanging Calamus and Moxa(挂菖蒲和艾草) dragon boat race 23 Tomb Sweeping Day things to eat things to do clean the tomb， cherish (怀念) the memories of their dead family members， plant willow trees （插柳） spring out （踏青） QingTuan 佳句积累 1.我们有很多方式庆祝春节，比如放烟花和贴春联。 ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________. 2. 在春节期间，我们中国人总会友好热情地招待亲戚朋友。 ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________. 3.在泼水节的时候，人们会走到街上互相泼水。 ___________________________________________________. __________. We celebrate the Spring Festival with many kinds of activities, such as setting fireworks and putting up red couplets. We Chinese always treat our relatives and friends with kindness and warmth during the Spring Festival. People go on the streets to throw water at each other during the Dai Water Festival. 佳句积累 4.人们有赏月和与家人分享月饼的传统。 ____________________________________________ _____________________________________________. 5.在元宵节的时候人们会团聚在一起吃汤圆。 ____________________________________________________. 6.在端午节那天，人们经常吃一种叫做粽子的特殊食物。 ____________________________________________________. 7.在除夕，家人们聚在一起吃一顿大餐。 __________________________________________________. People have the tradition of admiring the full moon and sharing mooncakes with families People often get together and eat sweet dumplings on Lantern Festival. People often eat a special kind of food called zongzi on Dragon Boat Festival. The families get together and have a big dinner on New Year’s Eve 佳句积累 8.那一天，有很多活动，如龙舟比赛和把粽子扔进河里。 ____________________________________________ _____________________________________________. 9.中国人已经庆祝中秋和吃月饼好几个世纪了。 _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________. 10.晚饭过后，人们会坐在一起看春节联欢晚会。 ______________________________________________________. On that day, there are many kinds of activities, such as the dragon boat races and throwing zongzi into the rivers. Chinese people have been celebrating Mid-Autumn Festival and enjoying mooncakes for centuries. After dinner, people sit together and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. 语言积累 Feeling， Reasons Feeling 感叹句表达情感 1. What a wonderful time we have! 2. How exciting and happy we are during the Spring Festivals! 表达情感的不同表达 1. I think that getting together with my family during the spring Festival is the most __________. 2.It makes me feel _______. 3.Not only do we get lots of happeniness and fun, but we can feel relaxed. Reasons 句子仿写。（选择一个节日，模仿下面这句话） Behind all these things lies the ture meaning of Christmas：the importance of sharing and giving love and joy to people around us. And that is the true spirits of christmas. ________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ Behind all these things lies the ture meaning of Mother’s Day：the importance of showing our love to our parents. Reasons 其他表示意义的句子。 1. Because the new year is a time for cleaning and washing away bad things. Then you’ll have good luck in the new year. 2.They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss. 3. It’s my favorite festival because... 写作注意点： About writing... 1. 开门见山  2. 多使用短语 3. 句式多样 4. 衔接词 32 句式多样 感叹句： 1. What a wonderful time we have! 2. How exciting and happy we are during the Spring Festival! 宾语从句： 1. I think that getting together with my family during the spring Festival is the most __________. 2.I hope I can watch the dragon dance again. 33 并列关系： and, or, either...or, both...and, not only...but also, as well as  转折关系：but, however, yet, although  条件关系：if, whether, unless  时间关系： when, as, before, after, while, until, since, as soon as  原因关系：because, as, since, for 衔接词 34 写作范例 Writing 在这么多的中国传统节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日, 以”My favorite Chinese traditional festival”为题写一篇80词左右的文章。 体裁：_______ 时态：_______ 人称:_______ 布局 : Draw an outline(提纲) for writing When things to do things to eat feeling Why What How Task1、读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。 Task2、①欣赏与修正 请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句 , 并运用改错符号找出不足，进行适当修改。 ②评分 以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。 ③点评 由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构 分析-细 节点评) 欣赏角度： 写作基本要求:人称, 时态； 2. 要点齐全； 3. 结构: 开头，正文，结尾； 4. 好词好句。 Step1:审 ◆ 定体裁：议论文 ◆ 定人称：第一人称 ◆ 定时态：一般现在时 ◆ 定要点：1. 介绍你喜欢的节日和庆祝时间； 2. 人们在节日期间做什么、吃什么； 3. 你喜欢这个节日的原因，对节日的感受。 39 Step2:列 Dragon Boat Festival 点明主题 节日习俗 认识与感受 My favorite Chinese festival is… … is one of the traditional festivals in China. It is celebrated in/on … Chinese people have been celebrating it for… During the festival/ On that day, people usually… At night, Family will …/Children… One of the most exciting things is… It’s exciting to… It’s my favorite festival because… It makes me feel happy and… How interesting/fantastic …! In my opinion, we should… Tang原创英语课件 小红书：Tang 淘宝：Tang原创课件 40 Step3:美 在有把握的情况下多使用短语和复合句来为文章增色。 1. My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. The Dragon Boat Festival is one of my favorite festivals in my mind. 2. It makes me feel happy and warm. It can not only make me feel love and happiness, but also let me know the importance of home and family. 41 Step4:查 用词方面: 代词主格，宾格； 名词单复数；动词搭配；副词位置 句子方面: 篇章方面: 细节方面: 句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；连词使用 内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理 字数；单词拼写；标点符号；大小写 42 Dragon Boat Festival Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in China. Chinese people have been celebrating Dragon Boat Festival in June in memory of the great Chinese poet Qu Yuan. We had a three-day holiday this year. My parents took me to visit my grandma in the countryside. We ate zongzi and watched dragon boat race there. Zongzi is a kind of traditional food in China. Dragon boat race is the most exciting part of the festival. Dragon Boat Festival is my favorite festival because it makes me feel happy and I really like eating zongzi. How wonderful the festival is! 43 假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友Mike想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。 内容提示： 1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日; 2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间) （Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money） 要求：1.80词左右，书信格式； 2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书 写规范。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。 44 写作指导 列提纲 写好句 审题 成篇章 假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友Mike想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。 内容提示： 1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日; 2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间) （Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money） 要求：1. 80词左右，书信格式； 2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构 正确、连贯；书 写规范。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。 审题 1. 审主题：______. 2. 审体裁：________. 3. 审人称：_______. 4. 审时态：_______. 5. 审要点 ：_______. 介绍传统节日春节 书信 第一人称 一般现在时 介绍春节， 春节(节前，除夕，过节期间）的主要活动 46 列提纲 Para 2 Para 1 Para 3 Spring Festival Spring Festival, the most important traditional holiday before the festival：clean our houses, decorate our houses the eve of the festival： get together， during the festival: get lucky money, happy Dear Jim, How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. Before the festival, we clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.We are very happy. 范文赏析 你如何评价这篇范文？ 字数不够 内容简单 词汇和语句比较简单 如何提升这篇范文？ 写好句 Dear Jim, How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. 提升 (第一段内容较少，可适当添加内容） There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the SpringFestival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It lies on the the first day of the 1st lunar month. 假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。 写好句 Before the festival, we clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people. 提升 ① 1. 在①句子增加内容，使用到that引导的宾语从句。 we clean our houses,we think cleaning can sweeps bad things. 2. 在②句子增加内容，充实句子。 We decorate our houses with paper cuttings. ② 写好句 Before the festival, We clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people. 提升 ① 1. 在①句子增加要点，充实句子. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have a big dinner . 还可以增加: Then we watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, we set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. 写好句 Before the festival, we clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people. 提升 ① 1. 在①句子增加要点，充实句子. We visit our relatives and friends. We wish each a happy year and good luck. 写好句 We are very happy. 提升 用感叹句表达情感 How exciting and happy we are on the Spring Festivals! Dear Jim, How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the SpringFestival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It lies on the the first day of the 1st lunar month. Before the festival, we clean our houses, we think cleaning can sweeps bad things.We decorate our houses with paper cuttings. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have a big dinner .Then we watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, we set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.We visit our relatives and friends. We wish each a happy year and good luck. How exciting and happy we are on the Spring Festivals! 成篇章 万能模板 Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 引出介绍的节日 介绍节日的习俗,意义 感受 ... is a/an ... festival. It is the most...festival in China. It lies on ... Let me tell you something about it. People usually have a big dinner together with... The most traditional food is... It’s a symbol of.... How happy and exciting people are during... 真题演练 （2019年盘锦改编） 最近，某英语报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节——中秋节”，恰巧中秋节是你最喜欢的节日，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你喜欢中秋节及喜欢的原因。 要点要求如下： 1.最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节； 2.中秋节在每年的农历八月十五； 3.在那天，家人汇聚在一起吃月饼； 4. ......(自主发挥，至少两点） 要求：1.80词左右，书信格式； 2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。 57 真题演练 审题 1. 审主题：______. 2. 审体裁：_____. 3. 审人称：_______. 4. 审时态：_______. 5. 审要点 ：_____. 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