专题 12 读后续写如何进行场景描写（写作专练） 英语高考复习通用版

专题 12 如何写进行场景描写 目录 01场景描写原则---------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 02人文场景描写---------------------------------------------------------------------------------1 03自然场景描写---------------------------------------------------------------------------------4 04即时演练---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------6 场景描写原则 　　场景描写就是对一个特定的时间与地点内许多人物活动的总体情况的描写。它往往是叙述、描写、抒情等表述方法的综合运用, 是自然景色、社会环境、人物活动等描写对象的集中表现。场景描写要表现出一种特定的气氛, 单一的表达方式和写作手法是不够的, 要综合运用记叙、描写、抒情、议论等表达方式, 以及映衬、象征等多种手法, 这样才能形成一幅生动而充满感染力的图画。恰当运用场景描写可以向读者交代故事背景,渲染气氛,衬托人物,从而推动情节发展,还可以通过场景描写向读者间接地表达故事主人公的内心情感。在进行场景描写时,需要格外注意的一点是,写景是服务于主旨的,如果此处描写与主旨无关,即为无效写作。 人文场景描写 人文场景 以人类活动空间为主体，体现社会环境、文化背景或人物生活场景，更贴近日常生活或特定社会场景。 人文场景常用词块 家庭场景 cozy home：温馨的家living room：客厅bedroom：卧室 kitchen：厨房 family members：家庭成员love and warmth：爱与温暖happy memories：幸福的回忆 校园场景 spacious classrooms：宽敞的教室 library：图书馆 playground：操场 dormitories：宿舍 laboratories：实验室teachers and students：老师和学生academic atmosphere：学术氛围 活动场景 exciting sports events：激动人心的体育赛事concerts and performances：音乐会和表演 festivals and celebrations：节日和庆祝活动parties and gatherings：聚会和集会 crowds of people：人群lively atmosphere：热闹的氛围 城市场景 bustling city：繁华的城市 skyscrapers：摩天大楼 busy streets：繁忙的街道 neon lights：霓虹灯 traffic jam：交通堵塞 shopping malls：购物中心 parks and gardens：公园和花园 cafes and restaurants：咖啡馆和餐馆 人文场景实用句子： 一、热闹的夜市 1.As night fell, the city's night market came to life. 夜幕降临，城市的夜市开始热闹起来。 2.Stalls were laden with a dazzling array of goods. 摊位上摆满了琳琅满目的商品。 3.The air was filled with the tantalizing aromas of grilled skewers, stinky tofu, and sugar-coated haws. 空气中弥漫着烤串、臭豆腐和糖葫芦的香气。 4.People gathered in groups, tasting various delicacies and enjoying the night's festivities. 人们三五成群地聚在一起，品尝着各种美食。 5.They chatted merrily, immersing themselves in the joy of the evening. 他们谈笑风生，享受着夜晚的欢乐。 6.Cheers echoed from time to time, adding more vibrancy to the night market. 不时传来阵阵欢呼声，为夜市增添了更多活力。 二、都市早晨 1.In the early morning of the bustling city, the streets were filled with people and traffic. 清晨的都市，街道上人来人往，车水马龙。 2.Coffee shops along the street emitted an inviting aroma. 街边的咖啡店散发出诱人的香气。 3.Baristas bustled about, preparing coffee and pastries for customers.店员们忙碌地为顾客准备咖啡和面包。 4.Towering skyscrapers shone brightly in the sunlight from a distance. 远处的高楼大厦在阳光下熠熠生辉。 三、乡村黄昏 1.The sun slowly descended towards the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and red. 夕阳渐渐沉入地平线，天边被染成了橘红色。 2.In the rural fields, golden wheat stalks swayed gently in the breeze. 乡村的田野上，金黄色的麦穗在微风中轻轻摇曳。 3.Children chased and played on the ridges between the fields, their laughter echoing through the air. 孩子们在田埂上追逐嬉戏，欢声笑语回荡在空气中。 三、校园场景 1.Silence spread across the classroom, interrupted only by the faint sound of pages turning.教室里一片寂静，只有翻动书页的声音轻轻响起。 2.Cheers erupted from the crowd as the team scored the winning goal, turning the stadium into a sea of jubilation.当球队攻入致胜一球时，欢呼声从人群中爆发出来，体育场变成了一片欢乐的海洋。 3.Students walked down the corridor, chatting animatedly, their laughter echoing through the halls. 学生们沿着走廊走着，兴奋地交谈着，笑声在走廊里回荡。 4.The corner of the library was a cozy haven, where the soft glow of lamps illuminated stacks of books and the faint scent of ink lingered in the air. 图书馆的一角是一个温馨的避风港，柔和的灯光照亮了一排排书籍，空气中弥漫着淡淡的墨香。 5.The campus is filled with an academic atmosphere, with students studying in the library and discussing in the classrooms.（校园里充满了学术氛围，学生们在图书馆学习，在教室里讨论。 6.The playground is lively with the sounds of laughter and shouts as students play sports.操场上充满了欢声笑语和呼喊声，学生们在进行体育活动。 7.The classrooms are spacious and well-equipped, providing a comfortable learning environment.教室宽敞且设备齐全，提供了一个舒适的学习环境。 四、描述家庭场景 1.The home is a haven of warmth and love, where family members gather to share happy moments.家是一个温暖和爱的避风港，家庭成员聚集在这里分享幸福的时刻。 2. The living room is decorated with family photos and comfortable sofas, creating a cozy atmosphere.客厅装饰着家庭照片和舒适的沙发，营造出温馨的氛围。 3.The kitchen smells of delicious food, making everyone's mouth water.厨房里飘着美味食物的香气，让每个人都垂涎欲滴。 4.The dining table was filled with laughter and conversation, as the family gathered to celebrate a special occasion.餐桌上充满了欢声笑语，家人围坐一起庆祝这个特别的日子。 五、描述活动场景 1.The concert was a huge success, with the audience cheering and applauding enthusiastically.（音乐会取得了巨大的成功，观众们热烈欢呼和鼓掌。） 2. The festival was filled with colorful decorations and lively performances, attracting people from all over.（节日里充满了五颜六色的装饰和热闹的表演，吸引了来自各地的人们。） 3.The party was in full swing, with people dancing and having a great time.（聚会正进行得如火如荼，人们跳舞，玩得很开心。） 自然场景描写 自然场景 以自然环境为主体，通过山川、草木、天气等自然元素营造氛围，常承载象征意义或推动情节。 自然场景常用动词及短语 风 howl嚎叫, blow吹, whip鞭打, sting刺痛,  kiss亲吻,stroked（轻抚） 雨 beat against..拍打, crash against击, pour down倾盆, fall 落下, 阳光 come out出来, rise升起, set落下, kiss亲吻,  flood in 照射进来, be bathed in沐浴在 雪 dance跳舞, float/fall/drift飘, melt away融化, blanket裹住, cover覆盖 星星 shine闪耀,sparkle/twinkle闪耀, wink/blink眨眼睛, hide躲藏, decorate装饰, dot装饰 自然场景常用形容词 dim昏暗的 feathery鹅毛般的 sparkling/twinkling/glittering闪闪发光的  lofty高耸入云 foggy雾蒙蒙的 misty 有雾 pure纯洁的 dark黑暗的 winding 蜿蜒的 steep 险峻的   sunny/rainy/cloudy/snowy starless没有星星 silky 丝滑的  hard 硬的  soft/gentle 轻的    strong/violent 猛烈的  sharp尖锐的 rough 粗糙的 icy/freezing冰冷的 pale/faint 暗淡 warm温暖的 biting刺骨的 dazzling  耀眼的 burning/scorching火辣辣 sweet甜的  wet/dam潮湿的 choking 让人窒息的 bone-chilling刺骨的    strong 强烈的 fresh 新鲜的  smelly/foul/stinky 臭的;难闻的 fragrant 清香的 deep深的  noisy 吵闹的   melodious悦耳的    deafening 震耳欲聋的 自然场景常用词块 风 暴风雨之夜 a stormy night；四面受风 exposed to the four winds of heaven； 雨 连绵不断的雨 continuous/constant rains；在茫茫大雨中 in the blinding rain； 狂风暴雨 fierce/heavy/violent storms； 阳光 在春天温暖的阳光里 in the warm spring sunshine沐日光浴 bathe/bask in (the) sunshine；在盛夏灼热的阳光下under the blazing/scorching/ burning sun of midsummer； the setting/rising sun 落日/冉冉升起的太阳; 雪 深埋在雪中 be buried in snow；Get piled with snow白雪皑皑，积雪堆积如山； 星空 stars sparkled in the sky星星在天空中闪烁；the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚 花草 fragile flowers 娇嫩的花；green grass 青草；fragrant roses 芬芳的玫瑰 鸟语 the twitter of birds 吱吱喳喳的叫声；birds soaring through the air空中翱翔的鸟儿 自然场景实用句子： 自然场景反衬愉悦的心情： 1. The sweetness of the sun fills my heart.我的心里满是阳光的甜蜜。 2. Upon the arrival of spring, beautiful birds would sing happily in the park. 春天一到,美丽的鸟儿就会在公园里欢快地歌唱。 3. As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, he quickened his steps. 天空越来越黑,光线越来越暗,他加快了步伐。 4. The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.第一缕阳光柔软得让人不忍触摸。 6. The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine. 伴随着一缕阳光,整个世界鲜花绽放。 7.The grassland smelt fresh and sweet after rain.雨后的草原闻起来清新香甜。 8. Birds greet the new day with their morning song. 聆听鸟儿用晨歌迎接崭新的一天。 9. They heard the chatter of birds among the bushes. 他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的叽叽喳喳声。 10. The crickets were playing the violin deep in the grass. 蟋蟀在草丛深处拉着小提琴。 自然场景反衬危险或困难的到来： 1. We had no choice but to sleep under the open sky. 我们别无选择,只能睡在露天下。 2. Black clouds spread across the sky quickly. 乌云很快遮住了天空。 3. Dark clouds were gathering in the sky天空乌云密布。 4. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.我们搬家那天,雨下得很大。 5. On a snowy day, the winds grew stronger and the snow turned into a snowstorm. 某天下雪,风越吹越大,把飘雪变成了一场暴风雪。 6.The waves were rising higher and higher. 海浪翻滚得越来越高。 自然场景衬托自然的美好（平静的心情）： 1. The sky was dotted with sparkling stars. 天空点缀着繁星。 2.The sunshine cast beautiful shadows among the leaves. 阳光在树叶间投下美丽的影子。 3. The mountain villages were bathed in the quiet moonlight. 山村沐浴在静谧的月色中。 4. Bathed in the golden sunlight, the sea rippled and sparkled charmingly.大海沐浴在金色的阳光下,荡漾着迷人的波光。 5. The sun filtered through the clouds, signaling the end of the rain. 阳光穿过云层，预示着雨的结束。 6. A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。 7. The thick forest stretched as far as the eye could see. 茂密的森林一望无际。 8. In the distance is a stretch of grassland.远处是连绵一片的草原。 9.The egret spread its wings like a white cloud, dancing in the misty spring rain. 白鹭舒展双翅如白云，在朦胧春雨中翩跹起舞。 10. Fireflies dotted the summer night, turning the meadow into a field of floating stars. 萤火虫点缀夏夜，将草地化作一片流动的星海。 自然场景反衬忧郁的心情： 1. From the distance, he saw some dim light in the village. 从远处,他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。 2. Immediately an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 顷刻间,黑暗笼罩了森林。 3. Winter wrapped the village in a quilt of snow, silencing even the stream. 冬天给村庄裹上一层雪被，连溪流都沉寂了。 4. On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and winds were howling.那个暴风雨的黑夜里,海浪肆意拍打,狂风咆哮不止。 5.The ceiling of thick branches shut out the sky and covered the path in darkness.如华盖般的树枝遮天蔽日,把小路笼罩在黑暗中。 6. The moon watched from the sky behind the clouds as the stars blink their eyes in fatigue. 月藏在云后偷看,星星带着倦意眨了眨眼睛。 即时演练 一、根据汉语提示，用恰当短语完成句子 1. The sound of my footsteps ___________（伴随着）the gracefully waving reeds. 2. The sky ___________（点缀着）numerous twinkling stars. 3. The garden looked so beautiful with the setting sun ___________（映照）the windows. 4. The mountain top ___________（覆盖）snow. 5. She ___________（沐浴）the sunshine and enjoyed the warmth. 【参考答案】 1. was accompanied by 我的脚步声伴随着优美摆动着的芦苇。 2. is dolled with ：天空中点缀着无数闪烁的星星。 3. reflected in 落日映照在窗户上,院于显得格外的美。 4. was covered with 山顶被积雪覆盖。 5. was bathed in 她沐浴在阳光下,享受着温暖。 二.高考范文中的场景表达句子。 1. (2025·浙江1月卷)当他们走出车站时，凯文凝视着广阔的天空，一种深深的满足感涌上心头。_________________________________________________ 2. (2025·八省联考卷)灯光渐渐变暗，我别无选择，只能带着一颗害怕的心看电影。_________________________________________________ 3. (2024·新课标I卷)我在九月一个寒冷、潮湿、难忘的夜晚遇到了冈特。_________________________________________________ 4. (2021·新课标I卷) 清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。_________________________________________________ 【答案】1.As they emerged from the station, Kevin gazed at the expansive sky, a profound sense of fulfillment washing over him.2.The light dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart. 3. I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. 4.The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love. 三、按照提示要求完成下列句子。 1.我们惊讶地发现阳光竟然早早地透过窗帘照射了进来。 We were surprised to find that the morning sunshine __________through the curtain in such an early hour. 2. It was a still, sweet day of early summer; ____________________ (树叶似乎更绿了) 3. The skies were dark. ____________________ (一阵大风猛烈地刮着)，cutting my face like a knife, I shook with cold and fear as I walked home. 4. ____________________ (被凉风所包裹)，the dullness of the day was softened, providing a soothing atmosphere for the soul. 5. ____________________ (沐浴在阳光下) and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination. 6.With ____________________ (头顶上方有沉重的乌云)，the atmosphere became heavy with anticipation of a storm. 【参考答案】1. had flooded in2. the leaves seemed greener; the flowers seemed brighter 3. A strong wind was blowing hard 4. Wrapped in a cool breeze 5. Bathed in the sunshine6. dark clouds looming overhead 四、按照提示要求完成下列场景语段。 1.【困境暖意】I was 3 years into my Ph.D.Yet I still felt in the dark because I did not know how or when I would graduate.To be frank，1.___________________________________________.Worse still，Erika was leaving，the only other woman in the lab.This added to my anxiety.As she cleared out her lab space，she offered a gift：her old but big computer monitor（显示器）.This kind，2._______________________________________________________________. 我读博士已经三年了，但我仍然感到迷茫，因为我不知道如何毕业，也不知道什么时候毕业。坦率地说，我看不到隧道尽头的光明。更糟糕的是，Erika要走了，她是实验室里唯一的女性。这增加了我的焦虑。在清理实验室空间时，她送出了一件礼物：她那台又旧又大的电脑显示器。这种看似微不足道的举动恰恰是我所需要的救命稻草。 【答案】1.I couldn't see the light at the end of the tunnel 2.seemingly minute gesture turned out to be exactly the lifeline（救命稻草）I needed 2.【家庭关系】I opened the door：the morning dishes weren't in the sink，and the floor had been cleaned.1._____________________________________________________.Then I replayed the casual comment I had made that morning： "You never helped out around the house..." I picked up the letter，anticipating his apology and gratitude for everything I did.But 2._____________________________________________. 我打开门：早上的餐具不在水槽里，地板也打扫过了。柜台上那堆垃圾邮件不见了，取而代之的是一个信封。然后我把那天早上随便说的话重播了一遍：“你从来不帮忙做家务……”我拿起信，期待着他会为我所做的一切道歉和感激。但当我读到第一行时，我为自己感到无比羞愧。 【答案】1.The pile of junk mail on the counter disappeared，replaced by a single envelope 2.when I read the first line，I felt incredibly ashamed of myself 3.【人与动物】One winter's day，1.__________________________________________________________. Lily，worried about Whiskers being out in the cold，searched anxiously for him.After hours of searching，2._________________________________________________________，Lily gently picked up Whiskers and rushed him home.She wrapped him in a warm blanket，nestled him by the fireplace，and held him close.As they sat together，lying in the warmth，Lily realized just how much Whiskers meant to her. 冬天的一天，一场暴风雪席卷了整个小镇，把所有的东西都覆盖上了白色。Lily担心Whiskers会在外面受冻，焦急地找他。经过几个小时的搜寻，她发现他蜷缩在一棵树下，皮毛上结了一层霜。Lily眼里含着泪水，轻轻地抱起Whiskers，送他回家。她用一条温暖的毯子把他裹起来，让他依偎在壁炉旁，紧紧地抱着他。他们坐在一起，躺在温暖中，Lily意识到Whiskers对她来说是多么重要。 【答案】1.a heavy snowstorm swept through the town，leaving everything blanketed in white 2.she found him huddled （蜷缩） beneath a tree，his fur was coated in frost.With tears in her eyes 五、读后续写 （2025·河北保定模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As I’ve grown older, my connection to nature has become stronger. Recently, I was fortunate to spend a good part of a week in the wilderness, following the teachings of my father from my childhood. Ever since I was 10, my sister, father, and I would load up his canoe (独木舟) with supplies and set off into the heart of Algonquin Park. There were years when I ignored the call of Algonquin, caught up in the busyness of life —graduating from school and raising young children. It all felt incredibly demanding. But as time passed, my children grew older, and the call of Algonquin grew louder. With the support of my family, I finally listened to that call again, and started planning to take part in one of our family trips there. My family's rich experience in the outdoors has been invaluable for such trips. My sister, a teacher, carefully planned our trips while my dad, a skilled outdoorsman, effortlessly handled tasks like setting up camp and preparing meals. And my husband is really strong and good at moving things around. But, as the trip got closer, my husband suddenly hurt his leg. And suddenly, I was faced with managing the first part of the trip as the only adult. Could I drive my daughter, alone, to Algonquin's remote north boundary to meet my dad and mom? Could I steer (驾驶) the canoe? Could I carry the canoe? I had driven across Canada, alone, in my twenties, well before Google Maps. I was pretty sure I could steer if we kept to smaller lakes that were less likely to become windswept. But I feared carrying a canoe. Plus, lifting it onto my shoulders seemed impossible for someone of my strength. But Algonquin was calling me. I recalled the fearless independence of my younger self and called Dad. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解析】文章以人物为线索展开，作者回忆起从小与父亲和妹妹一起在阿尔冈昆公园探险的经历，但曾因生活的忙碌而暂时忽略了这份召唤。随着时间的推移，孩子们长大，作者对阿尔冈昆的向往再次被唤醒。在家人的支持下，作者开始计划再次参与家庭旅行。然而，临近出发时，丈夫突然受伤，作者不得不独自承担起管理旅行初段的责任，包括独自驾车带女儿前往阿尔冈昆公园，以及面对驾驶和搬运独木舟的挑战。尽管作者对独自驾车有信心，但对搬运独木舟感到担忧。但最终，作者对自然的渴望战胜了恐惧，她回想起了年轻时无畏的独立精神，并决定迎接挑战，联系父亲继续前行。 1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容““如果我们缩短路线，找一艘轻便的独木舟，那我们就去，”我告诉他。”可知，第一段可描写作者克服困难，驾驶独木舟与父母会合的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我们终于抵达时，我的父母张开双臂迎接我们。”可知，第二段可描写作者的父母为作者感到自豪，一家人分享旅途中的故事以及作者的感悟。 2.续写线索：选择路线，踏上冒险之旅——克服困难，顺利会合——父母夸赞——分享旅途故事——感悟 【参考范文】 “If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him. With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle. Despite my initial doubts, we started our adventure, determined to meet my parents at the appointed spot. The journey was filled with challenges, but with each one we overcame, my confidence grew. Sailing the lake was less frightening than I had expected, and my daughter proved to be a capable and enthusiastic co-pilot. When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms. Their faces lit up with pride as they saw us paddle in. “You did it!” my dad cried, hugging me tightly. “We knew you could,” my mom added, her voice filled with emotion. Together, we unpacked the canoe and set up camp, sharing stories of our journey around a campfire. That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me. The wilderness helped me become stronger and more independent, reminding me of the strength I carried within. 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①选择：chose/pick out ②决定做某事：determine to do sth/decide to do sth ③充满：be filled with/be full of ④拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①令人害怕的： frightening/dreadful ②充满热情的：enthusiastic/passionate 【点睛】[高分句型1] With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle.（运用了that引导定语从句） [高分句型2] That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me.（运用了that引导宾语从句） 4 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$